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* GrowingTheBeard: Hang in there. The show ''does'' get better in its run, and not by a small margin either.
* WhatAnIdiot:
** Haruma in the anime version, [[spoiler:he almost loses his wish and thus Choco at one point during a school event, when he hurt her emotionally.]]
** Also Choco herself when it comes to Kuro. [[spoiler:His death is largely her own damn fault!]]
* WhatAnIdiot:
** Haruma in the anime version, [[spoiler:he almost loses his wish and thus Choco at one point during a school event, when he hurt her emotionally.]]
** Also Choco herself when it comes to Kuro. [[spoiler:His death is largely her own damn fault!]]
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* GrowingTheBeard: Hang in there. The show ''does'' get better in its run, and not by a small margin either. \n* WhatAnIdiot: \n** Haruma in the anime version, [[spoiler:he almost loses his wish and thus Choco at one point during a school event, when he hurt her emotionally.]]\n** Also Choco herself when it comes to Kuro. [[spoiler:His death is largely her own damn fault!]]
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ZCE, far too general, and incorrect grammar.
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* {{Moe}}: The Entire show.
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* EarWorm: Neko Nyan Dansu.
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** Also Choco herself when it comes to Kuro. [[spoiler:His death is largely her own damn fault!]]
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** Also Choco herself when it comes to Kuro. [[spoiler:His death is largely her own damn fault!]]
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unfortunate implications need citations.
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* UnfortunateImplications: Choco's manual seems to [[BrotherSisterIncest full of information]] that you might [[{{Squick}} be repulsed by]].
** Alternatively, Choco is simply too young and naive to understand that brothers don't count.
** Alternatively, Choco is simply too young and naive to understand that brothers don't count.
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** Alternatively, Choco is simply too young and naive to understand that brothers don't count.
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* NeedsMoreLove
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* UnfortunateImplications: Choco's manual seems to [[BrotherSisterIncest full of information]] that you'll [[FetishFuel enjoy]] or [[{{Squick}} be repulsed by]].
* WhatAnIdiot: Haruma in the anime version, [[spoiler:he almost loses his wish and thus Choco at one point during a school event, when he hurt her emotionally.]]
* WhatAnIdiot: Haruma in the anime version, [[spoiler:he almost loses his wish and thus Choco at one point during a school event, when he hurt her emotionally.]]
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* UnfortunateImplications: Choco's manual seems to [[BrotherSisterIncest full of information]] that you'll [[FetishFuel enjoy]] or you might [[{{Squick}} be repulsed by]].
*WhatAnIdiot: WhatAnIdiot:
** Haruma in the anime version, [[spoiler:he almost loses his wish and thus Choco at one point during a school event, when he hurt her emotionally.]]
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** Haruma in the anime version, [[spoiler:he almost loses his wish and thus Choco at one point during a school event, when he hurt her emotionally.]]
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* GrowingTheBeard: Hang in there. The show ''does'' get better in its run, and not by a small margin either.
* {{Moe}}
* UnfortunateImplications: Choco's manual seems to [[BrotherSisterIncest full of information]] that you'll [[FetishFuel enjoy]] or [[{{Squick}} be repulsed by]].
* WhatAnIdiot: Haruma in the anime version, [[spoiler:he almost loses his wish and thus Choco at one point during a school event, when he hurt her emotionally.]]
** Also Choco herself when it comes to Kuro. [[spoiler:His death is largely her own damn fault!]]
* {{Moe}}
* UnfortunateImplications: Choco's manual seems to [[BrotherSisterIncest full of information]] that you'll [[FetishFuel enjoy]] or [[{{Squick}} be repulsed by]].
* WhatAnIdiot: Haruma in the anime version, [[spoiler:he almost loses his wish and thus Choco at one point during a school event, when he hurt her emotionally.]]
** Also Choco herself when it comes to Kuro. [[spoiler:His death is largely her own damn fault!]]
