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%% * NiceHat: Charlotte has one. Tsec has donned a stolen top hat a couple of times.
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* %% * Josip and Charlotte.
* %% * Josip and [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} Tri]].
* %% * Josip and [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} Tri]].
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This fantasy story features [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters quite a lot of characters]] in both controllable and supporting roles, many of whom are contributing to or [[UnwittingPawn particpating in]] what is shaping up to be an sizable GambitPileup. To make matters [[MindScrew more confusing]], the story unfolds [[AnachronicOrder seemingly at random]] throughout [[TimeSkip multiple time periods]] at the behest of a LemonyNarrator with [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny ADD]].
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This fantasy story features [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters quite a lot of characters]] characters in both controllable and supporting roles, many of whom are contributing to or [[UnwittingPawn particpating in]] what is shaping up to be an sizable GambitPileup. To make matters [[MindScrew more confusing]], the story unfolds [[AnachronicOrder seemingly at random]] throughout [[TimeSkip multiple time periods]] at the behest of a LemonyNarrator with [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny ADD]].
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* ActionGirl Charlotte.
* ArtEvolution
* BilingualBonus: Most members of [[RuthlessForeignGangsters La Patrie]] speak entirely in [[GratuitousFrench Altaignese]].
* TheChessmaster: Tiberius, and possibly Kincaid.
* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Most obviously Tri, but Charlotte, Kincaid and Tsec all have their moments.
* CityOfAdventure: Of course!
* TheComicallySerious: [[LemonyNarrator Kincaid]] is still wearing his trademark grimace while sitting on a beach sipping a cocktail.
* ArtEvolution
* BilingualBonus: Most members of [[RuthlessForeignGangsters La Patrie]] speak entirely in [[GratuitousFrench Altaignese]].
* TheChessmaster: Tiberius, and possibly Kincaid.
* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Most obviously Tri, but Charlotte, Kincaid and Tsec all have their moments.
* CityOfAdventure: Of course!
* TheComicallySerious: [[LemonyNarrator Kincaid]] is still wearing his trademark grimace while sitting on a beach sipping a cocktail.
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%% * ActionGirl Action Girl Charlotte.
%% * ArtEvolution
%% * BilingualBonus: Most members of [[RuthlessForeignGangsters La Patrie]] speak entirely in [[GratuitousFrench Altaignese]].
%% * TheChessmaster: Tiberius, and possibly Kincaid.
%% * {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Most obviously Tri, but Charlotte, Kincaid and Tsec all have their moments.
%% * CityOfAdventure: Of course!
%% * TheComicallySerious: [[LemonyNarrator Kincaid]] is still wearing his trademark grimace whilesitting on a beach sipping a cocktail.
%% * ArtEvolution
%% * BilingualBonus: Most members of [[RuthlessForeignGangsters La Patrie]] speak entirely in [[GratuitousFrench Altaignese]].
%% * TheChessmaster: Tiberius, and possibly Kincaid.
%% * {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Most obviously Tri, but Charlotte, Kincaid and Tsec all have their moments.
%% * CityOfAdventure: Of course!
%% * TheComicallySerious: [[LemonyNarrator Kincaid]] is still wearing his trademark grimace while
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* DiagonalCut: Charlotte somehow does this with a [[RuleOfCool length of pipe.]]
* DungeonPunk
* EldritchAbomination: The Emperor.
* EldritchLocation: The house behind the sky.
* DungeonPunk
* EldritchAbomination: The Emperor.
* EldritchLocation: The house behind the sky.
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%% * DiagonalCut: Charlotte somehow does this with a [[RuleOfCool length of pipe.]]
%% * DungeonPunk
%% * EldritchAbomination: The Emperor.
%% * EldritchLocation: The house behind the sky.
%% * DungeonPunk
%% * EldritchAbomination: The Emperor.
%% * EldritchLocation: The house behind the sky.
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* TheFairFolk
* GeniusDitz: Tri is a [[GadgeteerGenius mechanical genius]] and [[TrademarkFavoriteFood loves honey]].
* GenreSavvy: Charlotte, although she has moments of WrongGenreSavvy.
* IdiotSavant: Tri again.
* GeniusDitz: Tri is a [[GadgeteerGenius mechanical genius]] and [[TrademarkFavoriteFood loves honey]].
* GenreSavvy: Charlotte, although she has moments of WrongGenreSavvy.
* IdiotSavant: Tri again.
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%% * TheFairFolk
%% * GeniusDitz: Tri is a [[GadgeteerGenius mechanical genius]] and [[TrademarkFavoriteFood loves honey]].
%% * GenreSavvy: Charlotte, although she has moments of WrongGenreSavvy.
%% * IdiotSavant: Tri again.
%% * GeniusDitz: Tri is a [[GadgeteerGenius mechanical genius]] and [[TrademarkFavoriteFood loves honey]].
%% * GenreSavvy: Charlotte, although she has moments of WrongGenreSavvy.
%% * IdiotSavant: Tri again.
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* KudzuPlot: Almost seven months in, and the plot threads continue to multiply.
* LadyOfWar: Hanara.
* MagicVersusScience: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]].
* LadyOfWar: Hanara.
* MagicVersusScience: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]].
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%% * KudzuPlot: Almost seven months in, and the plot threads continue to multiply.
%% * LadyOfWar: Hanara.
%% * MagicVersusScience: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]].
%% * LadyOfWar: Hanara.
%% * MagicVersusScience: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]].
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* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl:
** Josip and Charlotte.
** Josip and [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} Tri]].
* NiceHat: Charlotte has one. Tsec has donned a stolen top hat a couple of times.
* ShroudedInMyth: Can Tiberius see the future, or talk to birds? Who knows?
** Josip and Charlotte.
** Josip and [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} Tri]].
* NiceHat: Charlotte has one. Tsec has donned a stolen top hat a couple of times.
* ShroudedInMyth: Can Tiberius see the future, or talk to birds? Who knows?
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%% * SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl:
** *%% * Josip and Charlotte.
** *%% * Josip and [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} Tri]].
%% * NiceHat: Charlotte has one. Tsec has donned a stolen top hat a couple of times.
%% * ShroudedInMyth: Can Tiberius see the future, or talk to birds? Who knows?
%% * NiceHat: Charlotte has one. Tsec has donned a stolen top hat a couple of times.
%% * ShroudedInMyth: Can Tiberius see the future, or talk to birds? Who knows?
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* TalkativeLoon:
** Tri's main method of communication.
** Also Charlotte and Josip's fellow prisoner in ''[[LicensedGame Charlotte: Get to the Point]]''.
** Tri's main method of communication.
** Also Charlotte and Josip's fellow prisoner in ''[[LicensedGame Charlotte: Get to the Point]]''.
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%% * TalkativeLoon:
** %% * Tri's main method of communication.
** %% * Also Charlotte and Josip's fellow prisoner in ''[[LicensedGame Charlotte: Get to the Point]]''.
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* EvilMentor: Tiberius, possibly. His motives remain opaque, but he has intentionally put Josip in danger.
** [[PetTheDog Tiberius does seem worried about it, though.]]
* EvilVersusEvil: [[EvilOverlord Selmurande]] is released to fight [[OmnicidalManiac The Emperor]].
** [[PetTheDog Tiberius does seem worried about it, though.]]
* EvilVersusEvil: [[EvilOverlord Selmurande]] is released to fight [[OmnicidalManiac The Emperor]].
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* EvilMentor: Tiberius, possibly. His motives remain opaque, but he has intentionally put Josip in danger.
**danger. [[PetTheDog Tiberius does seem worried about it, though.]]
*EvilVersusEvil: EvilVersusEvil:
** [[EvilOverlord Selmurande]] is released to fight [[OmnicidalManiac The Emperor]].
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** [[EvilOverlord Selmurande]] is released to fight [[OmnicidalManiac The Emperor]].
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The Hand of the Lord Unseen sounds pretty ominous.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast:
** The Hand of the Lord Unseen sounds pretty ominous.
** The Hand of the Lord Unseen sounds pretty ominous.
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* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: Josip and Charlotte.
** Later, Josip and [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} Tri]].
** Later, Josip and [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} Tri]].
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* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl:
** Josip and Charlotte.
**Later, Josip and [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} Tri]].
** Josip and Charlotte.
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* TalkativeLoon: Tri's main method of communication.
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* TalkativeLoon: TalkativeLoon:
** Tri's main method of communication.
** Tri's main method of communication.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Tri can turn into a pigeon.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: VoluntaryShapeshifting:
** Tri can turn into a pigeon.
** Tri can turn into a pigeon.
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''The Undercity'' is an ongoing fantasy [[InteractiveComic MSPA Forum Adventure]] (a comic unrelated to ''MSPaintAdventures'' but maintaining the same "faux adventure game" format, hosted on the ''MS Paint Adventures'' forums), written and drawn by forums user Crumplepunch.
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''The Undercity'' is an ongoing fantasy [[InteractiveComic MSPA Forum Adventure]] (a comic unrelated to ''MSPaintAdventures'' ''Webcomic/MSPaintAdventures'' but maintaining the same "faux adventure game" format, hosted on the ''MS Paint Adventures'' forums), written and drawn by forums user Crumplepunch.
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\"Everything\'s Worse With Bears\" clean-up
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** And possibly a [[EverythingsWorseWithBears bear]].
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** And possibly a [[EverythingsWorseWithBears bear]].{{bear|sAreBadNews}}.
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That\'s the trope. no need for btI
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* DiagonalCut: Charlotte somehow does this with a [[BeyondTheImpossible length of pipe.]]
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* DiagonalCut: Charlotte somehow does this with a [[BeyondTheImpossible [[RuleOfCool length of pipe.]]
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* ImpossibleThief: Tsec, in spades. In his first appearance, he pickpocketed two rifles and a top hat from the [[BeyondTheImpossible other side of the room]].
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* ImpossibleThief: Tsec, in spades. In his first appearance, he pickpocketed two rifles and a top hat from the [[BeyondTheImpossible other side of the room]].room.
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This fantasy story features [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters quite a lot of characters]] in both controllable and supporting roles, many of whom are contributing to or [[XanatosSucker particpating in]] what is shaping up to be an sizable GambitPileup. To make matters [[MindScrew more confusing]], the story unfolds [[AnachronicOrder seemingly at random]] throughout [[TimeSkip multiple time periods]] at the behest of a LemonyNarrator with [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny ADD]].
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This fantasy story features [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters quite a lot of characters]] in both controllable and supporting roles, many of whom are contributing to or [[XanatosSucker [[UnwittingPawn particpating in]] what is shaping up to be an sizable GambitPileup. To make matters [[MindScrew more confusing]], the story unfolds [[AnachronicOrder seemingly at random]] throughout [[TimeSkip multiple time periods]] at the behest of a LemonyNarrator with [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny ADD]].
