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A webcomic style story written and drawn by ~Metal-Kitty on Deviantart, based on the characters of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''. After [[BigGood Celestia]] reveals what is seemingly a false alarm, the Main Six return to Ponyville only for [[TheHeroine Twilight]] to be haunted by a demonic looking foe in her dreams. After a week of sleep deprivation, Twilight turns to [[FriendToAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] for help, only to be assaulted later that night by the creature from her nightmares, later revealed to be a unicorn named Starflare. While Twilight is resting in the hospital, the plot unfolds that Starflare is after an evil artifact simply known as: “The Dark Crown”. While the characters and concepts are overall faithful to the show, the webcomic itself contains gore, violence, and even onscreen CharacterDeath.
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A webcomic style story written and drawn by ~Metal-Kitty on Deviantart, based on the characters of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''. After [[BigGood Celestia]] reveals what is seemingly a false alarm, the Main Six return to Ponyville only for [[TheHeroine Twilight]] Twilight to be haunted by a demonic looking foe in her dreams. After a week of sleep deprivation, Twilight turns to [[FriendToAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] for help, only to be assaulted later that night by the creature from her nightmares, later revealed to be a unicorn named Starflare. While Twilight is resting in the hospital, the plot unfolds that Starflare is after an evil artifact simply known as: “The Dark Crown”. While the characters and concepts are overall faithful to the show, the webcomic itself contains gore, violence, and even onscreen CharacterDeath.
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A webcomic style story written and drawn by ~Metal-Kitty on Deviantart, based on the characters of MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic. After [[BigGood Celestia]] reveals what is seemingly a false alarm, the Main Six return to Ponyville only for [[TheHeroine Twilight]] to be haunted by a demonic looking foe in her dreams. After a week of sleep deprivation, Twilight turns to [[FriendToAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] for help, only to be assaulted later that night by the creature from her nightmares, later revealed to be a unicorn named Starflare. While Twilight is resting in the hospital, the plot unfolds that Starflare is after an evil artifact simply known as: “The Dark Crown”. While the characters and concepts are overall faithful to the show, the webcomic itself contains gore, violence, and even onscreen CharacterDeath.
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A webcomic style story written and drawn by ~Metal-Kitty on Deviantart, based on the characters of MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic.''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''. After [[BigGood Celestia]] reveals what is seemingly a false alarm, the Main Six return to Ponyville only for [[TheHeroine Twilight]] to be haunted by a demonic looking foe in her dreams. After a week of sleep deprivation, Twilight turns to [[FriendToAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] for help, only to be assaulted later that night by the creature from her nightmares, later revealed to be a unicorn named Starflare. While Twilight is resting in the hospital, the plot unfolds that Starflare is after an evil artifact simply known as: “The Dark Crown”. While the characters and concepts are overall faithful to the show, the webcomic itself contains gore, violence, and even onscreen CharacterDeath.
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* BadassAdorable Fluttershy. For a shy pony, she has the courage to hit the assailant beating up Twilight with a club that she conveniently stored in her home, stand up for Twilight when she gets captured, and have a pair to beat up Starflare in a small act of revenge for hurting her friends.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Fluttershy. Sweet, gentle and extremely timid, but upon seeing Twilight being beaten to death by a nightmarish looking assailant, she snatches up a club and breaks it over the assailants head, ORDERING him to back off! Twilight then returns the favor when Fluttershy is about to get impaled for her trouble. Proved even further when she beats up Starflare when he transformed to the same nightmarish looking assailant 407 pages later.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Fluttershy. Sweet, gentle and extremely timid, but upon seeing Twilight being beaten to death by a nightmarish looking assailant, she snatches up a club and breaks it over the assailants head, ORDERING him to back off! Twilight then returns the favor when Fluttershy is about to get impaled for her trouble. Proved even further when she beats up Starflare when he transformed to the same nightmarish looking assailant 407 pages later.
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* BadassAdorable BadassAdorable: Fluttershy. For a shy pony, she has the courage to hit the assailant beating up Twilight with a club that she conveniently stored in her home, stand up for Twilight when she gets captured, and have a pair to beat up Starflare in a small act of revenge for hurting her friends.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Fluttershy. Sweet, gentle and extremely timid, but upon seeing Twilight being beaten to death by anightmarish looking nightmarish-looking assailant, she snatches up a club and breaks it over the assailants assailant's head, ORDERING him to back off! Twilight then returns the favor when Fluttershy is about to get impaled for her trouble. Proved even further when she beats up Starflare when he transformed to the same nightmarish looking nightmarish-looking assailant 407 pages later.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Fluttershy. Sweet, gentle and extremely timid, but upon seeing Twilight being beaten to death by a
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* BrokenBird: This happens to Rainbow Dash after losing [[spoiler: her good friend Twilight]] and her eyesight, and as a result her dreams and future. She gets better thanks to Zecora.
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* BrokenBird: This happens to Rainbow Dash after losing [[spoiler: her [[spoiler:her good friend Twilight]] and her eyesight, and as a result her dreams and future. She gets better thanks to Zecora.
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* DeadAllAlong: [[spoiler: Starflare is already dead. The one we see is a Changeling.]]
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* DeadAllAlong: [[spoiler: Starflare [[spoiler:Starflare is already dead. The one we see is a Changeling.]]Changeling]].
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* DespairEventHorizon: Twilight crossed the line as soon the dark crown awake and blasted her off the building. [[spoiler: She was, fortunately, pulled out of the horizon as soon Starswirl stepped in to explain what's happening.]]
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* DespairEventHorizon: Twilight crossed the line as soon the dark crown awake Dark Crown activates and blasted her off the building. [[spoiler: She was, fortunately, pulled out of the horizon as soon as Starswirl stepped in to explain what's happening.]]
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* EyepatchOfPower: Fluttershy wears one briefly to hide the shiner that Starflare gave her, further proving that she is THE BadassAdorable of the group.
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* EyepatchOfPower: Fluttershy wears one briefly to hide the shiner that Starflare gave her, further proving that she is THE ''the'' BadassAdorable of the group.
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* HandicappedBadass: Buckshot. [[spoiler: Despite his hornless appearance, he's a unicorn]].
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* HandicappedBadass: Buckshot. [[spoiler: Despite [[spoiler:Despite his hornless appearance, he's a unicorn]].
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* ItAlwaysRainsAtFunerals: [[spoiler: Twilight’s funeral was appropriately gloomy. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], as Pegasi in Equestria can control the weather, and there’s no way the others would have allowed the event to have a cheerful atmosphere.]]
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* ItAlwaysRainsAtFunerals: [[spoiler: Twilight’s [[spoiler:Twilight's funeral was appropriately gloomy. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], as Pegasi in Equestria can control the weather, and there’s no way the others would have allowed the event to have a cheerful atmosphere.]]
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* ItsAllMyFault: Spike blames himself [[spoiler: and the argument he had with Twilight, claiming it caused her body to give out on her.]] He’s wrong, but grief does that to you. Celestia blames herself for Starflare attempting (but fortunately failing) to drain Twilight’s life force to make the Dark Crown.
* KickTheDog: Starflare telling Celestia that [[spoiler: her beloved student Twilight is dead]]...in the form of a deliberately failed joke.
* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Starflare's head is blown off by Celestia. He's not coming back from that.]]
* KickTheDog: Starflare telling Celestia that [[spoiler: her beloved student Twilight is dead]]...in the form of a deliberately failed joke.
* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Starflare's head is blown off by Celestia. He's not coming back from that.]]
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* ItsAllMyFault: Spike blames himself [[spoiler: and the argument he had with Twilight, claiming it caused her body to give out on her.]] her]]. He’s wrong, but grief does that to you. Celestia blames herself for Starflare attempting (but fortunately failing) to drain Twilight’s life force to make the Dark Crown.
* KickTheDog: Starflare telling Celestia that[[spoiler: her [[spoiler:her beloved student Twilight is dead]]...dead]]... in the form of a deliberately failed joke.
* KilledOffForReal:[[spoiler: Starflare's [[spoiler:Starflare's head is blown off by Celestia. He's not coming back from that.]]that]].
* KickTheDog: Starflare telling Celestia that
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* MamaBear: Celestia is a protective mother for her entire country
--> “You have no idea what I would do to protect my subjects!”
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* MamaBear: Celestia is a protective mother for her entire country
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-->“You "You have no idea what I would do to protect my subjects!”subjects!"
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** Starflare implies this while standing in Twilight’s library [[spoiler: after her funeral.]] Then the rest of the Mane Six walk in to confront the intruder, breaking his thought process.
** [[spoiler: The real Starflare committed suicide a long time ago out of shame for his actions.]]
** [[spoiler: The real Starflare committed suicide a long time ago out of shame for his actions.]]
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** Starflare implies this while standing in Twilight’s library [[spoiler: after [[spoiler:after her funeral.]] funeral]]. Then the rest of the Mane Six walk in to confront the intruder, breaking his thought process.
**[[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The real Starflare committed suicide a long time ago out of shame for his actions.]]
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* OhCrap: A comedic version, Rainbow Dash has one when she finally pushes Applejack’s buttons one time too many. Shining has a non-comedic version when [[spoiler: Buckshot tells him the “bombs” Starflare mentioned are actually the hypnotized citizens of Canterlot…whom Shining evacuated across Equestria]]
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* OhCrap: A comedic version, OhCrap:
** Played for laughs with RainbowDash Dash, who has one when she finally pushes Applejack’s Applejack's buttons one time too many. many.
** Played straight with Shininghas a non-comedic version Armor when [[spoiler: Buckshot tells him the “bombs” "bombs" Starflare mentioned are actually the hypnotized citizens of Canterlot…whom Shining evacuated across Equestria]]
** Played for laughs with Rainbow
** Played straight with Shining
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* OwMyBodyPart: Twilight, waking up in the hospital: “Mmh…my…every-thing…”
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* OwMyBodyPart: Twilight, waking up in the hospital: “Mmh…my…every-thing…”"Mmh... my... every-thing..."
* PartialTransformation: As a part changeling, Starflare can morph and shift his limbs separately at will, even using this ability during his fight with the Mane 6. [[spoiler: He even used it to morph as Starfury just to throw off Twilight in the battle. [[BewareTheNiceOnes But a certain ''yellow'' pony punished him for that...]]]]
* PartialTransformation: As a part changeling, Starflare can morph and shift his limbs separately at will, even using this ability during his fight with the Mane 6. [[spoiler: He even used it to morph as Starfury just to throw off Twilight in the battle. [[BewareTheNiceOnes But a certain ''yellow'' pony punished him for that...]]]]
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* RevengeBeforeReason: Shining Armor admits this to Cadance after he hears about the attack on Twilight. [[spoiler: Later, after Twilight’s funeral he tries to hide it,]] but Luna calls him out on it
* ShooOutTheClowns: When Pinkie Pie’s mane goes flat, you know the dark side of the comic is in domination. Warning: Her mane goes flat for quite awhile.
* ShooOutTheClowns: When Pinkie Pie’s mane goes flat, you know the dark side of the comic is in domination. Warning: Her mane goes flat for quite awhile.
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* RevengeBeforeReason: Shining Armor admits this to Cadance after he hears about the attack on Twilight. [[spoiler: Later, [[spoiler:Later, after Twilight’s funeral he tries to hide it,]] it]], but Luna calls him out on it
it.
* ShooOutTheClowns: When PinkiePie’s Pie's mane goes flat, you know the dark side of the comic is in domination. Warning: Her mane goes flat for quite awhile.
* ShooOutTheClowns: When Pinkie
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler: Applejack]] gives what she intends to be one to [[spoiler: Twilight for faking her death and putting them through such heartache]], but Macintosh gives [[spoiler: Applejack one for not being grateful that Twilight is alive and not giving her a chance to explain herself.]]
->'''Applejack:''' Don’t make me th’ bad guy in this, Big Mac!
->'''Macintosh:''' Ya kinda ''ARE'', Applejack!
->'''Applejack:''' Don’t make me th’ bad guy in this, Big Mac!
->'''Macintosh:''' Ya kinda ''ARE'', Applejack!
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler: Applejack]] gives what she intends to be one to [[spoiler: Twilight for faking her death and putting them through such heartache]], but Macintosh gives [[spoiler: Applejack one for not being grateful that Twilight is alive and not giving her a chance to explain herself.]]
->'''Applejack:''' Applejack regrets her actions and later apologizes to Twilight for treating her coldly after reuniting with her]].
-->'''Applejack:''' Don’t make me th’ bad guy in this, BigMac!
->'''Macintosh:'''Mac!\\
'''Macintosh:''' Ya kinda ''ARE'', Applejack!
->'''Applejack:'''
-->'''Applejack:''' Don’t make me th’ bad guy in this, Big
->'''Macintosh:'''
'''Macintosh:''' Ya kinda ''ARE'', Applejack!
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* PartialTransformation: As a part changeling, Starflare can morph and shift his limbs separately at will, even using this ability during his fight with the Mane 6. [[spoiler: He even used it to morph as Starfury just to throw off Twilight in the battle. [[BewareTheNiceOnes But a certain ''yellow'' pony punished him for that...]]]]
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* DumbMuscle: [[AvertedTrope Like in canon]], Big Macintosh demonstrates that his muscles do not mean he is an idiot.
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* DumbMuscle: [[AvertedTrope Like in canon]], Big Macintosh demonstrates that his muscles do not mean he is an idiot.
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%%* AxeCrazy: Starflare
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Fluttershy. Sweet, gentle and extremely timid, but upon seeing Twilight being beaten to death by a nightmarish looking assailant, she snatches up a club and breaks it over the assailants head, ORDERING him to back off! Twilight then returns the favor when Fluttershy is about to get impaled for her trouble.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Fluttershy. Sweet, gentle and extremely timid, but upon seeing Twilight being beaten to death by a nightmarish looking assailant, she snatches up a club and breaks it over the assailants head, ORDERING him to back off! Twilight then returns the favor when Fluttershy is about to get impaled for her trouble.
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* BadassAdorable Fluttershy. For a shy pony, she has the courage to hit the assailant beating up Twilight with a club that she conveniently stored in her home, stand up for Twilight when she gets captured, and have a pair to beat up Starflare in a small act of revenge for hurting her friends.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Fluttershy. Sweet, gentle and extremely timid, but upon seeing Twilight being beaten to death by a nightmarish looking assailant, she snatches up a club and breaks it over the assailants head, ORDERING him to back off! Twilight then returns the favor when Fluttershy is about to get impaled for her trouble. Proved even further when she beats up Starflare when he transformed to the same nightmarish looking assailant 407 pages later.
* BreakTheCutie: Despite having some of her badass moments, Fluttershy also have her own fair share of moments where she breaks apart, she ''witnessed Twilight's impalement'' in front of her very own eyes, being traumatized from the experience to the point ''she had a whole nightmare about it'', she got hit in the eye by the door so hard it caused a blackeye that was there for the most of the comic, she even gets stabbed in the leg just only as a warning for walking to uncharted territory, and the situation folding around her gets more and more worse by every second. Just feel lucky she ''didn't'' snap, or go crazy at one point.
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* DespairSpeech: Pinkie, after [[spoiler: Twilight’s funeral]] and losing a fight against her assailant, goes off the deep end. Fluttershy pulls her out of it
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* DespairSpeech: Pinkie, after [[spoiler: Twilight’s funeral]] and losing a fight against her assailant, goes off the deep end. Fluttershy pulls her out of itit.
* DespairEventHorizon: Twilight crossed the line as soon the dark crown awake and blasted her off the building. [[spoiler: She was, fortunately, pulled out of the horizon as soon Starswirl stepped in to explain what's happening.]]
* DespairEventHorizon: Twilight crossed the line as soon the dark crown awake and blasted her off the building. [[spoiler: She was, fortunately, pulled out of the horizon as soon Starswirl stepped in to explain what's happening.]]
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* PleaseWakeUp: [[spoiler: Spike to Twilight after the doctors finally surrender in their efforts to save her.]]
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* PleaseWakeUp: [[spoiler: Spike to Twilight after the doctors finally surrender in their efforts to save her.her and Buckshot trying to save Starlight from her rear death.]]
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* TakingTheBullet: Seeing Fluttershy, who is protecting her, about to get impaled, Twilight jumps up to take the blow. True, she threw up a force field at the same time, but she must have known it wouldn’t last, thus positioning herself in front of Fluttershy
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* TakingTheBullet: Seeing Fluttershy, who is protecting her, about to get impaled, Twilight jumps up to take the blow. True, she threw up a force field at the same time, but she must have known it wouldn’t last, thus positioning herself in front of FluttershyFluttershy.
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%%* TookALevelInJerkass: Rainbow Dash and Rarity in the early story, but once the real story rolls along they return to normal.
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler: Applejack]] gives what she intends to be one to [[spoiler: Twilight for faking her death and putting them through such heartache]], but Macintosh gives [[spoiler: Applejack one for not being grateful that Twilight is alive and not giving her a chance to explain herself. Applejack: “Don’t make me th’ bad guy in this, Big Mac!” Macintosh: “Ya kinda ARE, Applejack!”]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler: Applejack]] gives what she intends to be one to [[spoiler: Twilight for faking her death and putting them through such heartache]], but Macintosh gives [[spoiler: Applejack one for not being grateful that Twilight is alive and not giving her a chance to explain herself. Applejack: “Don’t ]]
->'''Applejack:''' Don’t make me th’ bad guy in this, BigMac!” Macintosh: “Ya Mac!
->'''Macintosh:''' Ya kindaARE, Applejack!”]]''ARE'', Applejack!
->'''Applejack:''' Don’t make me th’ bad guy in this, Big
->'''Macintosh:''' Ya kinda
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* YourMakeupIsRunning: Rarity on four separate occasions. First, when she’s talking to Sweetie Belle after Twilight was assaulted, [[spoiler: then when Applejack tells her that Twilight died, then during Twilight’s funeral, and finally during Twilight’s wake. Twilight’s mother as well, during her daughter’s funeral.]]
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* YourMakeupIsRunning: Rarity on four five separate occasions. First, when she’s talking to Sweetie Belle after Twilight was assaulted, [[spoiler: then when Applejack tells her that Twilight died, then during Twilight’s funeral, and finally during Twilight’s wake.wake, and finally, when Twilight's friends are offering to volunteer in sacrificing themselves. Twilight’s mother as well, during her daughter’s funeral.]]]]
* PartialTransformation: As a part changeling, Starflare can morph and shift his limbs separately at will, even using this ability during his fight with the Mane 6. [[spoiler: He even used it to morph as Starfury just to throw off Twilight in the battle. [[BewareTheNiceOnes But a certain ''yellow'' pony punished him for that...]]]]
* PartialTransformation: As a part changeling, Starflare can morph and shift his limbs separately at will, even using this ability during his fight with the Mane 6. [[spoiler: He even used it to morph as Starfury just to throw off Twilight in the battle. [[BewareTheNiceOnes But a certain ''yellow'' pony punished him for that...]]]]
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** [[spoiler: Starflare's head is blown off by Celestia. He's not coming back from that.]]
** [[spoiler: Twilight is severely injured, the doctors declare her dead and Celestia vaporizes her coffin, but she was only FakingTheDead so the example doesn't count.]]
** [[spoiler: Starflare's head is blown off by Celestia. He's not coming back from that.]]
** [[spoiler: Twilight is severely injured, the doctors declare her dead and Celestia vaporizes her coffin, but she was only FakingTheDead so the example doesn't count.]]
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* KilledOffForReal:
**KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Starflare's head is blown off by Celestia. He's not coming back from that.]]
** [[spoiler: Twilight is severely injured, the doctors declare her dead and Celestia vaporizes her coffin, but she was only FakingTheDead so the example doesn't count.]]
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** [[spoiler: Twilight is severely injured, the doctors declare her dead and Celestia vaporizes her coffin, but she was only FakingTheDead so the example doesn't count.
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A redux of the first page can be read here: [[https://www.deviantart.com/metal-kitty/art/MLP-Project-001-Redux-735209893 MLP Project 001 Redux]]
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The first strip is right here: [[http://metal-kitty.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Project-Page-01-326914414 MLP Project Page 01]]
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The first strip page is right here: [[http://metal-kitty.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Project-Page-01-326914414 MLP Project Page 01]]
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A prequel spin-off, Blood is Thicker, is also here: [[https://metal-kitty.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Project-Blood-is-Thicker-01-492297314 Blood is Thicker]]
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A prequel spin-off, Blood is Thicker, is also here: [[https://metal-kitty.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Project-Blood-is-Thicker-01-492297314 Blood is Thicker]]
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[[caption-width-right:350: Your body...It haunt me...Your flesh is oh so haunting!]]
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The first strip is right here.
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The first strip is right here.
http://metal-kitty.here: [[http://metal-kitty.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Project-Page-01-326914414
com/art/MLP-Project-Page-01-326914414 MLP Project Page 01]]
A spin-off, Blood is Thicker, is also here: [[https://metal-kitty.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Project-Blood-is-Thicker-01-492297314 Blood is Thicker]]
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A spin-off, Blood is Thicker, is also here: [[https://metal-kitty.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Project-Blood-is-Thicker-01-492297314 Blood is Thicker]]
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* MamaBear: Celestia is a protective mother for her entire country
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--> “You have no idea what I would do to protect my subjects!”
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A webcomic style story written and drawn by ~Metal-Kitty on Deviantart, based on the characters of MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic. After [[BigGood Celestia]] reveals what is seemingly a false alarm, the Main Six return to Ponyville only for [[TheHeroine Twilight]] to be haunted by a demonic looking foe in her dreams. After a week of sleep deprivation, Twilight turns to [[FriendToAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] for help, only to be assaulted later that night by the creature from her nightmares, later revealed to be a unicorn named [[AxCrazy Starflare]]. While Twilight is resting in the hospital, the plot unfolds revealing that Starflare is after an evil artifact simply known as: “The Dark Crown”. While the characters and concepts are overall faithful to the show, the webcomic itself contains notable, though not excessive, gore, violence, and even onscreen death.
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A webcomic style story written and drawn by ~Metal-Kitty on Deviantart, based on the characters of MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic. After [[BigGood Celestia]] reveals what is seemingly a false alarm, the Main Six return to Ponyville only for [[TheHeroine Twilight]] to be haunted by a demonic looking foe in her dreams. After a week of sleep deprivation, Twilight turns to [[FriendToAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] for help, only to be assaulted later that night by the creature from her nightmares, later revealed to be a unicorn named[[AxCrazy Starflare]]. Starflare. While Twilight is resting in the hospital, the plot unfolds revealing that Starflare is after an evil artifact simply known as: “The Dark Crown”. While the characters and concepts are overall faithful to the show, the webcomic itself contains notable, though not excessive, gore, violence, and even onscreen death.
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A webcomic style story written and drawn by ~Metal-Kitty on Deviantart, based on the characters of MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic. After [[BigGood Celestia]] reveals what is seemingly a false alarm, the Main Six return to Ponyville only for [[TheHeroine Twilight]] to be haunted by a demonic looking foe in her dreams. After a week of sleep deprivation, Twilight turns to [[FriendToAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] for help, only to be assaulted later that night by the creature from her nightmares, later revealed to be a unicorn named
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* AxeCrazy: Starflare
* BadAss: Big Macintosh.
* BadassDamsel: Celestia. Pummel and imprison her? She’ll feign weakness until you get too close, and then she’ll go for your throat. Chain up her wings? She’ll dislocate her wings to slip out. [[spoiler: Drop your guard around her when she realizes you’re beyond redemption? BoomHeadshot.]]
* BigDamnHeroes: Fluttershy, just as Starflare is about to finish Twilight. Twilight then returns the favor. Later on, Applejack and Rainbow Dash pull this for Twilight and Fluttershy.
* BadAss: Big Macintosh.
* BadassDamsel: Celestia. Pummel and imprison her? She’ll feign weakness until you get too close, and then she’ll go for your throat. Chain up her wings? She’ll dislocate her wings to slip out. [[spoiler: Drop your guard around her when she realizes you’re beyond redemption? BoomHeadshot.]]
* BigDamnHeroes: Fluttershy, just as Starflare is about to finish Twilight. Twilight then returns the favor. Later on, Applejack and Rainbow Dash pull this for Twilight and Fluttershy.
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* BigBrotherInstinct:
**Shining Armor. In his own words, mess with his little sister and only the sound of your
**Don’t try to
* BigDamnHeroes:
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* [[BrokenBird Broken Pegasus]]: Rainbow Dash after losing [[spoiler: her good friend Twilight]] and her eyesight, and as a result her dreams and future. She gets better thanks to Zecora.
* CloudCuckoolander: Pinkie Pie, of course. Surprisingly, Macintosh has a moment of this as well. “This ain’t even mah final form!”
* CloudCuckoolander: Pinkie Pie, of course. Surprisingly, Macintosh has a moment of this as well. “This ain’t even mah final form!”
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* [[BrokenBird Broken Pegasus]]: BrokenBird: This happens to Rainbow Dash after losing [[spoiler: her good friend Twilight]] and her eyesight, and as a result her dreams and future. She gets better thanks to Zecora.
*CloudCuckoolander: Pinkie CloudCuckoolander:
**Pinkie Pie,of course. Surprisingly, Macintosh has a moment of this as well.per canon.
** Macintosh. “This ain’t even mah final form!”
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**Pinkie Pie,
** Macintosh. “This ain’t even mah final form!”
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* CurseCutShort: Rainbow Dash was going to say badass before Applejack thumped her in the chest to stop her.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Hoooooooo boy
* DeadAllAlong: [[spoiler: Starflare. The one we see is a Changeling.]]
* DespairSpeech: Pinkie, after [[spoiler: Twilight’s funeral]] and losing a fight against her assailant, pretty much goes off the deep end. Luckily, Fluttershy pulls her out of it
* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler: Bruno]]
* DrowningMySorrows: After [[spoiler: Twilight’s funeral, Pinkie]] gets absolutely wasted
* DumbMuscle: Bruno is implied to be this. Macintosh averts it, unsurprisingly.
* EyepatchOfPower: Fluttershy wears one briefly to hide the shiner that Starflare gave her. As if we needed any further proof that she is THE BadassAdorable of the group
* FaceHeelTurn: Starflare
* HandicappedBadass: Buckshot. [[spoiler: Despite his hornless appearance, he's a unicorn]]
* DarkerAndEdgier: Hoooooooo boy
* DeadAllAlong: [[spoiler: Starflare. The one we see is a Changeling.]]
* DespairSpeech: Pinkie, after [[spoiler: Twilight’s funeral]] and losing a fight against her assailant, pretty much goes off the deep end. Luckily, Fluttershy pulls her out of it
* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler: Bruno]]
* DrowningMySorrows: After [[spoiler: Twilight’s funeral, Pinkie]] gets absolutely wasted
* DumbMuscle: Bruno is implied to be this. Macintosh averts it, unsurprisingly.
* EyepatchOfPower: Fluttershy wears one briefly to hide the shiner that Starflare gave her. As if we needed any further proof that she is THE BadassAdorable of the group
* FaceHeelTurn: Starflare
* HandicappedBadass: Buckshot. [[spoiler: Despite his hornless appearance, he's a unicorn]]
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* CurseCutShort: Rainbow Dash was going to say badass "badass" before Applejack thumped her in the chest to stop her.
* DarkerAndEdgier:Hoooooooo boy
There's a lot more violence here than in canon and some of it is graphic.
* DamselOutOfDistress: Celestia. Pummel and imprison her? She’ll feign weakness until you get too close, and then she’ll go for your throat. Chain up her wings? She’ll dislocate her wings to slip out. [[spoiler: Drop your guard around her when she realizes you’re beyond redemption? BoomHeadshot.]]
* DeadAllAlong: [[spoiler:Starflare.Starflare is already dead. The one we see is a Changeling.]]
* DespairSpeech: Pinkie, after [[spoiler: Twilight’s funeral]] and losing a fight against her assailant,pretty much goes off the deep end. Luckily, Fluttershy pulls her out of it
* %%* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler: Bruno]]
* DrowningMySorrows: After [[spoiler: Twilight’s funeral, Pinkie]] gets absolutelywasted
wasted.
* DumbMuscle: [[AvertedTrope Like in canon]], Big Macintosh demonstrates that his muscles do not mean he is an idiot.
%% Bruno is implied to bethis. Macintosh averts it, unsurprisingly.
this.
* EyepatchOfPower: Fluttershy wears one briefly to hide the shiner that Starflare gaveher. As if we needed any her, further proof proving that she is THE BadassAdorable of the group
group.
* FaceHeelTurn:Starflare
Starflare wasn't always evil. He used to be on good terms with Celestia.
* HandicappedBadass: Buckshot. [[spoiler: Despite his hornless appearance, he's aunicorn]]unicorn]].
* DarkerAndEdgier:
* DamselOutOfDistress: Celestia. Pummel and imprison her? She’ll feign weakness until you get too close, and then she’ll go for your throat. Chain up her wings? She’ll dislocate her wings to slip out. [[spoiler: Drop your guard around her when she realizes you’re beyond redemption? BoomHeadshot.]]
* DeadAllAlong: [[spoiler:
* DespairSpeech: Pinkie, after [[spoiler: Twilight’s funeral]] and losing a fight against her assailant,
* DrowningMySorrows: After [[spoiler: Twilight’s funeral, Pinkie]] gets absolutely
* DumbMuscle: [[AvertedTrope Like in canon]], Big Macintosh demonstrates that his muscles do not mean he is an idiot.
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* EyepatchOfPower: Fluttershy wears one briefly to hide the shiner that Starflare gave
* FaceHeelTurn:
* HandicappedBadass: Buckshot. [[spoiler: Despite his hornless appearance, he's a
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* HeadbuttOfLove: In a flashback, Celestia nuzzles filly Twilight after barely pulling her back from the brink of death
* HeroicWillpower: Twilight. Seeing Fluttershy, who is protecting her, about to get impaled, Twilight jumps up to take the blow. True, she threw up a force field at the same time, but she must have known it wouldn’t last, thus positioning herself in front of Fluttershy
* [[spoiler: ItAlwaysRainsAtFunerals: Twilight’s funeral was appropriately gloomy. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], as Pegasi in Equestria can control the weather, and there’s no way the others would have allowed the event to have a cheerful atmosphere.]]
* ItsPersonal: Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie when they meet Starflare and Fluttershy identifies him as the one who attacked Twilight
* ItsAllMyFault: Spike blames himself [[spoiler: and the argument he had with Twilight, claiming it caused her body to give out on her.]] He’s wrong, of course, but grief does that to you. Celestia blames herself for Starflare attempting (but fortunately failing) to drain Twilight’s life force to make the Dark Crown
* HeroicWillpower: Twilight. Seeing Fluttershy, who is protecting her, about to get impaled, Twilight jumps up to take the blow. True, she threw up a force field at the same time, but she must have known it wouldn’t last, thus positioning herself in front of Fluttershy
* [[spoiler: ItAlwaysRainsAtFunerals: Twilight’s funeral was appropriately gloomy. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], as Pegasi in Equestria can control the weather, and there’s no way the others would have allowed the event to have a cheerful atmosphere.]]
* ItsPersonal: Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie when they meet Starflare and Fluttershy identifies him as the one who attacked Twilight
* ItsAllMyFault: Spike blames himself [[spoiler: and the argument he had with Twilight, claiming it caused her body to give out on her.]] He’s wrong, of course, but grief does that to you. Celestia blames herself for Starflare attempting (but fortunately failing) to drain Twilight’s life force to make the Dark Crown
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* HeadbuttOfLove: In a flashback, Celestia nuzzles filly Twilight after barely pulling her back from the brink of death
death.
*HeroicWillpower: Twilight. Seeing Fluttershy, who is protecting her, about to get impaled, Twilight jumps up to take the blow. True, she threw up a force field at the same time, but she must have known it wouldn’t last, thus positioning herself in front of Fluttershy
* [[spoiler:ItAlwaysRainsAtFunerals: [[spoiler: Twilight’s funeral was appropriately gloomy. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], as Pegasi in Equestria can control the weather, and there’s no way the others would have allowed the event to have a cheerful atmosphere.]]
* ItsPersonal: Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie when they meet Starflare and Fluttershy identifies him as the one who attackedTwilight
Twilight.
* ItsAllMyFault: Spike blames himself [[spoiler: and the argument he had with Twilight, claiming it caused her body to give out on her.]] He’s wrong,of course, but grief does that to you. Celestia blames herself for Starflare attempting (but fortunately failing) to drain Twilight’s life force to make the Dark CrownCrown.
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* ItsPersonal: Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie when they meet Starflare and Fluttershy identifies him as the one who attacked
* ItsAllMyFault: Spike blames himself [[spoiler: and the argument he had with Twilight, claiming it caused her body to give out on her.]] He’s wrong,
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Starflare]]
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Pinkie Pie dodges a Speech Bubble at one point
* MagicalDefibrillator: Which doesn't work.
* MamaBear: Fluttershy. Sweet, gentle and extremely timid, but upon seeing Twilight being beaten to death by a nightmarish looking assailant, she snatches up a club and breaks it over the assailants head, ORDERING him to back off! Twilight then returns the favor when Fluttershy is about to get impaled for her trouble. Also, Celestia: “You have no idea what I would do to protect my subjects!”
* MassOhCrap: Non-comedic version. While Twilight is resting in the hospital, the others come to visit her and she seems perfectly fine. Then she gets an expression of pure agony on her face and starts thrashing around. Cue Spike, Fluttershy, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Applejack nearly having heart failure.
* MoodWhiplash: Multiples times
* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone My Celestia, What Have I Done?]]: Starflare implies this while standing in Twilight’s library [[spoiler: after her funeral.]] Then the rest of the Mane Six walk in to confront the intruder, breaking his thought process.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Pinkie Pie dodges a Speech Bubble at one point
* MagicalDefibrillator: Which doesn't work.
* MamaBear: Fluttershy. Sweet, gentle and extremely timid, but upon seeing Twilight being beaten to death by a nightmarish looking assailant, she snatches up a club and breaks it over the assailants head, ORDERING him to back off! Twilight then returns the favor when Fluttershy is about to get impaled for her trouble. Also, Celestia: “You have no idea what I would do to protect my subjects!”
* MassOhCrap: Non-comedic version. While Twilight is resting in the hospital, the others come to visit her and she seems perfectly fine. Then she gets an expression of pure agony on her face and starts thrashing around. Cue Spike, Fluttershy, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Applejack nearly having heart failure.
* MoodWhiplash: Multiples times
* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone My Celestia, What Have I Done?]]: Starflare implies this while standing in Twilight’s library [[spoiler: after her funeral.]] Then the rest of the Mane Six walk in to confront the intruder, breaking his thought process.
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Starflare]]
KilledOffForReal:
**[[spoiler: Starflare's head is blown off by Celestia. He's not coming back from that.]]
**[[spoiler: Twilight is severely injured, the doctors declare her dead and Celestia vaporizes her coffin, but she was only FakingTheDead so the example doesn't count.]]
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Pinkie Pie dodges a Speech Bubble at onepoint
* MagicalDefibrillator: Which doesn't work.
* MamaBear: Fluttershy. Sweet, gentle and extremely timid, but upon seeing Twilight being beaten to death by a nightmarish looking assailant, she snatches up a club and breaks it over the assailants head, ORDERING him to back off! Twilight then returns the favor when Fluttershy is about to get impaled for her trouble. Also, Celestia: “You have no idea what I would do to protect my subjects!”
point.
%%* MagicalDefibrillator:
* MassOhCrap:Non-comedic version. While Twilight is resting in the hospital, the others come to visit her and she seems perfectly fine. Then she gets an expression of pure agony on her face and starts thrashing around. Cue Spike, Fluttershy, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Applejack nearly having heart failure.
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*MoodWhiplash: Multiples times
* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone My Celestia, What Have I Done?]]: StarflareMyGodWhatHaveIDone:
**Starflare implies this while standing in Twilight’s library [[spoiler: after her funeral.]] Then the rest of the Mane Six walk in to confront the intruder, breaking his thought process.
**[[spoiler: Starflare's head is blown off by Celestia. He's not coming back from that.]]
**[[spoiler: Twilight is severely injured, the doctors declare her dead and Celestia vaporizes her coffin, but she was only FakingTheDead so the example doesn't count.]]
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Pinkie Pie dodges a Speech Bubble at one
* MagicalDefibrillator: Which doesn't work.
* MamaBear: Fluttershy. Sweet, gentle and extremely timid, but upon seeing Twilight being beaten to death by a nightmarish looking assailant, she snatches up a club and breaks it over the assailants head, ORDERING him to back off! Twilight then returns the favor when Fluttershy is about to get impaled for her trouble. Also, Celestia: “You have no idea what I would do to protect my subjects!”
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* MassOhCrap:
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* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone My Celestia, What Have I Done?]]: Starflare
**Starflare implies this while standing in Twilight’s library [[spoiler: after her funeral.]] Then the rest of the Mane Six walk in to confront the intruder, breaking his thought process.
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* NoDialogueEpisode: Applejack and Pinkie telling Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Fluttershy that [[spoiler: [[TearJerker Twilight passed away.]]]]
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* [[OffhandBackhand Offhoof Backwing]]: Rainbow Dash does this during a bar fight. In a café.
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* [[OffhandBackhand Offhoof Backwing]]: OffhandBackhand: Rainbow Dash does this during a bar fight. In a café.fight with her wings.
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* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Pony]]: Fluttershy and Macintosh are the only ones willing to consider Twilight’s side of the story at first
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* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Pony]]: OnlySaneMan: Fluttershy and Macintosh are the only ones willing to consider Twilight’s side of the story at firstfirst.
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* PapaWolf: Shining Armor. Mess with his little sister and only the sound of your final breath with snap him out of his rage, in his actual words. Also, don’t try to hurt Applejack in front of Macintosh
* PetTheDog: Buckshot telling Starlight her father, Starflare, would have given anything to know she existed.
* PetTheDog: Buckshot telling Starlight her father, Starflare, would have given anything to know she existed.
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* RevengeBeforeReason: Shining Armor pretty much admits this to Cadance after he hears about the attack on Twilight. [[spoiler: Later, after Twilight’s funeral he tries to hide it,]] but Luna calls him out on it
* ShooOutTheClowns: When Pinkie Pie’s mane goes flat, you know the dark side of the comic is in domination. Warning: Her mane goes flat for quite awhile
* ShooOutTheClowns: When Pinkie Pie’s mane goes flat, you know the dark side of the comic is in domination. Warning: Her mane goes flat for quite awhile
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* RevengeBeforeReason: Shining Armor pretty much admits this to Cadance after he hears about the attack on Twilight. [[spoiler: Later, after Twilight’s funeral he tries to hide it,]] but Luna calls him out on it
* ShooOutTheClowns: When Pinkie Pie’s mane goes flat, you know the dark side of the comic is in domination. Warning: Her mane goes flat for quiteawhileawhile.
* ShooOutTheClowns: When Pinkie Pie’s mane goes flat, you know the dark side of the comic is in domination. Warning: Her mane goes flat for quite
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* TeamMom: Fluttershy, of course. Standing between the sleep deprived Twilight and her would be assailant, pulls Pinkie back from despairing insanity through kindness and calm reasoning, and stands by Twilight, listens to her reasons for what she did when no one else would, and forgives and comforts her.
* TemptingFate: Applejack. She even realizes this and attempts to subvert it: "Y'all deserve what you get-Ah didn't mean it! Ah'm very happy y'all are alive!!"
* [[TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth Too Good For This Sinful Equestria]]: [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle.]]
** [[spoiler: Subverted, she's very much alive as she faked her death.]]
* TookALevelInJerkass: Rainbow Dash and Rarity in the early going, but once the real story rolls along they return to normal.
* UngratefulBastard: Subverted, the train operator that Macintosh rescues from Bruno specifically says he doesn’t want to be ungrateful while begging them not to wreck the train.
* TemptingFate: Applejack. She even realizes this and attempts to subvert it: "Y'all deserve what you get-Ah didn't mean it! Ah'm very happy y'all are alive!!"
* [[TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth Too Good For This Sinful Equestria]]: [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle.]]
** [[spoiler: Subverted, she's very much alive as she faked her death.]]
* TookALevelInJerkass: Rainbow Dash and Rarity in the early going, but once the real story rolls along they return to normal.
* UngratefulBastard: Subverted, the train operator that Macintosh rescues from Bruno specifically says he doesn’t want to be ungrateful while begging them not to wreck the train.
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* TeamMom: TakingTheBullet: Seeing Fluttershy, who is protecting her, about to get impaled, Twilight jumps up to take the blow. True, she threw up a force field at the same time, but she must have known it wouldn’t last, thus positioning herself in front of course.Fluttershy
* TeamMom: Fluttershy is still the mother figure for the Mane Six. Standing between the sleep deprived Twilight and her would be assailant, pulls Pinkie back from despairing insanity through kindness and calm reasoning, and stands by Twilight, listens to her reasons for what she did when no one else would, and forgives and comforts her.
* TemptingFate: Applejack. Sheeven realizes this and attempts to subvert defy it: "Y'all deserve what you get-Ah didn't mean it! Ah'm very happy y'all are alive!!"
* [[TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth Too Good For This Sinful Equestria]]: [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle.]]
** [[spoiler: Subverted, she's very much alive as she faked her death.]]
*%%* TookALevelInJerkass: Rainbow Dash and Rarity in the early going, story, but once the real story rolls along they return to normal.
* UngratefulBastard:Subverted, Defied as the train operator that Macintosh rescues from Bruno specifically says he doesn’t want to be ungrateful while begging them not to wreck the train.
* TeamMom: Fluttershy is still the mother figure for the Mane Six. Standing between the sleep deprived Twilight and her would be assailant, pulls Pinkie back from despairing insanity through kindness and calm reasoning, and stands by Twilight, listens to her reasons for what she did when no one else would, and forgives and comforts her.
* TemptingFate: Applejack. She
** [[spoiler: Subverted, she's very much alive as she faked her death.]]
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* UngratefulBastard:
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* [[UsedToBeASweetKid Used To Be A Sweet Colt]]: Holy Horseapples STARFLARE
* [[WhatTheHellHero What The Tartarus, Hero?]]: [[spoiler: Applejack]] gives what she intends to be one to [[spoiler: Twilight for faking her death and putting them through such heartache]], but Macintosh gives [[spoiler: Applejack one for not being grateful that Twilight is alive and not giving her a chance to explain herself. Applejack: “Don’t make me th’ bad guy in this, Big Mac!” Macintosh: “Ya kinda ARE, Applejack!”]]
* [[WhatTheHellHero What The Tartarus, Hero?]]: [[spoiler: Applejack]] gives what she intends to be one to [[spoiler: Twilight for faking her death and putting them through such heartache]], but Macintosh gives [[spoiler: Applejack one for not being grateful that Twilight is alive and not giving her a chance to explain herself. Applejack: “Don’t make me th’ bad guy in this, Big Mac!” Macintosh: “Ya kinda ARE, Applejack!”]]
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* [[UsedToBeASweetKid Used To Be A Sweet Colt]]: Holy Horseapples STARFLARE
* [[WhatTheHellHero What The Tartarus, Hero?]]:WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler: Applejack]] gives what she intends to be one to [[spoiler: Twilight for faking her death and putting them through such heartache]], but Macintosh gives [[spoiler: Applejack one for not being grateful that Twilight is alive and not giving her a chance to explain herself. Applejack: “Don’t make me th’ bad guy in this, Big Mac!” Macintosh: “Ya kinda ARE, Applejack!”]]
* [[WhatTheHellHero What The Tartarus, Hero?]]:
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* WifeBasherBasher: Not explicit, but implied. Macintosh doesn’t like it when you attack a mare at all, let alone from behind
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* WifeBasherBasher: Not explicit, but implied. Macintosh doesn’t like it when you attack a mare at all, let alone from behindbehind.
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* PetTheDog: Buckshot telling Starlight her father, Starflare, would have given anything to know she existed.
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* DeadAllAlong: [[spoiler: Starflare. The one we see is a Changeling.]]
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** [[spoiler: The real Starflare committed suicide a long time ago out of shame for his actions.]]
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* ShoutOut: A rude Doctor with a bad leg? [[HouseMD Where have we seen that before?]]
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* ShoutOut: A rude Doctor with a bad leg? [[HouseMD [[Series/{{House}} Where have we seen that before?]]
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* [[BrokenBird Broken Pegasus]]: Rainbow Dash after losing her good friend Twilight and her eyesight, and as a result her dreams and future. She gets better thanks to Zecora.
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A webcomic style story written and drawn by ~Metal-Kitty on Deviantart, based on the characters of MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic. After [[BigGood Celestia]] reveals what is seemingly a false alarm, the Main Six return to Ponyville only for [[TheHeroine Twilight]] to be haunted by a demonic looking foe in her dreams. After a week of sleep deprivation, Twilight turns to [[FriendToAllLivingThings Fluttershy]] for help, only to be assaulted later that night by the creature from her nightmares, later revealed to be a unicorn named [[AxCrazy Starflare]]. While Twilight is resting in the hospital, the plot unfolds revealing that Starflare is after an evil artifact simply known as: “The Dark Crown”. While the characters and concepts are overall faithful to the show, the webcomic itself contains notable, though not excessive, gore, violence, and even onscreen death.
The first strip is right here.
http://metal-kitty.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Project-Page-01-326914414
A couple comments contain links to the next page, and later on, ~Metal-Kitty installs links himself.
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'''This show contains examples of:'''
* AxeCrazy: Starflare
* BadAss: Big Macintosh.
* BadassDamsel: Celestia. Pummel and imprison her? She’ll feign weakness until you get too close, and then she’ll go for your throat. Chain up her wings? She’ll dislocate her wings to slip out. [[spoiler: Drop your guard around her when she realizes you’re beyond redemption? BoomHeadshot.]]
* BigDamnHeroes: Fluttershy, just as Starflare is about to finish Twilight. Twilight then returns the favor. Later on, Applejack and Rainbow Dash pull this for Twilight and Fluttershy.
* BoomHeadshot: [[spoiler: Celestia does this to Starflare.]]
*[[BrokenBird Broken Pegasus]]: Rainbow Dash after losing her good friend Twilight and her eyesight, and as a result her dreams and future. She gets better thanks to Zecora.
* CloudCuckoolander: Pinkie Pie, of course. Surprisingly, Macintosh has a moment of this as well. “This ain’t even mah final form!”
* CradlingTheirKill: [[spoiler: Celestia, after taking out Starflare, wraps his body in her hooves and weeps for the [[UsedToBeASweetKid sweet, innocent colt]] he used to be]]
* CurbStompBattle: Applejack, Rarity, Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash had no chance against Starflare.
* CurseCutShort: Rainbow Dash was going to say badass before Applejack thumped her in the chest to stop her.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Hoooooooo boy
* DespairSpeech: Pinkie, after [[spoiler: Twilight’s funeral]] and losing a fight against her assailant, pretty much goes off the deep end. Luckily, Fluttershy pulls her out of it
* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler: Bruno]]
* DrowningMySorrows: After [[spoiler: Twilight’s funeral, Pinkie]] gets absolutely wasted
* DumbMuscle: Bruno is implied to be this. Macintosh averts it, unsurprisingly.
* EyepatchOfPower: Fluttershy wears one briefly to hide the shiner that Starflare gave her. As if we needed any further proof that she is THE BadassAdorable of the group
* FaceHeelTurn: Starflare
* HandicappedBadass: Buckshot. [[spoiler: Despite his hornless appearance, he's a unicorn]]
* HardHead: Pinkie knocks down the much larger Bruno by ''headbutting'' him!
* HeadbuttOfLove: In a flashback, Celestia nuzzles filly Twilight after barely pulling her back from the brink of death
* HeroicWillpower: Twilight. Seeing Fluttershy, who is protecting her, about to get impaled, Twilight jumps up to take the blow. True, she threw up a force field at the same time, but she must have known it wouldn’t last, thus positioning herself in front of Fluttershy
* [[spoiler: ItAlwaysRainsAtFunerals: Twilight’s funeral was appropriately gloomy. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], as Pegasi in Equestria can control the weather, and there’s no way the others would have allowed the event to have a cheerful atmosphere.]]
* ItsPersonal: Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie when they meet Starflare and Fluttershy identifies him as the one who attacked Twilight
* ItsAllMyFault: Spike blames himself [[spoiler: and the argument he had with Twilight, claiming it caused her body to give out on her.]] He’s wrong, of course, but grief does that to you. Celestia blames herself for Starflare attempting (but fortunately failing) to drain Twilight’s life force to make the Dark Crown
* KickTheDog: Starflare telling Celestia that [[spoiler: her beloved student Twilight is dead]]...in the form of a deliberately failed joke.
* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Starflare]]
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Pinkie Pie dodges a Speech Bubble at one point
* MagicalDefibrillator: Which doesn't work.
* MamaBear: Fluttershy. Sweet, gentle and extremely timid, but upon seeing Twilight being beaten to death by a nightmarish looking assailant, she snatches up a club and breaks it over the assailants head, ORDERING him to back off! Twilight then returns the favor when Fluttershy is about to get impaled for her trouble. Also, Celestia: “You have no idea what I would do to protect my subjects!”
* MassOhCrap: Non-comedic version. While Twilight is resting in the hospital, the others come to visit her and she seems perfectly fine. Then she gets an expression of pure agony on her face and starts thrashing around. Cue Spike, Fluttershy, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Applejack nearly having heart failure.
* MoodWhiplash: Multiples times
* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone My Celestia, What Have I Done?]]: Starflare implies this while standing in Twilight’s library [[spoiler: after her funeral.]] Then the rest of the Mane Six walk in to confront the intruder, breaking his thought process.
* NoDialogueEpisode: Applejack and Pinkie telling Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Fluttershy that [[spoiler: [[TearJerker Twilight passed away.]]]]
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Starflare delivers one to Twilight while she’s too sleep deprived to defend herself.
* NotSoStoic: Celestia breaks down over Twilight several times.
* [[OffhandBackhand Offhoof Backwing]]: Rainbow Dash does this during a bar fight. In a café.
* OhCrap: A comedic version, Rainbow Dash has one when she finally pushes Applejack’s buttons one time too many. Shining has a non-comedic version when [[spoiler: Buckshot tells him the “bombs” Starflare mentioned are actually the hypnotized citizens of Canterlot…whom Shining evacuated across Equestria]]
* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Pony]]: Fluttershy and Macintosh are the only ones willing to consider Twilight’s side of the story at first
* OwMyBodyPart: Twilight, waking up in the hospital: “Mmh…my…every-thing…”
* PainfulRhyme: Notably and mercifully averted, the author does a BEAUTIFUL job with Zecora’s dialogue.
* PapaWolf: Shining Armor. Mess with his little sister and only the sound of your final breath with snap him out of his rage, in his actual words. Also, don’t try to hurt Applejack in front of Macintosh
* PleaseWakeUp: [[spoiler: Spike to Twilight after the doctors finally surrender in their efforts to save her.]]
* RevengeBeforeReason: Shining Armor pretty much admits this to Cadance after he hears about the attack on Twilight. [[spoiler: Later, after Twilight’s funeral he tries to hide it,]] but Luna calls him out on it
* ShooOutTheClowns: When Pinkie Pie’s mane goes flat, you know the dark side of the comic is in domination. Warning: Her mane goes flat for quite awhile
* ShootTheDog: Poor Celestia is forced to do this TWICE. First, [[spoiler: vaporizing Twilight's coffin to prevent Starflare from using Necromancy to question Twilight]], and then [[spoiler: [[BoomHeadshot zapping Starflare through the skull]] when she realizes he's beyond redemption.]]
* ShoutOut: A rude Doctor with a bad leg? [[HouseMD Where have we seen that before?]]
* TakeOffYourClothes: When Spike tries to clarify for Twilight how badly she was hurt, he tells her to lift up her hospital gown. Twilight, misunderstanding the request, is angry and embarrassed by this, despite the fact that she doesn’t wear clothes normally. Also, as the comment section pointed out, he LIVES with her, so he’s already seen everything he’s going to.
* TeamMom: Fluttershy, of course. Standing between the sleep deprived Twilight and her would be assailant, pulls Pinkie back from despairing insanity through kindness and calm reasoning, and stands by Twilight, listens to her reasons for what she did when no one else would, and forgives and comforts her.
* TemptingFate: Applejack. She even realizes this and attempts to subvert it: "Y'all deserve what you get-Ah didn't mean it! Ah'm very happy y'all are alive!!"
* [[TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth Too Good For This Sinful Equestria]]: [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle.]]
** [[spoiler: Subverted, she's very much alive as she faked her death.]]
* TookALevelInJerkass: Rainbow Dash and Rarity in the early going, but once the real story rolls along they return to normal.
* UngratefulBastard: Subverted, the train operator that Macintosh rescues from Bruno specifically says he doesn’t want to be ungrateful while begging them not to wreck the train.
* UnsoundEffect: “Charge!” “Shove” “Twitch” “Drip drip” “Tumble” “Tackle” “Yank” “Grab” “Jump”
* [[UsedToBeASweetKid Used To Be A Sweet Colt]]: Holy Horseapples STARFLARE
* [[WhatTheHellHero What The Tartarus, Hero?]]: [[spoiler: Applejack]] gives what she intends to be one to [[spoiler: Twilight for faking her death and putting them through such heartache]], but Macintosh gives [[spoiler: Applejack one for not being grateful that Twilight is alive and not giving her a chance to explain herself. Applejack: “Don’t make me th’ bad guy in this, Big Mac!” Macintosh: “Ya kinda ARE, Applejack!”]]
* WhenSheSmiles: Even banged up and near death, Twilight is adorable when she smiles.
* WifeBasherBasher: Not explicit, but implied. Macintosh doesn’t like it when you attack a mare at all, let alone from behind
* WrittenSoundEffect: “Crack!” “Blam!” “Thunk!” “Thud!” “Wham!” “Whump!” “Whud!” all that is just during Starflare attacking Twilight. There are others after that.
* YourMakeupIsRunning: Rarity on four separate occasions. First, when she’s talking to Sweetie Belle after Twilight was assaulted, [[spoiler: then when Applejack tells her that Twilight died, then during Twilight’s funeral, and finally during Twilight’s wake. Twilight’s mother as well, during her daughter’s funeral.]]
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The first strip is right here.
http://metal-kitty.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Project-Page-01-326914414
A couple comments contain links to the next page, and later on, ~Metal-Kitty installs links himself.
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'''This show contains examples of:'''
* AxeCrazy: Starflare
* BadAss: Big Macintosh.
* BadassDamsel: Celestia. Pummel and imprison her? She’ll feign weakness until you get too close, and then she’ll go for your throat. Chain up her wings? She’ll dislocate her wings to slip out. [[spoiler: Drop your guard around her when she realizes you’re beyond redemption? BoomHeadshot.]]
* BigDamnHeroes: Fluttershy, just as Starflare is about to finish Twilight. Twilight then returns the favor. Later on, Applejack and Rainbow Dash pull this for Twilight and Fluttershy.
* BoomHeadshot: [[spoiler: Celestia does this to Starflare.]]
*[[BrokenBird Broken Pegasus]]: Rainbow Dash after losing her good friend Twilight and her eyesight, and as a result her dreams and future. She gets better thanks to Zecora.
* CloudCuckoolander: Pinkie Pie, of course. Surprisingly, Macintosh has a moment of this as well. “This ain’t even mah final form!”
* CradlingTheirKill: [[spoiler: Celestia, after taking out Starflare, wraps his body in her hooves and weeps for the [[UsedToBeASweetKid sweet, innocent colt]] he used to be]]
* CurbStompBattle: Applejack, Rarity, Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash had no chance against Starflare.
* CurseCutShort: Rainbow Dash was going to say badass before Applejack thumped her in the chest to stop her.
* DarkerAndEdgier: Hoooooooo boy
* DespairSpeech: Pinkie, after [[spoiler: Twilight’s funeral]] and losing a fight against her assailant, pretty much goes off the deep end. Luckily, Fluttershy pulls her out of it
* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler: Bruno]]
* DrowningMySorrows: After [[spoiler: Twilight’s funeral, Pinkie]] gets absolutely wasted
* DumbMuscle: Bruno is implied to be this. Macintosh averts it, unsurprisingly.
* EyepatchOfPower: Fluttershy wears one briefly to hide the shiner that Starflare gave her. As if we needed any further proof that she is THE BadassAdorable of the group
* FaceHeelTurn: Starflare
* HandicappedBadass: Buckshot. [[spoiler: Despite his hornless appearance, he's a unicorn]]
* HardHead: Pinkie knocks down the much larger Bruno by ''headbutting'' him!
* HeadbuttOfLove: In a flashback, Celestia nuzzles filly Twilight after barely pulling her back from the brink of death
* HeroicWillpower: Twilight. Seeing Fluttershy, who is protecting her, about to get impaled, Twilight jumps up to take the blow. True, she threw up a force field at the same time, but she must have known it wouldn’t last, thus positioning herself in front of Fluttershy
* [[spoiler: ItAlwaysRainsAtFunerals: Twilight’s funeral was appropriately gloomy. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], as Pegasi in Equestria can control the weather, and there’s no way the others would have allowed the event to have a cheerful atmosphere.]]
* ItsPersonal: Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie when they meet Starflare and Fluttershy identifies him as the one who attacked Twilight
* ItsAllMyFault: Spike blames himself [[spoiler: and the argument he had with Twilight, claiming it caused her body to give out on her.]] He’s wrong, of course, but grief does that to you. Celestia blames herself for Starflare attempting (but fortunately failing) to drain Twilight’s life force to make the Dark Crown
* KickTheDog: Starflare telling Celestia that [[spoiler: her beloved student Twilight is dead]]...in the form of a deliberately failed joke.
* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Starflare]]
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: Pinkie Pie dodges a Speech Bubble at one point
* MagicalDefibrillator: Which doesn't work.
* MamaBear: Fluttershy. Sweet, gentle and extremely timid, but upon seeing Twilight being beaten to death by a nightmarish looking assailant, she snatches up a club and breaks it over the assailants head, ORDERING him to back off! Twilight then returns the favor when Fluttershy is about to get impaled for her trouble. Also, Celestia: “You have no idea what I would do to protect my subjects!”
* MassOhCrap: Non-comedic version. While Twilight is resting in the hospital, the others come to visit her and she seems perfectly fine. Then she gets an expression of pure agony on her face and starts thrashing around. Cue Spike, Fluttershy, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Applejack nearly having heart failure.
* MoodWhiplash: Multiples times
* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone My Celestia, What Have I Done?]]: Starflare implies this while standing in Twilight’s library [[spoiler: after her funeral.]] Then the rest of the Mane Six walk in to confront the intruder, breaking his thought process.
* NoDialogueEpisode: Applejack and Pinkie telling Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Fluttershy that [[spoiler: [[TearJerker Twilight passed away.]]]]
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Starflare delivers one to Twilight while she’s too sleep deprived to defend herself.
* NotSoStoic: Celestia breaks down over Twilight several times.
* [[OffhandBackhand Offhoof Backwing]]: Rainbow Dash does this during a bar fight. In a café.
* OhCrap: A comedic version, Rainbow Dash has one when she finally pushes Applejack’s buttons one time too many. Shining has a non-comedic version when [[spoiler: Buckshot tells him the “bombs” Starflare mentioned are actually the hypnotized citizens of Canterlot…whom Shining evacuated across Equestria]]
* [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Pony]]: Fluttershy and Macintosh are the only ones willing to consider Twilight’s side of the story at first
* OwMyBodyPart: Twilight, waking up in the hospital: “Mmh…my…every-thing…”
* PainfulRhyme: Notably and mercifully averted, the author does a BEAUTIFUL job with Zecora’s dialogue.
* PapaWolf: Shining Armor. Mess with his little sister and only the sound of your final breath with snap him out of his rage, in his actual words. Also, don’t try to hurt Applejack in front of Macintosh
* PleaseWakeUp: [[spoiler: Spike to Twilight after the doctors finally surrender in their efforts to save her.]]
* RevengeBeforeReason: Shining Armor pretty much admits this to Cadance after he hears about the attack on Twilight. [[spoiler: Later, after Twilight’s funeral he tries to hide it,]] but Luna calls him out on it
* ShooOutTheClowns: When Pinkie Pie’s mane goes flat, you know the dark side of the comic is in domination. Warning: Her mane goes flat for quite awhile
* ShootTheDog: Poor Celestia is forced to do this TWICE. First, [[spoiler: vaporizing Twilight's coffin to prevent Starflare from using Necromancy to question Twilight]], and then [[spoiler: [[BoomHeadshot zapping Starflare through the skull]] when she realizes he's beyond redemption.]]
* ShoutOut: A rude Doctor with a bad leg? [[HouseMD Where have we seen that before?]]
* TakeOffYourClothes: When Spike tries to clarify for Twilight how badly she was hurt, he tells her to lift up her hospital gown. Twilight, misunderstanding the request, is angry and embarrassed by this, despite the fact that she doesn’t wear clothes normally. Also, as the comment section pointed out, he LIVES with her, so he’s already seen everything he’s going to.
* TeamMom: Fluttershy, of course. Standing between the sleep deprived Twilight and her would be assailant, pulls Pinkie back from despairing insanity through kindness and calm reasoning, and stands by Twilight, listens to her reasons for what she did when no one else would, and forgives and comforts her.
* TemptingFate: Applejack. She even realizes this and attempts to subvert it: "Y'all deserve what you get-Ah didn't mean it! Ah'm very happy y'all are alive!!"
* [[TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth Too Good For This Sinful Equestria]]: [[spoiler: Twilight Sparkle.]]
** [[spoiler: Subverted, she's very much alive as she faked her death.]]
* TookALevelInJerkass: Rainbow Dash and Rarity in the early going, but once the real story rolls along they return to normal.
* UngratefulBastard: Subverted, the train operator that Macintosh rescues from Bruno specifically says he doesn’t want to be ungrateful while begging them not to wreck the train.
* UnsoundEffect: “Charge!” “Shove” “Twitch” “Drip drip” “Tumble” “Tackle” “Yank” “Grab” “Jump”
* [[UsedToBeASweetKid Used To Be A Sweet Colt]]: Holy Horseapples STARFLARE
* [[WhatTheHellHero What The Tartarus, Hero?]]: [[spoiler: Applejack]] gives what she intends to be one to [[spoiler: Twilight for faking her death and putting them through such heartache]], but Macintosh gives [[spoiler: Applejack one for not being grateful that Twilight is alive and not giving her a chance to explain herself. Applejack: “Don’t make me th’ bad guy in this, Big Mac!” Macintosh: “Ya kinda ARE, Applejack!”]]
* WhenSheSmiles: Even banged up and near death, Twilight is adorable when she smiles.
* WifeBasherBasher: Not explicit, but implied. Macintosh doesn’t like it when you attack a mare at all, let alone from behind
* WrittenSoundEffect: “Crack!” “Blam!” “Thunk!” “Thud!” “Wham!” “Whump!” “Whud!” all that is just during Starflare attacking Twilight. There are others after that.
* YourMakeupIsRunning: Rarity on four separate occasions. First, when she’s talking to Sweetie Belle after Twilight was assaulted, [[spoiler: then when Applejack tells her that Twilight died, then during Twilight’s funeral, and finally during Twilight’s wake. Twilight’s mother as well, during her daughter’s funeral.]]
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