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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: [[spoiler:Rich defeating Satsukoro at the Battle Casino]]
** [[spoiler:the final Grand Festival battle is a simultaneous one for both Anabel and Nando]]
** Tiffany's ShamingTheMob moment in Chapter 9 when she [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech chews out the crowd]] for insulting Anabel.
** [[spoiler:Rich's defeat of Nando in the Grand Championship]] and [[spoiler:Maria at the climax]]
** [[spoiler: The final battle in the true last chapter.]]
** [[spoiler:Nando's defeat of Tiffany.]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: [[spoiler:When Rich and Olivia are reunited after Rich finally defeats Maria. D'awwww.]]
** [[spoiler:the final Grand Festival battle is a simultaneous one for both Anabel and Nando]]
** Tiffany's ShamingTheMob moment in Chapter 9 when she [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech chews out the crowd]] for insulting Anabel.
** [[spoiler:Rich's defeat of Nando in the Grand Championship]] and [[spoiler:Maria at the climax]]
** [[spoiler: The final battle in the true last chapter.]]
** [[spoiler:Nando's defeat of Tiffany.]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: [[spoiler:When Rich and Olivia are reunited after Rich finally defeats Maria. D'awwww.]]
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: [[spoiler:When Rich and Olivia are reunited after Rich finally defeats Maria. D'awwww.]]
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-->'''Nando:''' I have nothing of any interest to you gentlemen. Please, let's work something out here...
-->'''Sheena:''' Leave him alone! He's not interested!
-->'''Sheena:''' Leave him alone! He's not interested!
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-->'''Nando:''' I have nothing of any interest to you gentlemen. Please, let's work something out here...
-->'''Sheena:'''here...\\
'''Sheena:''' Leave him alone! He's not interested!
-->'''Sheena:'''
'''Sheena:''' Leave him alone! He's not interested!
* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: [[spoiler:Rich defeating Satsukoro at the Battle Casino]]
** [[spoiler:the final Grand Festival battle is a simultaneous one for both Anabel and Nando]]
** Tiffany's ShamingTheMob moment in Chapter 9 when she [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech chews out the crowd]] for insulting Anabel.
** [[spoiler:Rich's defeat of Nando in the Grand Championship]] and [[spoiler:Maria at the climax]]
** [[spoiler: The final battle in the true last chapter.]]
** [[spoiler:Nando's defeat of Tiffany.]]
** [[spoiler:the final Grand Festival battle is a simultaneous one for both Anabel and Nando]]
** Tiffany's ShamingTheMob moment in Chapter 9 when she [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech chews out the crowd]] for insulting Anabel.
** [[spoiler:Rich's defeat of Nando in the Grand Championship]] and [[spoiler:Maria at the climax]]
** [[spoiler: The final battle in the true last chapter.]]
** [[spoiler:Nando's defeat of Tiffany.]]
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** Matt and Eleanor in Gardener of Gratitude.
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** Matt and Eleanor in Gardener of Gratitude.Gratitude.
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* CompleteMonster: [[AristocratsAreEvil Count Fernando VIII]] from ''Pokemon Ranger and the Gardener of Gratitude'' expresses [[StrawMisogynist extremely sexist views against women]], believing them to be nothing but sex objects. He also murdered at least three people in cold blood, his own parents and an elderly man, for the purpose of obtaining information to advance his own goals. Eventually, he gains control of one of the OlympusMons and begins destroying his entire city, explicitly getting off to the suffering he's inflicting.
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* CompleteMonster: [[AristocratsAreEvil Count Fernando VIII]] from ''Pokemon Ranger and the Gardener of Gratitude'' expresses extremely sexist views against women, believing them to be nothing but sex objects. He also murdered at least three people in cold blood, his own parents and an elderly man, for the purpose of obtaining information to advance his own goals. Eventually, he gains control of one of the OlympusMons and begins destroying his entire city, explicitly getting off to the suffering he's inflicting.
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* CompleteMonster: [[AristocratsAreEvil Count Fernando VIII]] from ''Pokemon Ranger and the Gardener of Gratitude'' expresses [[StrawMisogynist extremely sexist views against women, women]], believing them to be nothing but sex objects. He also murdered at least three people in cold blood, his own parents and an elderly man, for the purpose of obtaining information to advance his own goals. Eventually, he gains control of one of the OlympusMons and begins destroying his entire city, explicitly getting off to the suffering he's inflicting.
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* CompleteMonster: Fernando VIII from ''Gardener of Gratitude''. He [[spoiler:expresses extremely sexist views against women, believing them to be nothing but sex objects (parodying his obvious {{Bishounen}} appearance). He also killed at least three people in cold blood - his own parents and an elderly man - for the purpose of obtaining information to advance his own goals. Eventually, he gains control of one of the OlympusMons and begins destroying his city, explicitly getting off to the suffering he's inflicting.]]
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* CompleteMonster: [[AristocratsAreEvil Count Fernando VIII VIII]] from ''Gardener ''Pokemon Ranger and the Gardener of Gratitude''. He [[spoiler:expresses Gratitude'' expresses extremely sexist views against women, believing them to be nothing but sex objects (parodying his obvious {{Bishounen}} appearance). objects. He also killed murdered at least three people in cold blood - blood, his own parents and an elderly man - man, for the purpose of obtaining information to advance his own goals. Eventually, he gains control of one of the OlympusMons and begins destroying his entire city, explicitly getting off to the suffering he's inflicting.]]
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* CompleteMonster: Dr. Yung, aka the Mastermind of Mirage Pokemon. Outright stated by Palkia: ''"You are inhuman, mortal. There is nothing redeeming in you, you are nothing but a product of pure evil."''
** Fernando VIII from ''Gardener of Gratitude'' as well.
** Fernando VIII from ''Gardener of Gratitude'' as well.
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* CompleteMonster: Dr. Yung, aka the Mastermind of Mirage Pokemon. Outright stated by Palkia: ''"You are inhuman, mortal. There is nothing redeeming in you, you are nothing but a product of pure evil."''
**Fernando VIII from ''Gardener of Gratitude'' as well.Gratitude''. He [[spoiler:expresses extremely sexist views against women, believing them to be nothing but sex objects (parodying his obvious {{Bishounen}} appearance). He also killed at least three people in cold blood - his own parents and an elderly man - for the purpose of obtaining information to advance his own goals. Eventually, he gains control of one of the OlympusMons and begins destroying his city, explicitly getting off to the suffering he's inflicting.]]
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* TearJerker: Pretty much the whole fic.
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* TearJerker: Pretty much the The whole fic.
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* CompleteMonster: Dr. Yung. Outright stated by Palkia: ''"You are inhuman, mortal. There is nothing redeeming in you, you are nothing but a product of pure evil."''
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* CompleteMonster: Dr. Yung.Yung, aka the Mastermind of Mirage Pokemon. Outright stated by Palkia: ''"You are inhuman, mortal. There is nothing redeeming in you, you are nothing but a product of pure evil."''
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* CompleteMonster: Fernando VIII and Dr. Yung. Outright stated by Palkia in the latter's case in Chapter 10: ''"You are inhuman, mortal. There is nothing redeeming in you, you are nothing but a product of pure evil."''
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* CompleteMonster: Fernando VIII and Dr. Yung. Outright stated by Palkia in the latter's case in Chapter 10: Palkia: ''"You are inhuman, mortal. There is nothing redeeming in you, you are nothing but a product of pure evil."''"''
** Fernando VIII from ''Gardener of Gratitude'' as well.
** Fernando VIII from ''Gardener of Gratitude'' as well.
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* HoYay: In Chapter 31, Nando gets cornered by a drunk casino patron who mistakes him for a woman, then looks him over for valuables (and maybe something else). Topped with this pair of {{Double Entendre}}s:
-->'''Nando:''' I have nothing of any interest to you gentlemen. Please, let's work something out here...
-->'''Sheena:''' Leave him alone! He's not interested!
-->'''Nando:''' I have nothing of any interest to you gentlemen. Please, let's work something out here...
-->'''Sheena:''' Leave him alone! He's not interested!
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All I saw was her being a basic psycho Yangire Perky Female Minion, nothing that serious.
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Er, what exactly did Lovrina do to qualify as a CM in this fic?
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* CompleteMonster: Lovrina, Fernando VIII and Dr. Yung. Outright stated by Palkia in the latter's case in Chapter 10: ''"You are inhuman, mortal. There is nothing redeeming in you, you are nothing but a product of pure evil."''
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* CompleteMonster: Lovrina, Fernando VIII and Dr. Yung. Outright stated by Palkia in the latter's case in Chapter 10: ''"You are inhuman, mortal. There is nothing redeeming in you, you are nothing but a product of pure evil."''
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** [[spoiler:Nando's defeat of Tiffany.]]
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* StoicWoobie: Satsukoro.
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* StoicWoobie: Satsukoro.Satsukoro and (debatably) Nando.
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* TheWoobie: Rich in Chapter 21. Sweet holy mother of CrystalDragonJesus, ''Rich in Chapter 21.''
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* TheWoobie: Rich in Chapter 21. Sweet holy mother of CrystalDragonJesus, ''Rich in Chapter 21.''So, so much.