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* TransferableMemory: As in canon, and central to the plot. Stretch collects memories of famous Muggles having sex.
** Later {{Subverted}}
---> '''Stretch''': These actually are ''not'' the memories of Muggles doing it.
** And [[DoubleSubversion Double Subverted]]
---> '''Squat''': That collection is safe in storage.
** Later {{Subverted}}
---> '''Stretch''': These actually are ''not'' the memories of Muggles doing it.
** And [[DoubleSubversion Double Subverted]]
---> '''Squat''': That collection is safe in storage.
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* TransferableMemory: As in canon, and central to the plot. Stretch collects memories of famous Muggles having sex.
** Later {{Subverted}}
---> '''Stretch''': Thesesex. {{Subverted}} when Stretch reveals "These actually are ''not'' the memories of Muggles doing it.
** Andit.", and [[DoubleSubversion Double Subverted]]
---> '''Squat''': ThatSubverted]] when Squat states "That collection is safe in storage."
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---> '''Stretch''': These
** And
---> '''Squat''': That
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%%** ''Literature/{{Twilight}}''''Literature/TheTwilightSaga''
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* EvilIsNotAToy: The fate of Squat.
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** Stretch collects memories of famous Muggles having sex.
** Later {{Subverted}}
---> '''Stretch''': These actually are ''not'' the memories of Muggles doing it.
** And [[DoubleSubversion Double Subverted]]
---> '''Squat''': That collection is safe in storage.
** Later {{Subverted}}
---> '''Stretch''': These actually are ''not'' the memories of Muggles doing it.
** And [[DoubleSubversion Double Subverted]]
---> '''Squat''': That collection is safe in storage.
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** And [[DoubleSubversion Double Subverted]]
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* ToplessnessFromTheBack: Hermione, post-coital.
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* TransferableMemory: As in canon, and central to the plot.
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* TransferableMemory: As in canon, and central to the
* WrongGenreSavvy:
-->'''Harry:''' This
** Later {{Subverted}}
---> '''Stretch''': These actually are ''not'' the memories of Muggles doing it.
** And [[DoubleSubversion Double Subverted]]
---> '''Squat''': That collection is
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%%** And [[DoubleSubversion Double Subverted]]
%%---> '''Squat''': That collection is safe in storage.
%%** Later {{Subverted}}
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* AlwaysSecondBest: Ron, who seems to have given up on ever succeeding. [[BaitAndSwitchComparison He's also overshadowed by Harry.]]
* BabiesEverAfter: Ginny has this in ''spades''.
* FanonDiscontinuity: Probably not surprising, given the tone of the piece, but it should be pointed out that this series ignores "[[WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue Nineteen Years Later]]."[[note]]If Harry and Ginny's second son is eleven during that epilogue, they ought to have two children by now, not be working on the first.[[/note]]
* CantStayNormal: Harry
* CompensatingForSomething: Squat's wand
* DeconstructorFleet
* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Hermione plies Harry with drink and has sex with him when he's so drunk he can't even remember it - and the next morning she even brazenly admits so - but Ginny still considers Harry guilty of adultery. She was more than a little drunk too.
* DrugsAreGood
* EasySexChange: First played straight, later [[DiscussedTrope discussed]] by the aurors and [[spoiler:Malfoy.]]
* EvilPlan: Squat and Stretch, [[MemoryWipingCrew Obliviators]], are taking advantage of Harry's unemployment to lure him into something.
* EvilIsNotAToy: The fate of Squat.
* ExactWords: Eye of Newt
* ExiledToTheCouch
* HookedUpAfterwards: [[spoiler:Shacklebolt[=/=]Malfoy]]
* HotterAndSexier
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Squat and Stretch
* IronicEcho
--> '''Stretch''': What makes a man a man? Memories. A man is defined by his collection of memories.
* BabiesEverAfter: Ginny has this in ''spades''.
* FanonDiscontinuity: Probably not surprising, given the tone of the piece, but it should be pointed out that this series ignores "[[WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue Nineteen Years Later]]."[[note]]If Harry and Ginny's second son is eleven during that epilogue, they ought to have two children by now, not be working on the first.[[/note]]
* CantStayNormal: Harry
* CompensatingForSomething: Squat's wand
* DeconstructorFleet
* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Hermione plies Harry with drink and has sex with him when he's so drunk he can't even remember it - and the next morning she even brazenly admits so - but Ginny still considers Harry guilty of adultery. She was more than a little drunk too.
* DrugsAreGood
* EasySexChange: First played straight, later [[DiscussedTrope discussed]] by the aurors and [[spoiler:Malfoy.]]
* EvilPlan: Squat and Stretch, [[MemoryWipingCrew Obliviators]], are taking advantage of Harry's unemployment to lure him into something.
* EvilIsNotAToy: The fate of Squat.
* ExactWords: Eye of Newt
* ExiledToTheCouch
* HookedUpAfterwards: [[spoiler:Shacklebolt[=/=]Malfoy]]
* HotterAndSexier
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Squat and Stretch
* IronicEcho
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** Also:
-->'''Harry:''' Do you ever notice how in the Wizarding World people's names tend to be [[MeaningfulName so much more descriptive]] of who they are than in the Muggle world? Did you ever notice that?\\
-->'''Harry:''' Do you ever notice how in the Wizarding World people's names tend to be [[MeaningfulName so much more descriptive]] of who they are than in the Muggle world? Did you ever notice that?\\
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--->'''Harry:''' Do you ever notice how in the Wizarding World people's names tend to be [[MeaningfulName so much more descriptive]] of who they are than in the Muggle world? Did you ever notice that?\\
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* ManBehindTheMan: Subverted: It's a woman pulling the strings on Squat and Stretch. [[spoiler:And her last name's "Malfoy".]]
* MarySue: {{Invoked}}. Ron claims Hermione has "never made a mistake in [her] life." [[{{Deconstruction}} It's not a compliment.]]
* MeaningfulName: Squat and Stretch, as [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]].
* MundaneUtility: Stretch collects memories of famous Muggles doing it.
** Later {{Subverted}}
--> '''Stretch''': These actually are ''not'' the memories of Muggles doing it.
** And [[DoubleSubversion Double Subverted]]
--> '''Squat''': That collection is safe in storage.
* PleasePutSomeClothesOn: Rare female-to-female example: [[spoiler:Ginny, confronting her sister-in-law after Hermione seduced Harry]].
* MarySue: {{Invoked}}. Ron claims Hermione has "never made a mistake in [her] life." [[{{Deconstruction}} It's not a compliment.]]
* MeaningfulName: Squat and Stretch, as [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]].
* MundaneUtility: Stretch collects memories of famous Muggles doing it.
** Later {{Subverted}}
--> '''Stretch''': These actually are ''not'' the memories of Muggles doing it.
** And [[DoubleSubversion Double Subverted]]
--> '''Squat''': That collection is safe in storage.
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* SequelHook: [[CallBack Newt]] the neurobiologist
* ShipSinking: The series takes direct aim at Harry×Ginny and Ron×Hermione. Still too early to tell if the sinking is permanent, though.
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* TakeThat:
** ''VideoGame/LegoHarryPotter''
** ''Literature/{{Twilight}}''
** ''Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone'' being re-branded in America
* TheTeetotaler: Malfoy
* ToplessnessFromTheBack: Hermione, post-coital.
* [[spoiler:TransferableMemory]]
* WrongGenreSavvy:
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** ''VideoGame/LegoHarryPotter''
** ''Literature/{{Twilight}}''
** ''Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone'' being re-branded in America
* TheTeetotaler: Malfoy
* ToplessnessFromTheBack: Hermione, post-coital.
* [[spoiler:TransferableMemory]]
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Hermione plies Harry with drink and has sex with him when he's so drunk he can't even remember it - and the next morning she even brazenly admits so - but Ginny still considers Harry guilty of adultery. She was more than a little drunk too.
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Hermione plies Harry with drink and has sex with him when he's so drunk he can't even remember it - and the next morning she even brazenly admits so - but Ginny still considers Harry guilty of adultery. adultery.
** She was more than a little drunk too.
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Hermione plies Harry with drink and has sex with him when he's so drunk he can't even remember it - and the next morning she even brazenly admits so - but Ginny still considers Harry guilty of adultery. adultery.
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** She was more than a little drunk too.
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Hermione plies Harry with drink and has sex with him when he's so drunk he can't even remember it - and the next morning she even brazenly admits so - but Ginny still considers Harry guilty of adultery. adultery.
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** She was more than a little drunk too.
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Hermione plies Harry with drink and has sex with him when he's so drunk he can't even remember it - and the next morning she even brazenly admits so - but Ginny still considers Harry guilty of adultery. She was more than a little drunk too.
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Hermione plies Harry with drink and has sex with him when he's so drunk he can't even remember it - and the next morning she even brazenly admits so - but Ginny still considers Harry guilty of adultery. adultery.
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** She was more than a little drunk too.
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Hermione plies Harry with drink and has sex with him when he's so drunk he can't even remember it - and the next morning she even brazenly admits so - but Ginny still considers Harry guilty of adultery.
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Hermione plies Harry with drink and has sex with him when he's so drunk he can't even remember it - and the next morning she even brazenly admits so - but Ginny still considers Harry guilty of adultery.
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* CanonDiscontinuity: Probably not surprising, given the tone of the piece, but it should be pointed out that this series ignores "[[WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue Nineteen Years Later]]."[[note]]If Harry and Ginny's second son is eleven during that epilogue, they ought to have two children by now, not be working on the first.[[/note]]
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* CanonDiscontinuity: FanonDiscontinuity: Probably not surprising, given the tone of the piece, but it should be pointed out that this series ignores "[[WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue Nineteen Years Later]]."[[note]]If Harry and Ginny's second son is eleven during that epilogue, they ought to have two children by now, not be working on the first.[[/note]]
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* PleasePutSomeClothesOn: rare female-to-female example: [[spoiler:Ginny, confronting her sister-in-law after Hermione seduced Harry]].
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* CanonDiscontinuity: probably not surprising, given the tone of the piece, but it should be pointed out that this series ignores "[[WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue Nineteen Years Later]]."[[note]]If Harry & Ginny's second son is eleven during that epilogue, they ought to have two children by now, not be working on the first.[[/note]]
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* CanonDiscontinuity: probably Probably not surprising, given the tone of the piece, but it should be pointed out that this series ignores "[[WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue Nineteen Years Later]]."[[note]]If Harry & and Ginny's second son is eleven during that epilogue, they ought to have two children by now, not be working on the first.[[/note]]
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->''ACCIO TROUSERS!!!''
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Running on RuleOfFunny and tons of AlternativeCharacterInterpretation, '''''Harry Potter and the Ten Years Later''''' is a fan-based production from Furious Molecules that takes Harry Potter and friends into the mysterious, confusing, back-stabbing world of adulthood... Muggle-ized. Set ten years after the fall of Voldemort & the events in ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows'', the Department of Aurors has been shut down due to no Dark Wizard activity, Harry's lost his job, [[BabiesEverAfter Ginny wants a big family]], Ron and Hermione have split up and Ron's now hiding in the woods stealing... oh, ack, you have to see it to believe it.
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Running on RuleOfFunny and tons of AlternativeCharacterInterpretation, '''''Harry ''Harry Potter and the Ten Years Later''''' Later'' is a fan-based production from Furious Molecules that takes Harry Potter and friends into the mysterious, confusing, back-stabbing world of adulthood... Muggle-ized. Set ten years after the fall of Voldemort & and the events in ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows'', the Department of Aurors has been shut down due to no Dark Wizard activity, Harry's lost his job, [[BabiesEverAfter Ginny wants a big family]], Ron and Hermione have split up and Ron's now hiding in the woods stealing... oh, ack, you have to see it to believe it.
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!!''Harry Potter and the Ten Years Later'' provides examples of the following tropes:
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** Lego Harry Potter
** ''[[{{Literature/Twilight}} Twilight]]''
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''VideoGame/LegoHarryPotter''
**''[[{{Literature/Twilight}} Twilight]]''''Literature/{{Twilight}}''
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* DirectedByCastMember: Matt [=DeNoto=] (Harry).
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* HilariousInHindsight: [[http://www.cnn.com/2014/02/02/showbiz/rowling-hermione-ron-revelation/ Word of God]] said Rowling now regrets pairing Ron and Hermione. You can guess what happens to their marriage in this production...
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