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** Season 2 has Ciri's final vision in the House of the Undying: revealing possible grim fates for the characters of westeros, and her challenging Daenerys to not become [[FanDisillusionment like the Dany of season 8]].
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** Season 2 has Ciri's final vision in the House of the Undying: revealing possible grim fates for the characters of westeros, and her challenging Daenerys to not become [[FanDisillusionment like the Dany of season 8]].8.
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* GrowingTheBeard: The early fic sometimes got criticism for issues in presentation, grammar or the fact that in a way it was a Geralt exploratory part of the story. The point where the fic started to grow its beard a bit more was when Gaunter showed up, giving Geralt's journey a bit more focus for the future. But the real point where the story began to flex its plot powers was when Geralt joined the Tournament of the Hand and began to not only make friends with other major players, but show the author's increasing skill in writing fight scenes. From there, things only escalated, until he began to create a story that was very much NOT TheStationsOfTheCanon.
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** Geralt rapidly begins to gain this reputation across Westeros. Not only for his service to the north, but because he beat both Clegane brothers and JAMIE, who are are basically renowned as the best fighters of the realm. Then there's his political and planning skills, and you have the lone wolf hero that's becoming a new legend for the kingdoms.
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** Geralt rapidly begins to gain this reputation across Westeros. Not only for his service to the north, North, but because he beat both Clegane brothers and JAMIE, who are are basically renowned as the best fighters of the realm. Then there's his political and planning skills, and you have the lone wolf hero that's becoming a new legend for the kingdoms.
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* MagnificentBastard: Zarin, the Grimm of Schemes. An ordinary man, first learning under the maesters then the alchemist's guild, he grew disgruntled with the elitism on display, and began scheming to bring the mighty down and raise up the smallfolk. While his methods of doing so include assassination and subterfuge, and his [[ThePerfectionist uncompromising view of a good ruler]] make him discard much of the good that nobles could do for the realm, he is a dedicated man with plans to change the world both secretly, and openly by lifting it up through [[GameChanger Technological advancement]].
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Renly Baratheon maintains his charming and bold stance as wanting to be king, but this story adds that he also carries some of Stannis's resentments of his brothers. Like Stannis, he feels overlooked, though in his case it's because he felt his brothers were too martial and didn't appreciate what he was doing as Lord Paramount and Master of Laws.
** Likewise, Stannis still has his feeling of duty to the crown, but it also adds that he has a decent administrative mind due to his recognizing ways his kingship can benefit The North.
** Likewise, Stannis still has his feeling of duty to the crown, but it also adds that he has a decent administrative mind due to his recognizing ways his kingship can benefit The North.
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** Geralt rapidly begins to gain this reputation across Westeros. Not only for his service to the north, but because he beat both clegane brothers and JAMIE, who are are basically renowned as the best fighters of the realm. Then there's his political and planning skills, and you have the lone wolf hero that's becoming a new legend for the kingdoms.
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** Geralt rapidly begins to gain this reputation across Westeros. Not only for his service to the north, but because he beat both clegane Clegane brothers and JAMIE, who are are basically renowned as the best fighters of the realm. Then there's his political and planning skills, and you have the lone wolf hero that's becoming a new legend for the kingdoms.
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* SignatureScene: Like in many crossovers in Westeros, Geralt cements his place as the great signature SpannerInTheWorks in his near single handed rescue of Sansa and Ned from execution day.
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** Season 1:
*** Geralt at the Tournament Melee, where he shows his raw skills against 3 of the greatest warriors of Westeros.
*** Like in many crossovers in Westeros, Geralt cements his place as the great signature SpannerInTheWorks in his near single handed rescue of Sansa and Ned from execution day.
** Season 1:
*** Geralt at the Tournament Melee, where he shows his raw skills against 3 of the greatest warriors of Westeros.
*** Like in many crossovers in Westeros, Geralt cements his place as the great signature SpannerInTheWorks in his near single handed rescue of Sansa and Ned from execution day.
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** Geralt rapidly begins to gain this reputation across Westeros. Not only for his service to the north, but because he beat both clegane brothers and JAMIE, who are are basically renowned as the best fighters of the realm. Then there's his political and planning skills, and you have the lone wolf hero that's becoming a new legend for the kingdoms.
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** Geralt rapidly begins to gain this reputation across Westeros. Not only for his service to the north, but because he beat both clegane brothers and JAMIE, who are are basically renowned as the best fighters of the realm. Then there's his political and planning skills, and you have the lone wolf hero that's becoming a new legend for the kingdoms.kingdoms.
* SignatureScene: Like in many crossovers in Westeros, Geralt cements his place as the great signature SpannerInTheWorks in his near single handed rescue of Sansa and Ned from execution day.
** Season 2 has Ciri's final vision in the House of the Undying: revealing possible grim fates for the characters of westeros, and her challenging Daenerys to not become [[FanDisillusionment like the Dany of season 8]].
* SignatureScene: Like in many crossovers in Westeros, Geralt cements his place as the great signature SpannerInTheWorks in his near single handed rescue of Sansa and Ned from execution day.
** Season 2 has Ciri's final vision in the House of the Undying: revealing possible grim fates for the characters of westeros, and her challenging Daenerys to not become [[FanDisillusionment like the Dany of season 8]].
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* EvilIsCool: Despite his very evil disposition, Euron is a smooth, smart and dangerous man, who works his way around other players in the game of thrones with hardly any fear.
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* EvilIsCool: Despite his very evil disposition, Euron is a smooth, smart and dangerous man, who works his way around other players in the game of thrones with hardly any fear.fear.
* MagnificentBastard: Zarin, the Grimm of Schemes. An ordinary man, first learning under the maesters then the alchemist's guild, he grew disgruntled with the elitism on display, and began scheming to bring the mighty down and raise up the smallfolk. While his methods of doing so include assassination and subterfuge, and his [[ThePerfectionist uncompromising view of a good ruler]] make him discard much of the good that nobles could do for the realm, he is a dedicated man with plans to change the world both secretly, and openly by lifting it up through [[GameChanger Technological advancement]].
* MemeticBadass:
** Geralt rapidly begins to gain this reputation across Westeros. Not only for his service to the north, but because he beat both clegane brothers and JAMIE, who are are basically renowned as the best fighters of the realm. Then there's his political and planning skills, and you have the lone wolf hero that's becoming a new legend for the kingdoms.
* MagnificentBastard: Zarin, the Grimm of Schemes. An ordinary man, first learning under the maesters then the alchemist's guild, he grew disgruntled with the elitism on display, and began scheming to bring the mighty down and raise up the smallfolk. While his methods of doing so include assassination and subterfuge, and his [[ThePerfectionist uncompromising view of a good ruler]] make him discard much of the good that nobles could do for the realm, he is a dedicated man with plans to change the world both secretly, and openly by lifting it up through [[GameChanger Technological advancement]].
* MemeticBadass:
** Geralt rapidly begins to gain this reputation across Westeros. Not only for his service to the north, but because he beat both clegane brothers and JAMIE, who are are basically renowned as the best fighters of the realm. Then there's his political and planning skills, and you have the lone wolf hero that's becoming a new legend for the kingdoms.
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* AlasPoorScrappy: Despite being played for a sclub, and his own reputation in canon, the death of [[spoiler: Edmure]] holds deeply tragic dimensions with his lamenting his foolishness and being unable to pass a last word to his family.
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** Likewise, Stannis still has his feeling of duty to the crown, but it also adds that he has a decent administrative mind due to his recognizing ways his kingship can benefit The North.
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** Likewise, Stannis still has his feeling of duty to the crown, but it also adds that he has a decent administrative mind due to his recognizing ways his kingship can benefit The North.North.
* AngstWhatAngst: Thoros partially falls into this after [[spoiler: Ned's]] death. In part because he chooses to focus on his deeds and impact over the loss.
** Arya also falls into this some too, but part of it is covering her grief with anger. Which Geralt tries to sharpen into something more productive.
* EvilIsCool: Despite his very evil disposition, Euron is a smooth, smart and dangerous man, who works his way around other players in the game of thrones with hardly any fear.
* AngstWhatAngst: Thoros partially falls into this after [[spoiler: Ned's]] death. In part because he chooses to focus on his deeds and impact over the loss.
** Arya also falls into this some too, but part of it is covering her grief with anger. Which Geralt tries to sharpen into something more productive.
* EvilIsCool: Despite his very evil disposition, Euron is a smooth, smart and dangerous man, who works his way around other players in the game of thrones with hardly any fear.
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Renly Baratheon maintains his charming and bold stance as wanting to be king, but this story adds that he also carries some of Stannis's resentments of his brothers. Like Stannis, he feels overlooked, though in his case it's because he felt his brothers were too martial and didn't appreciate what he was doing as Lord Paramount and Master of Laws.
** Likewise, Stannis still has his feeling of duty to the crown, but it also adds that he has a decent administrative mind due to his recognizing ways his kingship can benefit The North.
** Likewise, Stannis still has his feeling of duty to the crown, but it also adds that he has a decent administrative mind due to his recognizing ways his kingship can benefit The North.
