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Valiona2014-05-08 22:32:36

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Chapter 4: Making Progress

Naruto wakes up in the morning with the help of a Cloud Village piece of technology- an alarm clock that uses a jolt of electricity to silently wake up the ninja using it. It’s an interesting idea, although one has to wonder how the Leaf Village would get a technology from another village, which would likely be a somewhat carefully guarded secret.

Naruto thinks about his friends, and worries about whether they will ultimately “wake up” and start seeing him differently. It’s somewhat possible that he would worry about that, but not only do his friends barely react to hearing about him being a Jinchuuriki in canon, but Naruto still seems overly angsty and whiny.

A few hours of brutal and exhausting taijutsu training pass, and Naruto still remains puzzled at Guy and Lee’s demeanors. It’s fairly interesting seeing those two helping Naruto with his training, as well as more about their own methods.

Naruto goes to Ichiraku Ramen, and is informed about his teammates stepping up to defend him after he left, leaving him quite touched. Interestingly enough, in canon, a lot of the people didn’t necessarily compliment him to his face- for example, Kakashi told Inari about how Naruto’s harsh attitude toward Inari’s self-pity was born from having to deal with a difficult childhood and deciding to do something about it- so it seems slightly unlike Naruto to be completely surprised that people think more of him than they let on.

Elsewhere, Kurenai ponders the status of the team, as well as her own progress toward her goals of enabling Naruto to protect the others, while helping establish Team 8 as a safe haven for Hinata.

Hinata approaches Kurenai, and asks about her saying that she can’t help him with his taijutsu, prompting her to explain her arrangement, which is again described as unconventional; the frequency at which it is quickly approaches the point of redundancy.

Kurenai praises Hinata for handling Team 7, and remarks on how shallow Sakura seems. I agree that Sakura doesn’t understand Naruto nearly as well as Hinata does at this point in the story, especially her canonical comments to Sasuke on how he’s a troublemaker because he doesn’t have any parents to discipline him, but it does seem as though many characters are going out of their way to bash her.

Shino arrives, and pre-emptively defends his actions before hearing that Kurenai approves of them.

Naruto then follows, using genjutsu to pretend to have altered his outfit at Guy’s suggestion, getting a good laugh at Kurenai’s expense. After Kurenai recovers and realizes what Naruto has done, she discusses how to weaponize this; it’s a good touch to take into account that Naruto’s greatest strength is his unpredictability.

Kurenai draws parallels between her genin team and her previous teammates, determining who each person reflects- Hinata is the younger Kurenai, Shino is Nomaru, and Naruto is Mattai. These are some interesting insights, similar to how Naruto reminds many people of various determined and idealistic individuals, although it might be nice to see the individuals in question.

Naruto and the others finish two D-rank missions per afternoon, which seems implausibly fast, since by the time of the Chunin Exams, Teams 7 and 10 have one C-rank and seven D-rank missions under their belts, while Team 8 has the same grand total, but with three C-ranks and five D-ranks.

Naruto continues sparring with Lee, and notices, among other things, that he doesn’t get scar tissue or calluses, presumably as a result of his Healing Factor, which is an interesting take on it. Naruto makes some improvements, but has difficulty catching up to Lee’s speed. The gains he’s made are useful against Shino, however.

Naruto hears that Team 7 got a C-rank mission as a result of Kiba complaining. Naruto isn’t sad that the males of the team are out of the village, but has mixed feelings about Sakura’s absence. He also realizes that there are things that Hinata is not telling him.

The team goes to Moritake’s, and Shino starts asking about Naruto’s training, and suggests he could benefit from additional taijutsu training. Hinata also makes a similar request, but Kurenai tells her that her taijutsu form is too different for her to benefit, and Kurenai also suggests Hinata’s father might not approve.

Kurenai proposes an alternative- having Hinata and Naruto train together, and both are willing. The likelihood of Hiashi interfering is dismissed, since he is more involved with Hanabi’s training, and cannot interfere with a sensei training her genin.

The next day, Team 8 holds a joint training session with Tenten and Lee. Tenten is in awe of Kurenai and Kurenai can’t understand why. She considers letting Tenten know in no uncertain terms how scarred she is from the incident that claimed the lives of her teammates, but realizes that the one responsible would likely be greatly happy to hear it.

Kurenai then talks about disrupting genjutsu, including the “chakra pulse” necessary to dispel it, concluding that with the fox hindering his chakra control, Naruto has difficulty dispelling himself, but can dispel many others with a strong enough pulse. As far as I know, the way the genjutsu release technique is altering the flow of one’s own chakra and resetting it to normal levels, and while it’s possible to help someone else, it’s impossible to do over a wide range.

Kurenai reports in to the Third Hokage, and after mentioning the progress of Naruto’s relationships, pointedly criticizes the secrecy law, saying that it leaves Naruto unable to confront the problem, and that someone- preferably Hinata- needs to confront him about this problem and let him know that they accept him.

The Third Hokage acknowledges Kurenai’s points, and wonders if Naruto will ever forgive him. It’s clear that he’s less than happy with the secrecy law in canon, but it seems as though he’s too easily ceding the argument to Kurenai. Hinata stays after the genjutsu training session finishes to talk with Naruto, and after some awkwardness, they begin sparring with each other. Hinata becomes depressed at how much better Naruto is than she is at the moment.

As Naruto practices standing on the water, Hinata views Naruto’s chakra coils, which, for some reason, are thick, and notices red chakra with the blue (technically, chakra is yellow, but that’s a difference between the manga and anime that not everyone knows about).

Naruto praises Hinata’s food, saying that she would be a good cook, which she unfortunately manages to take as a suggestion that she should be one rather than a ninja, until she recalls what Kurenai told her about Naruto. This tendency is almost comical, but it’s also quite depressing to see that Hinata has this little confidence, even less than in canon.

The training continues, with Hinata acquiring leg weights. Shortly thereafter, however, a ninja infiltrates the village, and Kurenai plans to deal with him, only to find that her students have already engaged him.

After Naruto and Shino injure the ninja, Hinata manages to intercept him, per a plan they had discussed in a scene that has not been shown, and after a moment of hesitation, takes him down, which is a nice change.

After the interloper is arrested, Kurenai has mixed feelings about her subordinates’ intervention, glad that it turned out well for them but wishing that they had stood down. The Hokage congratulates them and rewards them equivalent to the pay from a C-rank mission, ending the chapter.

What I liked

  • The fight with the missing-nin is a good Warm-Up Boss for the series, in Mizuki and the Demon Brothers' absence.

What I didn’t like

  • Kurenai winning the argument too easily
  • It being driven home how different and better Kurenai’s methods are.
  • Hinata still being overly depressed and unconfident.

Comments

romancechina88 Since: Dec, 1969
May 10th 2014 at 5:09:42 AM
yeah by this time in the fic, i was getting a bit annoyed at how kurenai's views and teachings seem to always work, when there are flaws in both which have been overlooked in the fic i feel.

The third hokage conceding the arugement was yeah too easy, though it can tie into how he views overall he has been too reasonable and nice as the hokage, which he has really, since he left danzo and Orochimaru get away with a lot of acts that helped shape the series.

But yeah you have a point about kurenai winning arugments too easily, since she never helped Naruto before, so she is in a way just as guilty as the third hokage, Kakashi and as later on when she bashes jiarya (tough not without some cause) of neglecting naruto.

Just my view of coruse as always.

Persoanlly i never Hinata to be an interesting character, she' sweet and her crush on naruto is cute in it's ownw ay, i just feel her role in the series starts and ends with naruto, i mean what's her amibiton in life outside of naruto, what does she view of the village? etc, of course that's the same problem with sakura as well to some degrees, and some of the other women in naruto as well. Not all of them, but a certain degree of the women in naruto can come off this way. Satellite Love Interest is the trope that come sot mind ehre, something i am not fond of overall.

Another fine review keep it up

Valiona Since: Dec, 1969
May 10th 2014 at 7:45:25 AM
I personally think canon Kakashi is a fairly good, yet realistic teacher. He teaches his students a fair amount about being ninjas (not as much in the way of jutsus but it can be said for other teachers, save for Guy, whose teaching methods and jutsus are really only good for Lee). However, he can't do everything for them, as while he gives a fairly compelling speech about revenge, he doesn't succeed in turning Sasuke away from that path.

Kurenai didn't help Naruto before, and it's worth noting that she was, in canon, fairly convinced he had no chance against Kiba. Perhaps she would be somewhat more favorable toward him if she was able to watch his development for longer, but I doubt she would be this effective.

Hinata has a fair number of pre-existing goals before meeting Naruto, wanting to live up to her family's expectations, and be there for her friends (the later is why Neji suggests, not without reason, that the main reason she came as far as she did was so that Shino and Kiba would not have to quit). She certainly wants to get together with Naruto, but also looks to him as an inspiration to accomplish her other goals.
romancechina88 Since: Dec, 1969
May 10th 2014 at 8:32:42 AM
I would agree that kakashi was a decent teacher and that what happened to team 7 was out of his control. Espsecially Sasuke, as that was more due to Itachi beating him up and mindraping sasuke again, which happened thanks to itachi midnraping kakshi first and that sunglasses guy aiba stupdiy giving info on him away when sasuke was visiting the jouins in kakashi's room.

Plus kakashi put more focus on sasuke overall because he with vadiity saw sauske at more risk of being corrupted than Naruto and the fact Sasuke reminded him of himself as well as the adien on kakashi shows.

I meant in my comment more of how kunerai goes on about kakashi's flaw in the fic etc than kakshis teaching views in canon

Plus the fact Sasuke's flaws and obession with revenge drove his actions in leaving the village.

Yeah true hinata has those things as well so it isn't totally around naruto, again i don't hate her, i just think she isn't very interesting very much and find the anime's team overuse of her a bit overblown, when they flanderize Sakura for no good reason, not that she's a much better character, just wasted overall and underused.

But yeah agree with your points above.

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