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* CharacterRerailment: Prior to Broly's canon intergration, at least. After being brought back to life, Broly regains his sanity from his debut movie instead of continuing as psychopath obsessed with Goku in ''Broly: Second coming''. From the looks of it, Toyble wanted to give him some needed CharacterDevelopment.
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* CharacterRerailment: Prior to Broly's canon intergration, integration, at least. After being brought back to life, Broly regains his sanity from his debut movie instead of continuing as psychopath obsessed with Goku in ''Broly: Second coming''. From the looks of it, Toyble wanted to give him some needed CharacterDevelopment.
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** An evil woman creates her own version of the main protagonist, and that version is a BloodKnight fighter? Are we talking about Mira and Towa from ''VideoGame/DragonBallXenoverse'', or the Supreme Kai of the West and Xicor?
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** An evil woman creates her own version of the main protagonist, and that version is a BloodKnight fighter? Are we talking about Mira and Towa from ''VideoGame/DragonBallXenoverse'', or the Supreme Kai of the West and Xicor?Xicor? We're talking Towa from ''Videogame/DragonBallOnline'' although the game's release [[DevelopmentHell would be delayed]] until 2010, so Toyble's version still got out first.
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* CharacterRerailment: After being brought back to life, Broly regains his sanity from his debut movie instead of just being a moron psychopath obsessed with Goku in ''Broly: Second coming''. From the looks of it, Toyble wanted to give him some needed CharacterDevelopment.
* CrackShip: Due to a mistake in communication, everyone thought Goku and the Supreme Kai of the West were an actual couple in the comic. Not the case, but a lot of people like to joke about it
* CultClassic: The story is well regarded by members of the ''Dragon Ball community'' (Not all, mind you), and many wish it was actually finished. [[GenericDoomsdayVillain Any detractors the story may had is due to how bland Xicor is.]]
* CrackShip: Due to a mistake in communication, everyone thought Goku and the Supreme Kai of the West were an actual couple in the comic. Not the case, but a lot of people like to joke about it
* CultClassic: The story is well regarded by members of the ''Dragon Ball community'' (Not all, mind you), and many wish it was actually finished. [[GenericDoomsdayVillain Any detractors the story may had is due to how bland Xicor is.]]
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* CharacterRerailment: Prior to Broly's canon intergration, at least. After being brought back to life, Broly regains his sanity from his debut movie instead of just being a moron continuing as psychopath obsessed with Goku in ''Broly: Second coming''. From the looks of it, Toyble wanted to give him some needed CharacterDevelopment.
* CrackShip: Due to a mistake in communication, everyone thought Goku and the Supreme Kai of the West were an actual couple in the comic. Not the case, but a lot of people like to joke aboutit
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* CultClassic: The story is well regarded by some members of the ''Dragon Ballcommunity'' (Not all, mind you), community'', and many wish it was actually finished. [[GenericDoomsdayVillain Any detractors the story may had is due to how bland Xicor is.]]
* CrackShip: Due to a mistake in communication, everyone thought Goku and the Supreme Kai of the West were an actual couple in the comic. Not the case, but a lot of people like to joke about
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: Unlike the canon version of Shin, Kibito Kai actually becomes a badass by risking his life in order to stop the Supreme Kai of the West and seal Xicor in the Z-sword. ''And he does'', thanks to Dende appearing out of nowhere. Toyble made Dende and Shin badasses, something the anime never managed to do.
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: Unlike the canon version of Shin, Kibito Kai actually becomes a badass by risking his life in order to stop the Supreme Kai of the West and seal Xicor in the Z-sword. ''And he does'', thanks to Dende appearing out of nowhere. Toyble made Dende and Shin badasses, something the anime never managed to do.
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* CharacterRerailment: After being brought back to life, Broly regains his sanity from his debut movie instead of just being a moron psychopath obsessed with Goku in ''Broly: Second coming''. From the looks of it, Toyble wanted to give him some needed CharacterDevelopment.
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*** Despite Xicor being sealed in the sword, in the manga version of ''Super'' the Z-sword gets destroyed and ends up killing Old Kai, so the only thing they needed to kill Xicor was just to destroy the sword.
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* TearJerker: Master Roshi's death at the end of the comic. Yes, it was rushed and it cancelled the comic, but Toyble made the ending actually pretty touching.
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** And lastly, Majin Poo is a gag character who is literally a bear version of Majin Buu. Readers see him and all they could think of is of Botamo from Universe 6. Ironically, Toyotaro didn't design him, but Toriyama did (based on Winnie The Pooh).
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** And lastly, Majin Poo is a gag character who is literally a bear version of Majin Buu. Readers see him and all they could think of is of Botamo from Universe 6. Ironically, Toyotaro didn't design him, but Toriyama Creator/AkiraToriyama did (based on Winnie The Pooh).Franchise/WinnieThePooh).
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** In an unused draft for Volume 5, Vegeta fights against Xicor by switching rapidly between various different Super Saiyan forms. [[spoiler: Toyotaro would later re-use this same concept for the fight between Goku Black and Vegeta in the manga, even referencing the panels he used for this Xicor vs Vegeta fight.]]
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* TearJerker: Master Roshi death at the end of the comic. Yes, it was rushed and it cancelled the comic, but Toyble made the ending actually pretty touching.
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: Unlike the canon version of Shin, Kibito Kai actually becomes a badass by risking his life in order to stop the Supreme Kai of the West and seal Xicor in the Z-sword. ''And he does'', thanks to Dende appearing out of nowhere. Toyble made Dende and Shin badasses, something the anime never managed to do.
* TearJerker: Master Roshi death at the end of the comic. Yes, it was rushed and it cancelled the comic, but Toyble made the ending actually prettytouching.touching.
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** And lastly, Majin Poo is a gag character who is literally a bear version of Majin Buu. Readers see him and all they could think of is of Botamo from Universe 6. Ironically, Toyotaro didn't design him, but Toriyama did (based on Winnie The Pooh).
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** The fact Kibitoshin manages to seal off Xicor in the Z-Sword would be similar to Goku and Trunks using the Mafuba to seal off Future Zamasu. [[spoiler: Except it fails in ''Super'' due to the characters forgetting the seal, while the Z-Sword was going to be broken sooner or later.]]
*** Despite Xicor being sealed in the sword, the manga version of ''Super'', the Z-sword gets destroyed and ends up killing Old Kai, so the only thing they needed to kill Xicor was just to destroy the sword.
** The fact a god was TheGreaterScopeVillain of the series as a whole c can be quite funny, except Lila was the mother of Frieza, while Beerus merely suggested Frieza to destroy Planet Vegeta.
*** Despite Xicor being sealed in the sword, the manga version of ''Super'', the Z-sword gets destroyed and ends up killing Old Kai, so the only thing they needed to kill Xicor was just to destroy the sword.
** The fact a god was TheGreaterScopeVillain of the series as a whole c can be quite funny, except Lila was the mother of Frieza, while Beerus merely suggested Frieza to destroy Planet Vegeta.
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** The fact Kibitoshin manages to seal off Xicor in the Z-Sword would be similar to Goku and Trunks using the Mafuba to seal off Future Zamasu. [[spoiler: Except it fails in ''Super'' due to the characters forgetting the seal, while the Z-Sword was going to be broken sooner or later.last for about a month.]]
*** Despite Xicor being sealed in the sword, in the manga version of''Super'', ''Super'' the Z-sword gets destroyed and ends up killing Old Kai, so the only thing they needed to kill Xicor was just to destroy the sword.
** The fact a god wasTheGreaterScopeVillain of responsible for the series as a whole c can be quite funny, except Lila was the mother of Frieza, thus starting the series, while Beerus merely suggested Frieza to destroy Planet Vegeta.Vegeta and another minor set of events.
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*** Despite Xicor being sealed in the sword, the manga version of ''Super'', the Z-sword gets destroyed and ends up killing Old Kai, so the only thing they needed to kill Xicor was just to destroy the sword.
** The fact a god was TheGreaterScopeVillain of the series as a whole c can be quite funny, except Lila was the mother of Frieza, while Beerus merely suggested Frieza to destroy Planet Vegeta.
** The fact a god was TheGreaterScopeVillain of the series as a whole c can be quite funny, except Lila was the mother of Frieza, while Beerus merely suggested Frieza to destroy Planet Vegeta.
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** The fact Kibitoshin manages to seal off Xicor in the Z-Sword would be similar to Goku and Trunks using the Mafuba to seal off Future Zamasu. [[spoiler: Except it fails in ''Super'' due to the characters forgetting the seal, while the Z-Sword was going to be broken sooner or later.]]
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** An evil woman creates her own version of the main protagonist, and that version is a BloodKnight fighter? [[ Are we talking about Mira and Towa from ''VideoGame/DragonBallXenoverse'', or the Supreme Kai of the West and Xicor?
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* CrackShip: Due to [[{{Misblamed}} a mistake in communication, everyone thought Goku and the Supreme kai of the West were an actual couple]] in the comic. Not the case, but a lot of people like to joke about it
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** An evil woman creates her own version of the main protagonist, and that version is a BloodKnight fighter? [[Videogame/DragonBallXenoverse [[ Are we talking about Mira and Towa, Towa from ''VideoGame/DragonBallXenoverse'', or The the Supreme Kai of the West and Xicor?]]Xicor?
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* CrackShip: Due to [[{{Misblamed}} a mistake in communication, everyone thought Goku and the Supreme kai of the West were an actual couple]] in the comic. Not the case, but a lot of people like to joke about it
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** The fact the main characters need to do a ritual to bring Goku back, and they need the help of 7 super saiyans? [[Anime/DragonBallZBattleOfGods The ritual for the Super Saiyan God is quite similar to the concept.]]
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** The fact the main characters need to do a ritual to bring Goku back, and they need the help of 7 super saiyans? [[Anime/DragonBallZBattleOfGods The ritual for the Super Saiyan God is quite similar to the concept.]]]]
* TearJerker: Master Roshi death at the end of the comic. Yes, it was rushed and it cancelled the comic, but Toyble made the ending actually pretty touching.
* TearJerker: Master Roshi death at the end of the comic. Yes, it was rushed and it cancelled the comic, but Toyble made the ending actually pretty touching.
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* HilariousInHindsight: Some of this dojinshi ideas became used in the franchise later.
** An evil woman creates her own version of the main protagonist, and that version is a BloodKnight fighter? [[Videogame/DragonBallXenoverse Are we talking about Mira and Towa, or The Supreme Kai of the West and Xicor?]]
** An evil Kai and a clone of Goku with his unique form? [[Anime/DragonBallSuper Goku Black and Zamasu.]]
** The fact the main characters need to do a ritual to bring Goku back, and they need the help of 7 super saiyans? [[Anime/DragonBallZBattleOfGods The ritual for the Super Saiyan God is quite similar to the concept.]]
** An evil woman creates her own version of the main protagonist, and that version is a BloodKnight fighter? [[Videogame/DragonBallXenoverse Are we talking about Mira and Towa, or The Supreme Kai of the West and Xicor?]]
** An evil Kai and a clone of Goku with his unique form? [[Anime/DragonBallSuper Goku Black and Zamasu.]]
** The fact the main characters need to do a ritual to bring Goku back, and they need the help of 7 super saiyans? [[Anime/DragonBallZBattleOfGods The ritual for the Super Saiyan God is quite similar to the concept.]]
