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* KidFromTheFuture: Team Paragon was originally created as an eventual plotline in a ''FireEmblemAwakening'' fic SC is writing, wherein they were the children of the Specs and Co. from the future. They have since evolved into their own entity as a superhero group who happen to be the children of the Specs and Co. from the future, trapped in the past due to shenanigans.
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* KidFromTheFuture: Team Paragon was originally created as an eventual plotline in a ''FireEmblemAwakening'' ''VideoGame/FireEmblemAwakening'' fic SC is writing, wherein they were the children of the Specs and Co. from the future. They have since evolved into their own entity as a superhero group who happen to be the children of the Specs and Co. from the future, trapped in the past due to shenanigans.
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*** She's doing the same to Cain now.
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*** She's doing the same to Cain Cain, her "kitten" now.
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** On a more lighthearted note, anything that Goddess or Syl says, and Goddess having stole the moon of Ganymede are triggers for Cain.
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** On a more lighthearted note, almost anything that Goddess or Syl says, and Goddess having stole the moon of Ganymede are triggers for Cain.
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*** She's doing the same to Cain now.
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** agig (the character) is normally an incompetent asshole. Cain is cracking down on this, and so agig often ends up suddenly bring flying towards a wall, courtesy of the Retcannon.
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** A small one in in The Marissa Games Chapter Five, where everyone forgets that Ghostie us tied up, culminating in Cain [ItMakesSenseInContext Retconning in a robotic arm to feed her popcorn].
* Goddess doing product pitches.
* Goddess doing product pitches.
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** A small one in in The Marissa Games Chapter Five, where everyone forgets that Ghostie us tied up, culminating in Cain [ItMakesSenseInContext [[ItMakesSenseInContext Retconning in a robotic arm to feed her popcorn].
*popcorn]].
** Goddess doing productpitches.pitches.
** Inexplicable things happen because [blue].
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** Goddess doing product
** Inexplicable things happen because [blue].
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* ViewersAreGoldfish: A recurring issue in riffs is that the fic being riffed will often repeat information that has already been established over and over again. This, without fail, annoys the riffer who has to deal with it.
** Fanfic/LegendaryAdventurersFuturisticSaviors has done this so many times now that SC has started a "Shit Nobody Cares About" counter for every mention of: A) how cool Alex's curse transformation is, and B) anything that has been said previously being brought back up again and again.
** Fanfic/LegendaryAdventurersFuturisticSaviors has done this so many times now that SC has started a "Shit Nobody Cares About" counter for every mention of: A) how cool Alex's curse transformation is, and B) anything that has been said previously being brought back up again and again.
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* JustShootHim: SC quickly resorts to shooting anything or anybody that annoys him in the head. If it has a head.
** Or he'll shoot something in self-defense.
** Or as a last resort response.
** ...Really, it doesn't take much to make SC shoot something.
** Or he'll shoot something in self-defense.
** Or as a last resort response.
** ...Really, it doesn't take much to make SC shoot something.
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* JustShootHim: SC quickly resorts to shooting anything or anybody that annoys him in the head. If it has a head.
** Or he'll shoot something in self-defense.
** Orhead as a means of shutting them up, getting the last resort response.
** ...Really, it doesn't take much to make SC shoot something.word, or winning a fight. Failing that, he's not above using dirty tricks.
** This is kind of standard for dealing with the DRD in the Library, amongst other things.
** Or he'll shoot something in self-defense.
** Or
** ...Really, it doesn't take much to make SC shoot something.
** This is kind of standard for dealing with the DRD in the Library, amongst other things.
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* JustShootHim: SC quickly resorts to shooting anything or anybody that annoys him in the head. If it has a head.
** Or he'll shoot something in self-defense.
** Or as a last resort response.
** ...Really, it doesn't take much to make SC shoot something.
** Or he'll shoot something in self-defense.
** Or as a last resort response.
** ...Really, it doesn't take much to make SC shoot something.
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** Thanks to Bifocals, Ghostie has her pick between a crowbar named Mr. Crowbar, or the Xenodoken Gun - a cannon which uses Xenomorphs of the {{Alien}} franchise as its ammunition.
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** Thanks to Bifocals, Ghostie has her pick between a crowbar named Mr. Crowbar, or the Xenodoken Gun - a cannon which uses Xenomorphs of the {{Alien}} ''Franchise/{{Alien}}'' franchise as its ammunition.
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** If Kitty resorts to ''gradually more '''emphasized writing''''' instead of ALL CAPS to express her rage, the scene responsible has touched the wrong nerve and she is in no mood to lighten the atmosphere.
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*** Goddess can shoot a Plasma Bolt ten centimeters in diameter through a crack only [[BeyondTheImpossible four centimeters in diameter]].
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*** Goddess can shoot a Plasma Bolt ten centimeters in diameter through a crack only [[BeyondTheImpossible four centimeters in diameter]].diameter.
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* RunningGag: Many. To name a very small collection of them:
** Herr getting tossed into the Shark Jump Tank.
** Tacosplodey
** [THING THAT THE AUTHOR MESSED UP] got broked.
** A small one in in The Marissa Games Chapter Five, where everyone forgets that Ghostie us tied up, culminating in Cain [ItMakesSenseInContext Retconning in a robotic arm to feed her popcorn].
** Herr getting tossed into the Shark Jump Tank.
** Tacosplodey
** [THING THAT THE AUTHOR MESSED UP] got broked.
** A small one in in The Marissa Games Chapter Five, where everyone forgets that Ghostie us tied up, culminating in Cain [ItMakesSenseInContext Retconning in a robotic arm to feed her popcorn].
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* StarfishAliens: Agent [INEXPLICABLE] is part of a race of Telepathic, Telekinetic floating bowls of Rose Petals.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: The Librarians are used to bad reactions by fanfic authors. However, when agigabyte left a review on Fire Emblem: ReAwakening because of a berswek button being triggered by the author saying in an AN that he'd like "a but of constructive criticism here or there," the Private Message in response was very positive, and it turned out that the fic was an old shame. The author then joined the Library.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: The Librarians are used to bad reactions by fanfic authors. However, when agigabyte left a review on Fire Emblem: ReAwakening because of a berswek berserk button being triggered by the author saying in an AN that he'd like "a but bit of constructive criticism here or there," the Private Message in response was very positive, and it turned out that the fic was an old shame. The author then joined the Library.
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** Beware, all ye who speak of swords or tactics or mercenary life around Specs. One wrong detail will set him off like a bomb.
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* CoolSword: Specs' weapon of choice is even named "Kewl Sward."
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* CoolSword: Specs' weapon of choice is a lovingly crafted and expensively stylized arming sword that was his last project as a blacksmith apprentice. By his and Goldie's explanations, it was honed as close to perfection as a sword could get for the Third Crusade. Hell, it's even named "Kewl Sward."
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** One-time guest Ethan is a doofy, grinning fool. [[OhCrap Who happened to survive being crushed by a boulder with only slight memory loss and a scar on his chest.]]
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** In a way, SC cut ''Fire Emblem: Reawaken'' short as well. He was only four chapters in before he handed it off to Herr.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: The Librarians are used to bad reactions by fanfic authors. However, when agigabyte left a review on Fire Emblem: ReAwakening because of a berswek button being triggered by the author saying in an AN that he'd like "a but of constructive criticism here or there," the Private Message in response was very positive, and it turned out that the fic was an old shame. The author then joined the Library.
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*** agigabyte ended the riff of Truth or Dare Surprise because of how boring it was.
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* EyeBeams: SC went to the [[XMen Cyclops]] school of mutant powers, and much like Cyclops himself, his glasses exist to keep his laser powers in line. (Also, he needs them to see long distances.)
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* EyeBeams: SC went to the [[XMen Cyclops]] ComicBook/{{Cyclops}} school of mutant powers, and much like Cyclops himself, his glasses exist to keep his laser powers in line. (Also, he needs them to see long distances.)
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*** It's also in a Cold War with Pantheon.
*** Ahem, the term is [[InsistentTerminology Free Trader]]
** A couple of times, agig tried to have a one character riff. It never worked, with another always writing themselves in.
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** Cain, like most, has a string response to trivialized rape, but he has an especially strong one to treating rape as anything but itself.
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** Cain, like most, has a string strong response to trivialized rape, but he has an especially strong one to treating rape as anything but itself.
*** Also demonstrating a lack of understanding of how the law works, as Fanfiction itself is considered plagiarism.
** Notably justified with agig's characters. The only things to Dual wield are robots or people of powered armor. This is because those are able to properly aim and keep the weapons stable, whereas a regular organic would be unable to hit anything.
** Goddess is a Sniper/Sharpshooter/Marksman.
*** Goddess can shoot a Plasma Bolt ten centimeters in diameter through a crack only [[BeyondTheImpossible four centimeters in diameter]].
** Dakota.
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** In the Skype Chat, it was mentioned that Goddess' Plasma Sniper Rifle is called "Eleena", after a former lover who died in the war with the Plot Contrivance Corporation.
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** In the Skype Chat, it was mentioned that Goddess' Plasma Sniper Rifle is called "Eleena", after a former lover who died in the war with the Plot Contrivance Corporation.Corporation (And was contrived to be impossible to bring back to life.)
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** Goddess is a "Supply Officer." Supplies includes the Moon of Ganymede.
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** Goddess is a "Supply Officer." Officer," not a thief. Supplies includes the Moon of Ganymede.
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* ImpossibleThief: There was [[https://literarytravesty.wordpress.com/2015/09/28/call-of-retribution-chapter-one/ an entire comment chain]] of this.
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* ImpossibleThief: There was [[https://literarytravesty.wordpress.com/2015/09/28/call-of-retribution-chapter-one/ an entire comment chain]] of this. Highlights include Syl stealing the Queen of England and Goddess stealing the Moon of Ganymede.
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** Special mentions go to SC and agig. SC has a massive number of OCs, enough that he is likely the only one that knows how many there are. Every named character agig has amounts to eighteen.
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** Special mentions go to SC and agig. SC has a massive number of OCs, enough that he is likely the only one that knows how many there are. Every named character agig has amounts to eighteen.nineteen (At the the time of writing this.)
*** As are all of the Gemini main five except for [[TranquilFury Sem]].
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** Actually subverted, because William and Shades then go into deeper detail and squick SC and Alex right the hell out.
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Many.
** The Gemini CommandRoster has Cain, Sen, and Dakota, who are pretty professional. It also includes [[SirSwearsALot agig]], and Goddess, who needs nothing said about her.
** The Gemini CommandRoster has Cain, Sen, and Dakota, who are pretty professional. It also includes [[SirSwearsALot agig]], and Goddess, who needs nothing said about her.
** While not technically siblings, Cain and agig are thus due to the former being a clone of the latter.
** Agent [[CLASSIFIED]]. She does speak, but only around other Agents and Cain.
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** Cain uses the Retcannon.
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** Cain uses the Retcannon. Also occasionally a Plasma Pistol.
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** Also, Goddess early on.
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** Also, Goddess early on. Thus was before she was fully established as an AntiHero.
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** The Library itself is also far darker than some of the more, shall we say, "family-friendly" riffing groups, such as the ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum, as the Library enjoys employing just about any humor short of racism and similar BerserkButton topics.
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** The Library itself is also far darker than some of the more, shall we say, "family-friendly" riffing groups, such as the ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum, WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum, as the Library enjoys employing just about any humor short of racism and similar BerserkButton topics.
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* {{Chessmaster}}: In a chapter of The Marissa Games, Cain showed off this, and his egomania. He anticipated Syl trying to provoke him, and played along. This, as he planned, led to Ghostie requesting popcorn, which Goddess readily supplied. As soon as she summoned the popcorn, Agent [REDACTED] stole it and gave it to Cain, as he had ordered.
* CrackFic: Garfield Effect: Galaxy Adventure. It's a thing.
* CrackFic: Garfield Effect: Galaxy Adventure. It's a thing.
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** Dakota's weakness? Orders from a superior.
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** Cain, like most, has a string response to trivialized rape, but he has an especially strong one to treating rape as anything but itself.
** On a more lighthearted note, anything that Goddess or Syl says, and Goddess having stole the moon of Ganymede are triggers for Cain.
** On a more lighthearted note, anything that Goddess or Syl says, and Goddess having stole the moon of Ganymede are triggers for Cain.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: SC had set up a story arc of sorts for his riff of ''Tales of Vesperia 2: The Blastia Age Restored'', wherein eight members of a powerful group would all sit in on his riff with him; but after shifting his riffing schedule to one riff every Saturday instead of all his riffs interchangeably every Saturday, that plotline is probably dead and gone.
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** Goddess is a "Supply Officer." Supplies includes the Moon of Ganymede.
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* ImpossibleThief: There was [[https://literarytravesty.wordpress.com/2015/09/28/call-of-retribution-chapter-one/ an entire comment chain]] of this.
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