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* BonusMaterial: The [[http://kaspall.com/miscbox/miscbox.html Misc. Box.]]
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* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Caroline can't bring herself to finish off [[spoiler:Katherine]], even after what the latter did to Caroline's [[spoiler:parents]]. Once Caroline decides to spare her enemy's life, along comes [[spoiler:the Veritarc]], who has its beef with [[spoiler:Katherine]], to do the job instead.
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* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Caroline can't bring herself to finish off [[spoiler:Katherine]], even after what the latter did to Caroline's [[spoiler:parents]]. Once Caroline decides to spare her enemy's life, along comes [[spoiler:the Veritarc]], who has its own beef with [[spoiler:Katherine]], to do the job instead.
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*OminousWalk: the [[HumanoidAbomination Veritarc]] follows its victims at a slow, relentless stroll, accompanied by the ''tap! tap! tap!'' of its gnarled walking stick.
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* AmbiguousGender: The Captain is an androgynous [[PettingZooPeople bipedal rat]], and has never found it necessary to specify plumbing or pronouns on-screen. ([[http://kaspall.com/comic/2014/07/20#IDComment856386970 As the author put it in the comments:]] "[[ShrugOfGod Feel free to assign [the Captain's gender/sex] as you like, as it has no bearing on this story whatsoever.]]")
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* AmbiguousGender: The Captain is an androgynous [[PettingZooPeople [[RatMen bipedal rat]], and has never found it necessary to specify plumbing or pronouns on-screen. ([[http://kaspall.com/comic/2014/07/20#IDComment856386970 As the author put it in the comments:]] "[[ShrugOfGod Feel free to assign [the Captain's gender/sex] as you like, as it has no bearing on this story whatsoever.]]")
* BeastMan: A major fraction of the Kaspall population, including most of the main characters.
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* PettingZooPeople: A major fraction of the Kaspall population, including most of the main characters.
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* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Caroline can't bring herself to finish off [[spoiler:Katherine]], even after what the latter did to Caroline's [[spoiler:parents]]. Once Caroline decides to spare her enemy's life, along comes [[spoiler:the Veritarc]], who has its beef with [[spoiler:Katherine]], to do the job instead.
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italics for work names
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Kaspall is a {{fantasy}} [[MysteryFiction murder mystery]] {{webcomic}} written and drawn by Lucy Lyall that started in 2005 and finished in 2015.
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* ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne:
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* ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne:ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne: After [[http://www.kaspall.com/comic/2009/11/08 Caroline and Claudia tell their story]] of [[spoiler:visiting the study site]]:
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Spoilertagging; new trope.
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* IHateYouVampireDad: Caroline hates [[spoiler:Katherine Ulfor]], who turned her parents into [[OurWerewolvesAreDifferent werewolves]] who went crazy from it and infected her in turn.
-->'''Caroline:''' How about it, ''Grandma?'' I think you owe me some blood.
-->'''Caroline:''' How about it, ''Grandma?'' I think you owe me some blood.
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* IHateYouVampireDad: Caroline [[spoiler:Caroline]] hates [[spoiler:Katherine Ulfor]], who turned her parents into [[OurWerewolvesAreDifferent werewolves]] who went crazy from it and infected her in turn.
-->'''Caroline:''' -->'''[[spoiler:Caroline]]:''' How about it, ''Grandma?'' I think you owe me some blood.blood.
* ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne:
-->'''Jaiva:''' What's ''wrong?'' You're untrained and you've got no talent! You're a bloody ''civilian!''\\
'''Claudia:''' ... I'm not ''civil.''
* ITakeOffenseToThatLastOne:
-->'''Jaiva:''' What's ''wrong?'' You're untrained and you've got no talent! You're a bloody ''civilian!''\\
'''Claudia:''' ... I'm not ''civil.''
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Rereading the comic now that it\'s done. :D
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* {{Magitek}}: Mirrors are used like phones, with [[http://www.kaspall.com/comic/2006/08/05 operators]].
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* {{Magitek}}: {{Magitek}}:
** Mirrors are used like phones, with [[http://www.kaspall.com/comic/2006/08/05operators]].operators]].
** Sam's GlassEye [[http://www.kaspall.com/comic/2008/06/05 has a night-vision mode and a subscription service to unlock additional features.]]
** Mirrors are used like phones, with [[http://www.kaspall.com/comic/2006/08/05
** Sam's GlassEye [[http://www.kaspall.com/comic/2008/06/05 has a night-vision mode and a subscription service to unlock additional features.]]
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Editing now that the comic\'s over.
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(As of Scene 30, the webcomic is nearing its conclusion -- the artist has already begun a second project, titled ''Webcomic/SpareKeysForStrangeDoors''.)
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Complete!
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Kaspall is a {{fantasy}} [[MysteryFiction murder mystery]] {{webcomic}} written and drawn by Lucy Lyall that started in 2005.
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Kaspall is a {{fantasy}} [[MysteryFiction murder mystery]] {{webcomic}} written and drawn by Lucy Lyall that started in 2005.2005 and finished in 2015.
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Shrinking the spoiler slightly.
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** The OWR, which [[spoiler:[[http://kaspall.com/comic/2011/05/29.html handed a dangerous artifact back to Alex]] rather than [[http://kaspall.com/comic/2011/06/03.html put it in their safe]] because they had no clue about it.]]
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** The OWR, which [[spoiler:[[http://kaspall.com/comic/2011/05/29.html handed a dangerous artifact back to Alex]] rather than [[http://kaspall.com/comic/2011/06/03.html put it in their safe]] safe]]]] because they had no clue about it.]]
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** On [[http://www.kaspall.com/comic/2012/09/10 this page]], in which [[spoiler:Katherine Ulfor]] is convinced that everyone is conspiring against her together: "[[Franchise/CarryOn Infamy! Infamy! They've all got it in for me!]]"[[note]]Specifically, this is a quote from ''Carry On Cleo''.[[/note]]
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** On [[http://www.kaspall.com/comic/2012/09/10 this page]], in which [[spoiler:Katherine Ulfor]] is convinced that everyone is conspiring against her together: "[[Franchise/CarryOn "[[Film/CarryOn Infamy! Infamy! They've all got it in for me!]]"[[note]]Specifically, this is a quote from ''Carry On Cleo''.''Film/CarryOnCleo''.[[/note]]
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*IHateYouVampireDad: Caroline hates [[spoiler:Katherine Ulfor]], who turned her parents into [[OurWerewolvesAreDifferent werewolves]] who went crazy from it and infected her in turn.
-->'''Caroline:''' How about it, ''Grandma?'' I think you owe me some blood.
-->'''Caroline:''' How about it, ''Grandma?'' I think you owe me some blood.
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Yanking pronouns, per Word Of God. :P
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: The Captain. The only thing that hints at as much as her ''gender'' is half a [[MagicMirror not-telephone]] conversation between [[http://kaspall.com/comic/2005/05/12.html Hazel and Avril]] -- and even that got the ShrugOfGod before the end of the comic:
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: The Captain. The only thing that hints at as much as her ''gender'' is half a [[MagicMirror not-telephone]] conversation between [[http://kaspall.com/comic/2005/05/12.html Hazel and Avril]] -- and even that got the ShrugOfGod before the end of the comic:
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* NotSoStoic: The Captain is pretty much unfazed by everything that occurs -- right up to [[http://kaspall.com/comic/2011/08/14.html the point in Scene 26]] where [[spoiler:she discovers the Ulfor have started kidnapping people by the dozen right off the streets]].
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* NotSoStoic: The Captain is pretty much unfazed by everything that occurs -- right up to [[http://kaspall.com/comic/2011/08/14.html the point in Scene 26]] where [[spoiler:she discovers [[spoiler:the police discover that the Ulfor have started kidnapping people by the dozen right off the streets]].
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Around the time this story begins, [[TwoLinesNoWaiting several events are occurring in tandem]]: a new off-worlder by the name of Alex Gray is being processed by the O.W.R. ("Off-Worlder Registration"); a student psychomantic (mind-mage) named Caroline is doing a field project at the Skein Institute for Professor Jaiva; the Captain and Lieutenant de Montfort ("Call me Harry. ''Please''.") are investigating a curious series of murders; and, in a small Greenacre Street apartment building, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Sam Goldbourne is behind on his rent]]. Oh, and [[ThirdLineSomeWaiting something odd is happening at a certain mysterious estate]].
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Around the time this story begins, [[TwoLinesNoWaiting several events are occurring in tandem]]: a new off-worlder by the name of Alex Gray is being processed by the O.W.R. ("Off-Worlder Registration"); a student psychomantic (mind-mage) named Caroline is doing a field project at the Skein Institute for Professor Jaiva; the Captain and Lieutenant de Montfort ("Call me Harry. ''Please''.") are investigating a curious series of murders; and, in a Hazel Karswell's small Greenacre Street apartment building, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Sam Goldbourne is has fallen behind on paying his rent]]. Oh, and [[ThirdLineSomeWaiting something odd is happening at a certain mysterious estate]].
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* AmbiguousGender: The Captain is an androgynous [[PettingZooPeople bipedal rat]], and has never found it necessary to specify plumbing or pronouns on-screen. ([[http://kaspall.com/comic/2014/07/20#IDComment856386970 As the author put it in the comments:]] "[[ShrugOfGod Feel free to assign [the Captain's gender/sex] as you like, as it has no bearing on this story whatsoever.]]")
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: The Captain. The only thing that hints at as much as her ''gender'' is half a not-telephone conversation between [[http://kaspall.com/comic/2005/05/12.html Hazel and Avril]].
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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: The Captain. The only thing that hints at as much as her ''gender'' is half a not-telephone [[MagicMirror not-telephone]] conversation between [[http://kaspall.com/comic/2005/05/12.html Hazel and Avril]].Avril]] -- and even that got the ShrugOfGod before the end of the comic:
-->'''[[http://kaspall.com/comic/2014/07/20#IDComment856386970 4LS:]]''' The fact that the Captain's gender / sex was undefined kind of became a character point in my head. Which is not to say that Captain doesn't HAVE one. Just that I hadn't been given that information - much like I don't know what Claudia's Mum's name is, or exactly which part of the UK Alex is actually from.
-->'''[[http://kaspall.com/comic/2014/07/20#IDComment856386970 4LS:]]''' The fact that the Captain's gender / sex was undefined kind of became a character point in my head. Which is not to say that Captain doesn't HAVE one. Just that I hadn't been given that information - much like I don't know what Claudia's Mum's name is, or exactly which part of the UK Alex is actually from.
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* KnightInSourArmor: Sam Gouldborne, [[http://kaspall.com/comic/2012/02/12.html to the astonishment of people who know of him as "the jerk who never pays his rent"]] -- although as a {{Non-Action|Guy}} [[BurgerFool Cafe Pot-wash]] he can't actually accomplish much more than getting himself beat up.
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* KnightInSourArmor: Sam Gouldborne, [[http://kaspall.com/comic/2012/02/12.html to the astonishment of people who know of him as "the jerk who never pays his rent"]] -- although as a {{Non-Action|Guy}} [[NonActionGuy Non-Action]] [[BurgerFool Cafe Pot-wash]] he can't actually accomplish much more than getting himself beat up.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler: Beatrice delivers one to [[http://www.kaspall.com/comic/2012/03/11 her insane sister]], to distract her long enough for Sam to free Hazel and allow their escape.]]
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* ElectronicEyes: One of Sam's eyes is a removable prosthetic, that occasionally bugs him about renewing his subscription.
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* ElectronicEyes: One of Sam's eyes is a removable prosthetic, that occasionally bugs him about renewing his subscription. [[http://www.kaspall.com/comic/2010/06/27 Useful for peering around corners though]].
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* AlternateUniverse: Kaspall is filled with people from alternate universes, a lot of humans for some reason, though the only one who might be from Earth is Alex.
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* ElectronicEyes: One of Sam's eyes is a removable prosthetic, that occasionally bugs him about renewing his subscription.
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* {{Magitek}}: Mirrors are used like phones, with [[http://www.kaspall.com/comic/2006/08/05 operators]].
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* PortalCrossroadWorld: The city of Kaspall, unfortunately the portals that lead to other worlds are too unstable for the Off-Worlders to find a way home. There is however a PortalNetwork through the Skein that goes within the city.