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* On Mustafar, Anakin knocks out Padme by force-choking her, believing that she betrayed him to Obi-Wan. Obi-Wan runs to check on her as Anakin starts accusing his master of turning his wife against him.\\
'''You'd Expect''': He would tell Anakin to stop with the SkewedPriorities; he just tried to choke a pregnant woman. Whatever has happened, they need to give Padme medical attention. Then they can focus on who betrayed whom. If Anakin doesn't listen, Obi-Wan should retreat with Padme to the best of his ability because one person's life is not worth taking down someone else.\\
'''Instead''': Obi-Wan reluctantly decides to fight Anakin, who has started speaking like a Sith Lord and draws his lightsaber.\\
'''The Result''': When Padme does get medical attention ''hours'' after the battle, she only lives long enough to name her children. Anakin breaks down when Palpatine tells him -- and it's half-true, according to the novelization- that he killed his wife and with it, the last hope of his goodness.
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'''Instead:''' He pushes his luck by asking him to speak to the Emperor as a favor, which naturally pisses Vader off more than he already was. Honestly, he's lucky he didn't fatally choke on his aspirations.

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'''Instead:''' He pushes his luck by asking him to speak to the Emperor as a favor, which naturally pisses Vader off more than he already was. Honestly, he's lucky he didn't fatally choke choked on his aspirations.
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'''You'd Expect:''' Him to remember he is not a military strategist and might not have the knowledge to create an external vulnerability that can be believably targeted by an enemy fleet. Thus, him to stick to what he knows and concoct a weakness based on the Death Star's internal workings. Being in in charge of kyber energy crystal system that fuels the superlaser leaves Galen with many opportunities to sabotage the weapon, so he could rig the system to overload and blow up when it tries to fire its superlaser, for instance.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' Him to remember he is not a military strategist and might not have the knowledge to create an external vulnerability that can be believably targeted by an enemy fleet. Thus, him to stick to what he knows and concoct a weakness based on the Death Star's internal workings. Being in in charge of kyber energy crystal system that fuels the superlaser leaves Galen with many opportunities to sabotage the weapon, so he could rig the system to overload and blow up when it tries to fire its superlaser, for instance.\\
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'''Instead:''' He grabs a open, unarmored speeder bike and, accompanied by two light starfighters, heads to the hangar where his ship is located, which happens to at the other side of a ''kilometers-wide open field'' relatively nearby to where the Clone Army is wreaking havoc. As a result, he attracts the attention of their forces and is chased by Anakin and Obi-Wan, and eventually, Yoda.

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'''Instead:''' He grabs a an open, unarmored speeder bike and, accompanied by two light starfighters, heads to the hangar where his ship is located, which happens to at the other side of a ''kilometers-wide open field'' relatively nearby to where the Clone Army is wreaking havoc. As a result, he attracts the attention of their forces and is chased by Anakin and Obi-Wan, and eventually, Yoda.
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* General Pryde, commanding the ''Steadfast'' Star Destroyer in low orbit, hears that his ship is being boarded. The Resistance fighters are using horses to traverse the outside of the ship, instead of anti-gravity speeders.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Pryde to order his ship to tilt or turn upside down, causing all the boarders to fall off to the planet below.\\
'''Instead:''' He tries to clear off the boarders with infantry, who predictably are easily repelled by the good guys.
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'''Instead:''' Windu does an unnecessarily huge dramatic wind-up for about five seconds, pausing long enough for Anakin to even shout “I need him!”, providing Anakin plenty of time to interfere. Guess exactly what happens.

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'''Instead:''' Windu does an unnecessarily huge dramatic wind-up for about five seconds, pausing long enough for Anakin Palpatine to even shout “I need him!”, “please don’t!” before Windu even starts his downward swing. Easily providing Anakin plenty of more than enough time to interfere. Guess exactly what happens.
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'''You'd Expect:''' Windu to just quickly stab Palpatine before Anakin can do anything or even just complain more. No need to waste any time considering what’s at stake.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' Windu to just quickly stab Palpatine before Anakin can do anything or even just complain more.anything. No need to waste any time considering what’s at stake.\\
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* Mace Windu decides to kill Palpatine on the spot despite Anakin’s protests. The future of the entire galaxy rests on this successful kill and Windu knows that Anakin can be dangerously unpredictable (he’s even discussed his lack of trust in Anakin with other characters multiple times), meaning that he of all people should know that there is no room for error here and that time is of the essence if he wants to do this before Anakin messes anything up.
'''You'd Expect:''' Windu to just quickly stab Palpatine before Anakin can do anything or even just complain more. No need to waste any time considering what’s at stake.

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* Mace Windu decides to kill Palpatine on the spot despite Anakin’s protests. The future of the entire galaxy rests on this successful kill and Windu knows that Anakin can be dangerously unpredictable (he’s even discussed his lack of trust in Anakin with other characters multiple times), meaning that he of all people should know that there is no room for error here and that time is of the essence if he wants to do this before Anakin messes has time to mess anything up.
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'''You'd Expect:''' Windu to just quickly stab Palpatine before Anakin can do anything or even just complain more. No need to waste any time considering what’s at stake.\\
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* Mace Windu decides to kill Palpatine on the spot despite Anakin’s protests. The future of the entire galaxy rests on this successful kill and Windu knows that Anakin can be dangerously unpredictable (he’s even discussed his lack of trust in Anakin with other characters multiple times), meaning that he of all people should know that there is no room for error here and that time is of the essence if he wants to do this before Anakin messes anything up.
'''You'd Expect:''' Windu to just quickly stab Palpatine before Anakin can do anything or even just complain more. No need to waste any time considering what’s at stake.
'''Instead:''' Windu does an unnecessarily huge dramatic wind-up for about five seconds, pausing long enough for Anakin to even shout “I need him!”, providing Anakin plenty of time to interfere. Guess exactly what happens.
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'''You'd Expect:''' Being an experienced Force user and duelist who has already suffered from the same technique, he would stop shooting lightning. There are many techniques, like Force telekinesis, which he can use to recover the advantage.\\
'''Instead:''' He just keeps and keeps trying, allowing Rey to send the totality of his humongous power at Sidious, which effectively kills Sidious.

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'''You'd Expect:''' Being an experienced Force user and duelist who has already suffered from the same technique, he would stop shooting lightning. lightning at her. There are many techniques, like Force telekinesis, which he can use to recover the advantage.\\
'''Instead:''' He just keeps and keeps trying, allowing Rey to send the totality of his humongous power back at Sidious, which effectively kills Sidious.him, resulting in his death.
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* In a deleted scene, but a rather lapse of judgement of Phasma's part. She and her troopers have Finn cornered on all sides. Finn then calls out Phasma for shutting down Starkiller's shields, then covering it up to save her own skin.\\
'''You'd Expect''': Phasma to outright deny it and call Finn a lying traitor attempting to save himself, or just order her troopers to kill him.\\
'''Instead''': Phasma asks, "Who would believe a story like that?", which doesn't sound like denial and in ear shot of her troopers.\\
'''The Result''': The troopers begin to consider Finn may be telling the truth, so Phasma is forced to kill them all, eliminating her own backup and giving Finn the time to literally disarm her, leading to her death.\\
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'''Instead:''' They dump her in Jakku, a desert scavenger world, directly in the hands of a petty merchant like Unkar Plutt. As a result, she lives a in a miserable, abused state for 15 years.

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'''Instead:''' They dump her in Jakku, a desert scavenger world, directly in the hands of a petty merchant like Unkar Plutt. As a result, she lives a in a miserable, abused state for 15 years.
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* Rey's parents want to hide her five-year-old daughter from her grandfather.\\

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* Rey's parents want to hide her their five-year-old daughter from her grandfather.\\



'''Instead:''' They dump her in Jakku, a desert scavenger world, directly in the hands of a petty merchant like Unkar Plutt. As a result, she lives a in a miserable, abused state for 20 years.

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'''Instead:''' They dump her in Jakku, a desert scavenger world, directly in the hands of a petty merchant like Unkar Plutt. As a result, she lives a in a miserable, abused state for 20 15 years.
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'''Instead:''' He and the masters decide to make the arrest alone, without any surveillance, support, warning or register whatsoever, and judging for the three Jedi's attitude and skill, without being prepared for severe resistance from Palpatine. They also don't bother giving out any alert to the Jedi stationed across the galaxy about the Chancellor's possible ties with the Sith. The results end up being disastrous for everyone; three of the four Jedi Masters die ''within seconds'', Anakin's intervention leads to Windu's death and the failure of the mission, and Palpatine capitalizes on the clumsiness of the incident to play it like the Jedi tried to murder the chancellor. On top of that, the truth dies with Windu, leaving every Jedi in the galaxy off-guard for Order 66.

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'''Instead:''' He and the masters decide to make the arrest alone, without any surveillance, support, warning or register whatsoever, and judging for from the three Jedi's attitude and skill, without being prepared for severe resistance from Palpatine. They also don't bother giving out any alert to the Jedi stationed across the galaxy about the Chancellor's possible ties with the Sith. The results end up being disastrous for everyone; three of the four Jedi Masters die ''within seconds'', Anakin's intervention leads to Windu's death and the failure of the mission, and Palpatine capitalizes on the clumsiness of the incident to play it like the Jedi tried to murder the chancellor. On top of that, the truth dies with Windu, leaving every Jedi in the galaxy off-guard for Order 66.



'''You'd Expect:''' Windu to remain serene and try to calm Anakin down, as the latter is visibly flustered and could commit a mistake fatal for both of them. The master could propose cutting Palpatine's limbs off and taking him into custody: Palpatine would be rendered unable to use a lightsaber and severely impaired to use the Force in an offensive way while awaiting trial, and in the outlandish case he'd be found innocent despite they have now irrefutable proofs he's a Sith Lord, they have the technology to replace his limbs. Even if Anakin had his own reasons to be nervous, it would have greatly placated his moral scruples about the execution.\\
'''Instead:''' Windu rudely ignores Anakin, forgetting he's still a significantly dangerous Jedi who is openly unsure of his alignment at the situation, and instead moves in dramatically for the kill, which drives Anakin to act reflexively to stop what he sees as a murder. His reaction ends up making Windu lose his arm and his lightsaber, which leaves him open to be killed by Palpatine.

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'''You'd Expect:''' Windu to remain serene and try to calm Anakin down, as the latter is visibly flustered and could commit a mistake fatal for both of them. The master Windu could propose cutting Palpatine's limbs off and taking him into custody: Palpatine would be rendered unable to use a lightsaber and severely impaired to use the Force in an offensive way while awaiting trial, and in the outlandish case he'd be found innocent despite they have now irrefutable proofs he's a Sith Lord, they have the technology to replace his limbs. Even if Anakin had his own reasons to be nervous, it would have greatly placated his moral scruples about the execution.\\
'''Instead:''' Windu rudely ignores Anakin, forgetting he's still a significantly dangerous Jedi who is openly unsure of his alignment at the situation, moment, and instead moves in dramatically for the kill, which drives Anakin to act reflexively to stop what he sees as a murder. His reaction ends up making Windu lose his arm and his lightsaber, which leaves him open to be killed by Palpatine.



'''Or:''' Threaten to kill or expose him if he doesn't provide at the moment some substantial evidence that they can find soon the power. In case he doesn't, to gut him like a fish on the spot.\\

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'''Or:''' Threaten to kill or expose him if he doesn't provide at the moment some substantial evidence that they can soon find soon the power. In case this power, and if he doesn't, to gut him like a fish on the spot.\\



'''Instead''': He leaves Anakin to a ''painful death'', assuming that it would be left to the will of the Force. However, Anakin survives, is rebuilt into a dark cyborg and becomes Sidious's powerful attack dog during the next 20 years of their reign over the galaxy, and Obi-Wan [[DoomedByCanon and has to deal with the consequences.]]

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'''Instead''': He leaves Anakin to a ''painful death'', assuming that it would be left to the will of the Force. However, Anakin survives, is rebuilt into a dark cyborg and becomes Sidious's powerful attack dog during the next 20 years of their reign over the galaxy, and Obi-Wan [[DoomedByCanon and has to deal with the consequences.]]



'''Instead:''' [[HystericalWoman Idiotically]], after sending Jyn to the bunker, Lyra comes out and shoots Krennic with a blaster. Not being a trained shooter, she only hits his shoulder, and being in plain sight, the Death Troopers promptly gun her down. The result, therefore, is Lyra losing her life absolutely for nothing.\\

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'''Instead:''' [[HystericalWoman Idiotically]], after sending Jyn to the bunker, Lyra comes out and shoots Krennic with a blaster. Not being a trained shooter, she only hits his shoulder, and being in plain sight, the Death Troopers promptly gun her down. The result, therefore, is Lyra losing her life for absolutely for nothing.\\



'''You'd Expect:''' Even if Finn and Rose are out of water in the place, they should be smart enough to guess they are not going to start well their mission in Canto Bight by getting in trouble with the local law enforcement. Thus, they should try to find out where they can leave their ship without breaking any law. In the case they have no way to do so, one of them should keep the ship in the planet's orbit while the other enters the casino and contacts the Master Codebreaker so they can extract him.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' Even if Expect:''' Finn and Rose are out of water in the place, they should would be smart enough to guess know that they are not going to start well their mission in Canto Bight by getting in trouble with the local law enforcement. Thus, they should try to find out where they can leave their ship without breaking any law. In the case If they have no way to do so, one of them should keep the ship in the planet's orbit while the other enters the casino and contacts the Master Codebreaker so they can extract him.\\



'''You'd Expect:''' Them not to trust his claim, due the sheer improbability that they happened to be imprisoned next to a man with exactly the unusual type and level of skills they are looking for. Even if he shows to be able to hack a cell door lock system, it is still a relatively common skill in the galaxy (heck, R2 does it every film) and doesn't mean he is necessarily qualified for the job they need him to do. Thus, after escaping, they should use their stolen yatch to return to Canto Bight (hopefully this time without parking on a forbidden zone) and sneak into the casino to meet the Master Codebreaker. If DJ wants some payment for helping them up to this point, the codebreaker looks like a healthy man and could surely afford to pay him as a favor to Maz, remembering to tell DJ to keep his mouth shut about what little he knows by this point.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' Them not to trust his claim, due to the sheer improbability that they happened to be imprisoned next to a man with exactly the unusual type and level of skills they are looking for. Even if he shows to be able to hack a cell door lock system, it is still a relatively common skill in the galaxy (heck, R2 does it every film) and doesn't mean he is necessarily qualified for the job they need him to do. Thus, after escaping, they should use their stolen yatch to return to Canto Bight (hopefully this time without parking on a forbidden zone) and sneak into the casino to meet the Master Codebreaker. If DJ wants some payment for helping them up to this point, the codebreaker looks like a healthy man and could surely afford to pay him as a favor to Maz, remembering to tell DJ to keep his mouth shut about what little he knows by this point.\\



'''Even Worse:''' Rose and DJ have somewhat of a free pass because they are presumably unfamiliar with First Order equipment (not to mention DJ might secretly not give a crap about being captured, as he has vital info he could use for bargain), but Finn is a former First Order stormtrooper himself. He should be the least probable of the three to believe such ruse was going to work.

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'''Even Worse:''' Rose and DJ have somewhat of a free pass because they are presumably unfamiliar with First Order equipment (not to mention DJ might secretly not give a crap about being captured, as he has vital info he could use for bargain), but Finn is a former First Order stormtrooper himself. He should be the least probable of the three to believe such a ruse was going to work.



* Rey's parents want to hide her five-yeard-old daughter from her grandfather.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Them to seek a densely populated planet, preferently with a human population, so the girl can grow unnoticed.\\

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* Rey's parents want to hide her five-yeard-old five-year-old daughter from her grandfather.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Them to seek a densely populated planet, preferently preferably with a human population, so the girl can grow unnoticed.\\



'''You'd Expect:''' To keep this a secret. He should communicate with the First Order discreetly about it and not to make public the knowledge of his fleet until it has already deployed and spread through the Galaxy.\\
'''Instead:''' He sends a transmission to all the Galaxy gloating about it, all while the fleet is still stationed in Exegol, a plent whose atmosphere renders them stupidly vulnerable by difficulting their takeoff and usage of shields. As a result, the Resistance and their subsequent reinforcements receive an excellent chance to defeat them.

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'''You'd Expect:''' To He would keep this a secret. He should communicate with the First Order discreetly about it and not to make public the knowledge of his fleet until it has already deployed and spread through the Galaxy.\\
'''Instead:''' He sends a transmission to all the Galaxy gloating about it, all while the fleet is still stationed in Exegol, a plent planet whose atmosphere renders them stupidly vulnerable by difficulting making their takeoff and usage of shields.shields difficult. As a result, the Resistance and their subsequent reinforcements receive an excellent chance to defeat them.



'''Instead:''' Unable to keep his big mouth closed for five more seconds, he (guess what) gloats about his brilliant plan to transfer his own mind and all the other Sith into Rey. Naturally, she refrains to do so, ruining the plan. Ya think he would have learned after his last death.
* Palpatine and Rey are having their ultimate showdown. The Sith lord throws Force Lightning at her, only for her to start directing it back at him thanks to her two lightsabers.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Being an experimented Force user and duelist who has already suffered by the same technique, him to stop shooting lightning. There are many techniques, like Force telekinesis, which he can use to recover the advantage.\\

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'''Instead:''' Unable to keep his big mouth closed for five more seconds, he (guess what) gloats about his brilliant plan to transfer his own mind and all the other Sith into Rey. Naturally, she refrains to do so, ruining the plan. Ya You would think he would have learned after his last death.
* Palpatine and Rey are having their ultimate showdown. The Sith lord Lord throws Force Lightning at her, only for her to start directing it back at him thanks to her two lightsabers.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Being an experimented experienced Force user and duelist who has already suffered by from the same technique, him to he would stop shooting lightning. There are many techniques, like Force telekinesis, which he can use to recover the advantage.\\
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'''Instead:''' They dump her in Jakku, a desert scavenger world, directly in the hands of a petty merchant like Unkar Plutt. As a result, she lives a in a miser, abused state for 20 years.

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'''Instead:''' They dump her in Jakku, a desert scavenger world, directly in the hands of a petty merchant like Unkar Plutt. As a result, she lives a in a miser, miserable, abused state for 20 years.



'''You'd Expect:''' Him not to tell her, and just let Rey butcher him thinking she is just finishing a DarkLordOLifeSupport. Boom, Rey possessed, TheBadGuyWins.\\
'''Instead:''' Unable to keep his big mouth closed for five more seconds, he (guess what) gloats about his brilliant plan to transfer his own mind and all the other Sith into Rey. Naturally, she refrains to do so, ruining the plan.

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'''You'd Expect:''' Him not to tell her, and just let Rey butcher him thinking she is just finishing a DarkLordOLifeSupport.DarkLordOnLifeSupport. Boom, Rey possessed, TheBadGuyWins.\\
'''Instead:''' Unable to keep his big mouth closed for five more seconds, he (guess what) gloats about his brilliant plan to transfer his own mind and all the other Sith into Rey. Naturally, she refrains to do so, ruining the plan. Ya think he would have learned after his last death.
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* Rey's parents want to hide her five-yeard-old daughter from her grandfather.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Them to seek a densely populated planet, preferently with a human population, so the girl can grow unnoticed.\\
'''Instead:''' They dump her in Jakku, a desert scavenger world, directly in the hands of a petty merchant like Unkar Plutt. As a result, she lives a in a miser, abused state for 20 years.
* Palpatine has an enormous fleet with planet-killing capabilities in Exegol which he plans to use to conquer the Galaxy.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' To keep this a secret. He should communicate with the First Order discreetly about it and not to make public the knowledge of his fleet until it has already deployed and spread through the Galaxy.\\
'''Instead:''' He sends a transmission to all the Galaxy gloating about it, all while the fleet is still stationed in Exegol, a plent whose atmosphere renders them stupidly vulnerable by difficulting their takeoff and usage of shields. As a result, the Resistance and their subsequent reinforcements receive an excellent chance to defeat them.
* Palpatine's plan involves being killed by Rey so his undead spirit can possess her.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Him not to tell her, and just let Rey butcher him thinking she is just finishing a DarkLordOLifeSupport. Boom, Rey possessed, TheBadGuyWins.\\
'''Instead:''' Unable to keep his big mouth closed for five more seconds, he (guess what) gloats about his brilliant plan to transfer his own mind and all the other Sith into Rey. Naturally, she refrains to do so, ruining the plan.
* Palpatine and Rey are having their ultimate showdown. The Sith lord throws Force Lightning at her, only for her to start directing it back at him thanks to her two lightsabers.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Being an experimented Force user and duelist who has already suffered by the same technique, him to stop shooting lightning. There are many techniques, like Force telekinesis, which he can use to recover the advantage.\\
'''Instead:''' He just keeps and keeps trying, allowing Rey to send the totality of his humongous power at Sidious, which effectively kills Sidious.
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'''Worse Still:''' Krennic later executes the rest of his board of engineers out of spite, even after learning it was Galen (surprise, surprise) the one that betrayed the Empire. This ensures the Empire has no access anymore to the Death Star think tank, making any future attempt to revise the designs much more difficult.

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'''Worse Still:''' Krennic later executes the rest of his board of engineers out of spite, even after learning it was Galen (surprise, surprise) the one that betrayed the Empire. This ensures the Empire has no access anymore to the Death Star think tank, making any future attempt to revise the designs much more difficult.\\
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'''And, Let's also not forget:''' Nobody bothered to stop Galen from deliberately slow-walking the development of the superweapon. Even with all the teething troubles such a complex system would present, it has been stated that Galen was going as slowly as humanly possible in developing the superlaser to delay its deployment for as long as possible. Imperial security REALLY sucked at their job here.
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'''Even Worse:''' Leia of all people should have a lot of reasons not to immediately trust Finn's and Poe's great escape, given that she was part herself of a similar Imperial scheme in order to find the Rebel base in Yavin IV.

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'''Even Worse:''' Again, Leia of all people should have a lot of reasons not to immediately trust Finn's and Poe's great escape, given that she was part herself of a similar Imperial scheme in order to find the Rebel base in Yavin IV.



'''Instead:''' The Resistance sends Chewbacca chaperoning ''Rey'', a random Force sensitive girl whom they barely know, who has no relation to Luke, and whose personality and experience don't make her exactly the best person to bring a bitter old man out of his shell. As a result, as shown in the next film, Rey's presence is met with skepticism by Luke, creates a big deal of conflict between both (not only due to her utter lack of psychology, but also because her pleads for Luke to train her, and her absurdly high Force levels only revive Luke's worst fears), and actually foils things when Luke had improbably decided to help (as it turns out that Snoke was using Rey's and Kylo Ren's minds to manipulate each other, which scares and enrages Luke upon discovering it). At the end, it's ultimately more due to Yoda's timely intervention that Luke eventually returns to battle, after a long string of drama that could have probably been avoided.

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'''Instead:''' The Resistance sends Chewbacca chaperoning ''Rey'', a random Force sensitive girl whom they barely know, who has no relation to Luke, and whose personality and experience don't make her exactly the best person to bring a bitter old man out of his shell. As a result, as shown in the next film, Rey's presence is met with skepticism by Luke, creates a big deal of conflict between both (not only due to her utter lack of psychology, but also because due to her pleads for Luke to train her, and as her absurdly high Force levels only revive Luke's worst fears), and actually foils things when Luke had improbably decided to help (as it turns out that Snoke was using Rey's and Kylo Ren's minds to manipulate each other, which scares and enrages Luke upon discovering it). At the end, it's ultimately more due to Yoda's timely intervention that Luke eventually returns to battle, after a long string of drama that could have probably been avoided.



'''Instead:''' He sits idly by while the ship's pilot comes too close, mocks his higher-up, and starts clearing out the dreadnought's surface cannons, and then complains they ''should'' have given the order to scramble the fighters "five bloody minutes ago" as if he wasn't the one in command who should have given it himself. (The ExpandedUniverse reveals this one is not on the captain, but on Hux, who overrode him on deploying fighters in an attempt to give the Resistance a lesson. "WhatAnIdiot" perfectly summed up Captain Canady's own opinion on Hux regarding that.)\\

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'''Instead:''' He sits idly by while the ship's pilot comes too close, mocks his higher-up, and starts clearing out the dreadnought's surface cannons, and then complains they ''should'' should have given the order to scramble the fighters "five bloody minutes ago" as if he wasn't the one in command who should have given it himself. (The ExpandedUniverse reveals this one is not on the captain, but on Hux, who overrode him on deploying fighters in an attempt to give the Resistance a lesson. "WhatAnIdiot" perfectly summed up Captain Canady's own opinion on Hux regarding that.)\\



* The First Order has found the route of the Resistance fleet thanks to a special tracker in Snoke's flagship, the ''Supremacy''. Now the rebel ships's speed and gas tank are the only things that impede them from falling in the First Order's clutches, as it happens that they are still slightly faster than the ''Supremacy''.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Snoke to order the many Star Destroyers that follow his flagship to speed up and catch the Resistance fleet. In the improbable case the rebels are still too fast, Snoke to order them to jump to hyperspace to a faraway point and return to intercept the Resistance fleet from any other direction in a pincer movement. If not, order any other First Order space force in the galaxy to do the same.\\
'''Instead:''' Snoke keeps deliberately playing cat and mouse by chasing them at the ''Supremacy'''s cruising speed, which barely keeps up with the ''Raddus'', apparently expecting to catch them by attrition alone. As a result, the Resistance has time to reach Crait and execute a plan to save them (well, most of them, as it turns out).

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* The First Order has found the route of the Resistance fleet thanks to a special tracker in Snoke's flagship, the ''Supremacy''. Now the rebel ships's speed and rebels' gas tank are reserve is the only things thing that impede impedes them from falling in the First Order's clutches, as it happens that they are still slightly their ships happen to be not much faster than the ''Supremacy''.cumbersome ''Supremacy'' and can only keep the pace in the chase.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Snoke to order the many Star Destroyers that follow his flagship to speed up and catch the Resistance fleet. In the improbable case the rebels are still too fast, they cannot do so, Snoke to order them to jump to hyperspace to a faraway point and return to intercept the Resistance fleet from any other direction in a pincer movement. If not, order any other First Order space force in the galaxy to do the same.\\
'''Instead:''' Snoke keeps deliberately playing cat and mouse by chasing them at the ''Supremacy'''s cruising speed, which barely keeps up with the ''Raddus'', apparently expecting to catch them by attrition alone. As a result, the Resistance has time to reach Crait and execute a plan to save them (well, most some of them, as it turns out).



'''Instead:''' Finn empties a paper bin and drops it on top of BB-8 to make it resemble a MSE-6 repair droid. Naturally, BB-8's resultant camouflage is flimsy at the best, as it even hits a random Stormtrooper in his way for being unable to see clearly. As a result, a First Order astromech notices it and sees through the disguise, alerting the First Order on them.\\

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'''Instead:''' Finn empties a paper bin and drops it on top of BB-8 to make it resemble a MSE-6 repair droid. Naturally, BB-8's resultant camouflage is flimsy at the best, as it even hits a random Stormtrooper in his way for being unable to see clearly. As a result, expected, a First Order astromech notices it and sees through the disguise, alerting the First Order on them.\\



'''Instead:''' For some fathomless reason, Vice-Admiral Holdo decides she has to do it herself, despite this means the Resistance will lose one of their best tacticians in their direst times with all it entails. Her futile sacrifice will be also yet another blow to General Organa, who has just lost her husband at the hands of their corrupted son.\\

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'''Instead:''' For some fathomless reason, Vice-Admiral Holdo decides she has to do it herself, despite this means the Resistance will lose one of their ([[InformedAbility supposedly]]) best tacticians in their direst times with all it entails. Her futile sacrifice will be also yet another blow to General Organa, her friend Leia, who has just lost her husband at the hands of their corrupted son.\\



'''You'd Expect:''' Them to execute anything except a frontal attack. The ski speeders are few, unarmored and only lightly armed, while the First Order is employing a Veers Formation with all their AT-AT, AT-M6, AT-ST and air support fighters pointing all their humongous firepower forward, which effectively turns the Resistance forces into sitting ducks. Moreover, unlike the slow bombers from the film's beginning, the V-4X-D are actually pretty fast and could believably perform some agile flanking maneuvers to distract their enemies and avoid their artillery.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' Them to execute anything except but a frontal attack. The ski speeders are few, unarmored and only lightly armed, while the First Order is employing a Veers Formation with all their AT-AT, AT-M6, AT-ST and air support fighters pointing all their humongous firepower forward, which effectively turns the Resistance forces into sitting ducks. Moreover, unlike the slow bombers from the film's beginning, the V-4X-D are actually pretty fast and could believably perform some agile flanking maneuvers to distract their enemies and avoid their artillery.\\
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'''Instead:''' They somehow scorn her for her criminal activities (overlooking the little fact that she committed those crimes ''against the Empire'', the very enemy of the Rebellion) and for being the daughter of an Imperial scientist (now overlooking that she is obviously estranged from him since childhood and that she was a Partisan for many years, meaning she could hardly share any possible Imperial allegiance), and turn this into the standard reply against Jyn every time she opens her mouth. Naturally, any possible rapport between Jyn and the Rebels is killed right there. While she never betrays them outright, the bad relationship among them leads to the Rebellion's inaction during the film's third act.

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'''Instead:''' They somehow scorn her for her criminal activities (overlooking the little fact that she committed those crimes ''against the Empire'', the very enemy of the Rebellion) and for being the daughter of an Imperial scientist (now overlooking that she is obviously estranged from him since childhood and that she was a Partisan for many years, meaning she could hardly share any possible Imperial allegiance), allegiance with him), and turn this into the standard reply against Jyn every time she opens her mouth. Naturally, any possible rapport between Jyn and the Rebels is killed right there. While she never betrays them outright, the their bad relationship among them ultimately leads to the Rebellion's decisive inaction during the film's third act.



'''Instead''': He only plays a recording, leaving Jyn with no solid evidence to back her claims up. The Rebel Alliance laughs in her face, [[GeneralRipper Draven]] still wants Galen dead. Despite Cassian disobeying Draven's order, Galen does end up dead because the Rebel forces on Eadu don't have any orders to extract or at least spare him, and Jyn has to rely on a ragtag bunch to fulfill her father's wish.
* Speaking of the devil, Alliance General Davits Draven wishes to kill Erso because he is a prominent Imperial scientist. He has been informed by Cassian Andor that he is held in an Imperial facility in Eadu.\\

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'''Instead''': He only plays a recording, leaving Jyn with no solid evidence to back her claims up. The Rebel Alliance laughs in her face, face and [[GeneralRipper General Davits Draven]] still wants Galen dead. Despite Cassian disobeying Draven's order, Galen does end up dead because the Rebel forces on Eadu don't have any orders to extract or at least spare him, and Jyn has to rely on a ragtag bunch to fulfill her father's wish.
* Speaking of the devil, Alliance General Davits Draven wishes to kill Erso because he is a prominent Imperial scientist. He has been informed by Cassian Andor that he is held in an Imperial facility in Eadu.\\



'''Instead:''' He orders Cassian to go assassinate Erso personally, despite he is just a single agent with little to no support, facing the perspective of storming an Imperial base guarded by an entire garrison, and currently accompanied by Jyn, the supposedly unreliable criminal who happens to be Galen's own daughter and to believe they are out to rescue him. Predictably, although Cassian receives a shockingly convenient chance to snipe Galen down outside, it soon becomes a messy battle by a combination of Cassian's doubts in the heat of the moment and Jyn's inopportune intervention, and the chance is lost. For their part, only after the Rebellion lose contact with Cassian they realize it would be better to send a starfighter squad instead.

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'''Instead:''' He orders Cassian to go assassinate Erso personally, despite he is just a single agent with little to no support, facing the perspective of storming an Imperial base guarded by an entire garrison, and currently accompanied by Jyn, the supposedly unreliable criminal who happens to be Galen's own daughter and to believe believes they are out to rescue him. Predictably, although Cassian receives a shockingly convenient chance to snipe Galen down outside, it soon becomes a messy battle by a combination of Cassian's doubts in the heat of the moment and Jyn's inopportune intervention, and the chance is lost. For their part, only after the Rebellion lose contact with Cassian they realize it would be better to send a starfighter squad instead.



'''You'd Expect:''' Him to take a hefty escort with him, if anything because he doesn't know how many attackers are there nor what weapons they have. Krennic is just an executive with a background in architecture, not a trained soldier, so this measure should be a given for him if he really wants to get personally involved in a shootout.\\
'''You'd Also Expect:''' Him to order a nearby TIE to destroy the antenna on top of the tower just in case, as it is likely the Rebels will try to use it to transmit the stolen plans to their fleet above. While there is already an orbital shield that impedes any communication attempt, the presence of a space battle directly on top of it is a threat to its functionality, so it would be better to make it sure the signals don't leave Scarif in any way.\\
'''Instead:''' Krennic takes with him ''two'' guards, apparently trusting more on his own blaster than anything else, and gives no more orders at all. He is lucky that the intruders are two as well, but they happen to be much better shooters, with the result that his escorts are killed and one of the Rebels manages to flee. Also, the orbital shield ends up destroyed, now with the consequence that the Rebels are able to transmit the plans.

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'''You'd Expect:''' Him to take a hefty escort with him, if anything because he doesn't know how many attackers are there nor what weapons they have. Krennic is just an executive with a background in architecture, not a trained soldier, so this measure should be a given for him if he really wants to get personally involved in a shootout.shootout and come out alive.\\
'''You'd Also Expect:''' Him to order a nearby TIE to destroy the antenna on top of the tower just in case, as it is likely the Rebels will try to use it to transmit the stolen plans to their fleet above. While there is already an orbital shield that impedes any communication attempt, the presence of a space battle directly on top of it is a direct threat to its functionality, so it would be better to make it sure the signals don't leave Scarif in any way.\\
'''Instead:''' Krennic takes with him ''two'' guards, apparently trusting more on his own blaster than anything else, and gives no more orders at all. He is lucky that the intruders are two as well, but they happen to be much better shooters, with the result that his escorts are killed and one of the Rebels manages to flee. Also, the orbital shield ends up destroyed, now with the consequence that allowing the Rebels are able to transmit the plans.



'''You'd Expect:''' The Rebel fleet to try to receive it in as many ships as they can, so they could obtain many copies of the plans. Although they have momentarily the advantage in the battle, Imperial reinforcements are probably already on the way and the Rebels could be scattered and pursued in any moment. In that case, having multiple ships loaded with the plans would increase the chances for some of them to reach Yavin IV and deliver the precious item.\\
'''Instead:''' Aparently, only the cruiser ''Profundity'' had their communication system open at the time of the battle, because it is the only Rebel ship that receives it. Fatidically, it also happens to be the fleet's flagship, which ensures the Imperial reinforcements led by Darth Vader's ''Devastator'' all fall on it on short notice, while several other minor Alliance ships manage to pull out safely but pointlessly. The crew of the ''Profundity'' has just enough time to move the plans to their only docked ship, the corvette in repair ''Tantive IV'', and send it away desperately before being destroyed. As a consequence, the fruits of the entire Battle of Scarif and the labors of Galen Erso and Rogue One end up in a single, damaged ship, which the ''Devastator'' sets to chase.

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'''You'd Expect:''' The Rebel fleet to try to receive it in as many ships as they can, so they could obtain many copies of the plans. Although they have momentarily the advantage in the battle, Imperial reinforcements are probably already on the way and the Rebels could be scattered and pursued in any moment. In that case, having multiple ships loaded with the plans would increase the chances for some of them to reach Yavin IV and deliver the precious item.info.\\
'''Instead:''' Aparently, Apparently, only the cruiser ''Profundity'' had their its communication system open at the time of the battle, because it is the only Rebel ship that receives it. Fatidically, Now fatidically, it also happens to be the fleet's flagship, which ensures causes the Imperial reinforcements led by Darth Vader's ''Devastator'' all fall on it on short notice, notice while several other minor Alliance ships manage to pull out sneak away safely but pointlessly. The crew of the ''Profundity'' has just enough time to move the plans to their only docked ship, the corvette in repair ''Tantive IV'', and send it away desperately before being destroyed. As a consequence, the fruits of the entire Battle of Scarif and the labors of Galen Erso and Rogue One end up in a single, damaged ship, which the ''Devastator'' sets to chase.



'''Even Worse:''' Tarkin eventually captures the ship and the plans, but he forgets all about the implications of the Battle of Scarif, believing that the Rebels were pursuing a ghost and that the Death Star is invulnerable just as it is. He prefers to let the intact plans escape as a bait for the Rebel Alliance, not realizing that, if the Rebels really had a way to capitalize on them, he has just advanced decisively their plans.

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'''Even Worse:''' Tarkin eventually captures the ship and the plans, but he forgets all about the implications of the Battle of Scarif, apparently believing that the Rebels were pursuing a ghost and that the Death Star is invulnerable just as it is. He prefers to let the intact plans escape go as a bait for the Rebel Alliance, not realizing that, if the Rebels really had a way to capitalize on them, he has just advanced decisively their plans.



'''Also:''' He would walk Han out of the cantina and conduct their conversation in an alley or any other nearby lonely place. The cantina is dimly lit and very crowded, and it is unclear that Han is alone there in the first place, so there is a very real risk than an ally of his (or an enemy of Greedo) notices Han is being held in gunpoint and comes to do the same with Greedo from behind.\\

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'''Also:''' He would walk Han out of the cantina and conduct their conversation in an alley or any other nearby lonely place. The cantina is dimly lit and very crowded, and it is unclear that Han is alone there in the first place, so there is a very real risk than an ally of his (or an enemy of Greedo) notices Han is being held in at gunpoint and comes to do the same with Greedo from behind.\\



'''You'd Expect:''' The other wingman, knowing that Vader has a clear shot at Luke, to stay put and let Vader finish the job. Better yet, he should let Han shoot him down so that he can have Vader buy time.\\
'''Instead:''' The wingman clumsily attempts to protect Vader by flying over him, but ends up hitting Vader's fighter instead, causing Vader to lose control and veer off the Death Star trench wildly. The wingman ultimately ends up hitting the side of the trench and blows up, killing him. This clears Luke of any possible hostiles in the trench run, allowing him to launch the proton torpedoes into the exhaust port and thus destroy the Death Star.

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'''You'd Expect:''' The other wingman, knowing that Vader has a clear shot at Luke, to stay put and let Vader finish the job. Better yet, If he is a particularly loyal man, he should even let Han shoot him down so that he can have Vader buy time.\\
'''Instead:''' The wingman clumsily attempts to protect Vader by flying over him, but ends up hitting Vader's fighter instead, causing Vader to lose control and veer off the Death Star trench wildly. The wingman ultimately ends up hitting the side of the trench and blows blowing up, killing him.which kills him pointlessly. This clears Luke of any possible hostiles in the trench run, allowing him to launch the proton torpedoes into the exhaust port and thus destroy the Death Star.



* Captain Needa aboard the Star Destroyer ''Avenger'' encounters the Millennium Falcon and is attempting to capture it.\\

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* Captain Lorth Needa aboard the Star Destroyer ''Avenger'' encounters the Millennium Falcon and is attempting to capture it.\\



'''You'd Think:''' Needa, who says out aloud that the Falcon is too small to have a working cloaking device, would think that it's hiding on a blind spot or something of the sort, and in any case tell Vader that he's still in pursuit in order to save face. Star Destroyers like the ''Avenger'' have a squadron of TIE Fighters on board, and Needa could order his fighters to inspect all the blind spots around his ship to make sure the Falcon isn't hiding on his own hull.\\

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'''You'd Think:''' Needa, who says out aloud that the Falcon is too small to have a working cloaking device, would think that it's hiding on a blind spot or something of the sort, and in any case tell Vader that he's still in pursuit in order to save face. Star Destroyers like the ''Avenger'' have a squadron of TIE Fighters fighters on board, and Needa could order his fighters to inspect all the blind spots around his ship to make sure the Falcon isn't hiding on his own hull.\\



'''You'd Expect:''' The bunker's commander to refuse the request, given that all they need to do is hold the bunker. If the Rebels' and Ewoks' attack genuinely has failed then they won't be able to get reinforcements, given that the Rebels can't land reinforcements due to the shield still being up, so the best thing for the Imperials to do is reinforce their position.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' The bunker's commander to refuse the request, given that all they need to do is hold the bunker. If the Rebels' and Ewoks' attack genuinely has failed then they won't be able to get reinforcements, given that the Rebels can't land reinforcements starships due to the shield still being up, so the best thing for the Imperials to do is reinforce their own position.\\



* The Resistance have just destroyed the stabilizer in Starkiller Base, not only rendered the weapon completely useless but the planet is literally falling apart as a result.\\
'''You'd expect:''' Colonel Datoo to do the sensible thing like everyone else and make a run for it.\\

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* The Resistance have just destroyed the stabilizer in Starkiller Base, not only rendered rendering the weapon completely useless but also making the planet is literally falling fall apart as a result.\\
'''You'd expect:''' Colonel Erich Datoo to do the sensible thing like everyone else and make a run for it.\\



'''You'd Expect:''' Leia to go herself with Chewbacca in the ''Millennium Falcon''. The next film proves there are officers in the Resistance who should be able to take command for a short time, so she doesn't have to worry about abandoning her underlings. Besides, it's known that Luke exiled himself out of depression for his failures, which means that, by all reason, sending out people who know him well and used to have a strong bond with him is the Resistance's best option to convince Luke to return. Finally, a wise leading general like Leia should surely know a bit about how to instigate some moral back to someone someone who has lost the will to fight.\\
'''Instead:''' The Resistance sends Chewbacca chaperoning ''Rey'', a random Force sensitive girl whom they barely know, who has no relation to Luke, and whose personality and experience don't make her exactly the best person to bring a bitter old man out of his shell. As a result, as shown in the next film, Rey's presence is met with skepticism by Luke, creates a big deal of conflict between both (not only due to her lack of psychology, but also because her pleads for Luke to train her and her absurdly high Force levels only revive Luke's worst fears), and actually foils things when Luke had improbably decided to help (as it turns out that Snoke was using Rey's and Kylo Ren's minds to manipulate each other, which scares and enrages Luke upon discovering it). At the end, it's ultimately more due to Yoda's timely intervention that Luke eventually returns to battle, after a long string of drama that could have probably been avoided.

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'''You'd Expect:''' Leia to go herself with Chewbacca in the ''Millennium Falcon''. The next film proves there are officers in the Resistance who should be able to take command for a short time, so she doesn't have to worry about abandoning her underlings. Besides, it's known that Luke exiled himself out of depression for his failures, which means that, by all reason, sending out people who know him well and used to have a strong bond with him is the Resistance's best option to convince Luke to return. Finally, a wise leading general like Leia should surely know a bit about how to instigate some moral back to someone on someone who has lost the will to fight.\\
'''Instead:''' The Resistance sends Chewbacca chaperoning ''Rey'', a random Force sensitive girl whom they barely know, who has no relation to Luke, and whose personality and experience don't make her exactly the best person to bring a bitter old man out of his shell. As a result, as shown in the next film, Rey's presence is met with skepticism by Luke, creates a big deal of conflict between both (not only due to her utter lack of psychology, but also because her pleads for Luke to train her her, and her absurdly high Force levels only revive Luke's worst fears), and actually foils things when Luke had improbably decided to help (as it turns out that Snoke was using Rey's and Kylo Ren's minds to manipulate each other, which scares and enrages Luke upon discovering it). At the end, it's ultimately more due to Yoda's timely intervention that Luke eventually returns to battle, after a long string of drama that could have probably been avoided.
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'''You'd Expect:''' Nute Gunray would fill the Jedis' room with poison gas, seal the doors, and leave the Jedi trapped in the room for several hours until they were good and dead. Eventually, someone could go into the room and dispose of the corpses.\\
'''Instead:''' After pumping said gas into the Jedis' room, Gunray waits a full ten seconds before ordering his Battle Droids to open the door themselves and "destroy what's left of them." Who knew that opening the door after such a short amount of time would provide an easy escape route for two armed Jedi?

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'''You'd Expect:''' Nute Gunray would fill the Jedis' waiting room with poison gas, seal the doors, and leave the Jedi trapped in the room then wait for several hours until they were good and dead. Eventually, someone could go into the room and dispose of the corpses.\\
'''Instead:''' After pumping said gas into the Jedis' room, Gunray waits a full about ten seconds before ordering his Battle Droids to open the door themselves and "destroy what's left of them." Who knew that opening the door after such a short amount of time would provide an easy escape route for two armed Jedi?



'''For Added Stupidity:''' Maul uses the architecture to his advantage, while they don't seem to even consider trying to do the same. Force pushing him out of the catwalks seems a pretty intuitive option to try in order to soften him up (or downright finish him by DisneyVillainDeath given the depth of some of the nearby falls), particularly because, as said above, it would be improbable that Maul could block them both at it. However, for some undiscernible reason, they prefer to attack him with lightsaber slashes and nothing more.

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'''For Added Stupidity:''' Maul uses the architecture to his advantage, while they don't seem to even consider trying to do the same. Force pushing him out off of the catwalks seems a pretty intuitive option to try in order to soften him up (or downright finish him by DisneyVillainDeath given the depth of some of the nearby falls), particularly because, as said above, it would be improbable that Maul could block them both at it. However, for some undiscernible indiscernible reason, they prefer to attack him with lightsaber slashes and nothing more.



'''You'd Expect:''' Count Dooku to get aboard the ship and leave with them. His solar sailer is manned by at least one droid, so it is safer for him call it, order it to take off towards one of the Separatist battleships on orbit, and recover his ship from there later.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' Count Dooku to get aboard the ship and leave with them. His solar sailer is manned by at least one droid, so it is safer for him to call it, order it to take off towards one of the Separatist battleships on in orbit, and recover his ship from there later.\\
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* Down on Endor, the Imperial forces are slowly turning the tide on the Rebel and Ewok forces, when Chewbacca and two Ewoks manage to commandeer an AT-ST. They bring it to the entrance of the shield generator bunker, which Han and Leia have been trying to break into with no success. Han then uses the AT-ST's radio to impersonate an Imperial officer, falsely claiming to the personnel inside the bunker that the Rebels and Ewoks are in retreat, and requesting reinforcements to hunt them down and wipe them out.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' The bunker's commander to refuse the request, given that all they need to do is hold the bunker. If the Rebels' and Ewoks' attack genuinely has failed then they won't be able to get reinforcements, given that the Rebels can't land reinforcements due to the shield still being up, so the best thing for the Imperials to do is reinforce their position.\\
'''Instead:''' He opens the bunker's door and sends out a batallion of troops... right into the reaches of a small Ewok army and the guns of the commandeered AT-ST.\\
'''The Result:''' This one act of stupidity almost single-handedly turns the tide of the entire Battle of Endor, as Han is able to get inside the generator complex and blow the whole thing up, bringing down the shield and allowing the Rebel fighters to enter the Death Star II's superstructure and destroy the station. Granted, the Emperor and Darth Vader would have still died, and possibly the ''Executor'' would have still been destroyed, but the Death Star II's still being intact and operational would at best have forced the Rebels into retreat, and at worst wiped them out completely.
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'''Worse Still:''' Krennic later executes the rest of his board of engineers out of spite, even after learning it was Galen (surprise, surprise) the one that betrayed the Empire. This ensures the Empire has no access anymore to the Death Star think tank, making any future attempt to revise the designs very difficult, if not impossible.

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'''Worse Still:''' Krennic later executes the rest of his board of engineers out of spite, even after learning it was Galen (surprise, surprise) the one that betrayed the Empire. This ensures the Empire has no access anymore to the Death Star think tank, making any future attempt to revise the designs very difficult, if not impossible.much more difficult.



'''Instead:''' He designs a thermal exhaust port in the Death Star's hull that leads directly to an intentionally fragile reactor, creating a way for enemy proton torpedoes to blow the battle station up inside out. This forces the Alliance to directly attack the Death Star directly with its small starfighter fleet, which is not in position to absorb important losses like those it would surely receive in such a near-suicide mission. Even worse, the port in question takes shape of a relatively small blowhole, making it so difficult to hit that only a Force sensitive managed to score after several veteran pilots died trying.\\

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'''Instead:''' He designs a thermal exhaust port in the Death Star's hull that leads directly to an intentionally fragile reactor, creating a way for enemy proton torpedoes to blow the battle station up inside out. This forces the Alliance to directly attack the Death Star directly with its small starfighter fleet, which is not in position to absorb important losses like those it would surely receive in such a near-suicide mission. Even worse, In fact, the port in question takes shape of a relatively small blowhole, making it so difficult to hit that only a Force sensitive managed to score after several veteran pilots died trying.\\



'''Instead:''' They somehow scorn her for her criminal activities (overlooking the little fact that she committed those crimes ''against the Empire'', the very enemy of the Rebellion) and for being the daughter of an Imperial scientist (now overlooking that she is obviously estranged from him since childhood and that she was a Partisan for many years, meaning she could hardly share any possible Imperial sympathy Galen might have), and turn this into the standard reply against Jyn every time she opens her mouth. Naturally, any possible rapport between Jyn and the Rebels is killed right there, and while she never betrays them outright, the bad relationship among them leads to the Rebellion’s inaction during the film's third act.

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'''Instead:''' They somehow scorn her for her criminal activities (overlooking the little fact that she committed those crimes ''against the Empire'', the very enemy of the Rebellion) and for being the daughter of an Imperial scientist (now overlooking that she is obviously estranged from him since childhood and that she was a Partisan for many years, meaning she could hardly share any possible Imperial sympathy Galen might have), allegiance), and turn this into the standard reply against Jyn every time she opens her mouth. Naturally, any possible rapport between Jyn and the Rebels is killed right there, and while there. While she never betrays them outright, the bad relationship among them leads to the Rebellion’s Rebellion's inaction during the film's third act.



* Speaking of the devil, the Rebellion wishes to Kill Erso because he is a prominent Imperial scientist. They have been informed by Cassian Andor that he is held in an Imperial facility in Eadu.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Them to send a starfighter squad from the start and bomb the facility to pieces, the only safe way to ensure Erso dies without leaving too many traces the Empire can find. By doing so, they will take out some other Imperial scientists and officers as well.\\
'''Instead:''' They order Cassian to go assassinate Erso personally, despite he is just a single agent with little to no support, facing the perspective of storming an Imperial base guarded by an entire garrison, and currently accompanied by Jyn, the supposedly unreliable criminal who happens to be Galen's own daughter and to believe they are out to rescue him. Predictably, although Cassian receives a shockingly convenient chance to snipe Galen down outside, it soon becomes a messy battle by a combination of Cassian's doubts in the heat of the moment and Jyn's inopportune intervention, and the chance is lost. For their part, only after the Rebellion lose contact with Cassian they realize it would be better to send a starfighter squad instead, which is finally enough to complete the mission.

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* Speaking of the devil, the Rebellion Alliance General Davits Draven wishes to Kill kill Erso because he is a prominent Imperial scientist. They have He has been informed by Cassian Andor that he is held in an Imperial facility in Eadu.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Them Him to send a starfighter squad from the start and bomb the facility to pieces, the only safe way to ensure Erso dies without leaving too many traces the Empire can find. By doing so, they will take out some other Imperial scientists and officers as well.\\
'''Instead:''' They order He orders Cassian to go assassinate Erso personally, despite he is just a single agent with little to no support, facing the perspective of storming an Imperial base guarded by an entire garrison, and currently accompanied by Jyn, the supposedly unreliable criminal who happens to be Galen's own daughter and to believe they are out to rescue him. Predictably, although Cassian receives a shockingly convenient chance to snipe Galen down outside, it soon becomes a messy battle by a combination of Cassian's doubts in the heat of the moment and Jyn's inopportune intervention, and the chance is lost. For their part, only after the Rebellion lose contact with Cassian they realize it would be better to send a starfighter squad instead, which is finally enough to complete the mission.instead.



'''You'd Expect:''' Them to at least believe Cassian, not only because this is what they ordered him to investigate in the first place, but also because he’s still a veteran Rebel captain that witnessed its attack himself. If they fear Cassian might be hallucinating things, all they need to do is checking out K-2SO's memory, as he was present in Jedha too and saw the superlaser scorching the planet, or just trying to contact Jedha City by radio to see if it still exists. With that certainty, they can now ponder what to do with the Death Star and its mighty power: to leave it free to allow the Emperor bully entire systems into submission, or to take any chance to destroy it in order to leave a spark of hope for those who oppose the Empire.\\
'''Instead:''' The Rebel council [[HeadInTheSandManagement elects not to believe the inform]], with General Davits Draven himself suddenly turning skeptical about it despite he is precisely Cassian's superior (as well as the one who seemed convinced the most of the existence of the superweapon) and Senator Vasp Vaspar bringing again the absurd logic they cannot trust Jyn because she is a criminal and an Imperial's daughter. The possibility of having tangible proofs of it in K-2SO or Jedha is never brought up, neither by Jyn nor by the council, and the topic remains unproven by the end of the session, ultimately fueling the Rebellion's already existent internal divisions and moving it not to act. As a result, Cassian and Jyn are left to start an unsanctioned mission with a cadre of volunteers.\\
'''Even Worse:''' Admiral Raddus eventually makes up for it by sending the Alliance fleet to back the Rogue Squad during the Battle of Scarif, but by then it's too late to devise any plan or strategy with them, and all the fleet can do is initiate a direct space-and-land brawl to buy Cassian and Jyn time to finish their ploy. As a result, even although the Rebellion achieves an improbable success by escaping with the plans, roughly half of its fleet ends up destroyed (and Raddus himself killed) in a stunt that could have been avoided with a proper coordination.

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'''You'd Expect:''' Them to at least believe Cassian, not only because this is what they ordered him to investigate in the first place, but also because he’s he's still a veteran Rebel captain that witnessed its attack himself. If they fear Cassian might be hallucinating things, all they need to do is checking out K-2SO's memory, as he was present in Jedha too and saw the superlaser scorching the planet, too, or just trying to contact Jedha City by radio to see if it still exists.someone picks up the phone. With that certainty, they can now ponder what to do with the Death Star and its mighty power: to leave it free to allow the Emperor bully entire systems into submission, or to take any chance to destroy it in order to leave a spark of hope for those who oppose the Empire.\\
'''Instead:''' The Rebel council [[HeadInTheSandManagement elects not to believe the inform]], with General Davits Draven himself suddenly turning skeptical about it despite he is precisely Cassian's superior (as well as the one who seemed convinced the most of the existence of the superweapon) and Senator Vasp Vaspar bringing again the absurd logic that they cannot trust Jyn because she is a criminal and an Imperial's Imperial scientist's daughter. The possibility of having tangible proofs of it in K-2SO or Jedha is never brought up, neither by Jyn nor by the council, and the topic remains unproven by the end of the session, ultimately fueling the Rebellion's already existent internal divisions and moving it not to act. As a result, Cassian and Jyn are left to start an unsanctioned mission with a cadre of volunteers.\\
'''Even Worse:''' Admiral Raddus eventually makes up for it by sending the Alliance fleet to back the Rogue Squad during the Battle of Scarif, but by then it's too late to devise any plan or strategy with them, and all the fleet can do is initiate a direct space-and-land brawl to buy Cassian and Jyn some time to finish their ploy. As a result, even although the Rebellion achieves an improbable success by escaping with the plans, roughly half of its fleet ends up destroyed (and Raddus himself killed) killed in action) in a stunt that could have been avoided with a proper coordination.



'''You'd Also Expect:''' Him to order a nearby TIE to destroy the antenna on top of the tower just in case, as it is likely the Rebels intend to use it to transmit the stolen plans to their fleet above. While there is an orbital shield that impedes any communication attempt, the presence of a space battle on top of it directly threatens its functionality, so it is better to make it sure the signals don't leave Scarif in any way.\\
'''Instead:''' Krennic takes with him ''two'' guards, apparently trusting more on his own blaster than anything else, and gives no more orders at all. He is lucky that the intruders are two as well, but they happen to be much better shooters, with the result that his escorts are killed and one of the Rebels manages to flee. Also, the orbital shield ends up destroyed, with the consequence that the Rebels are able to transmit the plans away.
* Just as Jyn is about to transfer the Death Star plans to the rebels, Krennic manages to intercept her and has her at gun-point. He's implied to vaguely recognize this rebel girl though, both from when she was a child, and from seeing her briefly on Eadu.\\

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'''You'd Also Expect:''' Him to order a nearby TIE to destroy the antenna on top of the tower just in case, as it is likely the Rebels intend will try to use it to transmit the stolen plans to their fleet above. While there is already an orbital shield that impedes any communication attempt, the presence of a space battle directly on top of it directly threatens is a threat to its functionality, so it is would be better to make it sure the signals don't leave Scarif in any way.\\
'''Instead:''' Krennic takes with him ''two'' guards, apparently trusting more on his own blaster than anything else, and gives no more orders at all. He is lucky that the intruders are two as well, but they happen to be much better shooters, with the result that his escorts are killed and one of the Rebels manages to flee. Also, the orbital shield ends up destroyed, now with the consequence that the Rebels are able to transmit the plans away.
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* Just as Jyn is about to transfer the Death Star plans to the rebels, Krennic manages to intercept her and has her at gun-point. He's implied to vaguely recognize this rebel girl though, both from when she was a child, child and from seeing her briefly on Eadu.\\



'''Instead:''' Aparently, only the cruiser ''Profundity'' had their communication system open at the time of the battle, because it is the only Rebel ship that receives it. Fatidically, it also happens to be the fleet's flagship, which ensures the Imperial reinforcements led by Darth Vader's ''Devastator'' all fall on it on short notice, while several other minor Alliance ships manage to pull out safely but pointlessly. The crew of the ''Profundity'' has just enough time to move the plans to their only docked ship, the corvette in repair ''Tantive IV'', and send it away desperately before being destroyed. As a consequence, the goal of the entire Battle of Scarif and the labors of Galen Erso and the Rogue One ends up in a single, damaged ship, which the ''Devastator'' sets to chase.

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'''Instead:''' Aparently, only the cruiser ''Profundity'' had their communication system open at the time of the battle, because it is the only Rebel ship that receives it. Fatidically, it also happens to be the fleet's flagship, which ensures the Imperial reinforcements led by Darth Vader's ''Devastator'' all fall on it on short notice, while several other minor Alliance ships manage to pull out safely but pointlessly. The crew of the ''Profundity'' has just enough time to move the plans to their only docked ship, the corvette in repair ''Tantive IV'', and send it away desperately before being destroyed. As a consequence, the goal fruits of the entire Battle of Scarif and the labors of Galen Erso and the Rogue One ends end up in a single, damaged ship, which the ''Devastator'' sets to chase.



'''You'd Expect:''' Him to fire the superlaser on the Rebel fleet to wipe it out, which should ensure they don't escape with the Death Star plans regardless of whether their land forces manage to transmit them or not. After the battle is concluded, Tarkin should also initiate an investigation to discover how could have the Rebels have capitalized on the plans. Arranging for a team of loyal engineers to immediately revise the designs (either the re-captured ones or any duplicate the Empire can find), find all possible weaknesses and refit the station to correct them should be a priority.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' Him to concentrate fire the superlaser on the Rebel fleet to wipe it out, which should ensure they don't escape with the Death Star plans regardless of whether their land forces manage to transmit them or not. After the battle is concluded, Tarkin should also initiate an investigation to discover how could have the Rebels have capitalized on the plans. Arranging for a team of loyal engineers to immediately revise the designs (either the re-captured ones or any duplicate the Empire can find), find all possible weaknesses and refit the station to correct them should be a priority.\\



'''Even Worse:''' Tarkin eventually captures the ship and the plans, but he forgets all about the implications of the Battle of Scarif, believing that the Rebels were pursuing a ghost and that the Death Star is invulnerable just as it is. He prefers to let the intact plans escape as a bait for the Rebel Alliance, not realizing that, if the Rebels really had a way to capitalize on them, he has just help their own plans to advance.

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'''Even Worse:''' Tarkin eventually captures the ship and the plans, but he forgets all about the implications of the Battle of Scarif, believing that the Rebels were pursuing a ghost and that the Death Star is invulnerable just as it is. He prefers to let the intact plans escape as a bait for the Rebel Alliance, not realizing that, if the Rebels really had a way to capitalize on them, he has just help advanced decisively their own plans to advance.plans.

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* Tarkin learns about the Battle of Scarif and realizes that the Alliance is trying to obtain the plans of the Death Star. He orders the Death Star and its surrounding fleet to travel to the planet.\\
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* Thanks to the efforts of Jyn and Cassian, the transmission with the Death Star's plans is finally on air.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' The Rebel fleet to try to receive it in as many ships as they can, so they could obtain many copies of the plans. Although they have momentarily the advantage in the battle, Imperial reinforcements are probably already on the way and the Rebels could be scattered and pursued in any moment. In that case, having multiple ships loaded with the plans would increase the chances for some of them to reach Yavin IV and deliver the precious item.\\
'''Instead:''' Aparently, only the cruiser ''Profundity'' had their communication system open at the time of the battle, because it is the only Rebel ship that receives it. Fatidically, it also happens to be the fleet's flagship, which ensures the Imperial reinforcements led by Darth Vader's ''Devastator'' all fall on it on short notice, while several other minor Alliance ships manage to pull out safely but pointlessly. The crew of the ''Profundity'' has just enough time to move the plans to their only docked ship, the corvette in repair ''Tantive IV'', and send it away desperately before being destroyed. As a consequence, the goal of the entire Battle of Scarif and the labors of Galen Erso and the Rogue One ends up in a single, damaged ship, which the ''Devastator'' sets to chase.
* Tarkin learns about the Battle of Scarif and realizes that the Alliance is trying to obtain the plans of the Death Star.Star, presumably deducing they will use it to sabotage or find weak spots on the station. He orders the Death Star and its surrounding fleet to travel to the planet.\\
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Expect:''' Him to fire the superlaser on the Rebel fleet to wipe it out, which should ensure they don't escape with the Death Star plans regardless of whether their land forces manage to transmit them or not. After the battle is concluded, Tarkin should also initiate an investigation to discover how could have the Rebels have capitalized on the plans. Arranging for a team of loyal engineers to immediately revise the designs (either the re-captured ones or any duplicate the Empire can find), find all possible weaknesses and refit the station to correct them should be a priority.\\
'''Instead:''' He orders the Death Star to fire on the planet and destroy the Scarif base, where Imperial forces are still fighting and a valuable data vault is located. As a result, the data vault is lost with all its stored scientific treatises, bureaucratic memoranda, and weapons schematics, including projects War-Mantle and Stellar Sphere. Worsening things, this ends up failing to impede the plans from being transmitted, and in turns gives the Rebel fleet enough freedom of movements to load the item on a starship and fleeing the battlefield.\\
'''Even Worse:''' Tarkin eventually captures the ship and the plans, but he forgets all about the implications of the Battle of Scarif, believing that the Rebels were pursuing a ghost and that the Death Star is invulnerable just as it is. He prefers to let the intact plans escape as a bait for the Rebel Alliance, not realizing that, if the Rebels really had a way to capitalize on them, he has just help their own plans to advance.

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'''Instead:''' [[HystericalWoman Idiotically]], after sending Jyn to the bunker, Lyra comes out and shoots Krennic with a blaster. Not being a trained shooter, she only hits his shoulder, and being in plain sight, the Death Troopers promptly gun her down. The result, therefore, is Lyra losing her life absolutely for nothing.

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'''Instead:''' [[HystericalWoman Idiotically]], after sending Jyn to the bunker, Lyra comes out and shoots Krennic with a blaster. Not being a trained shooter, she only hits his shoulder, and being in plain sight, the Death Troopers promptly gun her down. The result, therefore, is Lyra losing her life absolutely for nothing.\\



'''Even Worse:''' Admiral Raddus eventually makes up for it by sending the Alliance fleet to back the Rogue Squad during the Battle of Scarif, but by then it's too late to devise any plan or strategy with them, and all the fleet can do is initiate a direct space brawl to buy Cassian and Jyn time to finish their ploy. As a result, even although the Rebellion achieves an improbable success by escaping with the plans, roughly half of its fleet ends up destroyed (and Raddus himself killed) in a stunt that could have been avoided with a proper coordination of the operation.

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'''Even Worse:''' Admiral Raddus eventually makes up for it by sending the Alliance fleet to back the Rogue Squad during the Battle of Scarif, but by then it's too late to devise any plan or strategy with them, and all the fleet can do is initiate a direct space space-and-land brawl to buy Cassian and Jyn time to finish their ploy. As a result, even although the Rebellion achieves an improbable success by escaping with the plans, roughly half of its fleet ends up destroyed (and Raddus himself killed) in a stunt that could have been avoided with a proper coordination coordination.
* During the Battle of Scarif, Krennic learns from a lieutenant that the data vault, where the Death Star's plans are located, has been breached. Deducing the Rebels are out to steal the plans, he goes to the vault.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Him to take a hefty escort with him, if anything because he doesn't know how many attackers are there nor what weapons they have. Krennic is just an executive with a background in architecture, not a trained soldier, so this measure should be a given for him if he really wants to get personally involved in a shootout.\\
'''You'd Also Expect:''' Him to order a nearby TIE to destroy the antenna on top
of the operation.tower just in case, as it is likely the Rebels intend to use it to transmit the stolen plans to their fleet above. While there is an orbital shield that impedes any communication attempt, the presence of a space battle on top of it directly threatens its functionality, so it is better to make it sure the signals don't leave Scarif in any way.\\
'''Instead:''' Krennic takes with him ''two'' guards, apparently trusting more on his own blaster than anything else, and gives no more orders at all. He is lucky that the intruders are two as well, but they happen to be much better shooters, with the result that his escorts are killed and one of the Rebels manages to flee. Also, the orbital shield ends up destroyed, with the consequence that the Rebels are able to transmit the plans away.



'''You'd Expect:''' That Krennic would shoot her, then ask her who she is as she bleeds out, securing a complete victory for the Empire as with her and Galen dead, any weaknesses regarding the Death Star plans will be lost forever.\\
'''Instead:''' He holds her at gunpoint and wastes time gloating to her about her failure long enough that Cassian manages to shoot him, allowing the two to activate the antenna and successfully transmit the Death Star plans to the rebels, dooming the Empire to their eventual downfall.

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'''You'd Expect:''' That Krennic would shoot her, then ask her who she is as she bleeds out, securing out (or not to ask her and just forgetting about it). This would secure a complete victory for the Empire Empire, as with her and Galen dead, any weaknesses regarding the Death Star plans will be lost forever.\\
'''Instead:''' He holds her at gunpoint and wastes time speaking to her gloating to her about her failure failure, long enough that a recovered Cassian manages to reach him and shoot him, allowing him InTheBack. This allows the two to activate the antenna and successfully transmit the Death Star plans to the rebels, dooming the Empire entire station.
* Tarkin learns about the Battle of Scarif and realizes that the Alliance is trying
to their eventual downfall.obtain the plans of the Death Star. He orders the Death Star and its surrounding fleet to travel to the planet.\\
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* Krennic is being slowly usurped by Tarkin, so he goes to Darth Vader to ask for his help. Not the brightest idea, but desperate times call for desperate measures. Vader is clearly displeased by this intrusion but does not indicate Krennic has been demoted or taken off the project. Krennic then wonders aloud if he's still in charge.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' He'd take Lord Vader's silence as a "yes", thank him for his time and get out of there.\\
'''Instead:''' He pushes his luck by asking him to speak to the Emperor as a favor, which naturally pisses Vader off more than he already was. Honestly, he's lucky he didn't fatally choke on his aspirations.

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* Imperial director Orson Krennic is being slowly usurped by Tarkin, so he goes arrives to Darth Vader planet Lah'mu to ask capture Galen Erso and make him continue working for his help. Not the brightest idea, but desperate times call for desperate measures. Vader is clearly displeased by this intrusion but does not indicate Krennic has been demoted or taken off Empire. Watching the project. Krennic then wonders aloud if he's still in charge.Imperial shuttle land, Galen's wife Lyra alerts their Partisan ally Saw Gerrera and runs into hiding with their little daughter Jyn.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' He'd take Lord Vader's silence as a "yes", thank him Galen to go hide with his family and wait together for his Gerrera's forces to arrive, ambush Krennic's entourage and throw their corpses to some ditch. The Imperials have weirdly landed a kilometer afar from the Erso homestead and are traveling there on foot, so the Ersos have clearly got a lot of time to act. If waiting in their secret bunker doesn't sound good for them, they still have a sparsely populated planet with many forests and get out of there.mountains, so it should not be hard for the family to evade the small Imperial contingent outside for a time.\\
'''Instead:''' Galen sends Lyra and Jyn to hide behind a nearby rock formation and gives himself up to the Empire, who will force him to finish the Death Star.\\
'''You'd Also Expect:''' Lyra to remain hidden until the Empire forces are gone and/or Gerrera arrives. From her position, she can see an entire Death Trooper platoon is here with Krennic to take Galen, so there's just no way a single civilian woman can impede the arrest. Moreover, she knows well the Empire wants Galen alive and able to work, so there's no overt reason to worry for him in the short run.\\
'''Instead:''' [[HystericalWoman Idiotically]], after sending Jyn to the bunker, Lyra comes out and shoots Krennic with a blaster. Not being a trained shooter, she only hits his shoulder, and being in plain sight, the Death Troopers promptly gun her down. The result, therefore, is Lyra losing her life absolutely for nothing.
'''For Extra Stupidity:''' Judging for Jyn's looks when she is pulled out of the bunker, Gerrera and his men showed up pretty quickly, which means any of the previous expected actions would have given the Partisans time to arrive, ambush Krennic and their men, dump their bodies in some ditch, and recover the Erso family.
* Krennic and the Empire now have recovered Galen. They put him in the Tarkin Initiative to work on the Death Star project.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Them to remember that Erso already defected once, is in disagreement with the Empire's superweapon policies, and had to be brought in chains. Galen should be permanently watched over to avoid any treason, with a couple loyal Imperial engineers examining his work at all times to prevent the possibility of an internal sabotage.\\
'''Instead:''' He pushes his luck by asking is left free and without any supervision, which allows him to speak to secretly put an intentional weak spot on the Death Star that will destroy the entire station if hit by a single starfighter. This ends up costing the Emperor as billions of credits on a favor, battle station and the life of a valuable Grand Moff.\\
'''Even Worse:''' Galen attests the Empire has enough brainpower to finish the Death Star without him,
which naturally pisses Vader off more than means they were all the time in position to understand his work and detect any sabotage he could attempt.\\
'''Worse Still:''' Krennic later executes the rest of his board of engineers out of spite, even after learning it was Galen (surprise, surprise) the one that betrayed the Empire. This ensures the Empire has no access anymore to the Death Star think tank, making any future attempt to revise the designs very difficult, if not impossible.
* Speaking of Galen, he is now working to complete the Death Star and intends to add a fatal weak spot.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Him to remember he is not a military strategist and might not have the knowledge to create an external vulnerability that can be believably targeted by an enemy fleet. Thus, him to stick to what he knows and concoct a weakness based on the Death Star's internal workings. Being in in charge of kyber energy crystal system that fuels the superlaser leaves Galen with many opportunities to sabotage the weapon, so he could rig the system to overload and blow up when it tries to fire its superlaser, for instance.\\
'''Instead:''' He designs a thermal exhaust port in the Death Star's hull that leads directly to an intentionally fragile reactor, creating a way for enemy proton torpedoes to blow the battle station up inside out. This forces the Alliance to directly attack the Death Star directly with its small starfighter fleet, which is not in position to absorb important losses like those it would surely receive in such a near-suicide mission. Even worse, the port in question takes shape of a relatively small blowhole, making it so difficult to hit that only a Force sensitive managed to score after several veteran pilots died trying.\\
'''Even Worse:''' Galen wants the Alliance to have the Death Star's plans so they can learn the weak spot, but he cannot smuggle them out himself despite having enough access to personally name the file. As a solution, he gives the file a codename that will make it identifiable for the Rebels among the many Imperial archives in Scarif. Only one thing: it is a pretty generic space codename that only his daughter could recognize as his term of endearment for her, which would equate to nothing for any Rebel mission that happened not to have Jyn Erso on it.
* After a life fighting for Gerrera and making a living as a petty criminal, Jyn Erso gets captured by the Empire and sent to the Wobani labor camp. Sixth months later, a Rebel force rescues her and brings her to the Yavin IV base, as they believe she can help them to restore communication with Gerrera.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' The Rebel leaders to treat her with some recognition, given that she is
already was. Honestly, he's lucky he didn't fatally choke on his aspirations.a sworn enemy of the Empire with many years of experience, and to try to gain Jyn's trust in order to ease things during the mission. Even if they have secretly planned to assassinate her dad and discard her afterwards, they gain nothing by alienating her from the Rebel cause from the very start, aside from compromising her cooperation; knowing her previous allegiance, and having witnessed first-hand how she attacked her own rescuers in Wobani out of sheer street-wisdom, they should be aware that a distrustful Jyn is perfectly able to betray them and seriously screw the Rebellion if given the reasons and chance.\\
'''Instead:''' They somehow scorn her for her criminal activities (overlooking the little fact that she committed those crimes ''against the Empire'', the very enemy of the Rebellion) and for being the daughter of an Imperial scientist (now overlooking that she is obviously estranged from him since childhood and that she was a Partisan for many years, meaning she could hardly share any possible Imperial sympathy Galen might have), and turn this into the standard reply against Jyn every time she opens her mouth. Naturally, any possible rapport between Jyn and the Rebels is killed right there, and while she never betrays them outright, the bad relationship among them leads to the Rebellion’s inaction during the film's third act.



'''Instead''': He only plays a recording, leaving Jyn with no solid evidence to back her claims up. The Rebel Alliance laughs in her face, [[GeneralRipper Draven]] still wants Galen dead. Despite Cassian disobeying Draven's order, Galen does end up dead because the Rebel forces on Eadu don't have any orders to extract or at least spare him, and Jyn has to rely on a ragtag bunch and Raddus.

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'''Instead''': He only plays a recording, leaving Jyn with no solid evidence to back her claims up. The Rebel Alliance laughs in her face, [[GeneralRipper Draven]] still wants Galen dead. Despite Cassian disobeying Draven's order, Galen does end up dead because the Rebel forces on Eadu don't have any orders to extract or at least spare him, and Jyn has to rely on a ragtag bunch to fulfill her father's wish.
* Speaking of the devil, the Rebellion wishes to Kill Erso because he is a prominent Imperial scientist. They have been informed by Cassian Andor that he is held in an Imperial facility in Eadu.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Them to send a starfighter squad from the start
and Raddus. bomb the facility to pieces, the only safe way to ensure Erso dies without leaving too many traces the Empire can find. By doing so, they will take out some other Imperial scientists and officers as well.\\
'''Instead:''' They order Cassian to go assassinate Erso personally, despite he is just a single agent with little to no support, facing the perspective of storming an Imperial base guarded by an entire garrison, and currently accompanied by Jyn, the supposedly unreliable criminal who happens to be Galen's own daughter and to believe they are out to rescue him. Predictably, although Cassian receives a shockingly convenient chance to snipe Galen down outside, it soon becomes a messy battle by a combination of Cassian's doubts in the heat of the moment and Jyn's inopportune intervention, and the chance is lost. For their part, only after the Rebellion lose contact with Cassian they realize it would be better to send a starfighter squad instead, which is finally enough to complete the mission.
* Krennic is being slowly usurped by Tarkin, so he goes to Darth Vader to ask for his help. Not the brightest idea, but desperate times call for desperate measures. Vader is clearly displeased by this intrusion but does not indicate Krennic has been demoted or taken off the project. Krennic then wonders aloud if he's still in charge.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' He'd take Lord Vader's silence as a "yes", thank him for his time and get out of there.\\
'''Instead:''' He pushes his luck by asking him to speak to the Emperor as a favor, which naturally pisses Vader off more than he already was. Honestly, he's lucky he didn't fatally choke on his aspirations.
* With Cassian having informed the Rebellion that the Death Star exists and actually performed a test firing on Jedha City, Jyn tells them her father was secretly working against the Empire and wants them to obtain an information node in Scarif.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Them to at least believe Cassian, not only because this is what they ordered him to investigate in the first place, but also because he’s still a veteran Rebel captain that witnessed its attack himself. If they fear Cassian might be hallucinating things, all they need to do is checking out K-2SO's memory, as he was present in Jedha too and saw the superlaser scorching the planet, or just trying to contact Jedha City by radio to see if it still exists. With that certainty, they can now ponder what to do with the Death Star and its mighty power: to leave it free to allow the Emperor bully entire systems into submission, or to take any chance to destroy it in order to leave a spark of hope for those who oppose the Empire.\\
'''Instead:''' The Rebel council [[HeadInTheSandManagement elects not to believe the inform]], with General Davits Draven himself suddenly turning skeptical about it despite he is precisely Cassian's superior (as well as the one who seemed convinced the most of the existence of the superweapon) and Senator Vasp Vaspar bringing again the absurd logic they cannot trust Jyn because she is a criminal and an Imperial's daughter. The possibility of having tangible proofs of it in K-2SO or Jedha is never brought up, neither by Jyn nor by the council, and the topic remains unproven by the end of the session, ultimately fueling the Rebellion's already existent internal divisions and moving it not to act. As a result, Cassian and Jyn are left to start an unsanctioned mission with a cadre of volunteers.\\
'''Even Worse:''' Admiral Raddus eventually makes up for it by sending the Alliance fleet to back the Rogue Squad during the Battle of Scarif, but by then it's too late to devise any plan or strategy with them, and all the fleet can do is initiate a direct space brawl to buy Cassian and Jyn time to finish their ploy. As a result, even although the Rebellion achieves an improbable success by escaping with the plans, roughly half of its fleet ends up destroyed (and Raddus himself killed) in a stunt that could have been avoided with a proper coordination of the operation.



* Finn and Rose arrive to the planet Cantonica in a Resistance ship. Upon landing on a Canto Bight beach, a stuffy alien, Slowen Lo, screams to them that they are not allowed to leave their ship there.\\

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* The entire event of Padmé's pregnancy. [[AsYouKnow As it has been reminded numerous times, Jedi are not allowed to have relationships or get married]] (certainly not to Senators). This is the whole reason Anakin and Padmé have kept their marriage secret. Now Padmé has just discovered she's pregnant.\\

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* The entire event of Padmé's pregnancy. [[AsYouKnow As it has been reminded numerous times, times]], Jedi are not allowed to have relationships or get married]] married (certainly not to Senators). This is the whole reason Anakin and Padmé have kept their marriage secret. Now Padmé has just discovered she's pregnant.\\



'''You'd Expect:''' Them to raise the twins together in a safe planet like Alderaan and have Obi-Wan train them in the Force since their childhood. They have no real reason to separate the twins, as there are millions and millions of humans in the galaxy and the Empire doesn't know Padme gave birth specifically to a boy and a girl (it actually doesn't know she gave birth, period), so nothing about it is going to lead Vader to them. Also, by doing so, they are providing the best life possible for them and ensuring no clueless innocents like Owen and Beru are being needlessly endangered. Training them from childhood would increase exponentially their chances to survive and their usefulness to the Rebel Alliance, and would allow Obi-Wan and Yoda to avoid the mistake committed by training Anakin when he was too old and angsty.\\
'''Alternatively:''' If raising them in separate planets is really indispensable, they have a lot of options to keep them safe that way. An influential politician like Organa could not only adopt one of the twins himself, but also have some other family of his trust adopt the other and bring him up in another system, preferently one discreet like Alderaan but not a wasteland like Tatooine. Obi-Wan could still train both by seasons, possibly trading it with Yoda in Dagobah, and still have time to train himself to become one with the Force.\\
'''Instead:''' Organa adopts Leia and raises her in Alderaan, while Kenobi takes Luke to Tatooine and basically forces Owen and Beru to adopt him (without even changing his surname from his father's). Understandably, the latter action creates a great measure of distrust in Owen, who actively opposes Luke from having nothing to do with his legacy through his life, fearing he could become another Vader. None of the Skywalkers receives any word of the Force until certain events drive Luke to become a Jedi at his twenties and with his own emotional baggage, thus taking a much greater risk with him than they had taken with Anakin (and Yoda of all people has the nerve to ''complain'' about this). Even worse, despite not having Leia trained, Organa still has her involved with the Rebellion anyways, which puts her in the Empire's sights without any of what would be her best resources against it.
* A large number of Jedi Knights have been wiped out and the newly christened Empire sets about exterminating the survivors.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Yoda and Obi-Wan would try and make contact with other Jedi survivors, regroup in a secret location, gather up as many Force sensitive individuals as they could find, and start training a new Jedi Order in secret. They may not have the numbers and resources they had beforce, but it's absolutely critical to preserve the knowledge of the Order by passing it on.\\
'''Instead:''' They both go into exile as self imposed punishment. While it's noble of them to admit their failures, this is of little help to the rest of the galaxy. Palpatine is largely unopposed and secures the Empire very quickly. Meanwhile, the other Jedi are hunted down by Vader and the Sith Inquisitors leaving the remnants of the Jedi Order to wither and die. By the time Obi-Wan and Yoda decide to finally train Luke, he's literally the last Jedi left and the Order nearly goes extinct.

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'''You'd Expect:''' Them to raise the twins together in a safe planet like Alderaan and have Obi-Wan train them in the Force since their childhood. They have no real reason to separate the twins, as there are millions and millions of humans in the galaxy and the Empire doesn't know Padme gave birth specifically to a boy and a girl (it actually doesn't know she gave birth, period), so nothing about it is going to lead Vader to them. Also, by doing so, they are providing the best life possible for them and ensuring no clueless innocents like Owen and Beru are being needlessly endangered. Training them from childhood would increase exponentially their chances to survive and their usefulness to the Rebel Alliance, and would allow Obi-Wan and Yoda to avoid the mistake committed by training Anakin when he was too old and angsty.\\
'''Alternatively:''' If raising them in separate planets is really indispensable, they have a lot of options to keep them safe that way. An influential politician like Organa could not only adopt one of the twins himself, but also have some other family of his trust adopt the other and bring him up in another system, preferently one discreet like Alderaan but not a wasteland like Tatooine. Obi-Wan could still train both by seasons, possibly trading it the job with Yoda in Dagobah, and still have time to train himself to become one with the Force.\\
'''Instead:''' Organa adopts Leia and raises her in Alderaan, while Kenobi takes Luke to Tatooine and basically forces Owen and Beru to adopt him (without even changing his surname from his father's). Understandably, the latter action creates a great measure of distrust in Owen, who actively opposes Luke from having nothing to do with his legacy through his life, fearing he could become another Vader. None of the Skywalkers receives any word of the Force until certain events drive Luke to become a Jedi at his twenties and with all his own emotional baggage, thus taking a much greater risk with him than they had taken with Anakin (and Yoda of all people has the nerve to ''complain'' about this). Even worse, despite not having Leia trained, Organa still has her involved with the Rebellion anyways, which puts her in the Empire's sights without any of what would be have been her best resources advantages against it.
* A large number Most of the Jedi Knights have Order has been wiped out and the newly christened Empire sets about exterminating the survivors.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Yoda and Obi-Wan would try and make contact with other Jedi survivors, regroup in a secret location, gather up as many Force sensitive individuals as they could find, and start training a new Jedi Order in secret. They may not have the numbers and resources they had beforce, but it's absolutely critical to preserve the knowledge of the Order by passing it on. Moreover, the newly formed Rebel Alliance could surely use any help they could provide.\\
'''Instead:''' They both go into exile as self imposed punishment. While it's noble of them to admit their failures, this is of little help to the rest of the galaxy. Palpatine is largely unopposed and secures the Empire very quickly. quickly, while the Rebels can barely hold their own in a pretty hopeless guerrilla war. Meanwhile, the other Jedi are hunted down by Vader and the Sith Inquisitors without Obi-Wan and Yoda doing anything significant to impede it, leaving the remnants of the Jedi Order to wither and die. By the time Obi-Wan and Yoda decide to finally train Luke, not to mention to do something remotely useful for the Alliance, he's literally the last Jedi left (except by Ezra Bridger, who is still a Padawan, and Ahsoka Tano, who is lost beyond time and space), and the Order nearly goes extinct.



'''You'd Expect:''' Leia to go herself with Chewbacca in the ''Millennium Falcon''. The next film proves there are officers in the Resistance who should be able to take command for a short time, so she doesn't have to worry about abandoning her underlings. Besides, it's known that Luke exiled himself out of depression for his failures, which means that, by all reason, sending out people who know him well and used to have a strong bond with him are the Resistance's best asset to convince Luke to return. Finally, a wise leading general like Leia should surely know a bit about how to give some moral back to someone someone who has lost the will to fight.\\
'''Instead:''' The Resistance sends Chewbacca chaperoning ''Rey'', a random Force sensitive girl whom they barely know, who has no relation to Luke, and whose personality and experience don't look the best to bring a bitter old man out of his shell. As a result, as shown in the next film, Rey's presence is met with skepticism by Luke, creates a big deal of conflict between both (not only due to her lack of tact, but also because her pleads for Luke to train him and her absurd Force levels only revive Luke's worst fears), and actually foils things when Luke had improbably decided to help (as it turns out that Snoke was using Rey's and Kylo Ren's minds to manipulate each other, which scares and enrages Luke upon discovering it). At the end, it's ultimately more due to Yoda's timely intervention that Luke eventually returns to battle, after a long string of drama that could have probably been avoided.

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'''You'd Expect:''' Leia to go herself with Chewbacca in the ''Millennium Falcon''. The next film proves there are officers in the Resistance who should be able to take command for a short time, so she doesn't have to worry about abandoning her underlings. Besides, it's known that Luke exiled himself out of depression for his failures, which means that, by all reason, sending out people who know him well and used to have a strong bond with him are is the Resistance's best asset option to convince Luke to return. Finally, a wise leading general like Leia should surely know a bit about how to give instigate some moral back to someone someone who has lost the will to fight.\\
'''Instead:''' The Resistance sends Chewbacca chaperoning ''Rey'', a random Force sensitive girl whom they barely know, who has no relation to Luke, and whose personality and experience don't look make her exactly the best person to bring a bitter old man out of his shell. As a result, as shown in the next film, Rey's presence is met with skepticism by Luke, creates a big deal of conflict between both (not only due to her lack of tact, psychology, but also because her pleads for Luke to train him her and her absurd absurdly high Force levels only revive Luke's worst fears), and actually foils things when Luke had improbably decided to help (as it turns out that Snoke was using Rey's and Kylo Ren's minds to manipulate each other, which scares and enrages Luke upon discovering it). At the end, it's ultimately more due to Yoda's timely intervention that Luke eventually returns to battle, after a long string of drama that could have probably been avoided.



'''You'd Expect:''' Snoke to order the many Star Destroyers that follow his flagship to speed up and catch the Resistance fleet. In the improbable case the rebels are still too fast, Snoke to order any other First Order space force in the galaxy to intercept the Resistance fleet from any other direction in a pincer movement.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' Snoke to order the many Star Destroyers that follow his flagship to speed up and catch the Resistance fleet. In the improbable case the rebels are still too fast, Snoke to order any other First Order space force in the galaxy them to jump to hyperspace to a faraway point and return to intercept the Resistance fleet from any other direction in a pincer movement.movement. If not, order any other First Order space force in the galaxy to do the same.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' Yoda to use the Force to quickly pull/push Anakin and Obi-Wan out of the way of the metal pillar before turning his attention back to Count Dooku. Alternatively, give the pillar a shove so it lands harmlessly to one side.\\

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'''You'd Expect:''' Yoda to use the Force to quickly pull/push Anakin and Obi-Wan out of the way of the metal pillar before turning his attention back to Count Dooku. Alternatively, give the pillar a shove so it lands harmlessly to one side. Or, to be completely callous, ''ignore'' them and go after Dooku. This after Yoda has constantly stated that personal matters were secondary and that they should focus on the mission.\\
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* A large number of Jedi Knights have been wiped out and the newly christened Empire sets about exterminating the survivors.
'''You'd Expect:''' Yoda and Obi-Wan would try and make contact with other Jedi survivors, regroup in a secret location, gather up as many Force sensitive individuals as they could find, and start training a new Jedi Order in secret. They may not have the numbers and resources they had beforce, but it's absolutely critical to preserve the knowledge of the Order by passing it on.

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* A large number of Jedi Knights have been wiped out and the newly christened Empire sets about exterminating the survivors.
survivors.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Yoda and Obi-Wan would try and make contact with other Jedi survivors, regroup in a secret location, gather up as many Force sensitive individuals as they could find, and start training a new Jedi Order in secret. They may not have the numbers and resources they had beforce, but it's absolutely critical to preserve the knowledge of the Order by passing it on.\\

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