Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 27 (click to see context) from:
* HarsherInHindsight: An early comic that involves G explaining about how bonds with a trainer increase a Gardevoir’s lifespan has her glare at the audience after explaining they form bonds with human companions and then glares at the audience and says “I can see you snickering, shut up.” This became a lot less funny after it was revealed that G lied and her extended lifespan came from forming a psychic mating bond with Lily, and her quick angry reaction looks more like a guilty conscience.
to:
* HarsherInHindsight: An early comic that involves G explaining about how bonds with a trainer increase a Gardevoir’s lifespan has her glare at the audience after explaining they form bonds with human companions and then glares at the audience and says “I "I can see you snickering, shut up.” " This became a lot less funny after it was revealed that G lied and her extended lifespan came from forming a psychic mating bond with Lily, and her quick angry reaction looks more like a guilty conscience.
Changed line(s) 57 (click to see context) from:
** ''“Lily... do you hate me?”'' Despite all of G’s faults and the gravity of her actions, the sincerity of that line instantly makes you feel for her and how heartbroken she is at Lily’s anger.
to:
** ''“Lily... ''"Lily... do you hate me?”'' me?"'' Despite all of G’s G's faults and the gravity of her actions, the sincerity of that line instantly makes you feel for her and how heartbroken she is at Lily’s Lily's anger.
