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* RonTheDeathEater:
** Granny Hina does ''NOT'' come off well in this story at all. All she does is try to manipulate others, then complain when they don't do as they're told and try to recast ''them'' as the ones in the wrong.
** Aside from [[OnlySaneMan Shinobu]], all of the Hinata Girls suffer from this to varying degrees. Naru and Mokoto get it the worst, especially after Mokoto [[spoiler:gets arrested]] and Naru shows absolutely NoSympathy because of how she was ''mildly embarrassed'' by [[spoiler:Mokoto losing the duel with Keitaro]].

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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Keitaro basically telling the girls to shove it and refusing to become manager.



* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: Keitaro basically telling the girls to shove it and refusing to become manager.



** Aside from [[OnlySaneMan Shinobu]], all of the Hinata Girls suffer from this to varying degrees. Naru and Mokoto get it the worst, especially after Mokoto [[spoiler:gets arrested]] and Naru shows absolutely NoSympathy because of how she was ''mildly embarrassed'' by [[spoiler:Mokoto losing the duel with Keitaro]].

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** Aside from [[OnlySaneMan Shinobu]], all of the Hinata Girls suffer from this to varying degrees. Naru and Mokoto get it the worst, especially after Mokoto [[spoiler:gets arrested]] and Naru shows absolutely NoSympathy because of how she was ''mildly embarrassed'' by [[spoiler:Mokoto losing the duel with Keitaro]].Keitaro]].
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* CrowningMomentOf Awesome: Keitaro basically telling the girls to shove it and refusing to become manager.

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* CrowningMomentOf Awesome: CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Keitaro basically telling the girls to shove it and refusing to become manager.
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* CrowningMomentOf Awesome: Keitaro basically telling the girls to shove it and refusing to become manager.
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** [[spoiler:You can also add Motoko being completely curbstomped by a supposed "vile male" (Keitaro) in a duel, which had resulted in her [[FairWeatherFriend so-called friends]] abandoning her. Not to mention, one of them (Naru) now despises Motoko due to having to apologize for her own previously unjustified behavior towards Keitaro as a result of losing the bet made on said duel]].

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** [[spoiler:You can also add Motoko [[CurbStompBattle being completely curbstomped curbstomped]] by a supposed "vile male" (Keitaro) in a duel, which had resulted in her [[FairWeatherFriend so-called friends]] abandoning her. Not to mention, one of them (Naru) now despises Motoko due to having to apologize for her own previously unjustified behavior towards Keitaro as a result of losing the bet made on said duel]].
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** [[spoiler:You can also add Motoko being completely curbstomped by a supposed "vile male" (Keitaro) in a duel, which had resulted in her FairWeatherFriends abandoning her. Not to mention, one of them (Naru) now despises Motoko due to having to apologize for her own previously unjustified behavior towards Keitaro as a result of losing the bet made on said duel]].

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** [[spoiler:You can also add Motoko being completely curbstomped by a supposed "vile male" (Keitaro) in a duel, which had resulted in her FairWeatherFriends [[FairWeatherFriend so-called friends]] abandoning her. Not to mention, one of them (Naru) now despises Motoko due to having to apologize for her own previously unjustified behavior towards Keitaro as a result of losing the bet made on said duel]].
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** [[spoiler:You can also add Motoko being completely curbstomped by a supposed "vile male" (Keitaro) in a duel, which had resulted in her FairWeatherFriends abandoning her. Not to mention, one of them (Naru) now despises Motoko due to having to apologize for her own previously unjustified actions as a result of losing the bet made on said duel]].

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** [[spoiler:You can also add Motoko being completely curbstomped by a supposed "vile male" (Keitaro) in a duel, which had resulted in her FairWeatherFriends abandoning her. Not to mention, one of them (Naru) now despises Motoko due to having to apologize for her own previously unjustified actions behavior towards Keitaro as a result of losing the bet made on said duel]].
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** [[spoiler:You can also add Motoko being completely curbstomped by a supposed "vile male" (Keitaro) in a duel, which had resulted in her so-called friends abandoning her. Not to mention, one of them (Naru) now despises Motoko due to having to apologize for her own previously unjustified actions as a result of losing the bet made on said duel]].

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** [[spoiler:You can also add Motoko being completely curbstomped by a supposed "vile male" (Keitaro) in a duel, which had resulted in her so-called friends FairWeatherFriends abandoning her. Not to mention, one of them (Naru) now despises Motoko due to having to apologize for her own previously unjustified actions as a result of losing the bet made on said duel]].

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**[[spoiler:You can also add Motoko being completely curbstomped by a supposed "vile male" (Keitaro) in a duel, which had resulted in her so-called friends abandoning her. Not to mention, one of them (Naru) now despises Motoko due to having to apologize for her own previously unjustified actions as a result of losing the bet made on said duel]].



** Aside from [[OnlySaneMan Shinobu]], all of the Hinata Girls suffer from this to varying degrees. Naru and Mokoto get it the worst, especially after Mokoto [[spoiler:gets arrested]] and Naru shows absolutely NoSympathy because of how she was ''mildly embarrassed'' by [[spoiler:Mokoto losing the duel]].

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** Aside from [[OnlySaneMan Shinobu]], all of the Hinata Girls suffer from this to varying degrees. Naru and Mokoto get it the worst, especially after Mokoto [[spoiler:gets arrested]] and Naru shows absolutely NoSympathy because of how she was ''mildly embarrassed'' by [[spoiler:Mokoto losing the duel]].duel with Keitaro]].
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** Aside from [[OnlySaneMan Shinobu]], all of the Hinata Girls suffer from this to varying degrees. Naru and Mokoto get it the worst, especially after Mokoto [[spoiler:gets arrested]] and Naru shows absolutely NoSympathy because of how she was ''mildly embarrassed'' by [[spoiler:Makoto losing the duel]].

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** Aside from [[OnlySaneMan Shinobu]], all of the Hinata Girls suffer from this to varying degrees. Naru and Mokoto get it the worst, especially after Mokoto [[spoiler:gets arrested]] and Naru shows absolutely NoSympathy because of how she was ''mildly embarrassed'' by [[spoiler:Makoto [[spoiler:Mokoto losing the duel]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: Granny Hina crosses it when she tries to get Motoko's uncle to not let Keitaro live with him out of petty spite.
** Naru crosses it when she [[spoiler: heartlessly advocates evicting Motoko simply because she lost a fight to Keitaro.]]
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* JerkassWoobie: While she brought it all upon herself, poor Makoto really suffers from her HumiliationConga. After all, she loses [[spoiler:EVERYTHING -- her 'friends' abandon her; she's drummed out of Kendo Club; stripped of her status as heir, and informed that she'll be moving back to Kyoto where she'll have to attend a co-ed school. Oh, and her older sister learned how she feels about her marriage and calls her out on that, too]].

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* JerkassWoobie: While she brought it all upon herself, poor Makoto Mokoto really suffers from her HumiliationConga. After all, she loses [[spoiler:EVERYTHING -- her 'friends' abandon her; she's drummed out of Kendo Club; stripped of her status as heir, and informed that she'll be moving back to Kyoto where she'll have to attend a co-ed school. Oh, and her older sister learned how she feels about her marriage and calls her out on that, too]].



** Aside from [[OnlySaneMan Shinobu]], all of the Hinata Girls suffer from this to varying degrees. Naru and Makoto get it the worst, especially after Makoto [[spoiler:gets arrested]] and Naru shows absolutely NoSympathy because of how she was ''mildly embarrassed'' by [[spoiler:Makoto losing the duel]].

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** Aside from [[OnlySaneMan Shinobu]], all of the Hinata Girls suffer from this to varying degrees. Naru and Makoto Mokoto get it the worst, especially after Makoto Mokoto [[spoiler:gets arrested]] and Naru shows absolutely NoSympathy because of how she was ''mildly embarrassed'' by [[spoiler:Makoto losing the duel]].
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* JerkassWoobie: While she brought it all upon herself, poor Makoto really suffers from her HumiliationConga. After all, she loses [[spoiler:EVERYTHING -- her 'friends' abandon her; she's drummed out of Kendo Club; stripped of her status as heir, and informed that she'll be moving back to Kyoto where she'll have to attend a co-ed school. Oh, and her older sister learned how she feels about her marriage and calls her out on that, too]].
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* RonTheDeathEater:
** Granny Hina does ''NOT'' come off well in this story at all. All she does is try to manipulate others, then complain when they don't do as they're told and try to recast ''them'' as the ones in the wrong.
** Aside from [[OnlySaneMan Shinobu]], all of the Hinata Girls suffer from this to varying degrees. Naru and Makoto get it the worst, especially after Makoto [[spoiler:gets arrested]] and Naru shows absolutely NoSympathy because of how she was ''mildly embarrassed'' by [[spoiler:Makoto losing the duel]].

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