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* FridgeBrilliance: What does China Mieville -- outspoken socialist that he is -- name the blonde-haired, blue-eyed, white-skinned chosen one of his story? "The shwazzy", as in, "the bourgeoisie". She's promptly done away with, leaving a Pakistani girl as the heroine.
** It's also a misspelling of the French word "choisi", which means "chosen one"
** It's also a misspelling of the French word "choisi", which means "chosen one"
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* FridgeBrilliance: What does China Mieville -- outspoken socialist that he is -- name the blonde-haired, blue-eyed, white-skinned chosen one of his story? "The shwazzy", as in, "the bourgeoisie". She's promptly done away with, leaving a Pakistani girl as the heroine.
**heroine. It's also a misspelling of the French word "choisi", which means "chosen one"
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** The description of the Black Windows. First, there's one. And then a few more climb out it, a few more climb out of them, and a few more climb out of ''them'', until the room is filled with them! The bad part? They'll eat any intruders. The worse part? It's impossible to get out once you've been eaten. The absolute worst part?! You can sometimes hear the screams and banging of the recently-eaten.
*** It really does get worse than that- there's no indication that the Black Windows actually ''digest'' anything, so the eaten will most likely starve to death, assuming they don't choose another way out first.
*** It really does get worse than that- there's no indication that the Black Windows actually ''digest'' anything, so the eaten will most likely starve to death, assuming they don't choose another way out first.
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** The description of the Black Windows. First, there's one. And then a few more climb out it, a few more climb out of them, and a few more climb out of ''them'', until the room is filled with them! The bad part? They'll eat any intruders. The worse part? It's intruders, and it's impossible to get out once you've been eaten. The absolute worst part?! You can sometimes hear the screams and banging of the recently-eaten.
*** It really does get worse than that-recently-eaten. Even worse, there's no indication that the Black Windows actually ''digest'' anything, so the eaten will most likely starve to death, assuming they don't choose another way out first.
*** It really does get worse than that-
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** It's also a misspelling of the French word "choisi", which means "chosen one"
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*FridgeBrilliance: What does China Mieville -- outspoken socialist that he is -- name the blonde-haired, blue-eyed, white-skinned chosen one of his story? "The shwazzy", as in, "the bourgeoisie". She's promptly done away with, leaving a Pakistani girl as the heroine.
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** The smombies. Shambling dead bodies inhabited by bits of the Smog to act as mostly mindless fighters and enforcers. The inhabitants of Wraithtown understandably hate them more than anything else, since those are ''their'' former bodies wandering around as evil minions.
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*** It really does get worse than that- there's no indication that the Black Windows actually ''digest'' anything, so the eaten will most likely starve to death, assuming they don't choose another way out first.
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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad the Smog]], Giraffes, and the [[HurricaneOfPuns Black Windows]]
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** Giraffes. They're the top predator in the outskirts of Un Lun Dun. Also, the Black Windows, which is what you'd get if you crossed spiders, windows, an EldritchAbomination, and AlienGeometries. They start out as one Black Window, and then one climbs out of it, and then two climb out of each, and then three climb out of each of ''those'', and so on until there are ''thousands''., all climbing and clicking and screaming. Though the screaming isn't from the windows themselves. It's from the people trapped on the other side . . .
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** Giraffes. They're the top predator in the outskirts of Un Lun Dun. Also, the Black Windows, which is what you'd get if you crossed spiders, windows, an EldritchAbomination, and AlienGeometries. They start out as one Black Window, and then one climbs out of it, and then two climb out of each, and then three climb out of each of ''those'', and so on until there are ''thousands''., all climbing and clicking and screaming. Though the screaming isn't from the windows themselves. It's from the people trapped on the other side . . .\n
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* NightmareFuel: The book provides an illustration of the carnivorous giraffes.
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* NightmareFuel: The book provides an illustration of the carnivorous giraffes.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Giraffes. They're the top predator in the outskirts of Un Lun Dun. Also, the Black Windows, which is what you'd get if you crossed spiders, windows, an EldritchAbomination, and AlienGeometries. They start out as one Black Window, and then one climbs out of it, and then two climb out of each, and then three climb out of each of ''those'', and so on until there are ''thousands''., all climbing and clicking and screaming. Though the screaming isn't from the windows themselves. It's from the people trapped on the other side . . .
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Giraffes. They're the top predator in the outskirts of Un Lun Dun. Also, the Black Windows, which is what you'd get if you crossed spiders, windows, an EldritchAbomination, and AlienGeometries. They start out as one Black Window, and then one climbs out of it, and then two climb out of each, and then three climb out of each of ''those'', and so on until there are ''thousands''., all climbing and clicking and screaming. Though the screaming isn't from the windows themselves. It's from the people trapped inside.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Giraffes. They're the top predator in the outskirts of Un Lun Dun. Also, the Black Windows, which is what you'd get if you crossed spiders, windows, an EldritchAbomination, and AlienGeometries. They start out as one Black Window, and then one climbs out of it, and then two climb out of each, and then three climb out of each of ''those'', and so on until there are ''thousands''., all climbing and clicking and screaming. Though the screaming isn't from the windows themselves. It's from the people trapped inside.on the other side . . .
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** The description of the Black Windows. First, there's one. And then a few more climb out it, a few more climb out of them, and a few more climb out of ''them'', until the room is filled with them! The bad part? They'll eat any intruders. The worse part? It's impossible to get out once you've been eaten. The absolute worst part?! You can sometimes hear the screams and banging of the recently-eaten.
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** The description of the Black Windows. First, there's one. And then a few more climb out it, a few more climb out of them, and a few more climb out of ''them'', until the room is filled with them! The bad part? They'll eat any intruders. The worse part? It's impossible to get out once you've been eaten. The absolute worst part?! You can sometimes hear the screams and banging of the recently-eaten.recently-eaten.
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Giraffes. They're the top predator in the outskirts of Un Lun Dun. Also, the Black Windows, which is what you'd get if you crossed spiders, windows, an EldritchAbomination, and AlienGeometries. They start out as one Black Window, and then one climbs out of it, and then two climb out of each, and then three climb out of each of ''those'', and so on until there are ''thousands''., all climbing and clicking and screaming. Though the screaming isn't from the windows themselves. It's from the people trapped inside.
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Giraffes. They're the top predator in the outskirts of Un Lun Dun. Also, the Black Windows, which is what you'd get if you crossed spiders, windows, an EldritchAbomination, and AlienGeometries. They start out as one Black Window, and then one climbs out of it, and then two climb out of each, and then three climb out of each of ''those'', and so on until there are ''thousands''., all climbing and clicking and screaming. Though the screaming isn't from the windows themselves. It's from the people trapped inside.
