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* JerkSue: The main character, without a doubt, which also has many GodModeSue traits.
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* HateDumb:Some [[{{Troll}}negative reviewers]] have complained that the story was a [[TheyCopiedItSoItSucks "rip-off"]] of ''Fanfic/ChristianHumberReloaded'' despite the fact that this fanfic is obviously intended to be similar, as an homage.
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* HateDumb:Some [[{{Troll}}negative reviewers]] have complained that the story was a [[ItsTheSameNowItSucks "rip-off"]] of ''Fanfic/ChristianHumberReloaded'' despite the fact that this fanfic is obviously intended to be similar, as an homage.
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* HateDumb:Some [[{{Troll}}negative reviewers]] have complained that the story was a [[ItsTheSameNowItSucks [[TheyCopiedItSoItSucks "rip-off"]] of ''Fanfic/ChristianHumberReloaded'' despite the fact that this fanfic is obviously intended to be similar, as an homage.
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* HateDumb:Some [[{{Troll}}negative reviewers]] have complained that the story was a "rip-off" [[ItsTheSameNowItSucks "rip-off"]] of ''Fanfic/ChristianHumberReloaded'' despite the fact that this fanfic is obviously intended to be similar, as an homage.
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* HoYay: There are many moments an homoerotic subtext in the story becames blatantly obvious. In part three there are several moments where the main character mentions being completely naked along with other male characters. (Case in point: His "mental training" mentioned in part 3)
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* HoYay: There are many several moments an when the homoerotic subtext in of the story becames blatantly obvious. In part three 3 there are several moments where the main character mentions being completely naked along with other male characters. (Case in point: His "mental training" mentioned in part 3)
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* {{Squick}}: There are several chapters were the acts of violence done by Max Wolf became a major source for NauseaFuel. For example in a chapter from part 2 named "More things that happen" Max Wolf mentions in a totally casual manner how he and his friend Dave started hunting "thugs, murderers, rapists and pedophiles", murder and torture them "just for fun" and then use their blood to write in the walls.
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*JerkSue: The main character, without a doubt, which also has many GodModeSue traits.
* {{Squick}}: There are several chapters were the acts of violence done by Max Wolf became a major source for NauseaFuel. For example in a chapter from part 2 named "More things thathappen" happened" Max Wolf mentions in a totally casual manner how he and his friend Dave started hunting "thugs, murderers, rapists and pedophiles", murder and torture them "just for fun" and then use their blood to write in the walls.
* {{Squick}}: There are several chapters were the acts of violence done by Max Wolf became a major source for NauseaFuel. For example in a chapter from part 2 named "More things that
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*HoYay: There are many moments an homoerotic subtext in the story becames blatantly obvious. In part three there are several moments where the main character mentions being completely naked along with other male characters. (Case in point: His "mental training" mentioned in part 3)
* {{Squick}}: There are several chapters were the acts of violence done by Max Wolf became a major source for NauseaFuel. For example in a chapter from part 2 named "More things that happen" Max Wolf mentions in a totally casual manner how he and his friend Dave started hunting "thugs, murderers, rapists and pedophiles", murder and torture them "just for fun" and then use their blood to write in the walls.
* {{Squick}}: There are several chapters were the acts of violence done by Max Wolf became a major source for NauseaFuel. For example in a chapter from part 2 named "More things that happen" Max Wolf mentions in a totally casual manner how he and his friend Dave started hunting "thugs, murderers, rapists and pedophiles", murder and torture them "just for fun" and then use their blood to write in the walls.
