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correcting grammar, spelling & character name mistakes, fixing unfinished sentences, added a few more tropes
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** Is Anna actually a PunchClockVillain who suffered a terrible wrong at the hands of superheroes or a SociopathicHero who is happy to destroy any amount of lives in order to get her results? Is she just suffering MoralMyopia because of her association of all superheroes with Supercollider?
** Are superheroes really the source of supervillains and a drain on society of is Anna a UnreliableNarrator since we meet individuals like Quantum Singularity who are genuine heroes but are still subject to the Draft.
** Are superheroes really the source of supervillains and a drain on society of is Anna a UnreliableNarrator since we meet individuals like Quantum Singularity who are genuine heroes but are still subject to the Draft.
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** Is Anna actually a PunchClockVillain who suffered a terrible wrong at the hands of superheroes or a SociopathicHero who is happy to destroy any amount of lives in order to get her results? Is she just suffering MoralMyopia because of her association of all superheroes with Supercollider?
** Are superheroes really the source of supervillains and a drain on societyof or is Anna a UnreliableNarrator since we meet individuals like Quantum Singularity Entanglement who are genuine heroes but are still subject to the Draft.
** Are superheroes really the source of supervillains and a drain on society
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* HoYay: Anna and Quantum Entanglement show significant sexual attraction despite discussing their respective love lives with men.
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* HoYay: Anna and Quantum Entanglement show significant sexual attraction despite discussing their respective love lives with men. Anna also has a crush on her female limo driver.
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Many readers have been put off by the increasingly heinous actions of Anna in the pursuit of superheroic destruction. These include doxxing, targeting of innocent civilians, and lying to Quantum Singularity's face about her involvement in her lover's death.
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* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Many readers have been put off by the increasingly heinous actions of Anna in the pursuit of superheroic destruction. These include doxxing, targeting of innocent civilians, and lying to Quantum Singularity's Entanglement's face about her involvement in her lover's death.
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* HoYay: Anna and Quantum Entanglement show significant FoeYay as well as sexual attraction despite discussing their respective love lives with men.
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* HoYay: Anna and Quantum Entanglement show significant FoeYay as well as sexual attraction despite discussing their respective love lives with men.
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** Was Quantum Entanglement [[spoiler: ever actually warming up to Anna or was it all just an attempt to manipulate her into telling her who killed Melting Point? The fact she thought Leviathan was dead certainly makes it so that she was always playing Anna on some level.]]
* HoYay: Anna and Quantum Entanglement show significant FoeYay as well as sexual attraction despite discussing their respective love lives with men.
* HoYay: Anna and Quantum Entanglement show significant FoeYay as well as sexual attraction despite discussing their respective love lives with men.
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* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Many readers have been put off by the increasingly heinous actions of Anna in the pursuit of superheroic destruction. These include doxxing, targeting of innocent civilians, and lying to Quantum Singularity's face about her involvement in her lover's death.
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** [[spoiler: Anna having the Accelerator murdered and feeling only a twinge of guilt despite being the one to order the hit. It doesn't help she's only doing it to tick Supercollider off by killing his sidekick.]]
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** [[spoiler: Anna having the Accelerator murdered and feeling only a twinge of guilt despite being the one to order the hit. It doesn't help she's only doing it to tick Supercollider off by killing his sidekick.]]]]
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Many readers have been put off by the increasingly heinous actions of Anna in the pursuit of superheroic destruction. These include doxxing, targeting of innocent civilians, and lying to Quantum Singularity's face about her involvement in her lover's death.
* TooBleakStoppedCaring: Many readers have been put off by the increasingly heinous actions of Anna in the pursuit of superheroic destruction. These include doxxing, targeting of innocent civilians, and lying to Quantum Singularity's face about her involvement in her lover's death.
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** Are superheroes really the source of supervillains and a drain on society of is Anna a UnreliableNarrator since we meet individuals like Quantum Singularity who are genuine heroes but are still subject to the Draft]].
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** Are superheroes really the source of supervillains and a drain on society of is Anna a UnreliableNarrator since we meet individuals like Quantum Singularity who are genuine heroes but are still subject to the Draft]].Draft.
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation:
** Is Anna actually a PunchClockVillain who suffered a terrible wrong at the hands of superheroes or a SociopathicHero who is happy to destroy any amount of lives in order to get her results? Is she just suffering MoralMyopia because of her association of all superheroes with Supercollider?
** Are superheroes really the source of supervillains and a drain on society of is Anna a UnreliableNarrator since we meet individuals like Quantum Singularity who are genuine heroes but are still subject to the Draft]].
* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Many readers have been put off by the increasingly heinous actions of Anna in the pursuit of superheroic destruction. These include doxxing, targeting of innocent civilians, and lying to Quantum Singularity's face about her involvement in her lover's death.
* MoralEventHorizon:
** Supercollider when he reveals [[spoiler: his plans to have Anna lobotomized in order to make sure she's no longer able to threaten him with bad publicity.]]
** [[spoiler: Anna having the Accelerator murdered and feeling only a twinge of guilt despite being the one to order the hit. It doesn't help she's only doing it to tick Supercollider off by killing his sidekick.]]
** Is Anna actually a PunchClockVillain who suffered a terrible wrong at the hands of superheroes or a SociopathicHero who is happy to destroy any amount of lives in order to get her results? Is she just suffering MoralMyopia because of her association of all superheroes with Supercollider?
** Are superheroes really the source of supervillains and a drain on society of is Anna a UnreliableNarrator since we meet individuals like Quantum Singularity who are genuine heroes but are still subject to the Draft]].
* DarknessInducedAudienceApathy: Many readers have been put off by the increasingly heinous actions of Anna in the pursuit of superheroic destruction. These include doxxing, targeting of innocent civilians, and lying to Quantum Singularity's face about her involvement in her lover's death.
* MoralEventHorizon:
** Supercollider when he reveals [[spoiler: his plans to have Anna lobotomized in order to make sure she's no longer able to threaten him with bad publicity.]]
** [[spoiler: Anna having the Accelerator murdered and feeling only a twinge of guilt despite being the one to order the hit. It doesn't help she's only doing it to tick Supercollider off by killing his sidekick.]]
