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* TheCameo: Spike makes an appearance in the prologue when Celestia and Luna question him about Twilight's whereabouts.

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* TheCameo: Spike makes an appearance in the prologue when Celestia and Luna question him about Twilight's whereabouts. Both Thorax and his brother Pharynx appear on the last page.

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The story consists of a prologue and eight chapters which can be found here:

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The story consists of a prologue and prologue, eight chapters chapters, and an epilogue which can be found here:




As of July 25, 2022 the comic is complete.

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\n* [[https://www.deviantart.com/deusexequus/art/Fix-Epilogue-925301312 Epilogue]]

As of July 25, 2022 2022, the comic is complete.



* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Applejack and Rainbow use this on Tirek to help him see that he doesn't need to steal power to be respected. He's already worthy of respect with his own skills.

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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre:
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Applejack and Rainbow use this on Tirek to help him see that he doesn't need to steal power to be respected. He's already worthy of respect with his own skills.

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By now, the story consists of a prologue and eight chapters which can be found here:

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By now, the The story consists of a prologue and eight chapters which can be found here:



As of July 25, 2022 the comic is complete.



** Celestia calls out Twilight for abandoning her duties as ruler of Equestria and turning herself to stone to help the Legion of Doom, leaving Equestria defenceless for a week.

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** Celestia calls out Twilight for abandoning her duties as ruler of Equestria and turning herself to stone to help the Legion of Doom, leaving as she left Equestria defenceless defenseless for a an entire week.

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* WhatTheHellHero: Celestia calls out Twilight for abandoning her duties as ruler of Equestria and turning herself to stone to help the Legion of Doom, leaving Equestria defenceless for a week.

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* WhatTheHellHero: WhatTheHellHero:
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Celestia calls out Twilight for abandoning her duties as ruler of Equestria and turning herself to stone to help the Legion of Doom, leaving Equestria defenceless for a week.week.
** Twilight in turn calls out the sisters for their AesopAmnesia regarding how they treat villains (they fight the villains, they banish the villains, the villains become Twilight's problem, rinse and repeat.)



** Twilight in turn calls out the sisters for their AesopAmnesia regarding how they treat villains (they fight the villains, they banish the villains, the villains become Twilight's problem, rinse and repeat.)
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** Twilight in turn calls out the sisters for their AesopAmnesia regarding how they treat villains (they fight the villains, they banish the villains, the villains become Twilight's problem, rinse and repeat.)
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Toning this down.


* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Were this webcomic canon, the members of the Legion of Doom would be the biggest woobies in all of MLP.

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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Were this webcomic canon, the members of the Legion of Doom would be the biggest woobies in all of MLP.All three villains turned to evil due to rejection and trauma.
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By now, the story consists of a prologue and seven chapters which can be found here:

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By now, the story consists of a prologue and seven eight chapters which can be found here:




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* [[https://www.deviantart.com/deusexequus/art/Fix-Chapter-Eight-Cover-911322178 Chapter 8]]

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** She also thinks of ripping apart a Daring Doo book after an attempt to socialize with the owner fails.

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** She also thinks of ripping apart a Daring Doo Do book after an attempt to socialize with the owner fails.fails.
* FateWorseThanDeath: This is Celestia's and Luna's plan to get rid of the Legion of Doom for good. They plan to send them to an alternate dimension consisting of a barren wasteland where there is, in their own words "no magic, no love, and no way out."



* SlasherSmile: All the monster hunters have this when they began the [[spoiler:massacre of the changelings]].

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* SlasherSmile: All the monster hunters have this when they began the [[spoiler:massacre of the changelings]]. Both Celestia and Luna give one when they explain their plan to get rid of the Legion of Doom once and for all.
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* TheChessmaster: We see the origin of how Cozy got her cutie mark. She had to manipulate some other students for them to be her friends by hiding a Daring Doo book that one of them left out and giving it back to said student when they get into a fight with another thinking that they stole it.

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* TheChessmaster: We see the origin of how Cozy got her cutie mark. She had to manipulate some other students for them to be her friends by hiding a Daring Doo Do book that one of them left out and giving it back to said student when they get into a fight with another thinking that they stole it.

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Almost half a year after beginning of their retirement Celestia and Luna receive mail from Princess Twilight Sparkle. She informs them that she sees herself not worthy of the throne and restore the sisters' status of ruling monarchs of Equestria. Fearing for Twilight's wellbeing, they rush into Canterlot.

What they find in Twilight's secret laboratory shocks them to the core. She has been having nightmares about the Legion of Doom. They accuse her of being no better then they are as she never tried to help them like the other villains. Eventually, the dreams became too much and she attempted to release them, but it went wrong and she got turned to stone. And now the rest of Mane 6 follow Twilight in her quest to fix the failure which started her reign.

But can they really fix such broken individuals? Or will their statue became the symbol of their greatest failure of Friendship forever?

By now, the story consists of prologue and six chapters which can be found here:

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Almost half a year after the beginning of their retirement Celestia and Luna receive mail from Princess Twilight Sparkle. She informs them that she sees herself not worthy of the throne and restore the sisters' status of ruling monarchs of Equestria. Fearing for Twilight's wellbeing, they rush into Canterlot.

What they find in Twilight's secret laboratory shocks them to the core. She has been having nightmares about the Legion of Doom. They accuse her of being no better then they are as she never tried to help them like the other villains. Eventually, the dreams became too much and she attempted to release them, but it went wrong and she got turned to stone. And now the rest of the Mane 6 follow Twilight in her quest to fix the failure which started her reign.

But can they really fix such broken individuals? Or will their statue became become the symbol of their greatest failure of Friendship forever?

By now, the story consists of a prologue and six seven chapters which can be found here:




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* [[https://www.deviantart.com/deusexequus/art/Fix-Chapter-Seven-Cover-900013920 Chapter 7]]


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* WhatTheHellHero: Celestia calls out Twilight for abandoning her duties as ruler of Equestria and turning herself to stone to help the Legion of Doom, leaving Equestria defenceless for a week.
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* LikeASonToMe: Chrysalis admits that she admired Cozy's cleverness and that she would almost accept her as part of her hive.

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* BattleDiscretionShot: There are several black panels during Chrysalis' revenge on the monster hunters. It's either blanks in her memory, [[GoryDiscretionShot too graphic for the comic]], or both.



* {{Blackground}}: In the parts of the dream realm that isn't tied to a specific character's memories, the background is entirely black. Most notably during most of chapter six, when the Mane Six are talking to Tirek, Chrysalis and Cozy.



* DoomedHometown: [[spoiler:Chrysalis' start of villainy happened when her old hive was burnt down with an uncounted amount of Changelings still inside]].



* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Applejack admits that she understands why Tirek became who he is now but points out that this is no excuse for what he has done. Likewise, while Rarity feels sorry for what happened to Cozy in the past, it does not excuse her actions in the present.



* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Applejack admits that she understands why Tirek became who he is now but points out that this is no excuse for what he has done. Likewise, while Rarity feels sorry for what happened to Cozy in the past, it does not excuse her actions in the present.

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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Applejack admits that she understands why ItsAllJunk: No matter how much Tirek became who trains, studies or wins awards, he is now but points claims them all to be worthless if his father never see's him as strong enough, so he throws most of his awards out that this is no excuse for what he has done. Likewise, while Rarity feels sorry for what happened to Cozy in the past, it does not excuse her actions in the present.window.



* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments:
** Tirek fist-bumping with Applejack and Rainbow Dash
** Cozy accepting Rarity's and Fluttershy's help



* NightmareFuel:
** The deteriorated state of petrified members of the Legion of Doom in [[spoiler:Twilight's]] nightmare[[labelnote:*]]especially Cozy Glow[[/labelnote]].
** [[https://www.deviantart.com/deusexequus/art/Fix-Chapter-Three-Page-Ten-860056591 Page Ten]] of Chapter 3.

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* NightmareFuel:
** The deteriorated state
NeverBeHurtAgain: This is generally Chrysalis' reasoning for seeing friendship as a poison; [[spoiler: her old hive was destroyed]] when she trusted a small group of petrified members of the Legion of Doom in [[spoiler:Twilight's]] nightmare[[labelnote:*]]especially Cozy Glow[[/labelnote]].
** [[https://www.deviantart.com/deusexequus/art/Fix-Chapter-Three-Page-Ten-860056591 Page Ten]] of Chapter 3.
ponies who turned out to be monster hunters.
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** And again by Celestia on page six of chapter 2.

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** And again by Celestia on page six of chapter Chapter 2.

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* TheCameo: Spike makes an appearance in the prologue when Celestia and Luna question him about Twilight's whereabouts.



-->'''Twilight Sparkle:''' I already know what to do. I'll do the same thing I always do when I have a friendship problem. I'll '''fix''' it.'''

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-->'''Twilight Sparkle:''' I already know what to do. I'll do the same thing I always do when I have a friendship problem. I'll '''fix''' it.'''it.
** And again by Celestia on page six of chapter 2.
-->'''Celestia:''' (To Luna) Let's discuss how we're going to '''fix''' that problem.
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* SinisterSilhouettes: [[spoiler: When Tirek and Cozy finally agree to try and become better people, they are freed from stone. But the next panel shows the shadows of Celestia and Luna, and the expressions on Tirek and Cozy's faces do not give an indication that the sisters are happy.]]
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Applejack and Rainbow use this on Tirek to help him see that he doesn't need to steal power to be respected. He's already worthy of respect with his own skills.

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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Applejack and Rainbow use this on Tirek to help him see that he doesn't need to steal power to be respected. He's already worthy of respect with his own skills.skills.
** Rarity and Fluttershy use this on Cozy when they find out the Legion actually cared for each other. They then admit that they care for her, despite everything that has happened and knowing that they won't get any power out of it. And that's what finally causes Cozy to accept their help.

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* FixFic: Well, it is in the name. The webcomic fixes the events after the finale by having the Main Six try to redeem Tirek, Chrysallis, and Cozy Glow.



->'''Queen Chrysalis:''' What do you call a group of travellers, that no one will miss, who enter a changeling hive willingly? '''A three-course meal.'''\\

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->'''Queen Chrysalis:''' What do you call a group of travellers, travelers, that no one will miss, who enter a changeling hive willingly? '''A three-course meal.'''\\



* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Applejack admits that she understands why Tirek became who he is now but points out that this is no excuse for what he done. Likewise, while Rarity feels sorry for what happened to Cozy in the past, it does not excuse her actions in the present.

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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Applejack admits that she understands why Tirek became who he is now but points out that this is no excuse for what he has done. Likewise, while Rarity feels sorry for what happened to Cozy in the past, it does not excuse her actions in the present.



** Tirek seems to be moved by Rainbow Dash's and Applejack's motivational speeches, but thinks that there's no place in the world for him, after everything he's done. He feels he needs to keep moving forward. But when they suggest that when people see how much he's changed, he'll be accepted, Tirek finally snaps out of it, and gently fist bumps them.
** Cozy has been traumatized so badly, that she thinks that Fluttershy and Rarity are trying to trick her, because she now thinks friendship is one giant lie.

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** Tirek seems to be moved by Rainbow Dash's and Applejack's motivational speeches, speeches but thinks that there's no place in the world for him, after everything he's done. He feels he needs to keep moving forward. But when they suggest that when people see how much he's changed, he'll be accepted, Tirek finally snaps out of it, and gently fist bumps them.
** Cozy has been traumatized so badly, that she thinks that Fluttershy and Rarity are trying to trick her, her because she now thinks friendship is one giant lie.



* ParentalNeglect: Cozy Glow's parents, especially her mother. In Cozy's memories we never see her ''eyes'', her head is always turned ''away'' from her daughter and she never ''listens'' to her.

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* ParentalNeglect: Cozy Glow's parents, especially her mother. In Cozy's memories memories, we never see her ''eyes'', her head is always turned ''away'' from her daughter and she never ''listens'' to her.her. Not even when Cozy tells her that she got her cutie mark.



** ''Tirek'': One of the spells in his magic books gives him an idea how to prove his father that his magic makes him strong. After that, he prepares for his journey into Equestria.
** ''Cozy Glow'': A flyer for the School of Friendship gives her idea that with all the power friendship will give her there will be nopony who can ''ignore'' and ''hurt'' her again.

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** ''Tirek'': One of the spells in his magic books gives him an idea of how to prove to his father that his magic makes him strong. After that, he prepares for his journey into Equestria.
** ''Cozy Glow'': A flyer for the School of Friendship gives her the idea that with all the power friendship will give her there will be nopony who can ''ignore'' and ''hurt'' her again.

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** Cozy Glow's parents, especially her father. In his first appearance we see that Cozy Glow is ''terrified'' of his ire after he slammed her into a wall.
** King Vorak, Tirek's father, is revealed to be this, as he did not like that his son was a better magic user then warrior.
* AndIMustScream: Tirek explains to Rainbow and Applejack, that this is what Tartarus is like, as it's eternity being locked in a cage with nowhere to move and seeing the same thing everyday.

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** Cozy Glow's parents, especially her father. In his first appearance appearance, we see that Cozy Glow is ''terrified'' of his ire after he slammed her into a wall.
** King Vorak, Tirek's father, is revealed to be this, as he did not like that his son was a better magic user then than a warrior.
* AndIMustScream: Tirek explains to Rainbow and Applejack, that this is what Tartarus is like, as it's eternity being locked in a cage with nowhere to move and seeing the same thing everyday.every day.



* BigWhat: Twilight's reaction when she see a younger and more kind Queen Chrysalis.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Steeltrap[[labelnote:*]]leader of the monster hunters[[/labelnote]]. He’s very polite, suggests a way to solve the hunger problem of the changelings and isn't against a friendly conversation at their hive. [[spoiler:And with his cute smile, after making sure that you are ''peaceful'' folks who just ''need'' love to eat, he set ablaze your leader and orders the massacre of all of you inside your home just because you ''might'' become a danger.]]

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* BigWhat: Twilight's reaction when she see sees a younger and more kind Queen Chrysalis.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Steeltrap[[labelnote:*]]leader of the monster hunters[[/labelnote]]. He’s very polite, suggests a way to solve the hunger problem of the changelings changelings, and isn't against a friendly conversation at their hive. [[spoiler:And with his cute smile, after making sure that you are ''peaceful'' folks who just ''need'' love to eat, he set ablaze your leader and orders the massacre of all of you inside your home just because you ''might'' become a danger.]]



* DarkAndTroubledPast: The Legion of Dooms past's are filled with parental neglect and abuse, being treated as monsters or pariah's for being different, and never knowing what love or friendship is.

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* TheChessmaster: We see the origin of how Cozy got her cutie mark. She had to manipulate some other students for them to be her friends by hiding a Daring Doo book that one of them left out and giving it back to said student when they get into a fight with another thinking that they stole it.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: The Legion of Dooms past's are filled with parental neglect and abuse, being treated as monsters or pariah's pariahs for being different, and never knowing what love or friendship is.



** ''[[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle]]'': After spending a week [[spoiler:in the shared dream]] with the Legion of Doom without even a clue how communicate with them, she is on the verge of this. [[spoiler:Fortunately, her friends snap her out of this]].

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** ''[[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle]]'': After spending a week [[spoiler:in the shared dream]] with the Legion of Doom without even a clue how to communicate with them, she is on the verge of this. [[spoiler:Fortunately, her friends snap her out of this]].



* EnfantTerrible: This is the initial opinion Rarity has of Cozy before they see her home life. Cozy is shown throwing paper balls at her teacher, stealing lunches, and getting into a fight.
** She also thinks of ripping apart a Daring Doo book after an attempt to socialize with the owner fails.



* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Applejack admits that she understands why Tirek became who he is now but points out that this is no excuse for what he done. Likewise while Rarity feels sorry for what happened to Cozy in the past, it does not excuse her actions in the present.

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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Applejack admits that she understands why Tirek became who he is now but points out that this is no excuse for what he done. Likewise Likewise, while Rarity feels sorry for what happened to Cozy in the past, it does not excuse her actions in the present.



* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments:
** Tirek fist-bumping with Applejack and Rainbow Dash
** Cozy accepting Rarity's and Fluttershy's help



* SlasherSmile: All the monster hunters have this when they begun the [[spoiler:massacre of the changelings]].

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* SlasherSmile: All the monster hunters have this when they begun began the [[spoiler:massacre of the changelings]].



** ''Tirek'': One of the spells in his magic books gives him an idea how to prove his father that his magic makes him strong. After that he prepares for his journey into Equestria.

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** ''Tirek'': One of the spells in his magic books gives him an idea how to prove his father that his magic makes him strong. After that that, he prepares for his journey into Equestria.



** ''Queen Chrysalis'': After the betrayal of Steeltrap in the ashes of her hive all she see is what danger friendship brings to her changelings.
* TakenForGranite: To dive into shared dream of Legion of Doom, the Mane 6 must share a petrified state with them.

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** ''Queen Chrysalis'': After the betrayal of Steeltrap in the ashes of her hive hive, all she see sees is what danger friendship brings to her changelings.
* TakenForGranite: To dive into the shared dream of Legion of Doom, the Mane 6 must share a petrified state with them.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Applejack admits that she understands why Tirek became who he is now but points out that this is no excuse for what he done.

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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: Applejack admits that she understands why Tirek became who he is now but points out that this is no excuse for what he done. Likewise while Rarity feels sorry for what happened to Cozy in the past, it does not excuse her actions in the present.
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** Cozy never knew love or friendship and became a troublemaker via her abusive parents.

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** Cozy never knew love or friendship and became a troublemaker and became addicted to friendship via her abusive parents.
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** King Vorac, Tirek's father, is revealed to be this, as he did not like that his son was a better magic user then warrior.

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** King Vorac, Vorak, Tirek's father, is revealed to be this, as he did not like that his son was a better magic user then warrior.



* CatapultNightmare: Happens to [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle]] in Chapter 1. With a thunder to boost!

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* CatapultNightmare: Happens to [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle]] in Chapter 1. With a thunder to boost!



* TheUnfavorite: Tirek is this to his father, Vorac. Though he tried to impress his father, Vorac felt Tirek was a failure as he prefered might to Tirek's magic.

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* TheUnfavorite: Tirek is this to his father, Vorac. Vorak. Though he tried to impress his father, Vorac Vorak felt Tirek was a failure as he prefered preferred might to Tirek's magic.
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* I'veComeTooFar: Both Tirek and Cozy have the tragic villain version of this attitude.

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* I'veComeTooFar: IveComeTooFar: Both Tirek and Cozy have the tragic villain version of this attitude.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre!: Applejack and Rainbow use this on Tirek to help him see that he doesn't need to steal power to be respected. He's already worthy of respect with his own skills.

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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre!: YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Applejack and Rainbow use this on Tirek to help him see that he doesn't need to steal power to be respected. He's already worthy of respect with his own skills.
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* YouAreBetterThenYouThinkYouAre!: Applejack and Rainbow use this on Tirek to help him see that he doesn't need to steal power to be respected. He's already worthy of respect with his own skills.

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* YouAreBetterThenYouThinkYouAre!: YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre!: Applejack and Rainbow use this on Tirek to help him see that he doesn't need to steal power to be respected. He's already worthy of respect with his own skills.
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* YouAreBetterThenYouThinkYouAre: Applejack and Rainbow use this on Tirek to help him see that he doesn't need to steal power to be respected. He's already worthy of respect with his own skills.

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* YouAreBetterThenYouThinkYouAre: YouAreBetterThenYouThinkYouAre!: Applejack and Rainbow use this on Tirek to help him see that he doesn't need to steal power to be respected. He's already worthy of respect with his own skills.
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* I'veComeTooFar: Both Tirek and Cozy have the tragic villain version of this attitude.
** Tirek seems to be moved by Rainbow Dash's and Applejack's motivational speeches, but thinks that there's no place in the world for him, after everything he's done. He feels he needs to keep moving forward. But when they suggest that when people see how much he's changed, he'll be accepted, Tirek finally snaps out of it, and gently fist bumps them.
** Cozy has been traumatized so badly, that she thinks that Fluttershy and Rarity are trying to trick her, because she now thinks friendship is one giant lie.



* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Were this webcomic canon, the members of the Legion of Doom would be the biggest woobies in all of MLP.

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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Were this webcomic canon, the members of the Legion of Doom would be the biggest woobies in all of MLP.MLP.
* YouAreBetterThenYouThinkYouAre: Applejack and Rainbow use this on Tirek to help him see that he doesn't need to steal power to be respected. He's already worthy of respect with his own skills.

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* TragicVillain: The fic reveals the Legion of Doom to be this trope as they were all rejected and scorned by their families and society. Tirek failed to live up to his strict father's expectations of being a good athlete. Cozy never knew love or friendship and became a troublemaker via her abusive parents. And poor Chrysalis came to distrust friendship when a group of "friendly ponies" killed much of her children.

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* TragicVillain: The fic reveals the Legion of Doom to be this trope as they were all rejected and scorned by their families and society. society.
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Tirek failed to live up to his strict father's expectations of being a good athlete. athlete.
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Cozy never knew love or friendship and became a troublemaker via her abusive parents. And poor parents.
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Chrysalis came to distrust friendship when a group of "friendly ponies" killed much of her children.

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