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* HolyShitQuotient: The story starts with some mild chapters but quickly picks up momentum, until it manages to get 4 Wham Episodes in a row.
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* StoryBreakerPower: Pinkie's [[SpiderSense Pinkie Sense]], GenreSavvy and nigh-RealityWarper-ness in the face of RuleOfFunny put her squarely here. [[spoiler:Enough so that both times, he has to fight her, Harry resorts to [[SweetTooth candy]] and [[GuileHero logic]] rather than brass tacks.]]
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** And Discord [[spoiler: tries to put Cupcakes, Sweet Apple Massacre, and one fanfic I forget on TV]]. That monster!
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** And Discord [[spoiler: tries to put Cupcakes, Sweet Apple Massacre, and one fanfic I forget Rainbow Factory on TV]]. That monster!
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* MoralEventHorizon: The demons are a definition of CompleteMonster from day one, but what really cements their evilness and sets the tone of the story is them [[spoiler:making ponies kill people]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: The demons are a definition of CompleteMonster Complete Monster from day one, but what really cements their evilness and sets the tone of the story is them [[spoiler:making ponies kill people]].
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** And then it turned out [[spoiler: The real reason they couldn't save RD's life was that she was never actually died. Luna just faked it to fool Celestia.]]
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** And Discord [[spoiler: tries to put Cupcakes, Sweet Apple Massacre, and one fanfic I forget on TV]]. That monster!
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** The {{flashback}} of what happened to [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle]] at the hands of [[spoiler:[[BrainwashedAndCrazy Celestia, Shining Armor and Cadence]]]]. Talk about BreakTheCutie.
** [[spoiler:Twilight]] in chapter 23 when [[spoiler:she snaps and teleports a bunch of {{mooks}} to the moon. [[FridgeHorror Earth's moon, which has no breathable atmosphere.]]]]
** [[spoiler:Twilight]] in chapter 23 when [[spoiler:she snaps and teleports a bunch of {{mooks}} to the moon. [[FridgeHorror Earth's moon, which has no breathable atmosphere.]]]]
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* StoryBreakerPower: Pinkie's [[SpiderSense Pinkie Sense]], GenreSavvy and nigh-RealityWarper-ness in the face of RuleOfFunny put her squarely here. [[spoiler:Enough so that both times, he has to fight her, Harry resorts to [[SweetTooth candy]] and [[GuileHero logic]] rather than brass tacks.]]
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: After reviewers called the author out on [[spoiler: not jumping back to the Outside to save Rainbow,]] the author offered explanations in the next chapter.
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** [[spoiler:Pinkie]]'s [[GoMadFromTheRevelation descent into madness]].
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* IronWoobie: Rainbow Dash.
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* TearJerker: The apparent death of [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]].
* TearJerker: The apparent death of [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]].
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* LesYay: Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash, to the point that several characters actually tease Rainbow about it in Chapter 13.
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* LesYay: Between Lyra and Bon Bon. [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash ''wishes'' she had this with Pinkie.]]
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* LesYay: Between Lyra and Bon Bon. [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash ''wishes'' she had this with Pinkie.]]
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* NightmareFuel: In the Skyrim world, Harry sees ''[[spoiler:Fluttershy]]'', of all ponies, kill an old man by callously crushing his throat. And earlier, on Earth, it's implied that the [[DemonicPossession temporarily Denarian]] [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] may have killed dozens of people when she sent a tornado whipping through Chicago.
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* NightmareFuel: In the Skyrim world, Harry sees ''[[spoiler:Fluttershy]]'', of all ponies, kill an old man by callously crushing his throat. And earlier, on Earth, it's implied that the [[DemonicPossession temporarily Denarian]] [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] may have killed dozens of people when she sent a tornado whipping through Chicago.Chicago.
** Magog's NoHoldsBarredBeatdown of [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]]
** Magog's NoHoldsBarredBeatdown of [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]]
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* NightmareFuel: In the Skyrim world, Harry sees ''[[spoiler:Fluttershy]]'', of all ponies, kill an old man by callously crushing his throat. And earlier, on Earth, it's implied that the [[DemonicPossession temporarily Denarian]] [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] may have killed dozens of people when she sent a tornado whipping through Chicago.
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* FashionVictimVillain -[[spoiler: possessed Harry]] - HellBentForLeather, TinTyrant, InTheHood, BadassCape, SpikesOfVillainy, BadassLongRobe and SigilSpam (skull of course!) may all be cool but certainly not all on one uniform
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