Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 45 (click to see context) from:
* DemotedToExtra: HB, CD, and Jack Noir (''especially'' Jack Noir) are pretty much sidelined by DD, who [[spoiler: becomes a DragonAscendent and takes over Dorsepit]]. It also helps that all three were [[spoiler: killed pretty quickly during their final battle with DD, not even being able to get revenge by getting the killing blow]].
to:
* DemotedToExtra: HB, CD, and Jack Noir (''especially'' Jack Noir) are pretty much sidelined by DD, who [[spoiler: becomes a DragonAscendent DragonAscendant and takes over Dorsepit]]. It also helps that all three were [[spoiler: killed pretty quickly during their final battle with DD, not even being able to get revenge by getting the killing blow]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 45 (click to see context) from:
* DemotedToExtra: HB, CD, and Jack Noir (''especially'' Jack Noir) are pretty much sidelined by DD, who [[spoiler: becomes a DragonAscendent and takes over Dorsepit]]. It also helps that all three were [[spoiler: were killed pretty quickly during their final battle with DD, not even being able to get revenge by getting the killing blow]].
to:
* DemotedToExtra: HB, CD, and Jack Noir (''especially'' Jack Noir) are pretty much sidelined by DD, who [[spoiler: becomes a DragonAscendent and takes over Dorsepit]]. It also helps that all three were [[spoiler: were killed pretty quickly during their final battle with DD, not even being able to get revenge by getting the killing blow]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 45 (click to see context) from:
* DemotedToExtra: HB, CD, and Jack Noir(''especially'' Jack Nor)) are pretty much sidelined by DD, who [[spoiler: becomes a DragonAscendent and takes over Dorsepit]]. It also helps that all three were [[spoiler: were killed pretty quickly during their final battle with DD, not even being able to get revenge by getting the killing blow]].
to:
* DemotedToExtra: HB, CD, and Jack Noir(''especially'' Noir (''especially'' Jack Nor)) Noir) are pretty much sidelined by DD, who [[spoiler: becomes a DragonAscendent and takes over Dorsepit]]. It also helps that all three were [[spoiler: were killed pretty quickly during their final battle with DD, not even being able to get revenge by getting the killing blow]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* DemotedToExtra: HB, CD, and Jack Noir(''especially'' Jack Nor)) are pretty much sidelined by DD, who [[spoiler: becomes a DragonAscendent and takes over Dorsepit]]. It also helps that all three were [[spoiler: were killed pretty quickly during their final battle with DD, not even being able to get revenge by getting the killing blow]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* NoEnding: [[spoiler: Just as Viy possess Kroblanco, and all the kids, Sunnydale characters, and Phoinexes get ready to confront and defeat him, combined with ''two'' HumongousMecha for both sides... the series is [[CutShort abruptly cancelled, leaving absolutely no resolution for the comic, it's characters, and the world at stake]]]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 148 (click to see context) from:
* {{Ultraterrestrials}}: While the phoenixs seem like aliens at first, [[spoiler: they are actually citizens from Atlantis, who were fused with their pet birds by Viy and sent off into space]].
to:
* {{Ultraterrestrials}}: While the phoenixs phoenixes seem like aliens at first, [[spoiler: they are actually citizens from Atlantis, who were fused with their pet birds by Viy and sent off into space]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 59 (click to see context) from:
* FreudianTrio: A trio of villains are based on the Freudian concepts. The Id was represented by [[spoiler: the Drow Pimp]], the Ego by [[spoiler: Asterion]], and the Superego by [[spoiler: Laravieve]]. [[Spoiler: A literal example of this trope too, since all three of them come from Viy's mind]].
to:
* FreudianTrio: A trio of villains are based on the Freudian concepts. The Id was represented by [[spoiler: the Drow Pimp]], the Ego by [[spoiler: Asterion]], and the Superego by [[spoiler: Laravieve]]. [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: A literal example of this trope too, since all three of them come from Viy's mind]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 46 (click to see context) from:
DiscOneFinalBoss: The Deranged Doombringer starts out as the BigBad, and is even the master of a First Guardian. However, he is quickly outclassed by [[spoiler: Viy, and is killed off reletively early]].
to:
* DiscOneFinalBoss: The Deranged Doombringer starts out as the BigBad, and is even the master of a First Guardian. However, he is quickly outclassed by [[spoiler: Viy, and is killed off reletively early]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
DiscOneFinalBoss: The Deranged Doombringer starts out as the BigBad, and is even the master of a First Guardian. However, he is quickly outclassed by [[spoiler: Viy, and is killed off reletively early]].
Changed line(s) 58 (click to see context) from:
* FreudianTrio: A trio of villains are based on the Freudian concepts. The Id was represented by [[spoiler: the Drow Pimp]], the Ego by [[spoiler: Asterion]], and the Superego by [[spoiler: Laravieve]].
to:
* FreudianTrio: A trio of villains are based on the Freudian concepts. The Id was represented by [[spoiler: the Drow Pimp]], the Ego by [[spoiler: Asterion]], and the Superego by [[spoiler: Laravieve]]. [[Spoiler: A literal example of this trope too, since all three of them come from Viy's mind]].
Changed line(s) 144 (click to see context) from:
* TerribleTrio: [[spoiler: Laravieve, Asterion, and the Drow Pimp]] fit the bill quite well, although they're more competent. All three of them work for [[spoiler: Viy.]]
to:
* TerribleTrio: [[spoiler: Laravieve, Asterion, and the Drow Pimp]] fit the bill quite well, although they're more competent. All three of them work for [[spoiler: Viy.]]Viy]]. Which makes sense considering that all of them are [[spoiler: are it's FreudianTrio, with Larvieve, Asterion, and the Drow Pimp embodiments of it's Super Ego, Ego, and Id, respectively]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* {{Ultraterrestrials}}: While the phoenixs seem like aliens at first, [[spoiler: they are actually citizens from Atlantis, who were fused with their pet birds by Viy and sent off into space]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 9,10 (click to see context) from:
Can be read [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=1032 here]].
to:
Can be read [[http://mspfanventures.com/?s=1032 here]].
here]], but please be warned that ''Hexane'' is an OrphanedSeries.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 44 (click to see context) :
** A straight example would be the Dungeons of Sunnydale poster in Mack's room. A redrawn version has been put up on Redbubble by the author.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 62 (click to see context) :
* GeniusBonus: Qamarkino's color is probably red because of the blood moon.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* FreudianTrio: A trio of villains are based on the Freudian concepts. The Id was represented by [[spoiler: the Drow Pimp]], the Ego by [[spoiler: Asterion]], and the Superego by [[spoiler: Laravieve]].
Deleted line(s) 73 (click to see context) :
* IdSuperegoAndEgo: A trio of villains are based on the Freudian concepts. The Id was represented by [[spoiler: the Drow Pimp]], the Ego by [[spoiler: Asterion]], and the Superego by [[spoiler: Laravieve]].
Changed line(s) 117 (click to see context) from:
* OneWordTitle
to:
* OneWordTitleOneWordTitle: Hexane.
* OrphanedSeries: Was discontinued right before the final battle.
Deleted line(s) 144 (click to see context) :
* SpiritualSuccessor: To one of the creator's earlier works, Scratchproof.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
dewicking per TRS thread.
Deleted line(s) 142 (click to see context) :
* SixStudentClique
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
No spoiler tagging trope names.
Changed line(s) 13 (click to see context) from:
* [[spoiler: AdvancedAncientHumans: There were two civilizations of these. The Atlanteans and the Ramans.]]
to:
* [[spoiler: AdvancedAncientHumans: [[spoiler: There were two civilizations of these. The Atlanteans and the Ramans.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Renamed trope
* ParodiesForDummies: Dell and the phoenixes own ''Fuseboxes for Muttonheads'' and ''Starship Engines for Featherheads'', respectively.
Deleted line(s) 149 (click to see context) :
* TropesForDummies: Dell and the phoenixes own ''Fuseboxes for Muttonheads'' and ''Starship Engines for Featherheads'', respectively.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 137 (click to see context) from:
---> '''AJTS''': [[TheBible LET THERE BE LIGHT]]!
to:
---> '''AJTS''': [[TheBible [[Literature/TheBible LET THERE BE LIGHT]]!
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 35 (click to see context) from:
* ClimaxBoss: The Drow Pimp battle in [S] Deathmatch. As well as being the climactic battle against the heroes' main enemy so far, it wraps up most of the loose plot points of Act 4 and sees the Phoenixes officially enter the session.
to:
* ClimaxBoss: The Drow Pimp battle in [S] Deathmatch. As well as being the climactic battle against the heroes' main enemy so far, it wraps up most of the loose plot points of Act 4 and sees the Phoenixes officially enter the session. The battle against Asterion is this to a lesser extent, and Laravieve definitely qualifies.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 107 (click to see context) from:
** [[spoiler: Eventually subverted. Laraminia has been possessed by Laravieve the whole time.]]
to:
** [[spoiler: Eventually subverted. Laraminia subverted for Laraminia. She's has been possessed by Laravieve the whole time.time, making Laravieve an even stronger example of this.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 4,6 (click to see context) from:
->''“Starting as a normal Sburb session, six players find themselves dealing with the resurrection of a demon from another world, and the avian beings who come with it.”''
-->-- '''tiresiasArchivist''', ''MSPFA description''
-->-- '''tiresiasArchivist''', ''MSPFA description''
to:
-->--
Added DiffLines:
** [[spoiler: Eventually subverted. Laraminia has been possessed by Laravieve the whole time.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 5,6 (click to see context) from:
-->--'''tiresiasArchivist''', ''MSPFA description''
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* PowerStrainBlackOut: Their powers are usually portrayed as being highly fatigueing with extensive or particularly powerful uses causing them to collapse from exhaustion.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Bilingual Bonus Translation
Changed line(s) 24 (click to see context) from:
* BilingualBonus: The author's exposition on phoenix romance, written in the phoenix language. [[note]]It's actually just [[http://www.dafont.com/crystal-bearers-script.font a font]].[[/note]]
to:
* BilingualBonus: The author's exposition on phoenix romance, written in the phoenix language. [[note]]It's actually just [[http://www.dafont.com/crystal-bearers-script.font a font]]. Here's what it translates to: So it turns out you guys learned to translate the phoenix language. Well unfortunately, what was previously written here was a bunch of gibberish, because even I have no idea how phoenix romance works. I'm just going to say that slot machine romance is second only to card based romance in terms of coolness. [[/note]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* GeniusBonus: Qamarkino's color is probably red because of the blood moon.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 129 (click to see context) from:
*** Phobeimos, ever since Cythedite gave him ''Hamlet'', regularly throws out [[Creator/Shakespeare Shakespeare]] quotes.
to:
*** Phobeimos, ever since Cythedite gave him ''Hamlet'', regularly throws out [[Creator/Shakespeare [[KlingonsLoveShakespeare Shakespeare]] quotes.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* BerserkButton: Cythedite is NOT a robot.
Added DiffLines:
*** Phobeimos, ever since Cythedite gave him ''Hamlet'', regularly throws out [[Creator/Shakespeare Shakespeare]] quotes.
---> '''Phobeimos''': -(I SAY THERE IS NO DARKNESS BUT IGNORANCE=>
---> '''Phobeimos''': -(NOW IS THE WINTER OF OUR DISCONTENT=>
**** And when AJTS switches the light on, he says:
---> '''AJTS''': [[TheBible LET THERE BE LIGHT]]!
---> '''Phobeimos''': -([[LampshadeHanging WAS THAT A QUOTE]]?=>
---> '''Phobeimos''': -(I SAY THERE IS NO DARKNESS BUT IGNORANCE=>
---> '''Phobeimos''': -(NOW IS THE WINTER OF OUR DISCONTENT=>
**** And when AJTS switches the light on, he says:
---> '''AJTS''': [[TheBible LET THERE BE LIGHT]]!
---> '''Phobeimos''': -([[LampshadeHanging WAS THAT A QUOTE]]?=>
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* ClimaxBoss: The Drow Pimp battle in [S] Deathmatch. As well as being the climactic battle against the heroes' main enemy so far, it wraps up most of the loose plot points of Act 4 and sees the Phoenixes officially enter the session.
Added DiffLines:
* HeroicSecondWind: Mack gets one of these during [S] Deathmatch. The Drow Pimp has killed all of his friends and the situation looks dire, but Mack uses his god tier powers to get their corpses to the Quest Beds in the core of Skaia, god tiering all of them.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
added Laravieve
Changed line(s) 69 (click to see context) from:
* IdSuperegoAndEgo: A trio of villains are based on the Freudian concepts. The Id was represented by [[spoiler: the Drow Pimp]], the Ego by [[spoiler: Asterion]], and the Superego by an as-of-yet unknown entity.
to:
* IdSuperegoAndEgo: A trio of villains are based on the Freudian concepts. The Id was represented by [[spoiler: the Drow Pimp]], the Ego by [[spoiler: Asterion]], and the Superego by an as-of-yet unknown entity.[[spoiler: Laravieve]].
