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** The gang's birthday video to Calvin is mostly a HeartwarmingMoment which ends with them smiling and wishing Calvin a happy birthday. But then Socrates' [[BrickJoke inability to direct a movie]] comes into play...
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** The gang's birthday video to Calvin is mostly a HeartwarmingMoment SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoment which ends with them smiling and wishing Calvin a happy birthday. But then Socrates' [[BrickJoke inability to direct a movie]] comes into play...
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---> '''Andy:''' Socrates, I think he gets the point now. He probably thinks this is creepy.\
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---> '''Andy:''' Socrates, I think he gets the point now. He probably thinks this is creepy.\
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---> '''Socrates:''' No, don't!
---> ''[Elliot cuts]
---> ''[Elliot cuts]
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---> '''Socrates:''' No, don't!
---> ''[Elliot cuts]don't!
---> ''[Elliot cuts]
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'''Sherman:''' ...Are we done? Can we stop smiling now?
'''Socrates:''' Keep holding a little longer...
'''Andy:''' Socrates, I think he gets the point now. He probably thinks this is creepy.\
'''Socrates:''' Smile, darn you! Smiles make everything better!
'''Hobbes:''' Not when they exceed five seconds, they don't.
'''Socrates:''' Just keep smiling!
'''Sherman:''' My face is going numb. Elliot, just cut already!
'''Socrates:''' No, don't!
'''Socrates:''' Keep holding a little longer...
'''Andy:''' Socrates, I think he gets the point now. He probably thinks this is creepy.\
'''Socrates:''' Smile, darn you! Smiles make everything better!
'''Hobbes:''' Not when they exceed five seconds, they don't.
'''Socrates:''' Just keep smiling!
'''Sherman:''' My face is going numb. Elliot, just cut already!
'''Socrates:''' No, don't!
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---> '''Sherman:''' ...Are we done? Can we stop smiling now?
---> '''Socrates:''' Keep holding a little longer...
---> '''Andy:''' Socrates, I think he gets the point now. He probably thinks this is creepy.\
---> '''Socrates:''' Smile, darn you! Smiles make everything better!
---> '''Hobbes:''' Not when they exceed five seconds, they don't.
---> '''Socrates:''' Just keep smiling!
---> '''Sherman:''' My face is going numb. Elliot, just cut already!
---> '''Socrates:''' No,don't!don't!
---> ''[Elliot cuts]
---> '''Socrates:''' Keep holding a little longer...
---> '''Andy:''' Socrates, I think he gets the point now. He probably thinks this is creepy.\
---> '''Socrates:''' Smile, darn you! Smiles make everything better!
---> '''Hobbes:''' Not when they exceed five seconds, they don't.
---> '''Socrates:''' Just keep smiling!
---> '''Sherman:''' My face is going numb. Elliot, just cut already!
---> '''Socrates:''' No,
---> ''[Elliot cuts]
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---> "Hello insert planetary leader name here! We are the Zokian Empire! I am insert Royal Zokian Army name #1 here and insert Royal Zokian Army name #2 here. We are your new leaders now. We will take over your planet by force if applicable, [[ReadingTheStageDirectionsOutLoud parentheses]] see page 36 for more info [[ReadingTheStageDirectionsOutLoud parentheses]]."
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---> "Hello insert planetary leader name here! We are the Zokian Empire! I am insert Royal Zokian Army name #1 here and insert Royal Zokian Army name #2 here. We are your new leaders now. We will take over your planet by force if applicable, [[ReadingTheStageDirectionsOutLoud parentheses]] see page 36 for more info [[ReadingTheStageDirectionsOutLoud parentheses]].""
** The gang's birthday video to Calvin is mostly a HeartwarmingMoment which ends with them smiling and wishing Calvin a happy birthday. But then Socrates' [[BrickJoke inability to direct a movie]] comes into play...
---> Note: ''all of this'' is said through their smiles
'''Sherman:''' ...Are we done? Can we stop smiling now?
'''Socrates:''' Keep holding a little longer...
'''Andy:''' Socrates, I think he gets the point now. He probably thinks this is creepy.\
'''Socrates:''' Smile, darn you! Smiles make everything better!
'''Hobbes:''' Not when they exceed five seconds, they don't.
'''Socrates:''' Just keep smiling!
'''Sherman:''' My face is going numb. Elliot, just cut already!
'''Socrates:''' No, don't!
** The gang's birthday video to Calvin is mostly a HeartwarmingMoment which ends with them smiling and wishing Calvin a happy birthday. But then Socrates' [[BrickJoke inability to direct a movie]] comes into play...
---> Note: ''all of this'' is said through their smiles
'''Sherman:''' ...Are we done? Can we stop smiling now?
'''Socrates:''' Keep holding a little longer...
'''Andy:''' Socrates, I think he gets the point now. He probably thinks this is creepy.\
'''Socrates:''' Smile, darn you! Smiles make everything better!
'''Hobbes:''' Not when they exceed five seconds, they don't.
'''Socrates:''' Just keep smiling!
'''Sherman:''' My face is going numb. Elliot, just cut already!
'''Socrates:''' No, don't!
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---> "Hello insert planetary leader name here! We are the Zokian Empire! I am insert Royal Zokian Army name #1 here and insert Royal Zokian Army name #2 here. We are your new leaders now. We will take over your planet by force if applicable, [[ReadingTheStageDirectionsOutLoud parentheses]] see page 36 for more info [[ReadingTheStageDirectionsOutLoud parentheses]].
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---> "Hello insert planetary leader name here! We are the Zokian Empire! I am insert Royal Zokian Army name #1 here and insert Royal Zokian Army name #2 here. We are your new leaders now. We will take over your planet by force if applicable, [[ReadingTheStageDirectionsOutLoud parentheses]] see page 36 for more info [[ReadingTheStageDirectionsOutLoud parentheses]]."
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* [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments]]: In the rewrite:
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* [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments]]: [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments Funny Moments]]: In the rewrite:
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* FunnyMoments: In the rewrite:
** MTM trying to teleport Calvin away from the kidnapper results in various objects around that area getting randomly teleported away, with Chill trying to figure out what the noise is and Calvin left exasperated by the MTM's failure. Meanwhile, Andy has had a sheet draped on his face, various burger wrappers and empty cups are on the console, a bookshelf is in the corner, and a bunch of firewood is next to Sherman's desk.
** MTM trying to teleport Calvin away from the kidnapper results in various objects around that area getting randomly teleported away, with Chill trying to figure out what the noise is and Calvin left exasperated by the MTM's failure. Meanwhile, Andy has had a sheet draped on his face, various burger wrappers and empty cups are on the console, a bookshelf is in the corner, and a bunch of firewood is next to Sherman's desk.
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* FunnyMoments: [[SugarWiki/FunnyMoments]]: In the rewrite:
** MTM trying to teleport Calvin away from the kidnapper results in various objects around that area getting randomly teleported away, with Chill trying to figure out what the noise is and Calvin left exasperated by the MTM's failure. Meanwhile, Andy has had a sheet draped on his face, various burger wrappers and empty cups are on the console, a bookshelf is in the corner, and a bunch of firewood is next to Sherman'sdesk.desk.
** Rupert's crew is as incompetent as ever, providing some good laughs:
---> "Hello insert planetary leader name here! We are the Zokian Empire! I am insert Royal Zokian Army name #1 here and insert Royal Zokian Army name #2 here. We are your new leaders now. We will take over your planet by force if applicable, [[ReadingTheStageDirectionsOutLoud parentheses]] see page 36 for more info [[ReadingTheStageDirectionsOutLoud parentheses]].
** MTM trying to teleport Calvin away from the kidnapper results in various objects around that area getting randomly teleported away, with Chill trying to figure out what the noise is and Calvin left exasperated by the MTM's failure. Meanwhile, Andy has had a sheet draped on his face, various burger wrappers and empty cups are on the console, a bookshelf is in the corner, and a bunch of firewood is next to Sherman's
** Rupert's crew is as incompetent as ever, providing some good laughs:
---> "Hello insert planetary leader name here! We are the Zokian Empire! I am insert Royal Zokian Army name #1 here and insert Royal Zokian Army name #2 here. We are your new leaders now. We will take over your planet by force if applicable, [[ReadingTheStageDirectionsOutLoud parentheses]] see page 36 for more info [[ReadingTheStageDirectionsOutLoud parentheses]].
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* FunnyMoments: In the rewrite:
** MTM trying to teleport Calvin away from the kidnapper results in various objects around that area getting randomly teleported away, with Chill trying to figure out what the noise is and Calvin left exasperated by the MTM's failure. Meanwhile, Andy has had a sheet draped on his face, various burger wrappers and empty cups are on the console, a bookshelf is in the corner, and a bunch of firewood is next to Sherman's desk.
** MTM trying to teleport Calvin away from the kidnapper results in various objects around that area getting randomly teleported away, with Chill trying to figure out what the noise is and Calvin left exasperated by the MTM's failure. Meanwhile, Andy has had a sheet draped on his face, various burger wrappers and empty cups are on the console, a bookshelf is in the corner, and a bunch of firewood is next to Sherman's desk.
