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* UnfortunateImplications: Some modern readers have criticized the story for misogyny.[[http://weirdgenesis.blogspot.com/2013/05/the-great-god-pan-1890-by-arthur-machen.html]][[http://somanybooksblog.com/2012/10/31/the-great-god-pan/]][[http://ttapress.com/1030/on-machen-misogyny-and-mad-women-in-attics/]][[http://www.blackgate.com/2012/10/30/arthur-machen-and-the-great-god-pan/]] ''The Encyclopedia of Science Fiction'' (1993) is widely quoted as stating that "The story begins with an sf rationale (brain surgery) which remains one of the most dramatically horrible and misogynistic in fiction."[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Great_God_Pan#Critical_opinion]]
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* UnfortunateImplications: Some modern readers have criticized the story "The Great God Pan" for misogyny.[[http://weirdgenesis.blogspot.com/2013/05/the-great-god-pan-1890-by-arthur-machen.html]][[http://somanybooksblog.com/2012/10/31/the-great-god-pan/]][[http://ttapress.com/1030/on-machen-misogyny-and-mad-women-in-attics/]][[http://www.blackgate.com/2012/10/30/arthur-machen-and-the-great-god-pan/]] ''The Encyclopedia of Science Fiction'' (1993) is widely quoted as stating that "The story begins with an sf rationale (brain surgery) which remains one of the most dramatically horrible and misogynistic in fiction."[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Great_God_Pan#Critical_opinion]]
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* UnfortunateImplications: Some modern readers have criticized the story for misogyny.[[http://somanybooksblog.com/2012/10/31/the-great-god-pan/]][[http://ttapress.com/1030/on-machen-misogyny-and-mad-women-in-attics/]][[http://www.blackgate.com/2012/10/30/arthur-machen-and-the-great-god-pan/]] ''The Encyclopedia of Science Fiction'' (1993) is widely quoted as stating that "The story begins with an sf rationale (brain surgery) which remains one of the most dramatically horrible and misogynistic in fiction."[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Great_God_Pan#Critical_opinion]]
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* UnfortunateImplications: Some modern readers have criticized the story for misogyny.[[http://somanybooksblog.[[http://weirdgenesis.blogspot.com/2013/05/the-great-god-pan-1890-by-arthur-machen.html]][[http://somanybooksblog.com/2012/10/31/the-great-god-pan/]][[http://ttapress.com/1030/on-machen-misogyny-and-mad-women-in-attics/]][[http://www.blackgate.com/2012/10/30/arthur-machen-and-the-great-god-pan/]] ''The Encyclopedia of Science Fiction'' (1993) is widely quoted as stating that "The story begins with an sf rationale (brain surgery) which remains one of the most dramatically horrible and misogynistic in fiction."[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Great_God_Pan#Critical_opinion]]
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* UnfortunateImplications: Some modern readers have criticized the story for misogyny.[[http://somanybooksblog.com/2012/10/31/the-great-god-pan/]][[http://ttapress.com/1030/on-machen-misogyny-and-mad-women-in-attics/]][[http://www.blackgate.com/2012/10/30/arthur-machen-and-the-great-god-pan/]] ''The Encyclopedia of Science Fiction'' (1993) is widely quoted as stating that "The story begins with an sf rationale (brain surgery) which remains one of the most dramatically horrible and misogynistic in fiction."[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Great_God_Pan#Critical_opinion]]
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* NightmareFuel: This story managed to given Creator/StephenKing some nights of nightmares, as he described in the endnotes to his short story collection ''Literature/JustAfterSunset''.
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* NightmareFuel: This story managed to given Creator/StephenKing some nights of nightmares.
--> "[''The Great God Pan''] surmounts its rather clumsy prose and works its way relentlessly into the reader's terror-zone. How many sleepless nights has it caused? God knows, but a few of them were mine. I think 'Pan' is as close as the horror genre comes to a great white whale."
---> - From the endnotes to his short story collection ''Literature/JustAfterSunset''
--> "[''The Great God Pan''] surmounts its rather clumsy prose and works its way relentlessly into the reader's terror-zone. How many sleepless nights has it caused? God knows, but a few of them were mine. I think 'Pan' is as close as the horror genre comes to a great white whale."
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* NightmareFuel: This story managed to given Creator/StephenKing some nights of nightmares.
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-->[''The Great God Pan''] surmounts its rather clumsy prose and works its way relentlessly into the reader's terror-zone. How many sleepless nights has it caused? God knows, but a few of them were mine. I think 'Pan' is as close as the horror genre comes to a great white whale.
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* UnfortunateImplications: The story can be seen as demonising female sexuality.
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* ValuesDissonance: Raymond's justification for using Mary as a test subject goes completely unchallenged:
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---> - From the endnotes to his short story collection ''Just After Sunset''
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* UnfortunateImplications: A single, independent woman is a monster using sex to destroy men. She must be killed! (By men.) Specifically, the story is blaming a woman's sexual behavior for the downfall of her male partners, even though they participated willingly.
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* UnfortunateImplications: A single, independent woman is a monster using sex to destroy men. She must be killed! (By men.) Specifically, the The story is blaming a woman's sexual behavior for the downfall of her male partners, even though they participated willingly.can be seen as demonising female sexuality.
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* UnfortunateImplications: A single, independent woman is a monster using sex to destroy men. She must be killed! (By men.) Specifically, the story is blaming a woman's sexual behavior for the downfall of her male partners, even though they participated willingly. Female sexuality has ''long'' been portrayed as demonic or dangerous, going back to Lilith, the Sirens, Circe, witches accused of sleeping with Satan, and so forth. The idea of women in general being the downfall of men dates back to Eve.
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* UnfortunateImplications: A single, independent woman is a monster using sex to destroy men. She must be killed! (By men.) Specifically, the story is blaming a woman's sexual behavior for the downfall of her male partners, even though they participated willingly. Female sexuality has ''long'' been portrayed as demonic or dangerous, going back to Lilith, the Sirens, Circe, witches accused of sleeping with Satan, and so forth. The idea of women in general being the downfall of men dates back to Eve.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: This story managed to given '''Creator/StephenKing''' some nights of nightmares.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: This story managed to given '''StephenKing''' '''Creator/StephenKing''' some nights of nightmares.
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--> "[''The Great God Pan''] surmounts its rather clumsy prose and works its way relentlessly into the reader's terror-zone. How many sleepless nights has it caused? God knows, but a few of them were mine. I think 'Pan' is as close as the horror genre comes to a great white whale.
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* UnfortunateImplications: A single, independent woman is a monster using sex to destroy men. She must be killed! (By men.) Specifically, the story is blaming a woman's sexual behavior for the downfall of her male partners, even though they participated willingly. Female sexuality has ''long'' been portrayed as demonic or dangerous, going back to Lilith, the Sirens, Circe, witches accused of sleeping with Satan, and so forth. The idea of women in general being the downfall of men dates back to Eve.
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