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** At the end of the book she hopes Lizzie is doing okay, but makes no effort to check on Lizzie even though she easily could.
* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs: A common reaction to the bizarre imagery, names, and worldbuilding.
* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs: A common reaction to the bizarre imagery, names, and worldbuilding.
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** At the end of the book she hopes Lizzie is doing okay, but makes no effort to check on Lizzie even though she easily could.
* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs: A common reaction to the bizarre imagery, names, and worldbuilding.could.
* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs: A common reaction to the bizarre imagery, names, and worldbuilding.
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* DiagnosedByTheAudience:
** Myrracle acts childish and sometimes is lost in her own world.
** Zarpessa seems to be going through some sort of mental breakdown, possibly due to her family going broke.
** Lizzie clearly has PTSD from her MysteriousPast.
** Myrracle acts childish and sometimes is lost in her own world.
** Zarpessa seems to be going through some sort of mental breakdown, possibly due to her family going broke.
** Lizzie clearly has PTSD from her MysteriousPast.
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* UncertainAudience: Despite being Tyra Banks's take on the Young Adult genre, It’s kinda difficult to establish who the target audience for Modelland is (beyond herself). It’s unsuited for children and even teens since it introduces things like stopping periods of girls without their consent, unwanted pregnancy, and particularly disgusting and disturbing imagery (some of which would not be out of place in a [[Creator/CliveBarker Clive Barker]] novel). But at the same time, the main plot is bare bones, uses teen romance Clichés, and wastes pages detailing song lyrics. The ridiculous names and made-up terms also make the plot hard to take seriously.
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* UncertainAudience: Despite being Tyra Banks's take on the Young Adult genre, It’s it’s kinda difficult to establish who the target audience for Modelland is (beyond herself). It’s unsuited for children and even teens since it introduces things like stopping periods of girls without their consent, unwanted pregnancy, and particularly disgusting and disturbing imagery (some of which would not be out of place in a [[Creator/CliveBarker Clive Barker]] novel). But at the same time, the main plot is bare bones, uses teen romance Clichés, clichés, and wastes pages detailing song lyrics. The ridiculous names and made-up terms also make the plot hard to take seriously.
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* UncertainAudience: Despite being Tyra Banks's take on the Young Adult genre, It’s kinda difficult to establish who the target audience for Modelland is (beyond herself). It’s unsuited for children and even teens since it introduces things like stopping periods of girls without their consent, unwanted pregnancy, and particularly disgusting and disturbing imagery (some of which would not be out of place in a [[Creator/CliveBarker Clive Barker]] novel). But at the same time, the main plot is bare bones, uses teen romance cliché s, Clichés, and wastes pages detailing song lyrics. The ridiculous names and made-up terms also make the plot hard to take seriously.
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* UncertainAudience: Despite being Tyra Banks's take on the Young Adult genre, It’s kinda difficult to establish who the target audience for Modelland is (beyond herself). It’s unsuited for children and even teens since it introduces things like stopping periods of girls without their consent, unwanted pregnancy, and particularly disgusting and disturbing imagery (some of which would not be out of place in a [[CliveBarker(creator) Clive Barker]] novel). But at the same time, the main plot is bare bones, uses teen romance cliché s, and wastes pages detailing song lyrics. The ridiculous names and made-up terms also make the plot hard to take seriously.
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* UncertainAudience: Despite being Tyra Banks's take on the Young Adult genre, It’s kinda difficult to establish who the target audience for Modelland is (beyond herself). It’s unsuited for children and even teens since it introduces things like stopping periods of girls without their consent, unwanted pregnancy, and particularly disgusting and disturbing imagery (some of which would not be out of place in a [[CliveBarker(creator) [[Creator/CliveBarker Clive Barker]] novel). But at the same time, the main plot is bare bones, uses teen romance cliché s, and wastes pages detailing song lyrics. The ridiculous names and made-up terms also make the plot hard to take seriously.
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* UncertainAudience: Despite being Tyra Banks's take on the Young Adult genre, It’s kinda difficult to establish who the target audience for Modelland is (beyond herself). It’s unsuited for children and even teens since it introduces things like stopping periods of girls without their consent, unwanted pregnancy, and particularly disgusting and disturbing imagery (some of which would not be out of place in a [[CliveBarker [[CliveBarker(creator) Clive Barker]] novel). But at the same time, the main plot is bare bones, uses teen romance cliché s, and wastes pages detailing song lyrics. The ridiculous names and made-up terms also make the plot hard to take seriously.
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* UncertainAudience: Despite being Tyra Banks's take on the Young Adult genre, It’s kinda difficult to establish who the target audience for Modelland is (beyond herself). It’s unsuited for children and even teens since it introduces things like stopping periods of girls without their consent, unwanted pregnancy, and particularly disgusting and disturbing imagery (some of which would not be out of place in a CliveBarker [[CliveBarker Clive Barker]] novel). But at the same time, the main plot is bare bones, uses teen romance cliché s, and wastes pages detailing song lyrics. The ridiculous names and made-up terms also make the plot hard to take seriously.
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* UncertainAudience: Despite being Tyra Banks's take on the Young Adult genre, It’s kinda difficult to establish who the target audience for Modelland is (beyond herself). It’s unsuited for children and even teens since it introduces things like stopping periods of girls without their consent, unwanted pregnancy, and particularly disgusting and disturbing imagery (some of which would not be out of place in a [[Clive Barker]] CliveBarker novel). But at the same time, the main plot is bare bones, uses teen romance clichés, cliché s, and wastes pages detailing song lyrics. The ridiculous names and made-up terms also make the plot hard to take seriously.
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* UncertainAudience: Despite being Tyra Banks's take on the Young Adult genre, It’s kinda difficult to establish who the target audience for Modelland is (beyond herself). It’s unsuited for children and even teen since it’s introduce things like stopping periods of girls without their consent, unwanted pregnancy and particularly disgusting and disturbing imagery. But at the same time, the main plot is bare bones, use cliché teen romance, doesn’t hesitate to waste pages for songs and the ridiculous names and made-up terms make the plot hard to take seriously.
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* UncertainAudience: Despite being Tyra Banks's take on the Young Adult genre, It’s kinda difficult to establish who the target audience for Modelland is (beyond herself). It’s unsuited for children and even teen teens since it’s introduce it introduces things like stopping periods of girls without their consent, unwanted pregnancy pregnancy, and particularly disgusting and disturbing imagery. imagery (some of which would not be out of place in a [[Clive Barker]] novel). But at the same time, the main plot is bare bones, use cliché uses teen romance, doesn’t hesitate to waste romance clichés, and wastes pages for songs and the detailing song lyrics. The ridiculous names and made-up terms also make the plot hard to take seriously.
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* UncertainAudience: Despite being Tyra Banks's take on the Young Adult genre, It’s kinda difficult to establish who the target audience for Modelland is (beyond herself). It’s unsuited for children and even teen since it’s introduce things like stopping periods of girls without their consent, unwanted pregnancy and particularly disgusting and disturbing imagery. But at the same time, the main plot is bare bones, use cliché teen romance, doesn’t hesitate to waste pages for songs and the ridiculous names and made-up terms make the plot hard to take seriously.
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* {{MSTing}}: Done [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/lb_i.php?lb_id=13173496870B00529600 here]] and [[http://impishidea.com/spork/lily-sporks-modelland-part-1-prologue here]].
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* {{Spork}}: Done [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/lb_i.php?lb_id=13173496870B00529600 here]] and [[http://impishidea.com/spork/lily-sporks-modelland-part-1-prologue here]].
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** At the end of the book she hopes Lizzie is doing okay, but makes no effort to check on Lizzie even though she easily could.could.
* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs: A common reaction to the bizarre imagery, names, and worldbuilding.
* WhatDoYouMeanItWasntMadeOnDrugs: A common reaction to the bizarre imagery, names, and worldbuilding.
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* {{Spork}}: Done [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/lb_i.php?lb_id=13173496870B00529600 here]] and [[http://impishidea.com/spork/lily-sporks-modelland-part-1-prologue here]].
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* SoBadItsGood: It`s a book where SMIZE is an actual word and models are living gods. What else would it be?!
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* SoBadItsGood: It`s It's a book where SMIZE is an actual word and models are living gods. What else would it be?!
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* SoBadItsGoodSoBadItsGood: It`s a book where SMIZE is an actual word and models are living gods. What else would it be?!
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This is Flame Bait now.
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* SnarkBait: The book ends up practically snarking itself. For example SMIZE is an actual word. Really.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Lizzie. Even most people who dislike the book consider her the most interesting character, [[PutOnABus not that her story gets much attention]].
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** Lizzie. Even most people who dislike the book consider her the most interesting character, [[PutOnABus not that her story gets much attention]].
** Lizzie. Even most people who dislike the book consider her the most interesting character, [[PutOnABus not that her story gets much attention]].
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Tookie is a complete loner...except given the way she acts in the beginning of the story, she comes across as an obsessive weirdo no one would ever want to be anywhere near anyway.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Tookie is a complete loner... except given the way she acts in the beginning of the story, she comes across as an obsessive weirdo no one would ever want to be anywhere near anyway.anyway. She also does some nasty stuff throughout the book, such as:
** Stealing hospital equipment for fun.
** Taking sadistic joy in seeing Zarpessa have to dumpster-dive for food, even though Zarpessa hasn't done anything mean to Tookie at this point.
** At the end of the book she hopes Lizzie is doing okay, but makes no effort to check on Lizzie even though she easily could.
** Stealing hospital equipment for fun.
** Taking sadistic joy in seeing Zarpessa have to dumpster-dive for food, even though Zarpessa hasn't done anything mean to Tookie at this point.
** At the end of the book she hopes Lizzie is doing okay, but makes no effort to check on Lizzie even though she easily could.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Lizzie. Even most people who dislike the book consider her the most interesting character, [[PutOnABus not that her story gets much attention]].
** Myrracle often garners more sympathy than Tookie herself, for being far more proactive in pursuing her dreams.
* TheScrappy: Dylan is far and away the least-liked of Tookie's ensemble, being a sassy-black-woman stereotype that constantly spouts annoying babble and rarely helps out with anything in the story.
** Myrracle often garners more sympathy than Tookie herself, for being far more proactive in pursuing her dreams.
* TheScrappy: Dylan is far and away the least-liked of Tookie's ensemble, being a sassy-black-woman stereotype that constantly spouts annoying babble and rarely helps out with anything in the story.
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot: Lizzie, just everything about Lizzie. She's being subjected to horrifying experiments for the sake of "beauty", but the plot instead focuses on the titular model school while Lizzie ends up PutOnABus (twice!).
* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Tookie is a complete loner...except given the way she acts in the beginning of the story, she comes across as an obsessive weirdo no one would ever want to be anywhere near anyway.
* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Tookie is a complete loner...except given the way she acts in the beginning of the story, she comes across as an obsessive weirdo no one would ever want to be anywhere near anyway.
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unfortunate implications need citations
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* UnfortunateImplications: Reeks of misogyny and just discrimination in general, both positive and negative.
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* SnarkBait: The book ends up practically snarking itself. For example SM-ize is an actual word. Really.
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* SnarkBait: The book ends up practically snarking itself. For example SM-ize SMIZE is an actual word. Really.
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natter, so bad it is horrible is Flame Bait
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** ... though, for some, it can easily jump to SoBadItsHorrible, particularly for people who picked up the book thinking it was going to poke fun at modelling and later realized that they picked up a published, relatively-improved version of Fanfic/MyImmortal.
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**... though, for some, it can easily jump to SoBadItsHorrible, particularly for people who picked up the book thinking it was going to poke fun at modelling and later realized that they picked up a published, relatively-improved version of Fanfic/MyImmortal.
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* Unfortunate Implications: Reeks of misogyny and just discrimination in general, both positive and negative.
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* Unfortunate Implications: Reeks of misogyny and just discrimination in general, both positive and negative.
* Unfortunate Implications: Reeks of misogyny and just discrimination in general, both positive and negative.
