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After a hiatus of two years it was finally recently updated.

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After a hiatus of two years it was finally recently updated. But has yet to be updated since then in 2018
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6536396/1/Stupid_Devil_Dog Stupid Devil Dog]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1230588/The-Real-Lee-is-here The Real Lee is here]] is a ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' fic with a very different Saito. [[MilitaryBrat Saito]] [[BadassBookworm Hiraga]] is the third son of a Japanese-American military family, who raised in a very regimented lifestyle, always pushing him to do his best. Saito has been training to join the military for years, when one day he goes to bed and wakes up in front of a pink-haired girl.

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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6536396/1/Stupid_Devil_Dog Stupid Devil Dog]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1230588/The-Real-Lee-is-here The Real Lee is here]] is a ''LightNovel/TheFamiliarOfZero'' ''Literature/TheFamiliarOfZero'' fic with a very different Saito. [[MilitaryBrat Saito]] [[BadassBookworm Hiraga]] is the third son of a Japanese-American military family, who raised in a very regimented lifestyle, always pushing him to do his best. Saito has been training to join the military for years, when one day he goes to bed and wakes up in front of a pink-haired girl.

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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved


* MirrorCharacter: Saito and Louise have a number of things in common that define their characters: both are the youngest of three children, though Saito gets along with his siblings while Louise's eldest sister is a [[BigBrotherBully heartless bully]] and the middle sister is kindly, but also sickly; they both have strict, domineering mothers whom they both fear and admire; both have a somewhat bratty demeanor--Saito being a MilitaryBrat and Louise behaving like a SpoiledBrat; and they both have quite nasty tempers.



* NotSoDifferent: Saito and Louise have a number of things in common that define their characters: both are the youngest of three children, though Saito gets along with his siblings while Louise's eldest sister is a [[BigBrotherBully heartless bully]] and the middle sister is kindly, but also sickly; they both have strict, domineering mothers whom they both fear and admire; both have a somewhat bratty demeanor--Saito being a MilitaryBrat and Louise behaving like a SpoiledBrat; and they both have quite nasty tempers.

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* RealityEnsues: When Gerald's familiar grab's Saito's pistol by the barrel and bounds off, the shaking causes the gun to go off, shooting said familiar in the head.


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* ReliablyUnreliableGuns: When Gerald's familiar grab's Saito's pistol by the barrel and bounds off, the shaking causes the gun to go off, shooting said familiar in the head.
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misuse


* AristocratsAreEvil: Saito, Siesta and Foquet all have this view, justified as most nobles they met are privileged jerks.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: Scarron is extremely flamboyant and insists on being called Mi Mademoiselle instead of Sir, but also has a daughter.
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** Headmaster Oswald and Louise were horrified to learn that Saito and the dead soldier brought the Staff of Destruction are ''Protestant.''

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** Headmaster Oswald and Louise were horrified to learn that Saito and the dead soldier who brought the Staff of Destruction are ''Protestant.''
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SSSN is getting cut; viable examples moved to [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/discussion.php?id=mtp7iu919c8n77tb4kajnpnl Collateral Bullet[[


* StrayShotsStrikeNothing: Inverted. Andre's and Gerald's spells that miss Saito during their fight hit several homes and kill at least a few people.
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* OCStandIn: TropesAreNotBad, as Saito is much more sympathetic and developed than canon Saito as he realizes something is seriously wrong with the situation and tries to rectify it.

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* OCStandIn: TropesAreNotBad, Administrivia/TropesAreNotBad, as Saito is much more sympathetic and developed than canon Saito as he realizes something is seriously wrong with the situation and tries to rectify it.

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After a hiatus of two years it was finally recently updated.



* DeadFic: Has not updated in two years.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: Louise figures Saito must have come from a wealthy family. How else could he possibly afford to [[MundaneLuxury bathe everyday?]]
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint:
-->'''Saito:''' I'm from a different world. In a country called the United States. It's a Republic.
-->'''Derflinger:''' A Republic? Is that a joke?
-->'''Saito:''' I just said I'm from a different world, and the thing that's shocking is that it's a Republic? Really?
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* TookALevelInKindness: Saito eventually evolves from a {{Jerkass} to a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.

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* TookALevelInKindness: Saito eventually evolves from a {{Jerkass} {{Jerkass}} to a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.

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* MugglesDoItBetter: At one point Louise compares Saito's bed (with a memory foam mattress) to sleeping on a cloud.



** OOCIsSeriousBusiness: It shows how furious Saito is at Montmorency and Guiche for stealing his money that he temporarily breaks out of his potion induced love of Tabitha to verbally rip them a new one. Previously, he'd only managed it to keep himself from killing someone.

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** * OOCIsSeriousBusiness: It shows how furious Saito is at Montmorency and Guiche for stealing his money that he temporarily breaks out of his potion induced love of Tabitha to verbally rip them a new one. Previously, he'd only managed it to keep himself from killing someone.
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* AmbiguouslyBi: Scarron is extremely flamboyant and insists on being called Mi Mademoiselle instead of Sir, but also has a daughter.


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* TookALevelInKindness: Saito eventually evolves from a {{Jerkass} to a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.

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* DepravedBisexual: While under the effects of a love potion, Saito becomes extremely overt in his advances at best and an attempted rapist at worst. And because whenever Louise dispels it, he falls in love with whoever he's looking at a short time later, this applies to both boys and girls.


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* ExtremeOmnisexual: While under the effects of a love potion, Saito in love with whoever he's looking at shortly after Louise dispels it, regardless of gender or ''species''.
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* DepravedBisexual: While under the effects of a love potion, Saito becomes extremely overt in his advances at best and an attempted rapist at worst. And because whenever Louise dispels it, he falls in love with whoever he's looking at a short time later, this applies to both boys and girls.
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* InsistentTerminology: Saito is ''not'' a Familiar, thank you very much. He eventually settles on being Louise's Ally; even Louise ends up thinking of him as such.

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* DudeNotFunny: One of Saito's friends once dressed up as Mohammad for Halloween and apparently spent the day telling racist jokes. Neither Saito nor his other friends were amused.


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** OOCIsSeriousBusiness: It shows how furious Saito is at Montmorency and Guiche for stealing his money that he temporarily breaks out of his potion induced love of Tabitha to verbally rip them a new one. Previously, he'd only managed it to keep himself from killing someone.
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* DudeNotFunny: One of Saito's friends once dressed up as Mohammad for Halloween and apparently spent the day telling racist jokes. Neither Saito nor his other friends were amused.

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* AristocratsAreEvil: Saito, Sietsa and Foquet all have this view, justified as most nobles they met are privileged jerks.

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* AristocratsAreEvil: Saito, Sietsa Siesta and Foquet all have this view, justified as most nobles they met are privileged jerks.jerks.
* BullyingADragon: Malicorne tries to make Saito get out of his seat even though Saito has already defeated two students (and three accredited mages but he doesn't know that).
* ContrivedCoincidence: Saito attacks Mott at roughly the same time Siesta is arriving to be his new maid/slave.
* CoolPlane: The "Dragon's Raiment", which in this fic is a Vietnam-era [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/McDonnell_Douglas_F-4_Phantom_II F-4E Phantom II]] fighter jet.



* CoolPlane: The "Dragon's Raiment", which in this fic is a Vietnam-era [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/McDonnell_Douglas_F-4_Phantom_II F-4E Phantom II]] fighter jet.


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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Colbert mentions a dragon whose blood is a clear orange and oddly flammable. Said "dragon" is later shown to be a fighter jet and the blood is jet fuel.

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