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** [[AbusiveParents Hiashi]] does this [[spoiler: when he disguises a training session with Hinata to beat her. The rest of the cast is visibly disturbed when they find Hinata battered and bruised, starving, and unable to stand because she hadn't slept at all.]]
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: In this series, Hiashi's cold exterior is more than a case of [[TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask acting as his station dictates]]; he's just an abusive ''dick''.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: In this series, Hiashi's cold exterior is more than a case of [[TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask [[TheChainsOfCommanding acting as his station dictates]]; he's just an abusive ''dick''.
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** ''[[UpToEleven Absolutely]];'' even Hiashi's biggest PetTheDog moment from canon (bowing down on his knees to beg for Neji's forgiveness after telling him the truth about Hizashi's death) is replaced by a KickTheDog moment instead (despite Neji ending up ''far'' more badly injured from his fight with Naruto than he did in canon, the only thing Hiashi is interested in is seeing him punished for "disgracing the clan"). He's ''easily'' bordering on [[CompleteMonster Complete Monsterhood]].
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** ''[[UpToEleven Absolutely]];'' even Hiashi's biggest PetTheDog moment from canon (bowing down on his knees to beg for Neji's forgiveness after telling him the truth about Hizashi's death) is replaced by a KickTheDog moment instead in which he [[YouHaveFailedMe only cares that Neji has lost]] (despite Neji ending up ''far'' more badly injured from his fight with Naruto than he did in canon, the only thing Hiashi is interested in is seeing him punished for "disgracing the clan"). He's ''easily'' bordering on [[CompleteMonster Complete Monsterhood]].
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* BaseBreaker: The fic itself has a good deal of people who either outright hate it, or don't think it's as great as hyped. This isn't entirely unjustified - much of this comes from how AlternateCharacterInterpretation is used, particularly when it comes to making some characters more antagonistic than in canon (mostly the Hyuuga clan); as anyone who's read ''HarryPotterAndTheNightmaresOfFuturesPast'' might have observed, the author seems to have a preference for the "Black" end of the spectrum when it comes to villains, to near-StupidEvil levels. While some of this is justified by [[ForWantOfANail the nail]], said reviewers are of the opinion that he's basically twisting things to suit his own ends (which is, admittedly, partially the point of Fanfiction); basically it depends on whether the story is your cup of tea or not. Few will dispute his talent at writing, however.
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* BaseBreaker: BrokenBase: The fic itself has a good deal of people who either outright hate it, or don't think it's as great as hyped. This isn't entirely unjustified - much of this comes from how AlternateCharacterInterpretation is used, particularly when it comes to making some characters more antagonistic than in canon (mostly the Hyuuga clan); as anyone who's read ''HarryPotterAndTheNightmaresOfFuturesPast'' might have observed, the author seems to have a preference for the "Black" end of the spectrum when it comes to villains, to near-StupidEvil levels. While some of this is justified by [[ForWantOfANail the nail]], said reviewers are of the opinion that he's basically twisting things to suit his own ends (which is, admittedly, partially the point of Fanfiction); basically it depends on whether the story is your cup of tea or not. Few will dispute his talent at writing, however.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: [[spoiler:Kurenai]] makes lots of sarcastic remarks regarding early retirement and death. [[WhamEpisode Chapter 20]] makes most of them [[TearJerker not funny anymore]].
* HypeBacklash: For the same reasons as ''HarryPotterAndTheNightmaresOfFuturesPast
* HypeBacklash: For the same reasons as ''HarryPotterAndTheNightmaresOfFuturesPast
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: [[spoiler:Kurenai]] makes lots of sarcastic remarks regarding early [[spoiler:early retirement and death.death]]. [[WhamEpisode Chapter 20]] makes most of them [[TearJerker not funny anymore]].
* HypeBacklash: For the same reasons as''HarryPotterAndTheNightmaresOfFuturesPast''HarryPotterAndTheNightmaresOfFuturesPast''.
* HypeBacklash: For the same reasons as
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* TheWoobie: Hinata UpToEleven compared to cannon due to the 'nail' shifting her family life from aloof to outright abusive.
** Sarutobi as well. The more aware he becomes of the injustices that Naruto faces, the more guilty he feels when he fails to stop them.
** Kurenai, given what we've learned so far about her backstory, qualifies bigtime. As does Naruto, of course... Really, of all of Team 8, only Shino is completely well-adjusted, and given he's TheSpoic, that says a ''lot''.
** Sarutobi as well. The more aware he becomes of the injustices that Naruto faces, the more guilty he feels when he fails to stop them.
** Kurenai, given what we've learned so far about her backstory, qualifies bigtime. As does Naruto, of course... Really, of all of Team 8, only Shino is completely well-adjusted, and given he's TheSpoic, that says a ''lot''.
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** [[spoiler:Sasuke]] has a moment as well: ''Yup, make fun of Hinata, [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown right after she got beaten within an inch of her life]]. Piss off her [[TrueCompanions teammate]], the guy who helped you fight [[spoiler:Orochimaru]], and [[BullyingADragon actually fared better than you did]]. This will [[SarcasmMode totally]] [[CurbStompBattle end]] [[IHitYouYouHitTheGround well]].''
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** [[spoiler:Sasuke]] has a moment as well: ''Yup, make fun of Hinata, [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown right after she got beaten within an inch of her life]]. Piss off her [[TrueCompanions teammate]], the guy who helped you fight [[spoiler:Orochimaru]], and [[BullyingADragon actually fared better than you did]]. This will [[SarcasmMode totally]] [[CurbStompBattle end]] [[IHitYouYouHitTheGround well]].'' ''
* TheWoobie: Hinata UpToEleven compared to cannon due to the 'nail' shifting her family life from aloof to outright abusive.
** Sarutobi as well. The more aware he becomes of the injustices that Naruto faces, the more guilty he feels when he fails to stop them.
** Kurenai, given what we've learned so far about her backstory, qualifies bigtime. As does Naruto, of course... Really, of all of Team 8, only Shino is completely well-adjusted, and given he's TheStoic, that says a ''lot''.
* TheWoobie: Hinata UpToEleven compared to cannon due to the 'nail' shifting her family life from aloof to outright abusive.
** Sarutobi as well. The more aware he becomes of the injustices that Naruto faces, the more guilty he feels when he fails to stop them.
** Kurenai, given what we've learned so far about her backstory, qualifies bigtime. As does Naruto, of course... Really, of all of Team 8, only Shino is completely well-adjusted, and given he's TheStoic, that says a ''lot''.
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* CompleteMonster: Itachi. Even Kisame seems [[EvenEvilHasStandards pretty disturbed]] with how coldly he crosses the MoralEventHorizon below.
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** As Shino even points out, it made sense for him to do so, seeing as to how [[spoiler: she broke Tsukuyomi. Of course, this does not stop Shino from entering the mother of all [[TranquilFury Tranquil Furies]].]]
** Actually, since this fic was planned out ''before'' certain plot elements came to light, Itachi in ''Team8'' did this back during the Uchiha Massacre. The above crossing simply serves to assert him as the story's only (so far) clear-cut CompleteMonster.
** Actually, since this fic was planned out ''before'' certain plot elements came to light, Itachi in ''Team8'' did this back during the Uchiha Massacre. The above crossing simply serves to assert him as the story's only (so far) clear-cut CompleteMonster.
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** As Shino even points out, it made sense for him to do so, seeing as to how [[spoiler: she broke Tsukuyomi. Of course, this does not stop Shino from entering the mother of all [[TranquilFury Tranquil Furies]].]]
** Actually, since this fic was planned out ''before'' certain plot elements came to light, Itachi in''Team8'' ''Team 8'' did this back during the Uchiha Massacre. The above crossing simply serves to assert him as the story's only (so far) clear-cut CompleteMonster.
** Actually, since this fic was planned out ''before'' certain plot elements came to light, Itachi in
** Kurenai, given what we've learned so far about her backstory, qualifies bigtime. As does Naruto, of course... Really, of all of Team 8, only Shino is completely well-adjusted, and given he's TheSpoic, that says a ''lot''.
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* WhatAnIdiot: Discussed many times in-story, with regards to the villagers that seem hell-bent on denigrating Naruto. ''That's right, be mean to the kid you KNOW has [[EldritchAbomination a powerful, nigh-unbeatable demon]] [[SealedInAPersonShapedCan sealed in his stomach]]. [[TooDumbToLive That'll learn 'em]]!''
** [[spoiler:Sasuke]] has a moment as well:''Yup, make fun of Hinata, [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown right after she got beaten within an inch of her life]]. Piss off her [[TrueCompanions teammate]], the guy who helped you fight [[spoiler:Orochimaru]], and [[BullyingADragon actually fared better than you did.]] This will [[SarcasmMode totally]] [[CurbStompBattle end]] [[IHitYouYouHitTheGround well]].''
** [[spoiler:Sasuke]] has a moment as well:''Yup, make fun of Hinata, [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown right after she got beaten within an inch of her life]]. Piss off her [[TrueCompanions teammate]], the guy who helped you fight [[spoiler:Orochimaru]], and [[BullyingADragon actually fared better than you did.]] This will [[SarcasmMode totally]] [[CurbStompBattle end]] [[IHitYouYouHitTheGround well]].''
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* WhatAnIdiot: Discussed many times in-story, with regards to the villagers that seem hell-bent on denigrating Naruto. ''That's right, be mean to the kid you KNOW has [[EldritchAbomination a powerful, nigh-unbeatable demon]] [[SealedInAPersonShapedCan sealed in his stomach]]. [[TooDumbToLive That'll learn teach 'em]]!''
** [[spoiler:Sasuke]] has a moment aswell:''Yup, well: ''Yup, make fun of Hinata, [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown right after she got beaten within an inch of her life]]. Piss off her [[TrueCompanions teammate]], the guy who helped you fight [[spoiler:Orochimaru]], and [[BullyingADragon actually fared better than you did.]] did]]. This will [[SarcasmMode totally]] [[CurbStompBattle end]] [[IHitYouYouHitTheGround well]].''
** [[spoiler:Sasuke]] has a moment as
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* CompleteMonster: Itachi. Even Kisame seems [[EvenEvilHasStandards pretty disturbed]] with how coldly he crosses the MoralEventHorizon below.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: [[spoiler:Kurenai]] makes lots of sarcastic remarks regarding early retirement and death. [[WhamEpisode Chapter 20]] makes most of them [[TearJerker not funny anymore.]]
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** As Shino even points out, it made sense for him to do so, seeing as to how [[spoiler: she broke Tsukuyomi. Of course, this does not stop Shino from entering the mother of all [[TranquilFury Tranquil Furies.]] ]]
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** As Shino even points out, it made sense for him to do so, seeing as to how [[spoiler: she broke Tsukuyomi. Of course, this does not stop Shino from entering the mother of all [[TranquilFury Tranquil Furies.]] ]]Furies]].]]
** Actually, since this fic was planned out ''before'' certain plot elements came to light, Itachi in ''Team8'' did this back during the Uchiha Massacre. The above crossing simply serves to assert him as the story's only (so far) clear-cut CompleteMonster.
** Actually, since this fic was planned out ''before'' certain plot elements came to light, Itachi in ''Team8'' did this back during the Uchiha Massacre. The above crossing simply serves to assert him as the story's only (so far) clear-cut CompleteMonster.
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: Besides the reasons for the HypeBacklash and BaseBreaker status mentioned above, part of the divisive nature of this fanfic comes from its age, being first published around 2006. While it's unlikely it was the [[TropeMaker first one]], it's certainly one of the earliest and more notable examples to use [[FandomSpecificPlot certain plot points that have become common in many subsequent fanfics in the Naruto fandom]]. Among the more used and repeated plot points are: A different teacher training Naruto, resulting in his skills developing earlier; the genin teams being different due to someone else requesting Naruto (and leading to a [[FanPreferredCouple Naruto/Hinata]] pairing); and [[spoiler: the presence of a sinister conspiracy inside the Village council]]. While these plot points are actually treated here with more nuance than in many other fanfics, if you have read similar stories and come to this one expecting something incredibly original, you might get dissapointed.
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: Besides the reasons for the HypeBacklash and BaseBreaker status mentioned above, part of the divisive nature of this fanfic comes from its age, being first published around 2006. While it's unlikely it was the [[TropeMaker first one]], it's certainly one of the earliest and more notable examples to use [[FandomSpecificPlot certain plot points that have become common in many subsequent fanfics in the Naruto fandom]]. Among the more used and repeated plot points are: A different teacher training Naruto, resulting in his skills developing earlier; the genin teams being different due to someone else requesting Naruto (and leading to a [[FanPreferredCouple Naruto/Hinata]] pairing); and [[spoiler: the presence of a sinister conspiracy inside the Village council]]. While these plot points are actually treated here with more nuance than in many other fanfics, if you have read similar stories and come to this one expecting something incredibly original, you might get dissapointed.may be disappointed.
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*** Also, depending on how indicative ''Snapped'' is of the main story, he may well be [[spoiler:one of the series' primary antagonists.]]
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: Besides the reasons for the HypeBacklash and BaseBreaker status mentioned above, part of the divisive nature of this fanfic comes from its age, being first published around 2006. While it's unlikely it was the [[TropeMaker first one]], it's certainly one of the earliest and more notable examples to use [[FandomSpecificPlot certain plot points that have become common in many subsequent fanficsin the Naruto fandom]]. Among the more used and repeated plot points are: A different teacher training Naruto, resulting in his skills developing earlier; the genin teams being different due to someone else requesting Naruto (and leading to a [[FanPreferredCouple Naruto/Hinata]] pairing); and [[spoiler: the presence of a sinister conspiracy inside the Village council]]. While these plot points are actually treated here with more nuance than in many other fanfics, if you have read similar stories and come to this one expecting something incredibly original, you might get dissapointed.
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: Besides the reasons for the HypeBacklash and BaseBreaker status mentioned above, part of the divisive nature of this fanfic comes from its age, being first published around 2006. While it's unlikely it was the [[TropeMaker first one]], it's certainly one of the earliest and more notable examples to use [[FandomSpecificPlot certain plot points that have become common in many subsequent fanficsin fanfics in the Naruto fandom]]. Among the more used and repeated plot points are: A different teacher training Naruto, resulting in his skills developing earlier; the genin teams being different due to someone else requesting Naruto (and leading to a [[FanPreferredCouple Naruto/Hinata]] pairing); and [[spoiler: the presence of a sinister conspiracy inside the Village council]]. While these plot points are actually treated here with more nuance than in many other fanfics, if you have read similar stories and come to this one expecting something incredibly original, you might get dissapointed.
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* SeinfeldIsUnfunny: Besides the reasons for the HypeBacklash and BaseBreaker status mentioned above, part of the divisive nature of this fanfic comes from its age, being first published around 2006. While it's unlikely it was the [[TropeMaker first one]], it's certainly one of the earliest and more notable examples to use [[FandomSpecificPlot certain plot points that have become common in many subsequent fanficsin the Naruto fandom]]. Among the more used and repeated plot points are: A different teacher training Naruto, resulting in his skills developing earlier; the genin teams being different due to someone else requesting Naruto (and leading to a [[FanPreferredCouple Naruto/Hinata]] pairing); and [[spoiler: the presence of a sinister conspiracy inside the Village council]]. While these plot points are actually treated here with more nuance than in many other fanfics, if you have read similar stories and come to this one expecting something incredibly original, you might get dissapointed.
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* BaseBreaker: The fic itself has a good deal of people who either outright hate it, or don't think it's as great as hyped. This isn't entirely unjustified - much of this comes from how AlternateCharacterInterpretation is used, particularly when it comes to making some characters more antagonistic than in canon (mostly the Hyuuga clan); as anyone who's read ''HarryPotterAndNightmaresOfFuturesPast'' might have observed, the author seems to have a preference for the "Black" end of the spectrum when it comes to villains, to near-StupidEvil levels. While some of this is justified by [[ForWantOfANail the nail]], said reviewers are of the opinion that he's basically twisting things to suit his own ends (which is, admittedly, partially the point of Fanfiction); basically it depends on whether the story is your cup of tea or not. Few will dispute his talent at writing, however.
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* BaseBreaker: The fic itself has a good deal of people who either outright hate it, or don't think it's as great as hyped. This isn't entirely unjustified - much of this comes from how AlternateCharacterInterpretation is used, particularly when it comes to making some characters more antagonistic than in canon (mostly the Hyuuga clan); as anyone who's read ''HarryPotterAndNightmaresOfFuturesPast'' ''HarryPotterAndTheNightmaresOfFuturesPast'' might have observed, the author seems to have a preference for the "Black" end of the spectrum when it comes to villains, to near-StupidEvil levels. While some of this is justified by [[ForWantOfANail the nail]], said reviewers are of the opinion that he's basically twisting things to suit his own ends (which is, admittedly, partially the point of Fanfiction); basically it depends on whether the story is your cup of tea or not. Few will dispute his talent at writing, however.
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* HypeBacklash: For the same reasons as ''HarryPotterAndTheNightmaresOfFuturesPast
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* BaseBreaker: The fic itself has a good deal of people who either outright hate it, or don't think it's as great as hyped. This isn't entirely unjustified - much of this comes from how AlternateCharacterInterpretation is used, particularly when it comes to making some characters more antagonistic than in canon (mostly the Hyuuga clan); as anyone who's read ''HarryPotterAndNightmaresOfFuturesPast'' might have observed, the author seems to have a preference for the "Black" end of the spectrum when it comes to villains, to near-StupidEvil levels. While some of this is justified by [[ForWantOfANail the nail]], said reviewers are of the opinion that he's basically twisting things to suit his own ends (which is, admittedly, partially the point of Fanfiction); basically it depends on whether the story is your cup of tea or not. Few will dispute his talent at writing, however.
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** ''[[UpToEleven Absolutely]];'' even Hiashi's biggest PetTheDog moment from canon (bowing down on his knees to beg for Neji's forgiveness after telling him the truth about Hizashi's death) is replaced by a KickTheDog moment instead (despite Neji ending up ''far'' more badly injured from his fight with Naruto than he did in canon, the only thing Hiashi is interested in is seeing him punished for "disgracing the clan"). He's ''easily'' bordering on [[CompleteMonster Complete Monsterhood]].
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* ScheduleSlip: As of this note, it hasn't been updated in over a year.
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* FanonDiscontinuity: Not inside the story itself, but regarding its relationship with canon. Two aspects of the fanfic that are not related to the [[ForWantOfANail nail]] don't match the way they appear in the original series. Specifically: The [[MagicAIsMagicA use of elemental jutsus]] in chapter 6 is inaccurate, and the portrayal of a certain villain ([[spoiler:Itachi]]) is very different from how he turned out to be in canon ([[spoiler:that is, GoodAllAlong, [[OmniscientMoralityLicense for a certain value of good]].]]) Nevertheless, this fanfic was first published in 2006, prior to the manga explaining how elemental jutsu actually worked, as well as prior to certain revelations regarding said villain. On that regard, [[WordOfGod the author]] has mentioned that, since he outlined most of the plot since the beginning, the story will not conform to the way things turned out to work in canon, and that the fanfic will stop actively following canon events after a certain point.
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* FanonDiscontinuity: Not inside the story itself, but regarding its relationship with canon. Two aspects of the fanfic that are not related to the [[ForWantOfANail nail]] don't match the way they appear in the original series. Specifically: The [[MagicAIsMagicA use of elemental jutsus]] in chapter 6 is inaccurate, and the portrayal of a certain villain ([[spoiler:Itachi]]) ([[spoiler: Itachi]]) is very different from how he turned out to be in canon ([[spoiler:that ([[spoiler: that is, GoodAllAlong, [[OmniscientMoralityLicense for a certain value of good]].]]) Nevertheless, this fanfic was first published in 2006, prior to the manga explaining how elemental jutsu actually worked, as well as prior to certain revelations regarding said villain. On that regard, [[WordOfGod the author]] has mentioned that, since he outlined most of the plot since the beginning, the story will not conform to the way things turned out to work in canon, and that the fanfic will stop actively following canon events after a certain point.
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* TheWoobie: Hinata, at BeyondTheImpossible levels, due to the 'nail' shifting her family life from aloof to outright abusive.
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* TheWoobie: Hinata, at BeyondTheImpossible levels, Hinata UpToEleven compared to cannon due to the 'nail' shifting her family life from aloof to outright abusive.
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* {{Discontinuity}}: Not inside the story itself, but regarding its relationship with canon. Two aspects of the fanfic that are not related to the [[ForWantOfANail nail]] don't match the way they appear in the original series. Specifically: The [[MagicAIsMagicA use of elemental jutsus]] in chapter 6 is inaccurate, and the portrayal of a certain villain ([[spoiler:Itachi]]) is very different from how he turned out to be in canon ([[spoiler:that is, GoodAllAlong, [[OmniscientMoralityLicense for a certain value of good]].]]) Nevertheless, this fanfic was first published in 2006, prior to the manga explaining how elemental jutsu actually worked, as well as prior to certain revelations regarding said villain. On that regard, [[WordOfGod the author]] has mentioned that, since he outlined most of the plot since the beginning, the story will not conform to the way things turned out to work in canon, and that the fanfic will stop actively following canon events after a certain point.
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** Sarutobi as well. The more aware he becomes of the injustices that Naruto faces, the more guilty he feels when he fails to stop them.
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* WhatAnIdiot: Discussed many times in-story, with regards to the villagers that seem hell-bent on denigrating Naruto. ''That's right, be mean to the kid you KNOW has [[EldritchAbomination a powerful, nigh-unbeatable demon]] [[SealedInAPersonShapedCan sealed in his stomach]]. [[TooDumbToLive That'll learn 'em]]!''
** [[spoiler:Sasuke]] has a moment as well:''Yup, make fun of Hinata, [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown right after she got beaten within an inch of her life]]. Piss off her [[TrueCompanions teammate]], the guy who helped you fight [[spoiler:Orochimaru]], and [[BullyingADragon actually fared better than you did.]] This will [[SarcasmMode totally]] [[CurbStompBattle end]] [[IHitYouYouHitTheGround well]].''
** [[spoiler:Sasuke]] has a moment as well:''Yup, make fun of Hinata, [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown right after she got beaten within an inch of her life]]. Piss off her [[TrueCompanions teammate]], the guy who helped you fight [[spoiler:Orochimaru]], and [[BullyingADragon actually fared better than you did.]] This will [[SarcasmMode totally]] [[CurbStompBattle end]] [[IHitYouYouHitTheGround well]].''
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*** This really extends to the entire Hyuga clan, who are in general much, ''much'' worse than they are in canon.
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* {{Discontinuity}}: Not inside the story itself, but regarding its relationship with canon. Two aspects of the fanfic that are not related to the [[ForWantOfANail nail]] don't match the way they appear in the original series. Specifically: The [[MagicAIsMagicA use of elemental jutsus]] in chapter 6 is inaccurate, and the portrayal of a certain villain is very different from how he turned out to be in canon. Nevertheless, this fanfic was first published in 2006, prior to the manga explaining how elemental jutsu actually worked, as well as prior to certain revelations regarding said villain. On that regard, [[WordOfGod the author]] has mentioned that, since he outlined most of the plot since the beginning, the story will not conform to the way things turned out to work in canon, and that the fanfic will stop actively following canon events after a certain point.
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** Similarly, Hanabi is also quite dismissive of Hinata, a common characterization of her despite appearing in only a few scenes.
* {{Discontinuity}}: Not inside the story itself, but regarding its relationship with canon. Two aspects of the fanfic that are not related to the [[ForWantOfANail nail]] don't match the way they appear in the original series. Specifically: The [[MagicAIsMagicA use of elemental jutsus]] in chapter 6 is inaccurate, and the portrayal of a certain villain ([[spoiler:Itachi]]) is very different from how he turned out to be incanon. canon ([[spoiler:that is, GoodAllAlong, [[OmniscientMoralityLicense for a certain value of good]].]]) Nevertheless, this fanfic was first published in 2006, prior to the manga explaining how elemental jutsu actually worked, as well as prior to certain revelations regarding said villain. On that regard, [[WordOfGod the author]] has mentioned that, since he outlined most of the plot since the beginning, the story will not conform to the way things turned out to work in canon, and that the fanfic will stop actively following canon events after a certain point.
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* {{Fanon}}: Much of the story is based on fanon theories such as an extremely powerful village counsel and intentional abuse and mistraining of Naruto.
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* AccidentalInnuendo:
-->'''Naruto:''' Hinata, could you use your eyes to check me out?
-->'''Naruto:''' Hinata, could you use your eyes to check me out?
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* {{Discontinuity}}: Not inside the story itself, but regarding its relationship with canon. Two aspects of the fanfic that are not related to the [[ForWantOfANail nail]] don't match the way they appear in the original series. Specifically: The use of elemental jutsus in chapter 6 is inaccurate, and the portrayal of a certain villain is very different from how he turned out to be in canon. Nevertheless, this fanfic was first published in 2006, prior to the manga explaining how elemental jutsu actually worked, as well as prior to certain revelations regarding said villain. On that regard, [[WordOfGod the author]] has mentioned that, since he outlined most of the plot since the beginning, the story will not conform to the way things turned out to work in canon, and that the fanfic will stop actively following canon events after certain point.
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* {{Discontinuity}}: Not inside the story itself, but regarding its relationship with canon. Two aspects of the fanfic that are not related to the [[ForWantOfANail nail]] don't match the way they appear in the original series. Specifically: The [[MagicAIsMagicA use of elemental jutsus jutsus]] in chapter 6 is inaccurate, and the portrayal of a certain villain is very different from how he turned out to be in canon. Nevertheless, this fanfic was first published in 2006, prior to the manga explaining how elemental jutsu actually worked, as well as prior to certain revelations regarding said villain. On that regard, [[WordOfGod the author]] has mentioned that, since he outlined most of the plot since the beginning, the story will not conform to the way things turned out to work in canon, and that the fanfic will stop actively following canon events after a certain point.
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* DidNotDoTheResearch: the use of elemental jutsus in chapter 6 is unaccurate.
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* DidNotDoTheResearch: {{Discontinuity}}: Not inside the story itself, but regarding its relationship with canon. Two aspects of the fanfic that are not related to the [[ForWantOfANail nail]] don't match the way they appear in the original series. Specifically: The use of elemental jutsus in chapter 6 is unaccurate.inaccurate, and the portrayal of a certain villain is very different from how he turned out to be in canon. Nevertheless, this fanfic was first published in 2006, prior to the manga explaining how elemental jutsu actually worked, as well as prior to certain revelations regarding said villain. On that regard, [[WordOfGod the author]] has mentioned that, since he outlined most of the plot since the beginning, the story will not conform to the way things turned out to work in canon, and that the fanfic will stop actively following canon events after certain point.
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* MoodWhiplash: In Chapter 11, following their dinner with the Aburame Clan and [[spoiler:Shibi apologizing to Naruto on behalf of their clan]], Naruto and Hinata play a game of tag that leads to [[spoiler:their first encounter with Gaara]].
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: In this series, Hiashi's cold exterior is more than a case of [[TheWomanWearingTheQueenlyMask acting as his station dictates]]; he's just an abusive ''dick''.
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* {{Fanon}}: Much of the story is based on fanon theories such as an extremely powerful village counsel and intentional abuse and mistraining of Naruto.
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* {{Fanon}}: Much of the story is based on fanon theories such as an extremely powerful village counsel and intentional abuse and mistraining of Naruto.
** Nevertheless, it should be pointed out that unlike many other stories with the same fanon elements, their presence [[GovernmentConspiracy is actually part of the plot]], as it's implied that [[ForWantOfANail the event]] that lead to the change from the Canon storyline is also tied to their ocurrence.
** Nevertheless, it should be pointed out that unlike many other stories with the same fanon elements, their presence [[GovernmentConspiracy is actually part of the plot]], as it's implied that [[ForWantOfANail the event]] that lead to the change from the Canon storyline is also tied to their ocurrence.
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* {{Fanon}}: Much of the story is based on fanon theories such as an extremely powerful village counsel and intentional abuse and mistraining of Naruto.