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* JerkassWoobie: While you can hardly blame [[spoiler: Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie for being upset that Twilight (unintentionally) put them through such heartache, you’d think they’d be happy she’s alive and give her a chance to explain herself instead of resorting to threats and violence. Applejack especially]]
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** JerkAssWoobie: While you can hardly blame [[spoiler: Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie for being upset that Twilight (unintentionally) put them through such heartache, you’d think they’d be happy she’s alive and give her a chance to explain herself instead of resorting to threats and violence. Applejack especially]]
*** WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: [[spoiler: Starflare]]
*** WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: [[spoiler: Starflare]]
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* PainfulRhyme: Notably and mercifully averted, the author does a BEAUTIFUL job with Zecora’s dialogue.
* TearJerker: [[spoiler: TWILIGHT’S FUNERAL. SO MUCH. The broken looks on the faces of the rest of the Mane Six plus Spike, particularly Rarity who is leaning on Applejack for support; seeing Twilight’s father and older brother as two of the pallbearers; the devastated look on the face of Twilight’s mother as she and Cadence lean on their respective husbands for support, who are clearly doing their best to stand strong for their wives. Also seeing Applebloom, Scootaloo, Cheerilee, Derpy/Ditzy, Dinky, Mayor Mare, Big Macintosh, Granny Smith, Snips, Snails, Lyra, Bon Bon, and Dr. Stable all attending the funeral as well, plus seeing Mr. Cake and what appears to be either Dr. Whooves/Time Turner or Caramel as the remaining two pallbearers makes you realize how well loved Twilight was even outside her immediate friends and family and how deeply news of her death affected Ponyville.]]
** Then we have [[spoiler: Twilight’s confession, where she admits to Fluttershy that there was nothing heroic about her faking her death and disappearing. She just flat out panicked and ran away. It’s clear Twilight feels HORRIBLE about this and desperately needs someone to forgive her.]]
** [[spoiler: Starflare’s]] backstory is no picnic either. After [[spoiler: losing half his face saving Twilight from an explosion, he blames himself for the accident and says he deserves his disfigurement for endangering Twilight by putting her in that situation in the first place. Although he recovers from that emotionally, apparently he and his wife Locket had a stillborn child. After Starflare goes off the deep end and willingly endangers Twilight, and finally we have Celestia’s panicked reaction and a brief moment of despair when she thinks she lost little Twilight.]]
* TearJerker: [[spoiler: TWILIGHT’S FUNERAL. SO MUCH. The broken looks on the faces of the rest of the Mane Six plus Spike, particularly Rarity who is leaning on Applejack for support; seeing Twilight’s father and older brother as two of the pallbearers; the devastated look on the face of Twilight’s mother as she and Cadence lean on their respective husbands for support, who are clearly doing their best to stand strong for their wives. Also seeing Applebloom, Scootaloo, Cheerilee, Derpy/Ditzy, Dinky, Mayor Mare, Big Macintosh, Granny Smith, Snips, Snails, Lyra, Bon Bon, and Dr. Stable all attending the funeral as well, plus seeing Mr. Cake and what appears to be either Dr. Whooves/Time Turner or Caramel as the remaining two pallbearers makes you realize how well loved Twilight was even outside her immediate friends and family and how deeply news of her death affected Ponyville.]]
** Then we have [[spoiler: Twilight’s confession, where she admits to Fluttershy that there was nothing heroic about her faking her death and disappearing. She just flat out panicked and ran away. It’s clear Twilight feels HORRIBLE about this and desperately needs someone to forgive her.]]
** [[spoiler: Starflare’s]] backstory is no picnic either. After [[spoiler: losing half his face saving Twilight from an explosion, he blames himself for the accident and says he deserves his disfigurement for endangering Twilight by putting her in that situation in the first place. Although he recovers from that emotionally, apparently he and his wife Locket had a stillborn child. After Starflare goes off the deep end and willingly endangers Twilight, and finally we have Celestia’s panicked reaction and a brief moment of despair when she thinks she lost little Twilight.]]
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartWarming: [[spoiler: Twilight and Applejack reconciling.]]
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartWarming: SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: [[spoiler: Twilight and Applejack reconciling.]]
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*** WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: [[spoiler: Starflare]]
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*** WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: [[spoiler: Starflare]]Starflare]]
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* CompleteMonster: Starflare
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* PainfulRhyme: Notably and mercifully averted, the author does a BEAUTIFUL job with Zecora’s dialogue.
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** JerkAssWoobie: While you can hardly blame [[spoiler: the rest of the Mane Six for being upset that Twilight (unintentionally) put them through such heartache, you’d think they’d be happy she’s alive and give her a chance to explain herself instead of resorting to threats and violence.]]
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** JerkAssWoobie: While you can hardly blame [[spoiler: the rest of the Mane Six Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie for being upset that Twilight (unintentionally) put them through such heartache, you’d think they’d be happy she’s alive and give her a chance to explain herself instead of resorting to threats and violence.]]violence. Applejack especially]]
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* CompleteMonster: Starflare
* CrowningMomentOfHeartWarming: [[spoiler: Twilight and Applejack reconciling.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: Starflare [[spoiler: digging up Twilight's grave, showing the coffin to Celestia, and threatening to use Nercromancer to get the answers he seeks.]]
*NightmareFuel: Bruno in general, plus Starflare's beatdown of Twilight
*TearJerker: [[spoiler: TWILIGHT’S FUNERAL. SO MUCH. The broken looks on the faces of the rest of the Mane Six plus Spike, particularly Rarity who is leaning on Applejack for support; seeing Twilight’s father and older brother as two of the pallbearers; the devastated look on the face of Twilight’s mother as she and Cadence lean on their respective husbands for support, who are clearly doing their best to stand strong for their wives. Also seeing Applebloom, Scootaloo, Cheerilee, Derpy/Ditzy, Dinky, Mayor Mare, Big Macintosh, Granny Smith, Snips, Snails, Lyra, Bon Bon, and Dr. Stable all attending the funeral as well, plus seeing Mr. Cake and what appears to be either Dr. Whooves/Time Turner or Caramel as the remaining two pallbearers makes you realize how well loved Twilight was even outside her immediate friends and family and how deeply news of her death affected Ponyville.]]
** Then we have [[spoiler: Twilight’s confession, where she admits to Fluttershy that there was nothing heroic about her faking her death and disappearing. She just flat out panicked and ran away. It’s clear Twilight feels HORRIBLE about this and desperately needs someone to forgive her.]]
** [[spoiler: Starflare’s]] backstory is no picnic either. After [[spoiler: losing half his face saving Twilight from an explosion, he blames himself for the accident and says he deserves his disfigurement for endangering Twilight by putting her in that situation in the first place. Although he recovers from that emotionally, apparently he and his wife Locket had a stillborn child. After Starflare goes off the deep end and willingly endangers Twilight, and finally we have Celestia’s panicked reaction and a brief moment of despair when she thinks she lost little Twilight.]]
* TheWoobie: [[spoiler: TWILIGHT. Oh dear Celestia, TWILIGHT. Assaulted while suffering from severe sleep deprivation due to hideous nightmares and beaten to within an inch of her life by the creature from her nightmares, and while resting up realizes, truly realizes how close she came to dying against somepony who HONESTLY INTENDED TO KILL HER. Then, when her friends realize she’s alive, rather than screaming with joy and guarding her around the clock, they knock her block off, scream at her, and storm out without giving her a chance to explain her reasons. The reason? After everything she’s been through, her courage failed her as despite her courage and heroism, she’s still a scared pony on the inside who has been forced to be strong for longer than any pony should have to.]]
** JerkAssWoobie: While you can hardly blame [[spoiler: the rest of the Mane Six for being upset that Twilight (unintentionally) put them through such heartache, you’d think they’d be happy she’s alive and give her a chance to explain herself instead of resorting to threats and violence.]]
*** WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: [[spoiler: Starflare]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartWarming: [[spoiler: Twilight and Applejack reconciling.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: Starflare [[spoiler: digging up Twilight's grave, showing the coffin to Celestia, and threatening to use Nercromancer to get the answers he seeks.]]
*NightmareFuel: Bruno in general, plus Starflare's beatdown of Twilight
*TearJerker: [[spoiler: TWILIGHT’S FUNERAL. SO MUCH. The broken looks on the faces of the rest of the Mane Six plus Spike, particularly Rarity who is leaning on Applejack for support; seeing Twilight’s father and older brother as two of the pallbearers; the devastated look on the face of Twilight’s mother as she and Cadence lean on their respective husbands for support, who are clearly doing their best to stand strong for their wives. Also seeing Applebloom, Scootaloo, Cheerilee, Derpy/Ditzy, Dinky, Mayor Mare, Big Macintosh, Granny Smith, Snips, Snails, Lyra, Bon Bon, and Dr. Stable all attending the funeral as well, plus seeing Mr. Cake and what appears to be either Dr. Whooves/Time Turner or Caramel as the remaining two pallbearers makes you realize how well loved Twilight was even outside her immediate friends and family and how deeply news of her death affected Ponyville.]]
** Then we have [[spoiler: Twilight’s confession, where she admits to Fluttershy that there was nothing heroic about her faking her death and disappearing. She just flat out panicked and ran away. It’s clear Twilight feels HORRIBLE about this and desperately needs someone to forgive her.]]
** [[spoiler: Starflare’s]] backstory is no picnic either. After [[spoiler: losing half his face saving Twilight from an explosion, he blames himself for the accident and says he deserves his disfigurement for endangering Twilight by putting her in that situation in the first place. Although he recovers from that emotionally, apparently he and his wife Locket had a stillborn child. After Starflare goes off the deep end and willingly endangers Twilight, and finally we have Celestia’s panicked reaction and a brief moment of despair when she thinks she lost little Twilight.]]
* TheWoobie: [[spoiler: TWILIGHT. Oh dear Celestia, TWILIGHT. Assaulted while suffering from severe sleep deprivation due to hideous nightmares and beaten to within an inch of her life by the creature from her nightmares, and while resting up realizes, truly realizes how close she came to dying against somepony who HONESTLY INTENDED TO KILL HER. Then, when her friends realize she’s alive, rather than screaming with joy and guarding her around the clock, they knock her block off, scream at her, and storm out without giving her a chance to explain her reasons. The reason? After everything she’s been through, her courage failed her as despite her courage and heroism, she’s still a scared pony on the inside who has been forced to be strong for longer than any pony should have to.]]
** JerkAssWoobie: While you can hardly blame [[spoiler: the rest of the Mane Six for being upset that Twilight (unintentionally) put them through such heartache, you’d think they’d be happy she’s alive and give her a chance to explain herself instead of resorting to threats and violence.]]
*** WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: [[spoiler: Starflare]]
