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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Anton telling Patty she is a person of value.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Anton telling Patty she is a person of value.
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* TheWoobie: Patty, though she gets some pluck by the end of the book. But between her {{Abusive Parents}} and being a complete loner who [[spoiler:gets tried for treason and told she is an embarrassment to Jews everywhere after learning that her first love has been shot by the FBI]], you just want to give this girl a hug so badly.
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* TheWoobie: Patty, though she gets some pluck by the end of the book. But between her {{Abusive Parents}} AbusiveParents and being a complete loner who [[spoiler:gets tried for treason and told she is an embarrassment to Jews everywhere after learning that her first love has been shot by the FBI]], you just want to give this girl a hug so badly.badly.
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** Becomes a {{Self Fulfilling Prophecy}}: "And I don't love you. Nobody does!"
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* {{Magnificent Bastard}}: John Pierce of the FBI, and how.
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** Becomes a {{Self Fulfilling Prophecy}}: SelfFulfillingProphecy: "And I don't love you. Nobody does!"
* {{Magnificent Bastard}}: John Pierce of the FBI, and how.does!"
* {{Magnificent Bastard}}: John Pierce of the FBI, and how.
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* TearJerker: Several throughout the story, but especially [[spoiler:when Agent Pierce interrogates Patty, showing her the shirt she gave Anton stained with blood, followed by the newspaper headline that says Anton Reiker died after being shot. Patty flies into a rage at Pierce, [[OhCrap and it goes downhill from there.]]]]
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* UnfortunateImplications: It's pretty heavily implied that 12-year-old Patty's PrecociousCrush on 22-year-old Anton is requited.
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* CompleteMonster: Harry. He frequently hits Patty, or uses his belt on her, and seems to fly off the handle at the drop of a hat.
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* UnfortunateImplications: It's pretty heavily implied that 12-year-old Patty's PrecociousCrush on 22-year-old Anton is requited.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Anton telling Patty she is a person of value.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Anton telling Patty she is a person of value.value.
* JerkassWoobie: Played with, with Harry. Anton overhears him rant about how no one loves him, which leads one to believe that his gruff and abusive nature is just a cover for how insecure and lonely he is.
** Becomes a {{Self Fulfilling Prophecy}}: "And I don't love you. Nobody does!"
* {{Magnificent Bastard}}: John Pierce of the FBI, and how.
* TheWoobie: Patty, though she gets some pluck by the end of the book. But between her {{Abusive Parents}} and being a complete loner who [[spoiler:gets tried for treason and told she is an embarrassment to Jews everywhere after learning that her first love has been shot by the FBI]], you just want to give this girl a hug so badly.
* JerkassWoobie: Played with, with Harry. Anton overhears him rant about how no one loves him, which leads one to believe that his gruff and abusive nature is just a cover for how insecure and lonely he is.
** Becomes a {{Self Fulfilling Prophecy}}: "And I don't love you. Nobody does!"
* {{Magnificent Bastard}}: John Pierce of the FBI, and how.
* TheWoobie: Patty, though she gets some pluck by the end of the book. But between her {{Abusive Parents}} and being a complete loner who [[spoiler:gets tried for treason and told she is an embarrassment to Jews everywhere after learning that her first love has been shot by the FBI]], you just want to give this girl a hug so badly.
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{{Crowning Moment Of Heartwarming}}: Anton telling Patty she is a person of value.
{{Crowning Moment Of Heartwarming}}: Anton telling Patty she is a person of value.
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{{Complete Monster}}: Harry. He frequently hits Patty, or uses his belt on her, and seems to fly off the handle at the drop of a hat.
{{Crowning Moment Of Heartwarming}}: Anton telling Patty she is a person of value.
{{Crowning Moment Of Heartwarming}}: Anton telling Patty she is a person of value.
