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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids: ''Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles is best known from child-friendly cartoons and comics, but this fancomic is based more on [[ComicBook/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesMirage the original comics]], that were a lot more violent and satirical. Telligly, the cartoon it draws most from is the slightly darker 2003 one. [[RRatedOpening The prologue should be warning enough to the reader]].
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids: ''Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles is best known from child-friendly cartoons and comics, but this fancomic is based more on [[ComicBook/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesMirage the original comics]], that were a lot more violent and satirical. Telligly, Tellingly, the cartoon it draws most from is the slightly darker 2003 one. [[RRatedOpening The prologue should be warning enough to the reader]].
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%% * RelationshipWritingFumble: Arguably Shadow and Renoir.
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Renoir was initially disliked for being exactly like every perverted anime protagonist and their father - Often being called the worst part of the comic in the beginning. However, as he received character development, showed some hidden depths, and improved his mentor/student relationship with Raphael, fans of the franchise warmed up to him and he became praised among the fanbase for being an interesting deconstruction of what it would be like to be thrown into the Turtle's world without warning. Something most OC's made by fans fail to do.
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Renoir was initially disliked for being exactly like every perverted anime protagonist and their father - Often being called the worst part of the comic in the beginning. However, as he received character development, showed some hidden depths, and improved his mentor/student relationship with Raphael, fans of the franchise warmed up to him and he became praised among the fanbase for being an interesting deconstruction of what it would be like to be thrown into the Turtle's world without warning. Something most OC's made by fans fail to do.
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* NightmareFuel: It starts [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=601 here]]. Except for those who are following the comic, since it's not such a surprise. For them, the true horror started [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=602 on the next page]].
** [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=622 And some pages later...]] it got even worse...
*** And just when you think the fuel is gonna stop flowing, [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=642 he had to throw in this particuar page... Dear Lord...]]
** And now, this... [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=659 freak]] makes the [[NightmareFuel nightmare fuel]] go into [[SerialEscalation ever increasing]] levels... Not safe to your mind or soul.
** Even before pages of chapter 22 started being released, [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=751 the cover]].
* RelationshipWritingFumble: Arguably Shadow and Renoir.
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Renoir was initially disliked for being exactly like every perverted anime protagonist and their father - Often being called the worst part of the comic in the beginning. However, as he received character development, showed some hidden depths, and improved his mentor/student relationship with Raphael fans of the franchise warmed up to him and he became praised among the fanbase for being an interesting deconstruction of what it would be like to be thrown into the Turtle's world without warning. Something most OC's made by fans often fail to do.
** [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=622 And some pages later...]] it got even worse...
*** And just when you think the fuel is gonna stop flowing, [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=642 he had to throw in this particuar page... Dear Lord...]]
** And now, this... [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=659 freak]] makes the [[NightmareFuel nightmare fuel]] go into [[SerialEscalation ever increasing]] levels... Not safe to your mind or soul.
** Even before pages of chapter 22 started being released, [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=751 the cover]].
* RelationshipWritingFumble: Arguably Shadow and Renoir.
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Renoir was initially disliked for being exactly like every perverted anime protagonist and their father - Often being called the worst part of the comic in the beginning. However, as he received character development, showed some hidden depths, and improved his mentor/student relationship with Raphael fans of the franchise warmed up to him and he became praised among the fanbase for being an interesting deconstruction of what it would be like to be thrown into the Turtle's world without warning. Something most OC's made by fans often fail to do.
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%% * NightmareFuel: It starts [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=601 here]]. Except for those who are following the comic, since it's not such a surprise. For them, the true horror started [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=602 on the next page]].
%% ** [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=622 And some pages later...]] it got even worse...
%% *** And just when you think the fuel is gonna stop flowing, [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=642 he had to throw in this particuar page... Dear Lord...]]
%% ** And now, this... [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=659 freak]] makes the [[NightmareFuel nightmare fuel]] go into [[SerialEscalation ever increasing]] levels... Not safe to your mind or soul.
%% ** Even before pages of chapter 22 started being released, [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=751 the cover]].
%% * RelationshipWritingFumble: Arguably Shadow and Renoir.
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Renoir was initially disliked for being exactly like every perverted anime protagonist and their father - Often being called the worst part of the comic in the beginning. However, as he received character development, showed some hidden depths, and improved his mentor/student relationship withRaphael Raphael, fans of the franchise warmed up to him and he became praised among the fanbase for being an interesting deconstruction of what it would be like to be thrown into the Turtle's world without warning. Something most OC's made by fans often fail to do.
%% ** [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=622 And some pages later...]] it got even worse...
%% *** And just when you think the fuel is gonna stop flowing, [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=642 he had to throw in this particuar page... Dear Lord...]]
%% ** And now, this... [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=659 freak]] makes the [[NightmareFuel nightmare fuel]] go into [[SerialEscalation ever increasing]] levels... Not safe to your mind or soul.
%% ** Even before pages of chapter 22 started being released, [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=751 the cover]].
%% * RelationshipWritingFumble: Arguably Shadow and Renoir.
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Renoir was initially disliked for being exactly like every perverted anime protagonist and their father - Often being called the worst part of the comic in the beginning. However, as he received character development, showed some hidden depths, and improved his mentor/student relationship with
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids: This is NOT the TMNT you grew up with. [[note]] It's more like [[ComicBook/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesMirage the one]] your [[MoralGuardians Mom]] didn't let you read.[[/note]]
** Perhaps this is best exemplified by [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=680 this page]].
** [[RRatedOpening You figured the prologue would've tipped you off.]]
*** The fact that it's heavily based on the original comics, and only slightly based on one of the cartoons, (the noticeably dark 2003 one at that) should have also indicated something.
** Perhaps this is best exemplified by [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=680 this page]].
** [[RRatedOpening You figured the prologue would've tipped you off.]]
*** The fact that it's heavily based on the original comics, and only slightly based on one of the cartoons, (the noticeably dark 2003 one at that) should have also indicated something.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids: This ''Franchise/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles is NOT the TMNT you grew up with. [[note]] It's best known from child-friendly cartoons and comics, but this fancomic is based more like on [[ComicBook/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesMirage the one]] your [[MoralGuardians Mom]] didn't let you read.[[/note]]
original comics]], that were a lot more violent and satirical. Telligly, the cartoon it draws most from is the slightly darker 2003 one. [[RRatedOpening The prologue should be warning enough to the reader]].
%% ** Perhaps this is best exemplified by [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=680 thispage]].
** [[RRatedOpening You figured the prologue would've tipped you off.]]
*** The fact that it's heavily based on the original comics, and only slightly based on one of the cartoons, (the noticeably dark 2003 one at that) should have also indicated something.page]].
%% ** Perhaps this is best exemplified by [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=680 this
** [[RRatedOpening You figured the prologue would've tipped you off.]]
*** The fact that it's heavily based on the original comics, and only slightly based on one of the cartoons, (the noticeably dark 2003 one at that) should have also indicated something.
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Raph and Mikey's brotherly moments in the 40-48th pages of Chapter 15.
** Renoir returning to Raphael's lair and asking to be taken back as his student, kneeling down to him... and then Raphael kneels down as well and responds with "Welcome back, my student". Made this troper smile.
** Leonardo's friendship with the ninja Sadao. Flashbacks show how rocky (to say the least) their first encounters were. To see how far they have progressed since then, to the point they are implied to often work side-by-side now, is a ray of hope in an otherwise very dark story.
** Renoir returning to Raphael's lair and asking to be taken back as his student, kneeling down to him... and then Raphael kneels down as well and responds with "Welcome back, my student". Made this troper smile.
** Leonardo's friendship with the ninja Sadao. Flashbacks show how rocky (to say the least) their first encounters were. To see how far they have progressed since then, to the point they are implied to often work side-by-side now, is a ray of hope in an otherwise very dark story.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids: This is NOT the TMNT you grew up with. [[note]] It's more like [[ComicBook/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesMirage The one]] the one your [[MoralGuardians Mom]] didn't let you read.[[/note]]
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids: This is NOT the TMNT you grew up with. [[note]] It's more like [[ComicBook/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesMirage The the one]] the one your [[MoralGuardians Mom]] didn't let you read.[[/note]]
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids: This is NOT the TMNT you grew up with. [[note]] It's more akin to the one your older brother grew up reading.[[/note]]
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids: This is NOT the TMNT you grew up with. [[note]] It's more akin to the one your older brother grew up reading.[[/note]]
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* FanPreferredCouple: Shadow and Renoir are this to the semi-canon Renoir/Davianna. Shadow and Renoir argue like a married couple at times and many of their interactions tend to come off as UST. Add the fact that they've had some rather tender moments, are far more developed as characters than Davianna, and seem to be [[ShipperOnDeck shipped by Carole]] it's understandable why this is.
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* FanPreferredCouple: Shadow and Renoir are this to the semi-canon Renoir/Davianna. Shadow and Renoir argue like a married couple at times and many of their interactions tend to come off as UST. Add the fact that they've had some rather tender moments, are far more developed as characters than Davianna, and seem to be [[ShipperOnDeck shipped by Carole]] it's understandable why this is. is.
* MoralEventHorizon: What Donatello does with [[spoiler:his clone, "Leo", and especially Officer Tony Howard after the latter stumbles upon his lab and experiments.]]
* MoralEventHorizon: What Donatello does with [[spoiler:his clone, "Leo", and especially Officer Tony Howard after the latter stumbles upon his lab and experiments.]]
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*FanPreferredCouple: Shadow and Renoir are this to the semi-canon Renoir/Davianna. Shadow and Renoir argue like a married couple at times and many of their interactions tend to come off as UST. Add the fact that they've had some rather tender moments, are far more developed as characters than Davianna, and seem to be [[ShipperOnDeck shipped by Carole]] it's understandable why this is.
* RelationshipWritingFumble: Arguably Shadow and Renoir.
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Renoir was initially disliked for being exactly like every perverted anime protagonist and their father - Often being called the worst part of the comic in the beginning. However, as he received character development, showed some hidden depths, and improved his mentor/student relationship with Raphael fans of the franchise warmed up to him and he became praised among the fanbase for being an interesting deconstruction of what it would be like to be thrown into the Turtle's world without warning. Something most OC's made by fans often fail to do.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: The major consensous on Davianna so far. Mostly due to not getting much character development outside her relationship with Renoir. Luckily this hasn't caused her to be a scrappy.
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Renoir was initially disliked for being exactly like every perverted anime protagonist and their father - Often being called the worst part of the comic in the beginning. However, as he received character development, showed some hidden depths, and improved his mentor/student relationship with Raphael fans of the franchise warmed up to him and he became praised among the fanbase for being an interesting deconstruction of what it would be like to be thrown into the Turtle's world without warning. Something most OC's made by fans often fail to do.
* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: The major consensous on Davianna so far. Mostly due to not getting much character development outside her relationship with Renoir. Luckily this hasn't caused her to be a scrappy.
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** [[RRatedOpening You figured the prologue would've tipped you off.]]]]
*** The fact that it's heavily based on the original comics, and only slightly based on one of the cartoons, (the noticeably dark 2003 one at that) should have also indicated something.
*TheWoobie: EVERYONE at one point or another.
*** The fact that it's heavily based on the original comics, and only slightly based on one of the cartoons, (the noticeably dark 2003 one at that) should have also indicated something.
*TheWoobie: EVERYONE at one point or another.
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** Renoir returning to Raphael's lair and asking to be taken back as his student, kneeling down to him... and then Raphael kneels down as well and responds with "Welcome back, my student". Made this troper smile.
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** Renoir returning to Raphael's lair and asking to be taken back as his student, kneeling down to him... and then Raphael kneels down as well and responds with "Welcome back, my student". Made this troper smile. smile.
** Leonardo's friendship with the ninja Sadao. Flashbacks show how rocky (to say the least) their first encounters were. To see how far they have progressed since then, to the point they are implied to often work side-by-side now, is a ray of hope in an otherwise very dark story.
** Leonardo's friendship with the ninja Sadao. Flashbacks show how rocky (to say the least) their first encounters were. To see how far they have progressed since then, to the point they are implied to often work side-by-side now, is a ray of hope in an otherwise very dark story.
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** Even before pages of chapter 21 start being released, [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=751 the cover]].
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** And now, this... [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=659 freak]] makes the [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel [[NightmareFuel nightmare fuel]] go into [[SerialEscalation ever increasing]] levels... Not safe to your mind or soul.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: It starts [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=601 here]]. Except for those who are following the comic, since it's not such a surprise. For them, the true horror started [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=602 on the next page]].
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: NauseaFuel: Frequently. Characters vomit on panel, mangled corpses abound and there's plenty of blood from the second panel on.
* NightmareFuel: It starts [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=601 here]]. Except for those who are following the comic, since it's not such a surprise. For them, the true horror started [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=602 on the next page]].
* NightmareFuel: It starts [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=601 here]]. Except for those who are following the comic, since it's not such a surprise. For them, the true horror started [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=602 on the next page]].
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** Even before pages of chapter 21 start being released, [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=751 the cover]].
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** Even before pages of chapter 21 start being released, [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=751 the cover]].cover]].
* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids: This is NOT the TMNT you grew up with.
** Perhaps this is best exemplified by [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=680 this page]].
** [[RRatedOpening You figured the prologue would've tipped you off.]]
* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids: This is NOT the TMNT you grew up with.
** Perhaps this is best exemplified by [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=680 this page]].
** [[RRatedOpening You figured the prologue would've tipped you off.]]
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** And now, this... [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=659 freak]] makes the [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel nightmare fuel]] go into [[BeyondtheImpossible Beyond the Impossible]] levels... Not safe to your mind or soul.
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** And now, this... [[http://www.mntgaiden.com/en/?id=659 freak]] makes the [[HighOctaneNightmareFuel nightmare fuel]] go into [[BeyondtheImpossible Beyond the Impossible]] [[SerialEscalation ever increasing]] levels... Not safe to your mind or soul.
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** Renoir returning to Raphael's lair and asking to be taken back as his student, kneeling down to him... and then Raphael kneels down as well and responds with "Welcome back, my student". Made this troper smile.
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* TheWoobie: See Entry.