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* BetterThanCanon: Between more extensive backstories for the characters along with more thorough character development and an impressive amount of interesting original characters, several traits of this fic have been regarded as better than the official story upon which it is based.
** For example, the OneSceneWonder character of Argo from the canon series has become an AscendedExtra with far more influence on the plot and quickly rose to EnsembleDarkhorse and BreakoutCharacter status.
** For example, the OneSceneWonder character of Argo from the canon series has become an AscendedExtra with far more influence on the plot and quickly rose to EnsembleDarkhorse and BreakoutCharacter status.
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*** Despite her limited screentime the character Wan Shotto has already received a fair amount of attention from readers, and she even scored fourth place in the
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*** Despite her limited screentime the character Wan Shotto has already received a fair amount of attention from readers, and she even scored fourth place in the original characters poll.
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* ItWasHisSled: Knowledgeseeker66 does not even attempt to hide the fact Kayaya Akihiko and Heathcliff are the same person. It is revealed during Chapter Seven when Heathcliff temporarily logs out into the real world.
* JerkassWoobie: Delano (Kudo Tomomi) he was once a great high school athlete who lost both his father and his ability to walk, because of his mother was neglectful in getting their car checked for maintenance purposes. His bitterness towards his mother and willingness to embrace the virtual world to walk again seems at least somewhat justified.
* JerkassWoobie: Delano (Kudo Tomomi) he was once a great high school athlete who lost both his father and his ability to walk, because of his mother was neglectful in getting their car checked for maintenance purposes. His bitterness towards his mother and willingness to embrace the virtual world to walk again seems at least somewhat justified.
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* ItWasHisSled: Knowledgeseeker66 does not even attempt to hide the fact Kayaya Kayaba Akihiko and Heathcliff are the same person. It is revealed during Chapter Seven when Heathcliff temporarily logs out into the real world.
* JerkassWoobie: Delano (Kudo Tomomi)he was once a great high school athlete who lost both his father and his ability to walk, because of his mother was neglectful in getting their car checked for maintenance purposes. His bitterness towards his mother and willingness to embrace the virtual world to walk again seems at least somewhat justified.
* JerkassWoobie: Delano (Kudo Tomomi)
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** For example, the OneSceneWonder character of Argo from the canon series has become an Ascended Extra with far more influence on the plot and quickly rose to EnsembleDarkhorse and BreakoutCharacter status.
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** For example, the OneSceneWonder character of Argo from the canon series has become an Ascended Extra AscendedExtra with far more influence on the plot and quickly rose to EnsembleDarkhorse and BreakoutCharacter status.
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* BetterThanCanon: Between more extensive backstories for the characters along with more thorough character development and an impressive amount of interesting original characters, several traits of this fic have been regarded as better than the official story upon which it is based.
** For example, the OneSceneWonder character of Argo from the canon series has become an Ascended Extra with far more influence on the plot and quickly rose to EnsembleDarkhorse and BreakoutCharacter status.
** For example, the OneSceneWonder character of Argo from the canon series has become an Ascended Extra with far more influence on the plot and quickly rose to EnsembleDarkhorse and BreakoutCharacter status.
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* IronWoobie: Kirita keeps fighting on despite the number of people who hate her for unjustified reasons keeps increasing.
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* DracoInLeatherPants: There are some readers of this fanfiction that believe Kayaba is not that bad due to his more protective side in regards to Kirita despite the fact he trapped her and thousands of other players in the virtual world.
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* Darco in LeatherPaints: They are some fanfic who believe that Kayaba's not that bad of a guy despite the fact that tapped thoaunads of players in an online world.
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* Draco in LeatherPaints: They are some fanfic who believe that Kayaba's not that bad of a guy despite the fact that tapped thoaunads of players in an online world.
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* Draco Darco in LeatherPaints: They are some fanfic who believe that Kayaba's not that bad of a guy despite the fact that tapped thoaunads of players in an online world.
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* Draco in Leather Paints: They are some fanfic who believe that Kayaba's not that bad of a guy despite the fact that tapped thoaunads of players in an online world.
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* Draco in Leather Paints: LeatherPaints: They are some fanfic who believe that Kayaba's not that bad of a guy despite the fact that tapped thoaunads of players in an online world.
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* DracoinLeatherPaints: They are some fanfic who believe that Kayaba's not that bad of a guy despite the fact that tapped thoaunads of players in an online world.
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* DracoinLeatherPaints: Draco in Leather Paints: They are some fanfic who believe that Kayaba's not that bad of a guy despite the fact that tapped thoaunads of players in an online world.
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* Dracoinleatherpaints: They are some fanfic who believe that Kayaba's not that bad of a guy despite the fact that tapped thoaunads of players in an online world.
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* Dracoinleatherpaints: DracoinLeatherPaints: They are some fanfic who believe that Kayaba's not that bad of a guy despite the fact that tapped thoaunads of players in an online world.
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* Dracoinleatherpaints: They are some fanfic who believe that Kayaba's not that bad of a guy despite the fact that tapped thoaunads of players in an online world.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Kirita and Akio are considered the most popular character of the story, but there are many characters who have received a decent fan base.
** Canon Characters:
*** Argo has generally be praised for being more involved in the storyline.
** Original Characters
*** The samurai brothers Gorobei and Kikuchiyo have been well received with Gorobei being the most popular original character and Kikuchiyo being the third most popular.
*** Delano was rated number two in the original character popularity contest due to various factors, including giving Kirita a run for her money during Chapter Three.
*** Despite her limited screentime the character Wan Shotto has already received a fair amount of attention from readers, and she even scored fourth place in the
** Canon Characters:
*** Argo has generally be praised for being more involved in the storyline.
** Original Characters
*** The samurai brothers Gorobei and Kikuchiyo have been well received with Gorobei being the most popular original character and Kikuchiyo being the third most popular.
*** Delano was rated number two in the original character popularity contest due to various factors, including giving Kirita a run for her money during Chapter Three.
*** Despite her limited screentime the character Wan Shotto has already received a fair amount of attention from readers, and she even scored fourth place in the
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* ItWasHisSled: Knowledgeseeker66 does not even attempt to hide the fact Kayaya Akihiko and Heathcliff are the same person. It is revealed during Chapter Six when Heathcliff temporarily logs out into the real world.
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* ItWasHisSled: Knowledgeseeker66 does not even attempt to hide the fact Kayaya Akihiko and Heathcliff are the same person. It is revealed during Chapter Six Seven when Heathcliff temporarily logs out into the real world.
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* ItWasHisSled: Knowledgeseeker66 does not even attempt to hide the fact Kayaya Akihiko and Heathcliff are the same person. It is revealed during Chapter Six when Heathcliff temporarily logs out into the real world.
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* FanPreferredPairing: Even before Chapter Eight, the fans were looking forward to what the Kirita and Akio relationship would be like. After the release of Chapter Eight, many fans want to see Akio and Kirita become a couple similar to their canon counterparts.
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* JerkassWoobie: Delano (Kudo Tomomi) he was once a great high school athlete who lost both his father and his ability to walk because of his mother was neglectful in getting their car checked for maintenance purposes. His bitterness towards his mother and willingness to embrace the virtual world to walk again seems at least somewhat justified.
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* JerkassWoobie: Delano (Kudo Tomomi) he was once a great high school athlete who lost both his father and his ability to walk walk, because of his mother was neglectful in getting their car checked for maintenance purposes. His bitterness towards his mother and willingness to embrace the virtual world to walk again seems at least somewhat justified.
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* JerkassWoobie: Delano (Kudo Tomomi) he was once a great high school athlete who lost both his father and his ability to walk because of his mother was neglectful in getting their car checked for maintenance purposes. His bitterness towards his mother and willingness to embrace the virtual world to walk again seems at least somewhat justified.
