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* ShoutOut: In Chapter 26, Nino compares "a feud between akuma haters and former akumatized victims" to [[Comicbook/CivilWar "some sort of civil war" and "something straight out of Marvel comics"]].

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* ShoutOut: In Chapter 26, Nino compares "a feud between akuma haters and former akumatized victims" to [[Comicbook/CivilWar [[Comicbook/CivilWar2006 "some sort of civil war" and "something straight out of Marvel comics"]].
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''[[http://www.archiveofourown.org/works/7253290?view_adult=true&view_full_work=true Back To Us]]'' by [=DarkReyna16=] is a completed ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'' fanfiction published on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.

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''[[http://www.archiveofourown.org/works/7253290?view_adult=true&view_full_work=true ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/7253290/ Back To Us]]'' by [=DarkReyna16=] is a completed ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'' fanfiction published on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
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* UnexpectedVirgin: Adrien, [[spoiler:which amuses Marinette (more his {{adorkable}}ness while telling her than the fact itself) even as she tells him it's nothing to be ashamed of.]]

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* UnexpectedVirgin: Adrien, [[spoiler:which amuses Marinette (more his {{adorkable}}ness dorkiness while telling her than the fact itself) even as she tells him it's nothing to be ashamed of.]]
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* DoorStopper: The longest ''Miraculous'' fic on Archive Of Our Own, at 446,244 words spanning 36 chapters. ''What Are Friends For'' adds another 6,252, while another side story, ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11383557 Not Your Choice]]'', adds another 1,357.

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* DoorStopper: The longest second-longest ''Miraculous'' fic on Archive Of Our Own, at 446,244 words spanning 36 chapters. ''What Are Friends For'' adds another 6,252, while another side story, ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11383557 Not Your Choice]]'', adds another 1,357.

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* NeverLiveItDown: InUniverse, a couple of times.
** Ladybug's culpability in Hawk Moth's death is thrown in her face several times by her critics, usually misrepresenting it as her murdering him, and usually in response to her objection to using lethal force against akuma victims. [[spoiler:It especially hurts when Adrien brings it up at the height of their argument in Chapter 33.]]
** On a lighter note, [[spoiler:Alya refuses to let Nino forget that he gave her the Fox Miraculous by mistake, at one point wondering aloud what would have happened if he had given it to Adrien.]]


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** Ladybug's culpability in Hawk Moth's death is thrown in her face several times by her critics, usually misrepresenting it as her murdering him, and usually in response to her objection to using lethal force against akuma victims. [[spoiler:It especially hurts when Adrien brings it up at the height of their argument in Chapter 33.]]
** On a lighter note, [[spoiler:Alya refuses to let Nino forget that he gave her the Fox Miraculous by mistake, at one point wondering aloud what would have happened if he had given it to Adrien.]]

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* ContrivedCoincidence: Despite the Butterfly Miraculous being presumably in enemy hands for seven years, the second wave of akuma attacks only begins within days of Adrien's return to Paris. Adrien admits that this had him paranoid for a while, but he can't see any way the Butterfly could have known who he was or that Chat Noir was back. [[spoiler:As it happens, she did, and [[SubvertedTrope it was not a coincidence]].]]

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Despite the Butterfly Miraculous being presumably in enemy hands for seven years, the second wave of akuma attacks only begins within days of Adrien's return to Paris. Adrien admits that this had him paranoid for a while, but he can't see any way the Butterfly could have known who he was or that Chat Noir was back. [[spoiler:As it happens, she did, and [[SubvertedTrope it was not a coincidence]].]]



* GetARoom: Said by Marinette to Alya and Nino. Alya's response: "This ''is'' a room. You and a bunch of other people just happen to be in it." (For the record, they're in a gelato shop.)

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Said by Marinette to Alya and Nino. Alya's response: "This ''is'' a room. You and a bunch of other people just happen to be in it." (For the record, they're in a gelato shop.)



* HeelRealization[=/=]HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Chat Noir, though more anti-hero than villain, eventually realises his mistakes and returns to Ladybug's side, resolving to fix the mess he helped create.]]

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* HeelRealization[=/=]HeelFaceTurn: HeelRealization: [[spoiler:Chat Noir, though more anti-hero than villain, eventually realises his mistakes and returns to Ladybug's side, resolving to fix the mess he helped create.]]



* InternalReveal: [[spoiler: The first one happens when Adrien reveals himself to Ivan, and from there the story continues to accumulate them.]]

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* MythologyGag: The protagonists of the ''Miraculous Ladybug'' pilot video are both referenced by supporting characters: Felix Chevalier is introduced as Marinette's co-worker at ''Tres Bien'' Boutique [[spoiler:and is revealed to be Adrien's cousin]], while Bridgette (a common fan nickname for the original version of Marinette) Reine is the Deputy Mayor of Paris - her resemblance to an older Marinette is noted a few chapters before we find out her name.

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The protagonists of the ''Miraculous Ladybug'' pilot video are both referenced by supporting characters: Felix Chevalier is introduced as Marinette's co-worker at ''Tres Bien'' Boutique [[spoiler:and is revealed to be Adrien's cousin]], while Bridgette (a common fan nickname for the original version of Marinette) Reine is the Deputy Mayor of Paris - her resemblance to an older Marinette is noted a few chapters before we find out her name.



* NeverLiveItDown: InUniverse, Ladybug's culpability in Hawk Moth's death is thrown in her face several times by her critics, usually misrepresenting it as her murdering him, and usually in response to her objection to using lethal force against akuma victims. [[spoiler:It especially hurts when Adrien brings it up at the height of their argument in Chapter 33.]]

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* NeverLiveItDown: InUniverse, a couple of times.
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Ladybug's culpability in Hawk Moth's death is thrown in her face several times by her critics, usually misrepresenting it as her murdering him, and usually in response to her objection to using lethal force against akuma victims. [[spoiler:It especially hurts when Adrien brings it up at the height of their argument in Chapter 33.]]



* NotSoStoic: Felix's stoic demeanor cracks when [[spoiler:his crush on Bridgette is pointed out.]]



* ReformedButRejected: [[spoiler: Happens to Chat Noir to varying degrees, and he knows that he has no right to expect otherwise. While Ladybug is ready to welcome back her partner with open arms after his heartfelt apology, Emerald Shell is grudging at best - he doesn't like him or trust him, but he's willing to work with him and see if he's serious about fixing the mess he created. The Paris public are largely hostile, with most former akuma victims still feeling betrayed (with exceptions such as Ivan and Alya) and the Anti-Akuma Taskforce feeling betrayed by his reformation. AVA take it to the point of spraying graffiti of Chat being violently attacked by them, and later burning him in effigy during their protest at City Hall.]]

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[[spoiler: Happens to Chat Noir to varying degrees, and he knows that he has no right to expect otherwise. While Ladybug is ready to welcome back her partner with open arms after his heartfelt apology, Emerald Shell is grudging at best - he doesn't like him or trust him, but he's willing to work with him and see if he's serious about fixing the mess he created. The Paris public are largely hostile, with most former akuma victims still feeling betrayed (with exceptions such as Ivan and Alya) and the Anti-Akuma Taskforce feeling betrayed by his reformation. AVA take it to the point of spraying graffiti of Chat being violently attacked by them, and later burning him in effigy during their protest at City Hall.]]



* SecretSecretKeeper: In Chapter 19, Alya figures out that Nino is Emerald Shell when he calls her "babe" in costume and builds on that to deduce Marinette is Ladybug. [[spoiler:Nino finds out towards the end of Chapter 31, while Marinette only learns in the final chapter.]]

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** NotSoStoic: [[spoiler:When his crush on Bridgette is pointed out.]]



* TeethClenchedTeamwork: [[spoiler:Chat Noir and Emerald Shell after the former returns to Ladybug's side. They've since gotten better, perhaps VitriolicBestBuds or FireForgedFriends (in fact, they're described as fire-forged teammates in the narration) by the time they reveal themselves.]]

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[[spoiler:Chat Noir and Emerald Shell after the former returns to Ladybug's side. They've since gotten better, perhaps VitriolicBestBuds or FireForgedFriends (in fact, they're described as fire-forged teammates in the narration) by the time they reveal themselves.]]



* TitleDrop: [[spoiler:After Chat Noir asks Ladybug how she could ever forgive him after the way he hurt her, she replies "Because we’re partners, ''chaton''. No matter what, we’re always meant to be partners. So, though you strayed for a while… I think you were always meant to come back to me. Back to ''us''."]]

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[[spoiler:After Chat Noir asks Ladybug how she could ever forgive him after the way he hurt her, she replies "Because we’re partners, ''chaton''. No matter what, we’re always meant to be partners. So, though you strayed for a while… I think you were always meant to come back to me. Back to ''us''."]]



* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Adrien's new attitude towards akumas is revealed to be rooted in some advice his cousin gave him, the night he almost ran away from his aunt and uncle after finding out that they were only treating him so well out of misguided fear. "If you don’t want to be mistaken for a demon…then show them what ''real'' demons look like." [[spoiler:Adrien confronts Felix about this later, and Felix protests that he misunderstood him. "Adrien, I never meant for you to change. What I meant was that you should just keep being you — this upbeat young man, optimistic nearly to the point of foolishness. Eventually, my parents would have realized that they were wrong about you, that you were nothing like Gabriel. I never said that you should have to prove yourself." In response, Adrien angrily maintains that Felix should have made himself clearer, and Marinette, eavesdropping on the conversation, considers the role Felix played in this mess [[ThisIsUnforgivable unforgivable.]]]]

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Adrien's new attitude towards akumas is revealed to be rooted in some advice his cousin gave him, the night he almost ran away from his aunt and uncle after finding out that they were only treating him so well out of misguided fear. "If you don’t want to be mistaken for a demon…then show them what ''real'' demons look like." [[spoiler:Adrien confronts Felix about this later, and Felix protests that he misunderstood him. "Adrien, I never meant for you to change. What I meant was that you should just keep being you — this upbeat young man, optimistic nearly to the point of foolishness. Eventually, my parents would have realized that they were wrong about you, that you were nothing like Gabriel. I never said that you should have to prove yourself." In response, Adrien angrily maintains that Felix should have made himself clearer, and Marinette, eavesdropping on the conversation, considers the role Felix played in this mess [[ThisIsUnforgivable unforgivable.]]]]



* WhamEpisode: Chapter 30: [[spoiler:Marinette's fashion show is attacked by Shade, the Snake Miraculous holder who was previously believed to be helping the Butterfly. As it happens, she ''is'' the Butterfly, she knows who Chat Noir is (having stolen the Butterfly Miraculous from him seven years ago) and most likely knows who Ladybug is (having broken into Marinette's apartment in an earlier chapter).]]

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Chapter 30: [[spoiler:Marinette's fashion show is attacked by Shade, the Snake Miraculous holder who was previously believed to be helping the Butterfly. As it happens, she ''is'' the Butterfly, she knows who Chat Noir is (having stolen the Butterfly Miraculous from him seven years ago) and most likely knows who Ladybug is (having broken into Marinette's apartment in an earlier chapter).]]
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* JerkassHasAPoint: [[spoiler:When Alya uses the Fox Miraculous to make the AVA members think she's Lila, they wonder if she's really a Miraculous holder or if she's akumatized. When Alya asks why it's so hard to believe she has a Miraculous, Chloe points out Lila lied about it before and Alya begrudgingly concedes the point]].
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* LetMeGetThisStraight: In Chapter 24, when Alya learns [[spoiler:Adrien is Cat Noir, she has this reaction upon being told Ivan is the only other person who knows it]].


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* ShoutOut: In Chapter 26, Nino compares "a feud between akuma haters and former akumatized victims" to [[Comicbook/CivilWar "some sort of civil war" and "something straight out of Marvel comics"]].
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* {{Touche}}: When Nino points out Adrien is wearing Marinette's charm bracelet, Adrien says "men can wear bracelets" and points out Nino himself is wearing one. Since Nino's is the Turtle Miraculous and Adrien doesn't know it yet, Nino just says "Touché".

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* [[spoiler: InternalReveal]]: [[spoiler: The first one happens when Adrien reveals himself to Ivan, and from there the story continues to accumulate them.]]

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* [[spoiler: InternalReveal]]: InternalReveal: [[spoiler: The first one happens when Adrien reveals himself to Ivan, and from there the story continues to accumulate them.]]]]
** Ladybug learns that Cat Noir knows about Master Fu when Cat mentions the latter albeit Ladybug admits to herself she should have figured out considering Master Fu is the one who gave them their Miraculouses.
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* AprilFoolsDay: Reyna posted a link to Chapter 32 [[https://insanitysscribblings.tumblr.com/post/159059547483/reyna-writes-back-to-us-updated-4117 on her Tumblr]], [[spoiler:which turned out to be a {{Rickroll}}.]]

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* AprilFoolsDay: Reyna posted a link to Chapter 32 [[https://insanitysscribblings.tumblr.com/post/159059547483/reyna-writes-back-to-us-updated-4117 on her Tumblr]], [[spoiler:which turned out to be a {{Rickroll}}.JustForFun/{{Rickroll}}.]]

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* BigBadDuumvirate: The Butterfly and Shade appear to be in cahoots, [[spoiler: but it’s then subverted with the reveal that they’re actually the same person.]]



* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler:Shade is described as one by Erika, thanks to powers of the Snake Miraculous: "She speaks with honey and velvet, and because of this, it is said that she can convince the most peaceful of rulers to go to war, and make them think that the idea was their own in the first place." As such, it's not too surprising when she turns out to be the Butterfly as well.]]

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* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler:Shade Shade is described as one by [[spoiler: Erika, thanks to the powers of the Snake Miraculous: "She speaks with honey and velvet, and because of this, it is said that she can convince the most peaceful of rulers to go to war, and make them think that the idea was their own in the first place." As such, it's not too surprising when she turns out to be the Butterfly as well. Then when we learn Desirèe is Shade it takes on another dimension, as in hindsight her interactions with the main cast frequently pushed them apart from each other.]]
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* [[spoiler: InternalReveal]]: [[spoiler: The first one happens when Marinette reveals herself to Nino, and from there the story continues to accumulate them.]]

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* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler:After weighing up his options for the remaining Miraculouses, Nino decides to offer Adrien the Fox necklace, not knowing that he's Chat Noir.]]

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* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler:After The bread and butter of this fic. One notable example is [[spoiler:after weighing up his options for the remaining Miraculouses, Nino decides to offer Adrien the Fox necklace, not knowing that he's Chat Noir.]]
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* WorldOfSnark: The amount of characters who don’t snark could be counted on one hand.
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* SickeninglySweethearts: Joked about by Alya and Nino after [[spoiler: Marinette and Adrien become ‘friends who kiss a lot’.]]
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* UsefulNotes/VictimBlaming: The rhetoric used by Chat Noir and later the Anti-Akuma taskforce.
-->'''Adrien''': I did everything I could to pursue what I thought was true justice… because there had to be something innately dark in these akumatized victims, right? After all, there was never more than one akuma attack at a time, and it was unlikely that everyone else was just having a really good day, save for this one person who’d been slighted in some way. There had to be ''something'' about these specific victims, other than their anger or their despair, that drew Hawk Moth to them. At least, that’s what I told myself, over and over and over again… But that’s not true. Hawk Moth doesn’t ''cause'' the negative feelings in akuma victims. ''We'' do. …I do. Humanity is responsible for humanity. And to blame the akuma victims for becoming victims…it’s like blaming them for ''feeling'', just like Ladybug said. I knew what it was like to be blamed for my feelings, to be called irrational, overemotional. Having someone cut you down that way — it ''hurts''. Like what you feel doesn’t even matter because it’s inconveniencing someone else. My father made me feel that way all the time when I was upset with him for missing something we’d had planned in favor of work, for restricting me to the house, isolating me from the world… but how was I any better, when I hunted akumatized victims for being taken advantage of by a supervillain? Didn’t I just become my father after all, with such an attitude? I may have been chosen for this life, but I chose it, too. I might’ve been able to say no, to quit… but I needed this. Chat Noir was the only way I was able to feel free… and if I think about it, it’s not that different from when the akumatized victims accept Hawk Moth’s help. We all want to be free of something once in a while, don’t we? Don’t we all feel trapped every now and again? Even lost…or helpless? If I dare to judge akumatized victims for what I believed was weakness of spirit…then what about me? ...I was wrong. I was wrong… and I’m sorry.
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* VictimBlaming: The rhetoric used by Chat Noir and later the Anti-Akuma taskforce.

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* MistakenForCheating: Alya comes to suspect something's going on with Nino and Marinette after overhearing and misinterpreting a conversation between them about keeping their superhero lives from her, leading her to break up with Nino right when he was about to propose. She figures out the truth before too long and they get back together.

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* MistakenForCheating: Alya MistakenForCheating:
** The host of the Christmas Ball is akumatized because he believes his supermodel wife is unfaithful, having a lot of private meetings with other men, including Adrien. In reality, she was cancelling arrangements so that she could quit modeling and dedicate her time to their upcoming baby.
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comes to suspect something's going on with Nino and Marinette after overhearing and misinterpreting a conversation between them about keeping their superhero lives from her, leading her to break up with Nino right when he was about to propose. She figures out the truth before too long and they get back together.

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* DistantFinale: [[spoiler:The epilogue takes place a year after Shade's defeat, with Nino and Alya now married, Felix living with Bridgette, who is about to become the new Butterfly Miraculous holder, and Adrien on the verge of proposing to Marinette.]]



* DoorStopper: The longest ''Miraculous'' fic on Archive Of Our Own, at 444,477 words spanning 36 chapters. ''What Are Friends For'' adds another 6,252, while another side story, ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11383557 Not Your Choice]]'', adds another 1,357.

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* DoorStopper: The longest ''Miraculous'' fic on Archive Of Our Own, at 444,477 446,244 words spanning 36 chapters. ''What Are Friends For'' adds another 6,252, while another side story, ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11383557 Not Your Choice]]'', adds another 1,357.
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* INeverSaidItWasPoison: Invoked by Marinette when she reveals herself to Nino; she refers to the new turtle superhero as Emerald Shell despite the fact that the only two people who know that name are Nino himself... and Ladybug.
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** In chapter 35, [[spoiler:Alya gives herself away to Adrien, first by calling him "Tiger" (which she called him as Vixen in the previous chapter) and then when he sees the Fox pendant peeking out of her dress.]]
** In chapter 36, this happens a ''lot''. [[spoiler:First, Marinette learns Alya's identity. Then, Team Miraculous, Camille, and Bridgette all learn that Felix is Pavone. Felix also reveals that he knew about Chat Noir and Camille all along. Chat himself deduces that Erika is Camille.]]

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** In chapter Chapter 35, [[spoiler:Alya gives herself away to Adrien, first by calling him "Tiger" (which she called him as Vixen in the previous chapter) and then when he sees the Fox pendant peeking out of her dress.]]
** In chapter Chapter 36, this happens a ''lot''. [[spoiler:First, Marinette learns Alya's identity. Then, Team Miraculous, Camille, and Bridgette all learn that Felix is Pavone. Felix also reveals that he knew about Chat Noir and Camille all along. Chat himself deduces that Erika is Camille.]]
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* DoorStopper: The longest ''Miraculous'' fic on Archive Of Our Own at 423000+ words, with just one chapter to go.

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* DoorStopper: The longest ''Miraculous'' fic on Archive Of Our Own Own, at 423000+ words, with just one chapter to go.444,477 words spanning 36 chapters. ''What Are Friends For'' adds another 6,252, while another side story, ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11383557 Not Your Choice]]'', adds another 1,357.



** In Chapter 24, circumstantial evidence leads Marinette to deduce that HeroOfAnotherStory Camille is Adrien's ex-girlfriend Erika Soriano.

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** In Chapter 24, circumstantial evidence leads Marinette to deduce that HeroOfAnotherStory [[spoiler:HeroOfAnotherStory Camille is Adrien's ex-girlfriend Erika Soriano.Soriano]].



** In chapter 35, [[spoiler:Alya gives herself away to Adrien, first by calling him "Tiger" (which she called him as Vixen in the previous chapter) and then when he sees the Fox pendant peeking out of her dress. At this point, the only secrets left between the four are that Marinette doesn't know Vixen is Alya or that Alya knows she's Ladybug.]]

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** In chapter 35, [[spoiler:Alya gives herself away to Adrien, first by calling him "Tiger" (which she called him as Vixen in the previous chapter) and then when he sees the Fox pendant peeking out of her dress. At this point, the only secrets left between the four are that Marinette doesn't know Vixen is Alya or that Alya knows she's Ladybug.]]



** [[spoiler: Oddly enough, Gabriel himself. If it weren't for his murder of Daniel Trace, Desirèe would never have tried to attack Paris.]]

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** [[spoiler: Oddly enough, Gabriel himself. If it weren't for his murder of him going along with Daniel Trace, Trace's blackmail and Trace's subsequent suicide, Desirèe would never have tried to attack Paris.]]

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