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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Are Madison and Emma reforming because of genuine CharacterDevelopment? Or are the vials they drank [[BrainwashingForTheGreaterGood manipulating their behavior]]? Or is it a bit of both?
** WordOfGod: [[MathematiciansAnswer Yes]].[[note]]The vials nudged their minds back toward balance (Emma) and stability (Madison). What they did with their new outlook was up to them.[[/note]]
** WordOfGod: [[MathematiciansAnswer Yes]].[[note]]The vials nudged their minds back toward balance (Emma) and stability (Madison). What they did with their new outlook was up to them.[[/note]]
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Are Madison and Emma reforming because of genuine CharacterDevelopment? Or are the vials they drank [[BrainwashingForTheGreaterGood manipulating their behavior]]? Or is it a bit of both?
** WordOfGod:both? according to WordOfGod, [[MathematiciansAnswer Yes]].[[note]]The vials nudged their minds back toward balance (Emma) and stability (Madison). What they did with their new outlook was up to them.[[/note]]
** WordOfGod:
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** [[spoiler: While Sophia was already a corrupt bully, she finally crossed the line when she tried to ''murder Danny'' to turn Taylor into a villain she could defeat. [[ILied And this was after promising Madison and Emma she would lay off Taylor]], even abandoning them during a raid on the Empire so they wouldn't get in her way]].
** And when they [[spoiler:thwart her at the last second and saved Danny]], she then doubles down by [[spoiler:going after Emma's parents to hold them hostage so as to ''force Emma to kill Danny'' and thus have blackmail to hold over them all.]] All because she's driven to win.
** And when they [[spoiler:thwart her at the last second and saved Danny]], she then doubles down by [[spoiler:going after Emma's parents to hold them hostage so as to ''force Emma to kill Danny'' and thus have blackmail to hold over them all.]] All because she's driven to win.
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** [[spoiler: While Sophia was already a corrupt bully, she finally crossed the line when she tried to ''murder Danny'' to turn frame Taylor into as a villain she could defeat. [[ILied And this was after promising Madison and Emma she would lay off Taylor]], even abandoning them during a raid on the Empire so they wouldn't get in her way]].
** And when they [[spoiler:thwart her at the last second and saved Danny]], she then doubles down by [[spoiler:going after Emma's parents to hold them hostage so as to ''force Emma to kill Danny'' and thus have blackmail to hold over themall.]] all]]. All because she's driven to win.
** And when they [[spoiler:thwart her at the last second and saved Danny]], she then doubles down by [[spoiler:going after Emma's parents to hold them hostage so as to ''force Emma to kill Danny'' and thus have blackmail to hold over them
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* AscendedFanon: Much like in ''Fanfic/ADarkerPath'', the author is willing to canonize stuff suggested by the readers he likes. For example, Riley (Bonesaw in canon) is instead a Rogue healer called Nurse Joy, who keeps Pokémon-like animals as her pets.
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: While Sophia was already a corrupt bully, she finally crossed the line when she tried to ''murder Danny'' to turn Taylor into a villain she could defeat. [[ILied And this was after promising Madison and Emma she would lay off Taylor]], even abandoning them during a raid on the Empire so they wouldn't get in her way]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: MoralEventHorizon:
**[[spoiler: While Sophia was already a corrupt bully, she finally crossed the line when she tried to ''murder Danny'' to turn Taylor into a villain she could defeat. [[ILied And this was after promising Madison and Emma she would lay off Taylor]], even abandoning them during a raid on the Empire so they wouldn't get in herway]].way]].
** And when they [[spoiler:thwart her at the last second and saved Danny]], she then doubles down by [[spoiler:going after Emma's parents to hold them hostage so as to ''force Emma to kill Danny'' and thus have blackmail to hold over them all.]] All because she's driven to win.
**[[spoiler: While Sophia was already a corrupt bully, she finally crossed the line when she tried to ''murder Danny'' to turn Taylor into a villain she could defeat. [[ILied And this was after promising Madison and Emma she would lay off Taylor]], even abandoning them during a raid on the Empire so they wouldn't get in her
** And when they [[spoiler:thwart her at the last second and saved Danny]], she then doubles down by [[spoiler:going after Emma's parents to hold them hostage so as to ''force Emma to kill Danny'' and thus have blackmail to hold over them all.]] All because she's driven to win.
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: While Sophia was already a corrupt bully, she finally crossed the line when she tried to ''murder Danny'' to turn Taylor into a villain she could defeat. [[ILied And this was after promising Sophia and Emma she would lay off Taylor]], even abandoning them during a raid on the Empire so they wouldn't get in her way]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: While Sophia was already a corrupt bully, she finally crossed the line when she tried to ''murder Danny'' to turn Taylor into a villain she could defeat. [[ILied And this was after promising Sophia Madison and Emma she would lay off Taylor]], even abandoning them during a raid on the Empire so they wouldn't get in her way]].
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** WordOfGod: [[MathematiciansAnswer Yes]].[[note]]The vials pushed their minds back toward balance (Emma) and stability (Madison). What they did with their new outlook was up to them.[[/note]]
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** WordOfGod: [[MathematiciansAnswer Yes]].[[note]]The vials pushed nudged their minds back toward balance (Emma) and stability (Madison). What they did with their new outlook was up to them.[[/note]]
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** WordOfGod: [[MathematiciansAnswer Yes]].
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** WordOfGod: [[MathematiciansAnswer Yes]].[[note]]The vials pushed their minds back toward balance (Emma) and stability (Madison). What they did with their new outlook was up to them.[[/note]]
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** WordOfGod: [[MathematiciansAnswer Yes]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: While Sophia was already a corrupt bully, she finally crossed the line when she tried to ''murder Danny'' to turn Taylor into a villain she could defeat. [[ILied And this was after promising Sophia and Emma she would lay off Taylor]], even abandoning them during a raid on the Empire so they wouldn't get in her way]].way]].
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* CatharsisFactor: While it was wrong [[spoiler: most people enjoyed seeing Taylor destroy [[SuckySchool Winslow High]] with her powers]].
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* CatharsisFactor: While it was wrong wrong, [[spoiler: most people enjoyed seeing Taylor destroy [[SuckySchool Winslow High]] with her powers]].
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* CatharsisFactor: While it definitely was wrong [[spoiler: most people enjoyed seeing Taylor destroy [[SuckySchool Winslow High]] with her powers]].
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: While Sophia was already a corrupt bully, she finally crossed the line when she tried to ''murder Danny'' in her bid to turn Taylor into a villain she could defeat. [[ILied And this was after promising Sophia and Emma she would lay off Taylor]], even abandoning them during a raid on the Empire so they wouldn't get in her way]].
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: While Sophia was already a corrupt bully, she finally crossed the line when she tried to ''murder Danny'' in her bid to turn Taylor into a villain she could defeat. [[ILied And this was after promising Sophia and Emma she would lay off Taylor]], even abandoning them during a raid on the Empire so they wouldn't get in her way]].
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* AlternateCharacterInterpretation: Are Madison and Emma reforming because of genuine CharacterDevelopment? Or are the vials they drank [[BrainwashingForTheGreaterGood manipulating their behavior]]? Or is it a bit of both?
* CatharsisFactor: While itdefinitely was wrong [[spoiler: most people enjoyed seeing Taylor destroy [[SuckySchool Winslow High]] with her powers]].
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: While Sophia was already a corrupt bully, she finally crossed the line when she tried to ''murder Danny''in her bid to turn Taylor into a villain she could defeat. [[ILied And this was after promising Sophia and Emma she would lay off Taylor]], even abandoning them during a raid on the Empire so they wouldn't get in her way]].
* CatharsisFactor: While it
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: While Sophia was already a corrupt bully, she finally crossed the line when she tried to ''murder Danny''
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: While Sophia was already a corrupt bully, she finally crossed the line when she tried to ''murder Danny'' in her bid to turn Taylor into a villain she could defeat.[[ILied And this was after promising Sophia and Emma she would lay off Taylor]], even abandoning them during a raid on the Empire so they wouldn't get in her way]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: While Sophia was already a corrupt bully, she finally crossed the line when she tried to ''murder Danny'' in her bid to turn Taylor into a villain she could defeat. [[ILied And this was after promising Sophia and Emma she would lay off Taylor]], even abandoning them during a raid on the Empire so they wouldn't get in her way]].
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* CatharsisFactor: While it definitely was wrong [[spoiler: most people enjoyed seeing Taylor destroy [[SuckySchool Winslow High]] with her powers]].
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: While Sophia was already a corrupt bully, she finally crossed the line when she tried to ''murder Danny'' in her bid to turn Taylor into a villain she could defeat.[[ILied And this was after promising Sophia and Emma she would lay off Taylor]], even abandoning them during a raid on the Empire so they wouldn't get in her way]].
* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: While Sophia was already a corrupt bully, she finally crossed the line when she tried to ''murder Danny'' in her bid to turn Taylor into a villain she could defeat.[[ILied And this was after promising Sophia and Emma she would lay off Taylor]], even abandoning them during a raid on the Empire so they wouldn't get in her way]].
