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* CorruptedCharacterCopy: Dorlock Holmes is clearky a SherlockHomage -- he's a British detective; his name matches Holmes' almost exactly, and he has a politer sidekick called Watkins (whose name is a few letters from Watson). He's as clueless as Holmes is super-competent, as well as being flighty and quick-tempered where Holmes is controlled. Finally, though Holmes is a jerk, he legitimately wants to stop evil and protect the innocent. Dorlock threatens a little old lady with arrest for "hawking dandelions without a license."
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* CorruptedCharacterCopy: Dorlock Holmes is clearky clearly a SherlockHomage -- he's a British detective; his name matches Holmes' almost exactly, and he has a politer sidekick called Watkins (whose name is a few letters from Watson). He's as clueless as Holmes is super-competent, as well as being flighty and quick-tempered where Holmes is controlled. Finally, though Holmes is a jerk, he legitimately wants to stop evil and protect the innocent. Dorlock threatens a little old lady with arrest for "hawking dandelions without a license."
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* CorruptedCharacterCopy: Dorlock Holmes is clearky a SherlockHomage -- he's a British detective; his name matches Holmes' almost exactly, and he has a politer sidekick called Watkins (whose name is a few letters from Watson). He's as clueless as Holmes is super-competent, as well as being flighty and quick-tempered where Holmes is controlled. Finally, though Holmes is a jerk, he legitimately wants to stop evil and protect the innocent. Dorlock threatens a little old lady with arrest for "hawking dandelions without a license."
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* GreatDetective: Dorlock thinks he's an awesome detective.
** CluelessDetective: What he actually is.
* [[HisNameReallyIsBarkeep His Name Really is Shropshire Slasher]]: His mother actually calls him "Slasher" at the end.
** And he confirmed it to Watkins earlier.
** CluelessDetective: What he actually is.
* [[HisNameReallyIsBarkeep His Name Really is Shropshire Slasher]]: His mother actually calls him "Slasher" at the end.
** And he confirmed it to Watkins earlier.
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* GreatDetective: Dorlock thinks he's an awesome detective.
detective. Unfortunately, he's rather [[CluelessDetective clueless.]]
* HisNameReallyIsBarkeep:
**CluelessDetective: What he actually is.
* [[HisNameReallyIsBarkeep His Name Really isThe Shropshire Slasher]]: His mother actually calls him "Slasher" at the end.
** And he confirmed itSlasher confirms to Watkins earlier.that his apparent title is actually his name.
* HisNameReallyIsBarkeep:
**
* [[HisNameReallyIsBarkeep His Name Really is
** And he confirmed it
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* HypercompetentSidekick: Arguably, Watkins, who is the most competent person in the short and Dorlock's sidekick. Not that he has a lot of competition.
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** At the end, the crook's mother actually calls him "Slasher."
* HypercompetentSidekick:Arguably, Watkins, who is Dorlock's sidekick and the most competent person in the short and Dorlock's sidekick. Not short. (Not that he has a lot of competition.) It's ultimately him and not Dorlock who ends the Slasher's reign.
* HypercompetentSidekick:
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* OhCrap: When Dorlock attempts to arrest a little old lady for "hawking dandelions without a licence":
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* OhCrap: When Dorlock attempts to arrest a little old lady for "hawking dandelions without a licence":licence", the Slasher recognizes her as his own mother. Given that he's failed miserably every time he's fought the Slasher, this quickly tells Dorlock that he's in trouble:
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* PunBasedTitle: On "The deuce[[note]]devil[[/note]] you say!"
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* PunBasedTitle: On The title puns on "The deuce[[note]]devil[[/note]] you say!"
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** CorruptedCharacterCopy: He's not only incompetent but flighty and quick-tempered where Holmes is stoic.
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'''Dorlock:''' Mother? Mother...(''in a terrified squeak'') [-really?-]''
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'''Dorlock:''' Mother? Mother...(''in a terrified squeak'') [-really?-]''''[-really?-]''
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''Deduce, You Say!'' is a 1956 ''WesternAnimation/LooneyTunes'' short directed by Creator/ChuckJones. WesternAnimation/DaffyDuck is Dorlock Holmes, with WesternAnimation/PorkyPig as sidekick Watkins, as they attempt to track down the notorious Shropshire Slasher.
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!!"Deduce, You Say" provides examples of:
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!!"Deduce, You Say" Say!" provides examples of:
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"Deduce, You Say" is a 1956 ''WesternAnimation/LooneyTunes'' short directed by Creator/ChuckJones. WesternAnimation/DaffyDuck is Dorlock Holmes, with WesternAnimation/PorkyPig as sidekick Watkins, as they attempt to track down the notorious Shropshire Slasher.
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-->"You'd best have that step fixed, guv'ner!"
-->'''Holmes''': Just for that, you get no gratuity.
-->'''Holmes''': Just for that, you get no gratuity.
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-->'''Holmes''':
'''Holmes''': Just for that, you get no gratuity.
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--->'''Watkins''': N-n-name? S-speak up, now, speak up!
--->'''Slasher''': Shropshire Slasher.
--->'''Watkins''': O-o-occupation?
--->'''Slasher''': Shropshire Slasher.
--->'''Slasher''': Shropshire Slasher.
--->'''Watkins''': O-o-occupation?
--->'''Slasher''': Shropshire Slasher.
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--->'''Watkins''': N-n-name? S-speak up, now, speak up!
--->'''Slasher''': Shropshire Slasher.
--->'''Watkins''': O-o-occupation?
--->'''Slasher''':up!\\
'''Slasher''': Shropshire Slasher.\\
'''Watkins''': O-o-occupation?\\
'''Slasher''': Shropshire Slasher.
--->'''Slasher''': Shropshire Slasher.
--->'''Watkins''': O-o-occupation?
--->'''Slasher''':
'''Slasher''': Shropshire Slasher.\\
'''Watkins''': O-o-occupation?\\
'''Slasher''': Shropshire Slasher.
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-->'''Watkins''': Tell me, Holmes, at what school did you learn to become a detective?
-->'''Holmes''': ''(dazed)'' Elementary, my dear Watkins. Elementary.
-->'''Holmes''': ''(dazed)'' Elementary, my dear Watkins. Elementary.
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-->'''Watkins''': Tell me, Holmes, at what school did you learn to become a detective?
-->'''Holmes''':detective?\\
'''Holmes''': ''(dazed)'' Elementary, my dear Watkins. Elementary.
-->'''Holmes''':
'''Holmes''': ''(dazed)'' Elementary, my dear Watkins. Elementary.
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-->'''Shropshire Slasher:''' Muvver!
-->'''Dorlock:''' Mother? Mother...(''in a terrified squeak'') [-really?-]''
-->'''Dorlock:''' Mother? Mother...(''in a terrified squeak'') [-really?-]''
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-->'''Shropshire Slasher:''' Muvver!
-->'''Dorlock:'''Muvver!\\
'''Dorlock:''' Mother? Mother...(''in a terrified squeak'') [-really?-]''
-->'''Dorlock:'''
'''Dorlock:''' Mother? Mother...(''in a terrified squeak'') [-really?-]''
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* AsideGlance: As Dorlock boasts of his superior physical skill while completely failing to restrain him, Slasher briefly looks at us in confusion.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Dorlock fails miserably against Slasher every time, but it's threatening to arrest the man's mother that really gets him pummeled.
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-->'''Homes''': Just for that, you get no gratuity.
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* NonSequiturThud: At the end, after Homes has been put through so much abuse by the Slasher:
-->'''Watkins''': Tell me, Homes, at what school did you learn to become a detective?
-->'''Homes''': ''(dazed)'' Elementary, my dear Watkins. Elementary.
-->'''Watkins''': Tell me, Homes, at what school did you learn to become a detective?
-->'''Homes''': ''(dazed)'' Elementary, my dear Watkins. Elementary.
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* NonSequiturThud: At the end, after Homes Holmes has been put through so much abuse by the Slasher:
-->'''Watkins''': Tell me,Homes, Holmes, at what school did you learn to become a detective?
-->'''Homes''': -->'''Holmes''': ''(dazed)'' Elementary, my dear Watkins. Elementary.
-->'''Watkins''': Tell me,
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-->'''Dorlock:''' Mother? Mother...(''in a terrified squeak'') ''really?''
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-->'''Dorlock:''' Mother? Mother...(''in a terrified squeak'') ''really?''[-really?-]''
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-->'''Homes''': Just for that, you get no gratuity.
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-->"You best have that step fixed, guv'ner!"
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* PolitenessJudo: The Shrorpshire Slasher gives himself up just because Watkins politely asked him to.
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* PolitenessJudo: The Shrorpshire Shropshire Slasher gives himself up just because Watkins politely asked him to.
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* PunnyName: "Doorlock Holmes"
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* PunnyName: "Doorlock "Dorlock Holmes"
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-->"You best have that step fixed, gov'nor!"
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-->"You best have that step fixed, gov'nor!"guv'ner!"
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-->'''Slasher:''' I promised the nice gentleman I give meself up now, Mother.\\
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-->'''Slasher:''' I promised the nice gentleman I I'd give meself up now, Mother.\\
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-->'''Dorlock:''' Mother? Mother...*in a terrified squeak* ''really?''
-->*NoHoldsBarredBeatdown ensues*
-->*NoHoldsBarredBeatdown ensues*
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-->'''Dorlock:''' Mother? Mother...*in (''in a terrified squeak* squeak'') ''really?''
-->*NoHoldsBarredBeatdown ensues*-->''(NoHoldsBarredBeatdown ensues)''
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This animated short provides examples of:
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-->'''Watkins''': Tell me, Homes, at what school did you learn to become a detective.
-->'''Homes''': Elementary, my dear Watkins. Elementary.
-->'''Homes''': Elementary, my dear Watkins. Elementary.
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-->'''Watkins''': Tell me, Homes, at what school did you learn to become a detective.
detective?
-->'''Homes''': ''(dazed)'' Elementary, my dear Watkins. Elementary.
-->'''Homes''': ''(dazed)'' Elementary, my dear Watkins. Elementary.
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* WeakButSkilled: Conversed; Holmes boasts that he can't see how the Slasher can hope to withstand Holmes' superior skill, but the Slasher demonstrates exactly how immediately: by flexing his arm to reveal a bicep almost as bit as Holmes himself.
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* WeakButSkilled: Conversed; Holmes boasts that he can't see how the Slasher can hope to withstand Holmes' superior skill, but the Slasher demonstrates exactly how immediately: by flexing his arm to reveal a bicep almost as bit big as Holmes himself.
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* WeakButSkilled: Holmes boasts that he can't see how the Slasher can hope to withstand Holmes' superior skill, but the Slasher demonstrates exactly how immediately: by flexing his arm to reveal a bicep almost as bit as Holmes himself.
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* WeakButSkilled: Conversed; Holmes boasts that he can't see how the Slasher can hope to withstand Holmes' superior skill, but the Slasher demonstrates exactly how immediately: by flexing his arm to reveal a bicep almost as bit as Holmes himself.
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* WeakButSkilled: Holmes boasts that he can't see how the Slasher can hope to withstand Holmes' superior skill, but the Slasher demonstrates exactly how immediately: by flexing his arm to reveal a bicep almost as bit as Holmes himself.
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--->'''Watkins''': O=o-occupation?
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--->'''Watkins''': O=o-occupation?O-o-occupation?
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** And he confirmed it to Watkins earlier.
--->'''Watkins''': N-n-name? S-speak up, now, speak up!
--->'''Slasher''': Shropshire Slasher.
--->'''Watkins''': O=o-occupation?
--->'''Slasher''': Shropshire Slasher.
--->'''Watkins''': N-n-name? S-speak up, now, speak up!
--->'''Slasher''': Shropshire Slasher.
--->'''Watkins''': O=o-occupation?
--->'''Slasher''': Shropshire Slasher.
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* DavidVersusGoliath: Dorlock [[LampshadeHanging lampshades this]] as he starts to take on the Slasher.
-->"You may be big, but I'm small!"
-->"You may be big, but I'm small!"