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* FanNickname: Sharo is sometimes called Sxaro, as a compromise between [[SpellMyNameWithAnS two rival romanizations of her name]], Sharo and Syaro.
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* FanNickname: Sharo is sometimes called Sxaro, as a compromise between [[SpellMyNameWithAnS two rival romanizations of her name]], name, Sharo and Syaro.
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Removing Gratuitous Japanese (tankobon just means "volume") and "ameloriate" isn't a word.
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* BetterOnDVD: As the chapters go into the triple digits, the manga authors add both more continuity and more characters while only releasing eight pages a month, to the point readers have to remember plot points like the Ginger girls losing a job at Bright Bunny to Yura that not only happened over a year prior, but also had [[FourLinesAllWaiting other plotlines interupting that one]] while it was going on. Needless to say, rereading through the series in ''Tankobon'' format not only ameloriates this, but it's practically required just to remember what the hell is going on at any given time.
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* BetterOnDVD: As the chapters go into the triple digits, the manga authors add both more continuity and more characters while only releasing eight pages a month, to the point readers have to remember plot points like the Ginger girls losing a job at Bright Bunny to Yura that not only happened over a year prior, but also had [[FourLinesAllWaiting other plotlines interupting that one]] while it was going on. Needless to say, rereading through the series in ''Tankobon'' volume format not only ameloriates alleviates this, but it's practically required just to remember what the hell is going on at any given time.
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* HeartwarmingInHindsight: Right before the girls (and Tippy) leave for their trip to the beach in chapter 140, Chino's grandfather asks if Takahiro will be alright running Rabbit House "while I'm away". Takahiro says not to worry about it and Aoyama pops up to say she'll be helping out too. [[spoiler: This chapter is the start of a story arc that ends with Chino's grandfather ascending to Heaven, so basically they're telling him Rabbit House will be in good hands after he goes to the great beyond.]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: In vol. 10 ch. 4, Chino wails at her grandfather, "Don't say things like 'You don't need me anymore' that make it sound like you're going to disappear!" [[spoiler: A mere twenty-two chapters later, after Chino finally says what he needs to hear, he ascends to Heaven in the middle of the night without saying a word to anybody, which utterly devastates Chino.]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: HarsherInHindsight:
** In vol. 10 ch. 4, Chino wails at her grandfather, "Don't say things like 'You don't need me anymore' that make it sound like you're going to disappear!" [[spoiler: A mere twenty-two chapters later, after Chino finally says what he needs to hear, he ascends to Heaven in the middle of the night without saying a word to anybody, which utterly devastates Chino.]]
** Chapter 136 ends with Chino and her grandfather debating whether she should continue to run Rabbit House the way he ran it, or spread her wings and find a way to run it that makes her happy. He ends the chapter by saying, "Maybe we'll find out soon enough." [[spoiler: When Chino finally answers that question in chapter 145, it becomes the trigger for his ascension to heaven.]]
** In vol. 10 ch. 4, Chino wails at her grandfather, "Don't say things like 'You don't need me anymore' that make it sound like you're going to disappear!" [[spoiler: A mere twenty-two chapters later, after Chino finally says what he needs to hear, he ascends to Heaven in the middle of the night without saying a word to anybody, which utterly devastates Chino.]]
** Chapter 136 ends with Chino and her grandfather debating whether she should continue to run Rabbit House the way he ran it, or spread her wings and find a way to run it that makes her happy. He ends the chapter by saying, "Maybe we'll find out soon enough." [[spoiler: When Chino finally answers that question in chapter 145, it becomes the trigger for his ascension to heaven.]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: In vol. 10 ch. 4, Chino wails at her grandfather, "Don't say things like 'You don't need me anymore' that make it sound like you're going to disappear!" [[spoiler: A mere twenty-two chapters later, after Chino finally says what he needs to hear, he ascends to Heaven in the middle of the night without saying a word to anybody.]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: In vol. 10 ch. 4, Chino wails at her grandfather, "Don't say things like 'You don't need me anymore' that make it sound like you're going to disappear!" [[spoiler: A mere twenty-two chapters later, after Chino finally says what he needs to hear, he ascends to Heaven in the middle of the night without saying a word to anybody.anybody, which utterly devastates Chino.]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: In vol. 10 ch. 4, Chino wails at her grandfather, "Don't say things like 'You don't need me anymore' that make it sound like you're going to disappear!" [[spoiler: A mere twenty-two chapters later, after Chino finally says what he needs to hear, he ascends to Heaven in the middle of the night without saying a word to anybody.]]
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* TearJerker: [[spoiler: Once Chino's grandfather hears what he needs to hear, he's suddenly shepherded off to heaven by Saki in the middle of the night, never getting the chance to say goodbye to his family. Poor Chino spends the whole next chapter depressed and bawls her eyes out at the end.]]
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* BetterOnDVD: As the chapters go into the triple digits, the manga authors add both more continuity and more characters while only releasing eight pages a month, to the point readers have to remember plot points like the Ginger girls losing a job at Bright Bunny to Yura that not only happened over a year prior, but also had [[FourLinesAllWaiting other plotlines interupting that one]] while it was going on. Needless to say, rereading through the series in ''Tankobon'' format not only ameloriates this, but it's practically required just to remember what the hell is going on at any given time.
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* LesYay: Syaro's admiration for Rize is very strong; between her fantasies about Rize, becomes flustered when she's around and blushes when complimented, it's clear she's got a crush on her. On the whole, however, the girls do not have such a dynamic with one another: compared with other works in ''Magazine/MangaTimeKirara'', such as ''Manga/SakuraTrick'', ''Manga/KiniroMosaic'', and ''Manga/{{Yuyushiki}}'', ''[=GochiUsa=]'' is more tame.
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* LesYay: LesYay:
** Syaro's admiration for Rize is very strong; between her fantasies about Rize, becomes flustered when she's around and blushes when complimented, it's clear she's got a crush on her. On the whole, however, the girls do not have such a dynamic with one another: compared with other works in ''Magazine/MangaTimeKirara'', such as ''Manga/SakuraTrick'', ''Manga/KiniroMosaic'', and ''Manga/{{Yuyushiki}}'', ''[=GochiUsa=]'' is moretame.tame.
** Chapter 139. After Yura buys a bunch of BDSM equipment from the flea market, she asks Rize if she wants to try the stuff out.
** Syaro's admiration for Rize is very strong; between her fantasies about Rize, becomes flustered when she's around and blushes when complimented, it's clear she's got a crush on her. On the whole, however, the girls do not have such a dynamic with one another: compared with other works in ''Magazine/MangaTimeKirara'', such as ''Manga/SakuraTrick'', ''Manga/KiniroMosaic'', and ''Manga/{{Yuyushiki}}'', ''[=GochiUsa=]'' is more
** Chapter 139. After Yura buys a bunch of BDSM equipment from the flea market, she asks Rize if she wants to try the stuff out.
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Fixed incorrect grammar and awkward phrasing.
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* LauncherOfAThousandShips: Excluding every male adults, an old woman and the talking rabbit, Cocoa gets shipped to literally every characters thanks to her countless LesYay moments she had with everyone.
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* LauncherOfAThousandShips: Excluding every male adults, an old woman and the talking rabbit, Cocoa gets shipped to with literally every characters all of her peers and ''kouhai'', thanks to her the countless LesYay moments she she's had with everyone.
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* LauncherOfAThousandShips: Excluding every male adults, an old woman and the talking rabbit, Cocoa gets shipped to literally every characters thanks to her countless LesYay moments she had with everyone.
