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* WeirdnessCensor: A lot of odd stuff goes on in Metacarpolis, like the digits, but no one comments or notices. [[spoiler: Emiko moved there specifically because no one knew who she was, despite her fame in the rest of the world.]]
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* WeirdnessCensor: A lot of odd stuff goes on in Metacarpolis, like the digits, but no one comments or notices. [[spoiler: Emiko moved there specifically because no one knew who she was, despite her fame in the rest of the world.]]]]
* WhipOfDominance: Cecily Crane is the haughty and domineering [[CorruptCorporateExecutive CEO]] of [[EvilInc Doomcorps]] and she's often seen carrying a riding crop or an actual whip, as a visual illustration of her personality. Her ex-Max also heavily implies she was a {{Dominatrix}} to him when they were together.
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* WhipOfDominance: Cecily Crane is the haughty and domineering [[CorruptCorporateExecutive CEO]] of [[EvilInc Doomcorps]] and she's often seen carrying a riding crop or an actual whip, as a visual illustration of her personality. Her ex-Max also heavily implies she was a {{Dominatrix}} to him when they were together.
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She's a maid with a secret, he's an unemployed minion. [[TheyFightCrime Together, they... well, they're not quite sure what they're going to do.]] In the meantime, they clean houses in [[http://www.metacarpolis.com/ Metacarpolis]].
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She's a maid with a secret, he's an unemployed minion. [[TheyFightCrime [[WunzaPlot Together, they... well, they're not quite sure what they're going to do.]] In the meantime, they clean houses in [[http://www.metacarpolis.com/ Metacarpolis]].
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Meganekko is no longer a trope. It's a Fanspeak term. Moving wicks to Bespectacled Cutie when appropriate.
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* {{Meganekko}}: Max
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* CuteWitch: Definitely Emi's magical-girl aesthetic, with a frilly pink dress and a broomstick.
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* BrainUploading: Racha the AI was created this way from a cockroach. That's why she has those RobotAntennae.
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* RobotGirl: Racha's recovered body appears to be this, with insect-inspired RobotAntennae.
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* Really700YearsOld : Susan and some other digits are there since the creation of Metacarpolis, who happened about 400 years ago.
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* Really700YearsOld : Susan and some of the other digits are have been there since the creation of Metacarpolis, who which happened about 400 years ago.
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* SoProudOfYou: Arthur's reaction to Cecilly's corporate coup is...ideosyncratic, to say the least.
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* SoProudOfYou: Arthur's reaction to Cecilly's corporate coup is...ideosyncratic, idiosyncratic, to say the least.
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spoiler tagging a big surprise a little ways into the comic
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* DisappearedDad: Arthur [=MacCallister=], at least until he comes back and makes one wonder if Max was better off with him gone.
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* DisappearedDad: Arthur [=MacCallister=], at Max's father. [[spoiler:At least until he comes back and makes one back; wonder if Max was better off with him gone.gone?]]
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She's a maid with a secret, he's an unemployed minion. [[TogetherTheyFightCrime Together, they... well, they're not quite sure what they're going to do.]] In the meantime, they clean houses in [[http://www.metacarpolis.com/ Metacarpolis]].
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She's a maid with a secret, he's an unemployed minion. [[TogetherTheyFightCrime [[TheyFightCrime Together, they... well, they're not quite sure what they're going to do.]] In the meantime, they clean houses in [[http://www.metacarpolis.com/ Metacarpolis]].
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She's a maid with a secret, he's an unemployed minion. [[TogtherTheyFightCrime Together, they... well, they're not quite sure what they're going to do.]] In the meantime, they clean houses in [[http://www.metacarpolis.com/ Metacarpolis]].
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She's a maid with a secret, he's an unemployed minion. [[TogtherTheyFightCrime [[TogetherTheyFightCrime Together, they... well, they're not quite sure what they're going to do.]] In the meantime, they clean houses in [[http://www.metacarpolis.com/ Metacarpolis]].
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She's a maid with a secret, he's an unemployed minion. [[TogtherTheyFightCrime Together, they... well, they're not quite sure what they're going to do. ]] In the meantime, they clean houses in [[http://www.metacarpolis.com/ Metacarpolis]].
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* ButNotTooForeign: Emi was raised in a bilingual home, and apparently speaks accentless English, since Max thought she was a local until she told him otherwise.
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* ButNotTooForeign: Emi was raised in a bilingual home, home and apparently speaks accentless English, since Max thought she was a local until she told him otherwise.otherwise. A filler page later reveals Emi's father is Japanese and her mother is Korean.
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* ObfuscatingDisability: Becca wears a fake sling on her arm when she accompanies Marcus to Emi's apartment after their back alley encounter. Not only is it on the wrong arm (to make Emi think she's hurt worse than she is and to camouflage the one Emi actually hit with her baton) she conceals a pistol in it.
* Really700YearsOld : Susan and some other digits are there since the creation of Metacarpolis, who happenend about 400 years ago.
* Really700YearsOld : Susan and some other digits are there since the creation of Metacarpolis, who happenend about 400 years ago.
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* ObfuscatingDisability: Becca wears a fake sling on her arm to make Emi think she's hurt worse than she is when she accompanies Marcus to Emi's apartment after their back alley encounter. Not only is it on the wrong arm (to make Emi think she's hurt worse than she is and to camouflage the one Emi actually hit with her baton) she conceals a pistol in it.
* Really700YearsOld : Susan and some other digits are there since the creation of Metacarpolis, whohappenend happened about 400 years ago.
* Really700YearsOld : Susan and some other digits are there since the creation of Metacarpolis, who
