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* DesignatedLoveInterest: Parlin {{defie|dTrope}}s this with respect to Vivenna when she supposes that, with her original marriage prospects off the table, she might as well marry him instead. He observes that their families' allegiance isn't relevant in Hallandren, bluntly tells her that she never even bothered to be nice to him, and leaves to flirt with someone else.
* DracoInLeatherPants: Often inverted. [[spoiler:It's common for first-time readers to fall in love with the mercenaries before it turns out that they're not joking about their sadism]].
* DracoInLeatherPants: Often inverted. [[spoiler:It's common for first-time readers to fall in love with the mercenaries before it turns out that they're not joking about their sadism]].
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Early on in the book, it's established that you can make Awakenings cheaper by making the object you are Awakening shaped like a human, or by putting a bit of your own body (hair or such) on the item to be Awakened as a focus. This never really comes up again, because the protagonists have access to so many Breaths that they don't need to bother with such crutches. Creator/BrandonSanderson has mentioned in the Annotations that he hopes to make more use of these concepts in the sequel.sequel
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** Vivenna's [[spoiler:time in the streets and the descriptions of her utter desperation, her starvation and filth, and the way her body and mind are slowly shutting down from lack of food]] -- especially knowing that [[spoiler:the mercs]] are hunting her and ''will torture her'' if they find her. Thankfully, this culminates in her being picked up by [[spoiler:Vasher]]. However, while the ''reader'' knows this is probably the best possible thing that could happen to Vivenna at this point, [[spoiler:Vivenna's previous meeting with Vasher involved kidnapping and threats of murder]]. So when she wakes and sees who's in the room with her, her first question -- upon realizing that she's been bathed and is wearing [[UndressingTheUnconscious different clothes]] -- is to quietly ask [[spoiler:Vasher if he raped her]]. The nightmare fuel is the way she's so calm about asking; after all she's been through, she seems resigned to the idea that another trauma might have been just heaped on her to top off all the rest.
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** Vivenna's [[spoiler:time in the streets and the descriptions of her utter desperation, her starvation and filth, and the way her body and mind are slowly shutting down from lack of food]] -- especially knowing that [[spoiler:the mercs]] are hunting her and ''will torture her'' if they find her. Thankfully, this culminates in her being picked up by [[spoiler:Vasher]]. However, while the ''reader'' knows this is probably the best possible thing that could happen to Vivenna at this point, [[spoiler:Vivenna's previous meeting with Vasher involved kidnapping and threats of murder]]. So when she wakes and sees who's in the room with her, her first question -- upon realizing that she's been bathed and is wearing [[UndressingTheUnconscious different clothes]] -- is to quietly ask [[spoiler:Vasher [[spoiler:Vasher]] if he raped her]].her. The nightmare fuel is the way she's so calm about asking; after all she's been through, she seems resigned to the idea that another trauma might have been just heaped on her to top off all the rest.
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** Vivenna's [[spoiler:time in the streets and the descriptions of her utter desperation, her starvation and filth, and the way her body and mind are slowly shutting down from lack of food]] -- especially knowing that [[spoiler:the mercs]] are hunting her and ''will torture her'' if they find her. Thankfully, this culminates in her being picked up by Vasher. However, while the ''reader'' knows this is probably the best possible thing that could happen to Vivenna at this point, Vivenna's previous meeting with Vasher involved kidnapping and threats of murder. So when she wakes and sees who's in the room with her, her first question -- upon realizing that she's been bathed and is wearing [[UndressingTheUnconscious different clothes]] -- is to quietly ask Vasher if he raped her. The nightmare fuel is the way she's so calm about asking; after all she's been through, she seems resigned to the idea that another trauma might have been just heaped on her to top off all the rest.
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* DracoInLeatherPants: Often inverted. [[spoiler:It's common for first-time readers to fall in love with the mercenaries before it turns out that they're not joking about their sadism]].
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* DesignatedLoveInterest: Parlin {{defie|dTrope}}s this with respect to Vivenna when she supposes that, with her original marriage prospects off the table, she might as well marry him instead. He observes that their families' allegiance isn't relevant in Hallandren, bluntly tells her that she never even bothered to be nice to him, and leaves to flirt with someone else.
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* MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler:Denth. Not only does he have Vivenna (and the reader) convinced he's a good guy for the first half of the novel, he's also the driving force behind destabilizing Hallandren from within.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Blushweaver's murder.]] ''So not cool''.
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Blushweaver's murder.]] ''So not cool''.
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* FridgeBrilliance: Lemex catches fever and dies just as Vivenna reaches him, resulting in the fortunate passing on of his Breath to her. The timing of the death is a large coincidence that slightly strains suspension of disbelief. [[spoiler: However, the truth is that Denth is responsible for the death and the timing, revealed with his sudden betrayal.]]
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* {{Squick}}: Per WordOfGod, Clod the Lifeless was once Arsteel. Denth's teammate [[DarkActionGirl Jewels]] was once in love with Arsteel. Now that he's a Lifeless, she still sometimes sleeps with him. [[spoiler:Yeah, Denth's team all have issues.]]
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* {{Squick}}: Per WordOfGod, Clod the Lifeless was once Arsteel. Denth's teammate [[DarkActionGirl Jewels]] was once in love with Arsteel. Now that he's a Lifeless, she still sometimes sleeps with him. [[spoiler:Yeah, Denth's team all have issues.]]]]
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* MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler:Denth. Not only does he have Vivenna (and the reader) convinced he's a good guy for the first half of the novel, he's also the driving force behind destabilizing Hallandren from within and is DangerouslyGenreSavvy.within.]]
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* {{Squick}}: Per WordOfGod, Clod the Lifeless was once Arsteel. Denth's teammate [[DarkActionGirl Jewels]] was once in love with Arsteel. Now that he's a Lifeless, she still sometimes sleeps with him. [[spoiler:Yeah, Denth's team all have issues.]]
* TheDogWasTheMastermind: The foreshadowing that [[spoiler:the Pahn Kahl]] are behind everything is very subtle; not much information is given about them, so it feels like TheReveal comes out of nowhere.
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* {{Squick}}: Per WordOfGod, Clod the Lifeless was once Arsteel. Denth's teammate [[DarkActionGirl Jewels]] was once in love with Arsteel. Now that he's a Lifeless, she still sometimes sleeps with him. [[spoiler:Yeah, Denth's team all have issues.]]
* TheDogWasTheMastermind: The foreshadowing that [[spoiler:the Pahn Kahl]] are behind everything is very subtle; not much information is given about them, so it feels like TheReveal comes out of nowhere.]]
* TheDogWasTheMastermind: The foreshadowing that [[spoiler:the Pahn Kahl]] are behind everything is very subtle; not much information is given about them, so it feels like TheReveal comes out of nowhere.
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* MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler:Denth. Not only does he have Vivenna (and the reader) convinced he's a good guy for the first half of the novel, he's also the driving force behind destabilizing Hallandren from with in within and is DangerouslyGenreSavvy.]]
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* CompleteMonster: There's a very good reason why [[spoiler:Tonk Fah]] goes through [[spoiler:pets]] so quickly.
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* CompleteMonster: There's a very good reason why [[spoiler:Tonk Fah]] goes through [[spoiler:pets]] so quickly.
* LawfulNeutral: [[spoiler:The God King's priests.]]
* FridgeBrilliance:LemexLemex catches fever and dies just as Vivenna reaches him, resulting in the fortunate passing on of his Breath to her. The timing of the death is a large coincidence that slightly strains suspension of disbelief. [[spoiler: However, the truth is that Denth is responsible for the death and the timing, revealed with his sudden betrayal.]]
* MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler:Denth. Not only does he have Vivenna (and the reader) convinced he's a good guy for the first half of the novel, he's also the driving force behind destabilizing Hallandren from with in and is DangerouslyGenreSavvy.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Blushweaver's murder.]] ''So not cool''.
* NightmareFuel: This little exchange:
-->Vasher [quietly]: Torturing me won't bring her back.
-->Denth [turning, the moonlight glinting on his blade]: No. It won't.
* {{Squick}}: Per WordOfGod, Clod the Lifeless was once Arsteel. Denth's teammate [[DarkActionGirl Jewels]] was once in love with Arsteel. Now that he's a Lifeless, she still sometimes sleeps with him. [[spoiler:Yeah, Denth's team all have issues.]]
* TheDogWasTheMastermind: The foreshadowing that [[spoiler:the Pahn Kahl]] are behind everything is very subtle; not much information is given about them, so it feels like TheReveal comes out of nowhere.
* LawfulNeutral: [[spoiler:The God King's priests.]]
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* MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler:Denth. Not only does he have Vivenna (and the reader) convinced he's a good guy for the first half of the novel, he's also the driving force behind destabilizing Hallandren from with in and is DangerouslyGenreSavvy.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Blushweaver's murder.]] ''So not cool''.
* NightmareFuel: This little exchange:
-->Vasher [quietly]: Torturing me won't bring her back.
-->Denth [turning, the moonlight glinting on his blade]: No. It won't.
* {{Squick}}: Per WordOfGod, Clod the Lifeless was once Arsteel. Denth's teammate [[DarkActionGirl Jewels]] was once in love with Arsteel. Now that he's a Lifeless, she still sometimes sleeps with him. [[spoiler:Yeah, Denth's team all have issues.]]
* TheDogWasTheMastermind: The foreshadowing that [[spoiler:the Pahn Kahl]] are behind everything is very subtle; not much information is given about them, so it feels like TheReveal comes out of nowhere.
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* CompleteMonster: There's a very good reason why [[spoiler:Tonk Fah]] goes through [[spoiler:pets]] so quickly.
* LawfulNeutral: [[spoiler:The God King's priests.]]
* FridgeBrilliance: Lemex catches fever and dies just as Vivenna reaches him, resulting in the fortunate passing on of his Breath to her. The timing of the death is a large coincidence that slightly strains suspension of disbelief. [[spoiler: However, the truth is that Denth is responsible for the death and the timing, revealed with his sudden betrayal.]]
* MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler:Denth. Not only does he have Vivenna (and the reader) convinced he's a good guy for the first half of the novel, he's also the driving force behind destabilizing Hallandren from with in and is DangerouslyGenreSavvy.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Blushweaver's murder.]] ''So not cool''.
* NightmareFuel: This little exchange:
-->Vasher [quietly]: Torturing me won't bring her back.
-->Denth [turning, the moonlight glinting on his blade]: No. It won't.
* {{Squick}}: Per WordOfGod, Clod the Lifeless was once Arsteel. Denth's teammate [[DarkActionGirl Jewels]] was once in love with Arsteel. Now that he's a Lifeless, she still sometimes sleeps with him. [[spoiler:Yeah, Denth's team all have issues.]]
* TheDogWasTheMastermind: The foreshadowing that [[spoiler:the Pahn Kahl]] are behind everything is very subtle; not much information is given about them, so it feels like TheReveal comes out of nowhere.
* LawfulNeutral: [[spoiler:The God King's priests.]]
* FridgeBrilliance: Lemex catches fever and dies just as Vivenna reaches him, resulting in the fortunate passing on of his Breath to her. The timing of the death is a large coincidence that slightly strains suspension of disbelief. [[spoiler: However, the truth is that Denth is responsible for the death and the timing, revealed with his sudden betrayal.]]
* MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler:Denth. Not only does he have Vivenna (and the reader) convinced he's a good guy for the first half of the novel, he's also the driving force behind destabilizing Hallandren from with in and is DangerouslyGenreSavvy.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Blushweaver's murder.]] ''So not cool''.
* NightmareFuel: This little exchange:
-->Vasher [quietly]: Torturing me won't bring her back.
-->Denth [turning, the moonlight glinting on his blade]: No. It won't.
* {{Squick}}: Per WordOfGod, Clod the Lifeless was once Arsteel. Denth's teammate [[DarkActionGirl Jewels]] was once in love with Arsteel. Now that he's a Lifeless, she still sometimes sleeps with him. [[spoiler:Yeah, Denth's team all have issues.]]
* TheDogWasTheMastermind: The foreshadowing that [[spoiler:the Pahn Kahl]] are behind everything is very subtle; not much information is given about them, so it feels like TheReveal comes out of nowhere.
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* LawfulNeutral: [[spoiler:The God King's priests.]]
* MagnificentBastard: [[spoiler:Denth. Not only does he have Vivenna (and the reader) convinced he's a good guy for the first half of the novel, he's also the driving force behind destabilizing Hallandren from with in and is DangerouslyGenreSavvy.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Blushweaver's murder.]] ''So not cool''.
* NightmareFuel: This little exchange:
-->Vasher [quietly]: Torturing me won't bring her back.
-->Denth [turning, the moonlight glinting on his blade]: No. It won't.
* {{Squick}}: Per WordOfGod, Clod the Lifeless was once Arsteel. Denth's teammate [[DarkActionGirl Jewels]] was once in love with Arsteel. Now that he's a Lifeless, she still sometimes sleeps with him. [[spoiler:Yeah, Denth's team all have issues.]]
* TheDogWasTheMastermind: The foreshadowing that [[spoiler:the Pahn Kahl]] are behind everything is very subtle; not much information is given about them, so it feels like TheReveal comes out of nowhere.
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-->Denth [turning, the moonlight glinting on his blade]: I know.
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* {{Squick}}: Per WordOfGod, Clod the Lifeless was once Arsteel. Denth's teammate [[DarkActionGirl Jewels]] was once in love with Arsteel. Now that he's a Lifeless, she still sometimes sleeps with him. [[spoiler:Yeah, Denth's team all have issues.]]]]
* TheDogWasTheMastermind: The foreshadowing that [[spoiler:the Pahn Kahl]] are behind everything is very subtle; not much information is given about them, so it feels like TheReveal comes out of nowhere.
* TheDogWasTheMastermind: The foreshadowing that [[spoiler:the Pahn Kahl]] are behind everything is very subtle; not much information is given about them, so it feels like TheReveal comes out of nowhere.