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* MohsScaleOfScienceFictionHardness: World of phlebotinum flavor. At the very least, the blades and shards work in a consistent manner, though with no scientific reasoning given.
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* NotSoDifferent: Annabelle to Merlin in chapter nine. [[spoiler:Thematically relevant to Whisper in the final chapters as well.]]
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* BiTheWay: In chapter nine Annabelle mentions her sexuality to Merlin. She's casual about it.
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* HigherTechSpecies: The villains, justified in that they have space travel in the first place.
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* MohsScaleOfScienceFictionHardness: All the way down at one, science in genre only.
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* NoAccountingForTaste: Merlin thinks this of his relationship with Felix.
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* ColorCodedCharacters: Annabelle is blue, Claire is pink, Lola is orange, Sonia is green, Merlin is red, Felix is yellow, etc. Almost inevitable for a magical girl story, but a bit odd to see in a written medium.
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* EyeScream: How Lola gets her powers.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:What kicked off the whole plot. Whisper was only trying to help.]]
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* PosthumousCharacter: Lily Clover. [[spoiler:Hers is the PlotTriggeringDeath, after all.]]
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* TeamPet: Cotton is this, though he might wish hewasn't.wasn't.
* TooKinkyToTorture: Sonia, though they don't put it to the test too much.
* {{Twincest}}: Felix and Merlin's whole deal. At least, according to Felix.
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* TooKinkyToTorture: Sonia, though they don't put it to the test too much.
* {{Twincest}}: Felix and Merlin's whole deal. At least, according to Felix.
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* BioluminescenceIsCool: Whisper and Lily Clover's character designs certainly seem to think so.
* ExoticEquipment: In chapter eighteen. [[spoiler:Leave it to a fanfic author to include all the details when the aliens get down and dirty.]]
* HealingFactor: While it allows the magical girls to fight much more powerful monsters, it also puts a time limit on their powers.
* InsectoidAliens: [[spoiler:Whisper and Lily Clover are evocative of this trope, though they have shades of FrogMen as well.]]
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* NonMammalMammaries: Justified. It's still part of the alien's reproductive cycle, just not the way mammals might think.
* NotSoDifferent: Annabelle to Merlin in chapter nine. [[spoiler:Thematically relevant to Whisper in the final chapters as well.]]]]
* {{Sadist}}: Claire is one.
* TeamPet: Cotton is this, though he might wish he wasn't.
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* {{Sadist}}: Claire is one.
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* BizarreAlienBiology: In chapter eighteen. [[spoiler:While nothing too far outside of what can be found on earth, Whisper and Lily Clover definitely don't function at all like humans.]]
* BrainComputerInterface: At the end of chapter fourteen. [[spoiler:Alien tech sure is creepy, huh?]]
* CastFullOfGay: Is every character specifically homosexual? No, but there isn't a heterosexual to be seen, so this falls under that trope.
* CastFullOfGay: Is every character specifically homosexual? No, but there isn't a heterosexual to be seen, so this falls under that trope.
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* HeelFaceTurn: In chapter sixteen, [[spoiler:Annabelle has a heart-to-heart withAnnabelle and Claire. [[spoiler:Felix and Merlin might be this, depending on the reader.Whisper that ends remarkably well.]]
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* ArtifactOfPower: The magical girls and boys get their powers from a series of blades they use in combat. Corrupted Ones gain their powers from a different artifact called "shards."
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* TheCorruption: Zigzagged. The shards have no sentience and are not malevolent, simply attaching themselves to humans at random. However, there's no denying their corrupting influence on those they sink their teeth into, so to speak.
* HoYay: The LesYay version with Annabelle andClaire.Claire. [[spoiler:Felix and Merlin might be this, depending on the reader.]]
* MagicalGirlWarrior: Annabelle, Claire, Lola and [[spoiler:as of chapter eight, Sonia.]] Felix and Merlin are male examples of this trope.
*MonsterOfTheWeek: How the story begins. New chapter, new Corrupted One.
*NotSoDifferent: Annabelle to Merlin in chapter nine. [[spoiler:Thematically relevant to Whisper in the final chapters as well.]]
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* MagicalGirlWarrior: Annabelle, Claire, Lola and [[spoiler:as of chapter eight, Sonia.]] Felix and Merlin are male examples of this trope.
*MonsterOfTheWeek: How the story begins. New chapter, new Corrupted One.
*NotSoDifferent: Annabelle to Merlin in chapter nine. [[spoiler:Thematically relevant to Whisper in the final chapters as well.]]
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/15252084/chapters/35376612 Magical Girl Spleens]]'' is a web original story written by [[Creator/TwitchtipTheGnawer twitchtipthegnawer]] and posted on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn. It follows the adventures of Annabelle Baker and five other totally normal people who are suddenly gifted the power necessary to become magical girls (and boys). The only problem? Totally normal people can't work these powers at all.
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!!Magical Girl Spleens contains examples of:
* BiTheWay: In chapter nine Annabelle mentions her sexuality to Merlin. She's casual about it.
* LesYay: Annabelle and Claire.
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!!Magical Girl Spleens contains examples of:
* BiTheWay: In chapter nine Annabelle mentions her sexuality to Merlin. She's casual about it.
* LesYay: Annabelle and Claire.
