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* FamilialCannibalismSurprise: Played for drama. Orlock tricks him into [[spoiler: drinking his wife and daughter's remains.]]
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* HighCollarOfDoom: Orlock's wardrobe. Emphasis on "doom"
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* HighCollarOfDoom: Orlock's wardrobe. Emphasis on "doom""doom".
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The story begins with Jack Price and his wife enjoying a quiet evening at home. A knock comes at the door, and while Jack doesn't see anyone, we see a [[EvilAlbino white-haired man]] sneak into the home. This man is Orlock, an incredibly powerful vampire, who proceeds to murder Jack's wife and daughter right before his eyes.
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The story begins with Jack Price and his wife enjoying a quiet evening at home. A knock comes at the door, and while Jack doesn't see anyone, we see a [[EvilAlbino [[WhiteHairBlackHeart white-haired man]] sneak into the home. This man is Orlock, an incredibly powerful vampire, who proceeds to murder Jack's wife and daughter right before his eyes.
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Has a character sheer that NeedsMoreLove.
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[[Characters/VampirePhantasm Has a character sheer that NeedsMoreLove.sheet]].
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* BadassLonghair: Jack and Orlock.
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* FourthWAllMailSlot: An animation of one done by the creators of the comic can be downloaded [[http://www.vermillionworks.com/vp/askjack.zip here.]]
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* OurVampiresAreDifferent: The vampires in this manga are rather traditional by modern standards. They need blood to drink, will burn in the sunlight, are generally evil unless turned against their will, will either keep to themselves or travel in small packs, and certain "noble" vampires, for lack of a better term, seem to be endowed with stronger powers than usual. The only differences from these vampires and Stoker's vampires are the fact that they are unaffected by crosses. We have yet to see someone try garlic on them. Eye color is also significant, to the point that vampire hunters shine special lights on people's faces to make sure that they're human.
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* OurVampiresAreDifferent: The vampires in this manga webcomic are rather traditional by modern standards. They need blood to drink, will burn in the sunlight, are generally evil unless turned against their will, will either keep to themselves or travel in small packs, and certain "noble" vampires, for lack of a better term, seem to be endowed with stronger powers than usual. The only differences from these vampires and Stoker's vampires are the fact that they are unaffected by crosses. We have yet to see someone try garlic on them. Eye color is also significant, to the point that vampire hunters shine special lights on people's faces to make sure that they're human.
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The trope descriptions were very brief, and many of the tropes were placed out of alphabetical order. The plot also needed a much more detailed explanation.
Has a character sheer that NeedsMoreLove.
* AudienceSurrogate: Topaz, who knows even less about the vampire underground than the reader does at the time of his introduction.
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* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: "Jack Price"
-->'''Topaz:''' "Wasn't your father's name Vincent or something?"
-->'''Topaz:''' "Wasn't your father's name Vincent or something?"
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* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: "Jack Price"
-->'''Topaz:''' "Wasn't your father's name Vincent or something?"BeneathTheMask: It's been suggested that Jill is not always being herself.
-->'''Topaz:''' "Wasn't your father's name Vincent or something?"
* TheBigGuy: Jack's drone servant, Vallov.
* BrokenBird: Jill.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Many of the characters have had some bad stuff happen to them, but most of all...poor Jack.
* BrokenBird: Jill.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Many of the characters have had some bad stuff happen to them, but most of all...poor Jack.
* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: "Jack Price"
-->'''Topaz:''' "Wasn't your father's name Vincent or something?"
* OurVampiresAreDifferent: The vampires in this manga are rather traditional by modern standards. They need blood to drink, will burn in the sunlight, are generally evil unless turned against their will, will either keep to themselves or travel in small packs, and certain "noble" vampires, for lack of a better term, seem to be endowed with stronger powers than usual. The only differences from these vampires and Stoker's vampires are the fact that they are unaffected by crosses. We have yet to see someone try garlic on them. Eye color is also significant, to the point that vampire hunters shine special lights on people's faces to make sure that they're human.
-->'''Topaz:''' "Wasn't your father's name Vincent or something?"
* OurVampiresAreDifferent: The vampires in this manga are rather traditional by modern standards. They need blood to drink, will burn in the sunlight, are generally evil unless turned against their will, will either keep to themselves or travel in small packs, and certain "noble" vampires, for lack of a better term, seem to be endowed with stronger powers than usual. The only differences from these vampires and Stoker's vampires are the fact that they are unaffected by crosses. We have yet to see someone try garlic on them. Eye color is also significant, to the point that vampire hunters shine special lights on people's faces to make sure that they're human.
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* VampiricDraining: This is in Vampire Phantasm, naturally.
* TheBigGuy: Jack's drone servant, Vallov.
* TheBigGuy: Jack's drone servant, Vallov.
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* VampiricDraining: This SoundOnlyDeath: Jill's first impression of Jack and Topaz is in Vampire Phantasm, naturally.
* TheBigGuy: Jack's drone servant, Vallov.hearing them slaughter an entire group of vampire hunters from behind a door.
* TheBigGuy: Jack's drone servant, Vallov.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Many of the characters have had some bad stuff happen to them, but most of all...poor Jack.
* BrokenBird: Jill.
* BeneathTheMask: It's been suggested that Jill is not always being herself.
* BrokenBird: Jill.
* BeneathTheMask: It's been suggested that Jill is not always being herself.
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* SoundOnlyDeath: Jill's first impression of Jack and Topaz is hearing them slaughter an entire group of vampire hunters from behind a door.
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* SoundOnlyDeath: Jill's first impression of Jack and Topaz VampiricDraining: This is hearing them slaughter an entire group of vampire hunters from behind a door.in Vampire Phantasm, naturally.
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The story begins with Jack Price and his wife enjoying a quiet evening at home. A knock comes at the door, and while Jack doesn't see anyone, we see a [[EvilAlbino white-haired man]] sneak into the home. This man is Orlock, an incredibly powerful vampire, who proceeds to murder Jack's wife and daughter right before his eyes.
Following a TimeSkip, the existence of vampires is now public knowledge, and Jack has become a vampire. He's followed by Vallov, his servant, and Topaz, his best friend from high school, who was also turned into a vampire against his will in an unrelated incident. They travel the landscape, living from victim to victim, pursued by Orlock.
Following a TimeSkip, the existence of vampires is now public knowledge, and Jack has become a vampire. He's followed by Vallov, his servant, and Topaz, his best friend from high school, who was also turned into a vampire against his will in an unrelated incident. They travel the landscape, living from victim to victim, pursued by Orlock.
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Also make sure to read [[http://www.drunkduck.com/Vampire_Phantasm_X/ Vampire Phantasm Excrucio]], a short webcomic which tells of most of the events during the TimeSkip, which includes how Topaz was turned, and how Orlock turned Jack, a loving and happy father, into a bloodthirsty, near-mad vampire.
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* Dystopia: Much of Europe is in a bad state thanks to Orlock and his guild, the Highgates.
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* Dystopia: {{Dystopia}}: Much of Europe is in a bad state thanks to Orlock and his guild, the Highgates.
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* CompleteMonster: Orlock, Jack's master, is by far the most evil vampire in the world. He's been systematically torturing Jack both mentally and physically into being his prime servant.
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"Vampire Phantasm" is an online comic about a group of (you guessed it) vampires and their lives in a dystopian world; always under the ominous gaze of a twisted high vampire.
Located here: http://www.vermillionworks.com/vp/ updating every Tuesday!
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This comic provides examples of:
* BadassLonghair: Jack and Orlock.
* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: "Jack Price"
->'''Topaz:''' "Wasn't your father's name Vincent or something?"
* BigBad: Maximillian Orlock.
* CompleteMonster: Orlock, Jack's master, is by far the most evil vampire in the world. He's been systematically torturing Jack both mentally and physically into being his prime servant.
* Dystopia: Much of Europe is in a bad state thanks to Orlock and his guild, the Highgates.
* EvilMentor: Orlock to Jack, much to Jack's distress.
* HighCollarOfDoom: Orlock's wardrobe. Emphasis on "doom"
* IHateYouVampireDad: Orlock and Jack's relationship is dysfunctional to say the least.
* LaughingMad: Jack is prone to this, especially in VPX.
* LivingShadow: Jack's powers over darkness allow him to become a living shadow.
* PluckyComicRelief: Topaz
* PsychoticSmirk: Jack almost always has one of these planted on his face.
* SlasherSmile: Jack and Orlock get slasher smiles when they become especially violent.
* VampiricDraining: This is in Vampire Phantasm, naturally.
* TheBigGuy: Jack's drone servant, Vallov.
* TemptingFate: Jack did this in many ways in the prologue. Leaving the front door wide open didn't help either.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Many of the characters have had some bad stuff happen to them, but most of all...poor Jack.
* BrokenBird: Jill.
* BeneathTheMask: It's been suggested that Jill is not always being herself.
* TooHappyToLive: Jack's family.
* TheLostLenore: Jack's wife, Emily.
* SoundOnlyDeath: Jill's first impression of Jack and Topaz is hearing them slaughter an entire group of vampire hunters from behind a door.
* WeakenedByTheLight: The vampires of Vampire Phantasm are the kind that burn in the sun.
* YourHeadASplode: One of Orlock's favorite things to do with his psychic powers.
Located here: http://www.vermillionworks.com/vp/ updating every Tuesday!
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This comic provides examples of:
* BadassLonghair: Jack and Orlock.
* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: "Jack Price"
->'''Topaz:''' "Wasn't your father's name Vincent or something?"
* BigBad: Maximillian Orlock.
* CompleteMonster: Orlock, Jack's master, is by far the most evil vampire in the world. He's been systematically torturing Jack both mentally and physically into being his prime servant.
* Dystopia: Much of Europe is in a bad state thanks to Orlock and his guild, the Highgates.
* EvilMentor: Orlock to Jack, much to Jack's distress.
* HighCollarOfDoom: Orlock's wardrobe. Emphasis on "doom"
* IHateYouVampireDad: Orlock and Jack's relationship is dysfunctional to say the least.
* LaughingMad: Jack is prone to this, especially in VPX.
* LivingShadow: Jack's powers over darkness allow him to become a living shadow.
* PluckyComicRelief: Topaz
* PsychoticSmirk: Jack almost always has one of these planted on his face.
* SlasherSmile: Jack and Orlock get slasher smiles when they become especially violent.
* VampiricDraining: This is in Vampire Phantasm, naturally.
* TheBigGuy: Jack's drone servant, Vallov.
* TemptingFate: Jack did this in many ways in the prologue. Leaving the front door wide open didn't help either.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Many of the characters have had some bad stuff happen to them, but most of all...poor Jack.
* BrokenBird: Jill.
* BeneathTheMask: It's been suggested that Jill is not always being herself.
* TooHappyToLive: Jack's family.
* TheLostLenore: Jack's wife, Emily.
* SoundOnlyDeath: Jill's first impression of Jack and Topaz is hearing them slaughter an entire group of vampire hunters from behind a door.
* WeakenedByTheLight: The vampires of Vampire Phantasm are the kind that burn in the sun.
* YourHeadASplode: One of Orlock's favorite things to do with his psychic powers.
