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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: Carly's only contribution to the ''entire'' story is to revive Jack, give him the vision of him being the Dark King and being support...and after that she's relegated to the sidelines and is a FauxActionGirl, being shot in the head by a bullet from Don Gerome's goons and the ''only'' time she actually gets into a fight has her completely torn apart by Aki. For the one who supposedly made Hell on Earth, you'd think she would've been more proactive.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: Carly's only contribution to the ''entire'' story is to revive Jack, give him the vision of him being the Dark King and being support... and after that she's relegated to the sidelines and is a FauxActionGirl, being shot in the head by a bullet from Don Gerome's goons and the ''only'' time she actually gets into a fight has her completely torn apart by Aki. For the one who supposedly made Hell on Earth, you'd think she would've been more proactive.
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* EvilIsSexy: Played 100% straight in Carly's case, but it'd be kind of hard for Jack to get any sexier.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: Carly's only contribution to the ''entire'' story is to revive Jack, give him the vision of him being the Dark King and being support...and after that she's relegated to the sidelines and is a FauxActionGirl, with the ''only'' time she actually gets into a fight has her completely torn apart by Aki. For the one who supposedly made Hell on Earth, you'd think she would've been more proactive.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: Carly's only contribution to the ''entire'' story is to revive Jack, give him the vision of him being the Dark King and being support...and after that she's relegated to the sidelines and is a FauxActionGirl, with being shot in the head by a bullet from Don Gerome's goons and the ''only'' time she actually gets into a fight has her completely torn apart by Aki. For the one who supposedly made Hell on Earth, you'd think she would've been more proactive.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: Carly's only contribution to the ''entire'' story is to revive Jack, give him the vision of him being the Dark King and being support...and after that she's relegated to the sidelines and is a FauxActionGirl, with the ''only'' time she actually gets into a fight has her completely torn apart by Aki. For the one who supposedly made Hell on Earth, you'd think she would've been more proactive.
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** : For a story that's so heavily Jack/Carly, Carly sure does hug Misty a lot...
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** : For a story that's so heavily Jack/Carly, Carly sure does hug Misty a lot...
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-->"You continue to intrigue me, ma chere. How attractive is this girl you mentioned?"
-->"Beautiful but she doesn't see herself as that... Red hair, nice figure, beautiful peach-pink lips and a nice rack. I'd hit it."
-->"Beautiful but she doesn't see herself as that... Red hair, nice figure, beautiful peach-pink lips and a nice rack. I'd hit it."
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-->"You continue to intrigue me, ma chere. How attractive is this girl you mentioned?"
-->"Beautifulmentioned?"\\
"Beautiful but she doesn't see herself as that... Red hair, nice figure, beautiful peach-pink lips and a nice rack. I'd hit it."
-->"Beautiful
"Beautiful but she doesn't see herself as that... Red hair, nice figure, beautiful peach-pink lips and a nice rack. I'd hit it."
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Even when he's evil, Jack Atlas still lives and breathes these. You can pick from [[spoiler: him punching Divine's torso off]] or [[spoiler: stealing Wiraqocha Rasca from Goodwin right before he crushes him like a wet pinata.]]
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Goodwin screaming "Fuck you, Jack Atlas!" is almost too funny for words.
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Goodwin screaming "Fuck you, Jack Atlas!" is almost too funny for words.
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* HoYay: In the author's own words, regarding Team Unicorn, "…their symbol is a unicorn and their fortress is named after an Erasure song. I don't think that they're really trying to hide anything."
* LesYay: For a story that's so heavily Jack/Carly, Carly sure does hug Misty a lot...
* LesYay: For a story that's so heavily Jack/Carly, Carly sure does hug Misty a lot...
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* HoYay: SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: Goodwin screaming "Fuck you, Jack Atlas!" is almost too funny for words.
* HoYay:
** In the author's own words, regarding Team Unicorn, "…their symbol is a unicorn and their fortress is named after an Erasure song. I don't think that they're really trying to hide anything."
* LesYay: ** : For a story that's so heavily Jack/Carly, Carly sure does hug Misty a lot...
* HoYay:
** In the author's own words, regarding Team Unicorn, "…their symbol is a unicorn and their fortress is named after an Erasure song. I don't think that they're really trying to hide anything."
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-->"Based on that description...so would I. [[GratuitousFrench Deux c'est assez, trois c'est un parti]]. [[note]][[BilingualBonus Two is company, three's a party."]][[/note]]"
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-->"Based on that description...so would I. [[GratuitousFrench Deux c'est assez, trois c'est un parti]]. [[note]][[BilingualBonus Two is company, three's a party."]][[/note]]""]][[/note]]"
* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: Even when he's evil, Jack Atlas still lives and breathes these. You can pick from [[spoiler: him punching Divine's torso off]] or [[spoiler: stealing Wiraqocha Rasca from Goodwin right before he crushes him like a wet pinata.]]
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: Even when he's evil, Jack Atlas still lives and breathes these. You can pick from [[spoiler: him punching Divine's torso off]] or [[spoiler: stealing Wiraqocha Rasca from Goodwin right before he crushes him like a wet pinata.]]
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-->"Based on that description...so would I. [[GratuitousFrench Deux c'est assez, trois c'est un parti]]. [[note]][[BilingualBonus Two is company, three is a party."]][[/note]]"
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-->"Based on that description...so would I. [[GratuitousFrench Deux c'est assez, trois c'est un parti]]. [[note]][[BilingualBonus Two is company, three is three's a party."]][[/note]]"
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* LesYay: For a story that's so heavily Jack/Carly, Carly sure does hug Misty a lot...
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* LesYay: For a story that's so heavily Jack/Carly, Carly sure does hug Misty a lot...lot...
** Sherry is noted to keep her hand on Aki's shoulder longer than necessary. [[AllThereInTheManual Sherry's Formspring]] suggests that this is intentional.
-->"You continue to intrigue me, ma chere. How attractive is this girl you mentioned?"
-->"Beautiful but she doesn't see herself as that... Red hair, nice figure, beautiful peach-pink lips and a nice rack. I'd hit it."
-->"Based on that description...so would I. [[GratuitousFrench Deux c'est assez, trois c'est un parti]]. [[note]][[BilingualBonus Two is company, three is a party."]][[/note]]"
** Sherry is noted to keep her hand on Aki's shoulder longer than necessary. [[AllThereInTheManual Sherry's Formspring]] suggests that this is intentional.
-->"You continue to intrigue me, ma chere. How attractive is this girl you mentioned?"
-->"Beautiful but she doesn't see herself as that... Red hair, nice figure, beautiful peach-pink lips and a nice rack. I'd hit it."
-->"Based on that description...so would I. [[GratuitousFrench Deux c'est assez, trois c'est un parti]]. [[note]][[BilingualBonus Two is company, three is a party."]][[/note]]"
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Did you know that Demak was a former Duel Academy student? Or that Saiou founded the Arcadia Movement?
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Even when he's evil, Jack Atlas still lives and breathes these. You can pick from [[spoiler: him punching Divine's torso off]] or [[spoiler: stealing Wiraqocha Rasca from Goodwin right before he crushes him like a wet pinata.]]
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Goodwin screaming "Fuck you, Jack Atlas!" is almost too funny for words.
* EvilIsSexy: Played 100% straight in Carly's case, but it'd be kind of hard for Jack to get any sexier.
* HoYay: In the author's own words, regarding Team Unicorn, "…their symbol is a unicorn and their fortress is named after an Erasure song. I don't think that they're really trying to hide anything."
* LesYay: For a story that's so heavily Jack/Carly, Carly sure does hug Misty a lot...
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Even when he's evil, Jack Atlas still lives and breathes these. You can pick from [[spoiler: him punching Divine's torso off]] or [[spoiler: stealing Wiraqocha Rasca from Goodwin right before he crushes him like a wet pinata.]]
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Goodwin screaming "Fuck you, Jack Atlas!" is almost too funny for words.
* EvilIsSexy: Played 100% straight in Carly's case, but it'd be kind of hard for Jack to get any sexier.
* HoYay: In the author's own words, regarding Team Unicorn, "…their symbol is a unicorn and their fortress is named after an Erasure song. I don't think that they're really trying to hide anything."
* LesYay: For a story that's so heavily Jack/Carly, Carly sure does hug Misty a lot...
