History Webcomic / Paranatural

7th Apr '16 11:10:49 AM Twiddler
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* InMediasRes: Chapter 5 opens with the activity club bursting into the teacher's lounge at lunch. It then cuts back to morning and proceeds chronologically from there.
5th Apr '16 10:52:43 AM Twiddler
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** Dr. Zarei's spirit Bagworm wants to avert this, or at least head off some potentially [[ComplexityAddiction unnecessary plotting]]:

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** Dr. Zarei's spirit Bagworm Patchworm wants to avert this, or at least head off some potentially [[ComplexityAddiction unnecessary plotting]]:



'''Bagworm''': ''you don't need to spy on him, Mina''\\

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'''Bagworm''': '''Patchworm''': ''you don't need to spy on him, Mina''\\
5th Apr '16 8:00:14 AM Lanthorn
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** Max, Isaac, Spender and Ed's spirits all have unusual speech bubble designs: [[VoiceOfTheLegion two-tailed speech bubbles]], bubbles shaped like storm clouds (with lightning tails), text fading in and out to accompany the AccentOnTheWrongSyllable, and tails with black ends, respectively.

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** Max, Isaac, Spender and Ed's spirits all have unusual speech bubble designs: [[VoiceOfTheLegion two-tailed speech bubbles]], bubbles shaped like storm clouds (with lightning tails), text fading in and out to accompany the AccentOnTheWrongSyllable, and tails with black ends, respectively. Dr. Zarei's spirit has black, wobbly speech bubbles with rainbow text; the "angel" that the Doorman speaks to has similar speech bubbles but white and with very light rainbow text.


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* PoorCommunicationKills:
** Spender keeping vital information from Isaac (or his spirit) could be headed towards disaster since it's giving him (and his spirit) a huge inferiority complex.
** Dr. Zarei's spirit Bagworm wants to avert this, or at least head off some potentially [[ComplexityAddiction unnecessary plotting]]:
--->'''Dr. Zarei''': If Mayview's chosen Richard Spender and his ''toddler squad'' as the epicenter of its latest conspiracy, I'll want as many friendly eyes in their midst as I can get.\\
'''Bagworm''': ''you don't need to spy on him, Mina''\\
''talk to him''\\
''he is still your friend''
4th Apr '16 4:27:48 PM Twiddler
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* SomeKindOfForceField: Touching the [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-4-page-44 Mayview barrier]] makes it ripple and go "zoop zoop zoop".

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* SomeKindOfForceField: Touching The Mayview barrier is barely perceptible most of the time, but [[http://www.paranatural.net/comic/chapter-4-page-44 Mayview barrier]] touching it]] makes it ripple and go "zoop zoop zoop".
4th Apr '16 4:24:08 PM Twiddler
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** Cody when he gets hit in hitball.
2nd Apr '16 1:02:54 PM angryundies
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* ContinuitySnarl: In chapter three, Issac and Max deal with a Sphinx, and Issac describes himself as a "12-year-old child." Come chapter five, which is only a few days later in-universe, he's revealed to be a 13-year-old eighth grader.
2nd Apr '16 1:00:05 PM angryundies
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* ContinuitySnarl: In chapter three, Issac and Max deal with a Sphinx, and Issac describes himself as a "12-year-old child." Come chapter five, which is only a few days later in-universe, he's revealed to be a 13-year-old eighth grader.
27th Mar '16 12:14:00 PM Twiddler
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** After Isaac was revealed to be thirteen, one of his lines [[http://www.paranatural.net/index.php?id=134 here]] was changed from "the strength and reflexes of a 12 year old child?!" to "the strength and reflexes of a small child?!"
** [[http://www.paranatural.net/index.php?id=315 This page]] originally had Max wearing pants instead of shorts, and Spender holding a walkie-talkie instead of a cellphone.
25th Mar '16 4:13:54 PM Twiddler
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* SuperSpeed: Spectrals with a spirit can use this by being pulled into their mind realm, which slows down the world around them.
24th Mar '16 6:47:23 PM 3dgar01
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* TransformationOfThePossessed: This happens to mediums over time; their physical appearances are influenced by their spirits.

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* TransformationOfThePossessed: This happens to mediums and tools over time; their physical appearances are influenced by their spirits.
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