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A Franchise/SpiderMan webcomic by ''Webcomic/DaughterOfTheLilies'' creator Meg Syverud. It's a AlternateUniverse story of how Spider-Man meets ComicBook/MaryJaneWatson. Or more accurately meets ''Doctor'' Mary Jane Watson, who gets roped into treating Spidey after he's captured by her father, the Taskmaster.
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A Franchise/SpiderMan ComicBook/SpiderMan webcomic by ''Webcomic/DaughterOfTheLilies'' creator Meg Syverud. It's a AlternateUniverse story of how Spider-Man meets ComicBook/MaryJaneWatson. Or more accurately meets ''Doctor'' Mary Jane Watson, who gets roped into treating Spidey after he's captured by her father, the Taskmaster.
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* AdaptationalJobChange: In most depictions, MJ is an actress, supermodel, fashion designer, or somewhere in between thanks to her shockingly good looks. Here, she's a doctor, though not entirely of her own volition, as Taskmaster pressed her into going through medical school.
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* AdaptationalJobChange: In most depictions, MJ is an actress, supermodel, fashion designer, or somewhere in between thanks to her shockingly good looks. Here, she's a doctor, though neurosurgeon, although not entirely of her own volition, as Taskmaster pressed her into going through medical school.
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* ArtificialLimbs: The big hint to "Grandpa's" identity is [[spoiler:his Vibranium metal arm, revealing that he's the Winter Soldier.]]
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* ArtificialLimbs: The big hint to "Grandpa's" identity is [[spoiler:his Vibranium metal arm, revealing that he's the Winter Soldier.]]Soldier]].
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** At the end of the comic, Spidey gets a phone call from "Grandpa" aka [[spoiler: the Winter Soldier.]]
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** At the end of the comic, Spidey gets a phone call from "Grandpa" aka [[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the Winter Soldier.]]Soldier]].
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--->'''MJ:''' I saw my dad ...luckily I was able to escape and see Miranda's play.
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--->'''MJ:''' I saw my dad ...dad... luckily I was able to escape and see Miranda's play.
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* ExpressiveMask: Spidey and Taskmaster both.
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--> '''Spidey''': Sooooo...I'm probably going to have to beat up your dad if I'm gonna get out of here. Is that gonna bother you?
--> '''MJ''': ''Please'' do that. He ''sucks''.
--> '''MJ''': ''Please'' do that. He ''sucks''.
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'''MJ''': ''Please'' do that. He ''sucks''.
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* SecretKeeper: Spidey shares an apartment with Ned Leeds, who is both aware of his SecretIdentity as Peter Parker and reminds him to grade midterms before classes start tomorrow.
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* SecretKeeper: RelatedInTheAdaptation: One of the comic's main premises is that Taskmaster is Mary Jane's biological father.
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** Spidey shares an apartment with Ned Leeds, who is both aware of his SecretIdentity as Peter Parker and reminds him to grade midterms before classes start tomorrow.
* SecretKeeper:
** Spidey shares an apartment with Ned Leeds, who is both aware of his SecretIdentity as Peter Parker and reminds him to grade midterms before classes start tomorrow.
