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* AssPull: Peter Paltridge wanted "[[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&pageType=index&seriesID=11 The New Adventures of the Nettropolis Narvel]]" to have the most unpredictable ending he could think of for a romance. He succeeded in that area, but YMMV over whether or not the lack of foreshadowing weakens its emotional appeal.
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* AssPull: Peter Paltridge wanted "[[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&pageType=index&seriesID=11 The New Adventures of the Nettropolis Narvel]]" to have the most unpredictable ending he could think of for a romance. He succeeded in that area, but YMMV over whether or not the lack of foreshadowing arguably weakens its emotional appeal.
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* AssPull: Peter Paltridge wanted "[[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&pageType=index&seriesID=11 The New Adventures of the Nettropolis Narvel]]" to have the most unpredictable ending he could think of for a romance. He succeeded in that area, but YMMV over whether or not the lack of foreshadowing works against if.
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* AssPull: Peter Paltridge wanted "[[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&pageType=index&seriesID=11 The New Adventures of the Nettropolis Narvel]]" to have the most unpredictable ending he could think of for a romance. He succeeded in that area, but YMMV over whether or not the lack of foreshadowing works against if.weakens its emotional appeal.
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* AssPull: Peter Paltridge wanted "[[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&pageType=index&seriesID=11 The New Adventures of the Nettropolis Narvel]]" to have the most unpredictable ending he could think of for a romance. He succeeded in that area, but YMMV over whether or not the resolution feels cheap.
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* AssPull: Peter Paltridge wanted "[[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&pageType=index&seriesID=11 The New Adventures of the Nettropolis Narvel]]" to have the most unpredictable ending he could think of for a romance. He succeeded in that area, but YMMV over whether or not the resolution feels cheap.lack of foreshadowing works against if.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: The part of "Deviantaaargh" when the ''NFP'' staff meets an avatar resembling [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=5&page=17 a stick figure version]] of JJ from ''GoodTimes''.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: The part of "Deviantaaargh" when the ''NFP'' staff meets an avatar resembling [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=5&page=17 a stick figure version]] of JJ from ''GoodTimes''.
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Shroomy]] crosses this in "Shrooming With Shroomy", after [[spoiler: [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=14&page=19 pushing Nina Wing out the window.]]]]
* NauseaFuel: The first three panels of [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=13&page=4 this page]] of "Valentine's Day Massacre". Paltridge based them on a comic one of his readers actually made and sent him.
* NauseaFuel: The first three panels of [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=13&page=4 this page]] of "Valentine's Day Massacre". Paltridge based them on a comic one of his readers actually made and sent him.
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* FridgeBrilliance: In "The New Adventures of the Nettropolis Narvel," why did Narvel have to [[spoiler: [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&page=18 kiss Vicky]] [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&page=23 twice]]]] before [[spoiler: they could escape the Sim Life]]? [[spoiler: They shared their first kiss while Vicky only loved Narvel for selfish reasons, but Narvel kissed her again after she decided to put his needs before her wants, which apparently restored enough of her purity for her to become Girl Friday again.]]
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* FridgeBrilliance: In "The New Adventures of the Nettropolis Narvel," why did Narvel have to [[spoiler: [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&page=18 kiss Vicky]] [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&page=23 twice]]]] before [[spoiler: they could escape the Sim Life]]? [[spoiler: They Narvel and Vicky shared their first kiss while Vicky she only loved Narvel him for selfish reasons, but Narvel kissed her again Vicky a second time after she decided to put his needs before her wants, which apparently restored enough of her purity for her to become Girl Friday again.]]
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* FridgeBrilliance: In "The New Adventures of the Nettropolis Narvel," why did Narvel have to [[spoiler: [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&page=18 kiss Vicky]] [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&page=23 twice]]]] before [[spoiler: they could escape the Sim Life]]? [[spoiler: Their They shared their first kiss occurred while Vicky only loved Narvel for selfish reasons, while their second happened but Narvel kissed her again after she decided to put his needs before her wants, restoring which apparently restored enough of her purity for her to become Girl Friday again.]]
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* FridgeBrilliance: In "The New Adventures of the Nettropolis Narvel," why did Narvel have to [[spoiler: [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&page=18 kiss Vicky]] [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&page=23 twice]]]] before [[spoiler: they could escape the Sim Life]]? [[spoiler: Their first kiss occurred while Vicky only loved Narvel for selfish reasons, while their second happened after she decided to put his needs before her wants, restoring enough of her purity for her to become a superhero Girl Friday again.]]
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* FridgeBrilliance: Why did Narvel have to [[spoiler: [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&page=18 kiss Vicky]] [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&page=23 twice]]]] before [[spoiler: they could escape the Sim Life]]? [[spoiler: Their first kiss occurred while Vicky only loved Narvel for selfish reasons, while their second happened after she decided to put his needs before her wants, restoring enough of her purity for her to become a superhero again.]]
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* FridgeBrilliance: Why In "The New Adventures of the Nettropolis Narvel," why did Narvel have to [[spoiler: [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&page=18 kiss Vicky]] [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&page=23 twice]]]] before [[spoiler: they could escape the Sim Life]]? [[spoiler: Their first kiss occurred while Vicky only loved Narvel for selfish reasons, while their second happened after she decided to put his needs before her wants, restoring enough of her purity for her to become a superhero again.]]
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* FridgeBrilliance: Why did Narvel have to [[spoiler: [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&page=18 kiss Vicky]] [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=15&page=23 twice]]]] before [[spoiler: they could escape the Sim Life]]? [[spoiler: Their first kiss occurred while Vicky only loved Narvel for selfish reasons, while their second happened after she decided to put his needs before her wants, restoring enough of her purity for her to become a superhero again.]]
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* MoralEventHorizon: Shroomy crosses this in "Shrooming With Shroomy", after [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=14&page=19 pushing Nina Wing out the window.]]
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* MoralEventHorizon: Shroomy [[spoiler: Shroomy]] crosses this in "Shrooming With Shroomy", after [[spoiler: [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=14&page=19 pushing Nina Wing out the window.]]]]]]
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* MoralEventHorizon: Shroomy crosses this in "Shrooming With Shroomy", after [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=14&page=19 pushing Nina Wing out the window.]]
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** Lululu's [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=7&page=7 poverty and immobility]] would make her a JerkassWoobie if not for the fact she does not appear to have a Heart Of Gold.
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** Lululu's [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=7&page=7 poverty and immobility]] would make her a JerkassWoobie if not for the fact she does not appear to have a Heart Of Gold.heart of gold.
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** Aerynn also qualifies when she [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=1&page=17 talks about her past struggles]] to find someone who could accept her despite her powers. This could explain why she [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=6&page=23&seriesID=11 consoles Shroomy]] more willingly than the others in her times of feeling inferiority. (That scene came after Aerynn helped Shroomy realize Parker doesn't really love her.)
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** Aerynn also qualifies when she [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=1&page=17 talks about her past struggles]] to find someone who could accept her despite her powers. This could explain why she [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=6&page=23&seriesID=11 consoles Shroomy]] more willingly than the others in her times of feeling inferiority. (That [[hottip:*:The scene in that second link came after Aerynn helped Shroomy realize Parker doesn't really love her.)]]
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* NauseaFuel: The first three panels of [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=13&page=4 this page]] of "Valentine's Day Massacre". Paltridge based them on a comic one of his readers actually made and sent him.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: The part of "Deviantaaargh" when the ''NFP'' staff meets an avatar resembling [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=5&page=17 a stick figure version]] of JJ from ''GoodTimes''.
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I don\'t know if she fits the criteria of getting emphasized for no reason, either.
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* CreatorsPet: Aerynn Arlia. Paltridge even ends her bio by calling her the best character in the series. Although, only a few people seem to hate her, for now.
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Much, much, much better example.
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** Aerynn also qualifies when she [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=2&page=5 talks about her past struggles]] to find someone who could accept her despite her powers. This could explain why she [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=6&page=23&seriesID=11 consoles Shroomy]] more willingly than the others in her times of feeling inferiority. (That scene came after Aerynn helped Shroomy realize Parker doesn't really love her.)
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** Aerynn also qualifies when she [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=2&page=5 php?issue=1&page=17 talks about her past struggles]] to find someone who could accept her despite her powers. This could explain why she [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=6&page=23&seriesID=11 consoles Shroomy]] more willingly than the others in her times of feeling inferiority. (That scene came after Aerynn helped Shroomy realize Parker doesn't really love her.)
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I couldn\'t find anything for Trawn yet because her entry refers to something Mr. Paltridge wrote in her bio without showing yet.
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** Aerynn also qualifies when she talks about her initial struggles to find someone who could accept her despite her powers. This could explain why she consoles Shroomy more willingly than the others in her times of feeling inferiority.
** Lululu's poverty and immobility would make her a JerkassWoobie if not for the fact she does not appear to have a Heart Of Gold.
** Lululu's poverty and immobility would make her a JerkassWoobie if not for the fact she does not appear to have a Heart Of Gold.
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inferiority. (That scene came after Aerynn helped Shroomy realize Parker doesn't really love her.)
** Lululu's [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=7&page=7 poverty andimmobility immobility]] would make her a JerkassWoobie if not for the fact she does not appear to have a Heart Of Gold.
** Lululu's [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=7&page=7 poverty and
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** NJ also has some crushed hopes. These feel especially pitiful in the WholeEpisodeFlashback "The Time That People Forgot", when a vocational test's results (claiming he'll become a cartoonist someday) leave him in doubt about his future.
** Natasha seemed hard not to pity when she grew up unable to overcome Nathaniel Wing's shadow. Also, Paltridge wrote on DeviantArt that Natasha's rise in fame and power led to her receiving death threats and the jealousy of other NPD members.
** Natasha seemed hard not to pity when she grew up unable to overcome Nathaniel Wing's shadow. Also, Paltridge wrote on DeviantArt that Natasha's rise in fame and power led to her receiving death threats and the jealousy of other NPD members.
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** NJ also has some crushed hopes. These feel especially pitiful in the WholeEpisodeFlashback "The Time That People Forgot", when a vocational test's results (claiming he'll become a cartoonist someday) [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=11&page=8 leave him in doubt doubt]] about his future.
** Natasha seemed hard not to pity when she grew up [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=9&page=16 unable to overcome Nathaniel Wing'sshadow. Also, Paltridge wrote on DeviantArt that Natasha's rise in fame and power led to her receiving death threats and the jealousy of other NPD members.shadow]].
** Natasha seemed hard not to pity when she grew up [[http://www.platypuscomix.net/electricwonderland/index.php?issue=9&page=16 unable to overcome Nathaniel Wing's
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I don\'t hate her, by the way.
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** Natasha seemed hard not to pity when she grew up unable to overcome Nathaniel Wing's shadow.
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** Natasha seemed hard not to pity when she grew up unable to overcome Nathaniel Wing's shadow. Also, Paltridge wrote on DeviantArt that Natasha's rise in fame and power led to her receiving death threats and the jealousy of other NPD members.
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** Lululu would be a JerkassWoobie if not for the fact she does not appear to have a Heart Of Gold.
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** Lululu Lululu's poverty and immobility would be make her a JerkassWoobie if not for the fact she does not appear to have a Heart Of Gold.
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Wow. It looks like only three of the main characters haven\'t become woobies yet.
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** Aerynn also qualifies when she talks about her initial struggles to find someone who could accept her despite her powers. This could explain why she consoles Shroomy more willingly than the others in her times of feeling loneliness and inferiority.
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** NJ also has some crushed hopes. These feel especially pitiful in the WholeEpisodeFlashback "The Time That People Forgot", when a vocational test's results (claiming he'll become a cartoonist someday) leave him in doubt about his future.
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** NJ also has some crushed hopes. These feel especially pitiful in the WholeEpisodeFlashback "The Time That People Forgot", when a vocational test's results (claiming he'll become a cartoonist someday) leave him in doubt about his future.future.
** Natasha seemed hard not to pity when she grew up unable to overcome Nathaniel Wing's shadow.
** Natasha seemed hard not to pity when she grew up unable to overcome Nathaniel Wing's shadow.
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** Some readers might even sympathize with Trawn's and NJ's crushed hopes.
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** Some readers might even sympathize with Trawn's and NJ's Trawn has her dreams of becoming a famous journalist shot down after her desire to share harsh truths clashes against corporate media's attitude.
** NJ also has some crushedhopes.hopes. These feel especially pitiful in the WholeEpisodeFlashback "The Time That People Forgot", when a vocational test's results (claiming he'll become a cartoonist someday) leave him in doubt about his future.
** NJ also has some crushed
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* TheUntwist: The character bios spoil dramatic [[TheReveal reveals]] of Lululu's mermaid tail and Trawn's and Natasha's friendship.
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Your mileage would *really* vary for them, though.
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** Some readers might even sympathize with Trawn's and NJ's crushed hopes.
** Some readers might even sympathize with Trawn's and NJ's crushed hopes.