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* AnAesop: [[spoiler:Never make a promise without knowing the consequences.]]
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Page was movedfrom Fanfic.Five Dangerous Months At The Hinata Inn to WebAnimation.Five Dangerous Months At The Hinata Inn. Null edit to update page.
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* BlackComedy
* BleachedUnderpants: Due to the creative limits of create.swf, all of the fanservice was removed, and considering how [[BuffySpeak fanservicey]] the original was, that's saying something.
* BleachedUnderpants: Due to the creative limits of create.swf, all of the fanservice was removed, and considering how [[BuffySpeak fanservicey]] the original was, that's saying something.
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* BleachedUnderpants: Due to the creative limits of create.swf, all of the fanservice was removed, and considering how [[BuffySpeak fanservicey]] the original was, that's saying something.
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* CanonForeigner: Keitaro's parents.
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Unfortunately, the series has remained in DevelopmentHell thanks to ''Fanfic/AoUsagiTributeShow'' and ''WebAnimation/DiamondInTheRoughTouhou''. However, Spaztique does plan to release the scripts and eventually continue the series once he finishes ''Fanfic/AoUsagiTributeShow''.
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Unfortunately, the series has remained in DevelopmentHell thanks to ''Fanfic/AoUsagiTributeShow'' ''WebAnimation/AoUsagiTributeShow'' and ''WebAnimation/DiamondInTheRoughTouhou''. However, Spaztique does plan to release the scripts and eventually continue the series once he finishes ''Fanfic/AoUsagiTributeShow''.''WebAnimation/AoUsagiTributeShow''.
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->'''Naru''': It better be the moment he finishes that [[Fanfic/AoUsagiTributeShow weird top-down shooter thing]], or I'm flying all the way out just so I can strangle him until he starts up again!
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->'''Naru''': It better be the moment he finishes that [[Fanfic/AoUsagiTributeShow [[WebAnimation/AoUsagiTributeShow weird top-down shooter thing]], or I'm flying all the way out just so I can strangle him until he starts up again!
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* TalkingToHimself: Ten characters, eight of which are female, and one male VA.
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Slapstick Knows No Gender is a redirect
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* SlapstickKnowsNoGender: One of the goals of the series is to evenly distribute the pain among the residents.
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A Chained Sinkholes or two and I tried giving something better wording.
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->'''Keitaro''': It's fine. I'm pretty sure I'll figure out where to go next. ''([[FawltyTowersPlot I can't]] [[ArcWelding tell my sister I can't get the inn back]], but [[BlackComedy maybe if I jump into the ocean, no one will find the body]]...)''
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->'''Keitaro''': It's fine. I'm pretty sure I'll figure out where to go next. ''([[FawltyTowersPlot I can't]] tell [[ArcWelding tell my sister I can't get the inn back]], but [[BlackComedy maybe if I jump into the ocean, no one will find the body]]...)''
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** [[ChildhoodMarriagePromise The first episode alone butchers the idea of Keitaro trying to hold onto his promise, showing just how disturbed Keitaro would have to become to hold onto his promise for so long]]. [[SunkCostFallacy Subsequent episode scripts explore how virtually every choice Keitaro ever made, from staying at the inn to having Naru as a study partner,]] [[FawltyTowersPlot was all simply so he could keep his promise.]] [[spoiler:[[SweetAndSourGrapes Subsequent scripts of the final episodes show it turned out for the best: he got to meet the girl from his memories and got a firsthand lesson in why he needed to take care of those around him.]]]]
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** [[ChildhoodMarriagePromise The first episode alone butchers the idea of Keitaro trying to hold onto his promise, showing just how disturbed Keitaro would have to become to hold onto his promise for so long]]. [[SunkCostFallacy Subsequent episode scripts explore how virtually every choice Keitaro ever made, from staying at the inn to having Naru as a study partner,]] partner]], [[FawltyTowersPlot was all simply so he could keep his promise.]] [[spoiler:[[SweetAndSourGrapes Subsequent scripts of the final episodes show it turned out for the best: he got to meet the girl from his memories and got a firsthand lesson in why he needed to take care of those around him.]]]]
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** Kanako, as of the beginning of the series, seems to be the most [[OnlySaneMan level-headed person]] in the cast. She only snaps after being continuously ignored by her brother and seeing the residents of the inn break down his morale.
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** Kanako, as of the beginning of the series, seems to be the most [[OnlySaneMan level-headed person]] in the cast.cast's OnlySaneWoman. She only snaps after being continuously ignored by her brother and seeing the residents of the inn break down his morale.
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* NotSoDifferent: Keitaro and Naru. Made explicit in Episode 3.1, [[WhatTheHellHero when after Naru criticizes Keitaro for being obsessed with his promise and only using others as a means to an end]], Keitaro calls her out right back and asks, "[[ArmorPiercingQuestion How are you any different?]]" Later in the episode, Naru admits that maybe he's right.
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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Keitaro and Naru. Made explicit in Episode 3.1, [[WhatTheHellHero when after Naru criticizes Keitaro for being obsessed with his promise and only using others as a means to an end]], Keitaro calls her out right back and asks, "[[ArmorPiercingQuestion How are you any different?]]" Later in the episode, Naru admits that maybe he's right.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[NotSoDifferent Keitaro and Naru]] deliver one to eachother in episode 3.1 after [[spoiler:failing the entrance exam]], both accusing eachother of only caring about their promises and using everyone to fulfill those promises.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[NotSoDifferent Keitaro and Naru]] Naru deliver one to eachother in episode 3.1 after [[spoiler:failing the entrance exam]], both accusing eachother of only caring about their promises and using everyone to fulfill those promises.
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* DownerBeginning: {{Lampshade|Hanging}}d by the title of Episode 1.1. [[RealityEnsues Keitaro loses his promise girl, becomes a nervous wreck studying for Tokyo U's entrance exam, his family is crumbling apart, and he's been kicked out of the house]]. And [[FromBadToWorse that's not even the start of what's to come]].
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* DownerBeginning: {{Lampshade|Hanging}}d by the title of Episode 1.1. [[RealityEnsues Keitaro loses his promise girl, becomes a nervous wreck studying for Tokyo U's entrance exam, his family is crumbling apart, and he's been kicked out of the house]].house. And [[FromBadToWorse that's not even the start of what's to come]].
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[[caption-width-right:295:The cast of ''Manga/LoveHina'', built out of parts from ''VideoGame/{{Touhou}}'' characters using [[VirtualPaperDoll Create.swf]].[[note]]Because create.swf only allows one skin tone, Su is no longer tan.[[/note]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:295:The cast of ''Manga/LoveHina'', built out of parts from ''VideoGame/{{Touhou}}'' ''Franchise/TouhouProject'' characters using [[VirtualPaperDoll Create.swf]].[[note]]Because create.swf only allows one skin tone, Su is no longer tan.[[/note]]]]
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* DevelopmentHell: Courtesy of [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} Ao Usagi]].
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* DevelopmentHell: Courtesy of [[VideoGame/{{Touhou}} [[Franchise/TouhouProject Ao Usagi]].
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* {{Fanime}}: Made in a virtual doll program designed for ''VideoGame/{{Touhou}}'' characters.
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* {{Fanime}}: Made in a virtual doll program designed for ''VideoGame/{{Touhou}}'' ''Franchise/TouhouProject'' characters.
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* ShoutOut: Since it was made in a program designed for VideoGame/{{Touhou}} characters, there are plenty to spot.
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* ShoutOut: Since it was made in a program designed for VideoGame/{{Touhou}} ''Franchise/TouhouProject'' characters, there are plenty to spot.
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* VirtualPaperDoll: Everything was animated in Walfas's [[http://www.walfas.org/flash/create.swf Create.swf]], or "Create A VideoGame/{{Touhou}} Character".
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* VirtualPaperDoll: Everything was animated in Walfas's [[http://www.walfas.org/flash/create.swf Create.swf]], or "Create A VideoGame/{{Touhou}} Franchise/TouhouProject Character".
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* DrivenToSuicide: Keitaro. At the beginning, he's overworking himself to the point of death. In the end, realizing he can't get the inn back or find a place to stay, he contemplates drowning himself.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Keitaro. At the beginning, he's overworking himself to the point of death. In the end, realizing he can't get the inn back or find a place to stay, [[BlackComedy he contemplates drowning himself.]]
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* RealitySubtext: When Keitaro says, "Oh, what have I gotten myself into?," [[WordOfGod that was also Spaztique]] when he realized he had to continue the series after that point.
* {{Retool}}: The original series had a comedy/drama mix of 80/20. This series will have a mix of 50/50. Also, the original was [[WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants written in chronological order with no mind to future events]]. Everything here is built to foreshadow what's to come.
* {{Retool}}: The original series had a comedy/drama mix of 80/20. This series will have a mix of 50/50. Also, the original was [[WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants written in chronological order with no mind to future events]]. Everything here is built to foreshadow what's to come.
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* RealitySubtext: When Keitaro says, "Oh, "[[SelfDeprecation Oh, what have I gotten myself into?," into?]]," [[WordOfGod that was also Spaztique]] when he realized he had to continue the series after that point.
* {{Retool}}: The original series had a comedy/drama mix of 80/20. This series will have a mix of 50/50. Also, the original was [[WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants written in chronological order with no mind to future events]]. [[Forshadowing Everything here is built to foreshadow what's to come.]]
* {{Retool}}: The original series had a comedy/drama mix of 80/20. This series will have a mix of 50/50. Also, the original was [[WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants written in chronological order with no mind to future events]]. [[Forshadowing Everything here is built to foreshadow what's to come.]]
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* DownerBeginning: {{Lampshade|Hanging}}d by the title of Episode 1.1. Keitaro loses his promise girl, becomes a nervous wreck studying for Tokyo U's entrance exam, his family is crumbling apart, and he's been kicked out of the house. And [[FromBadToWorse that's not even the start of what's to come]].
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* DownerBeginning: {{Lampshade|Hanging}}d by the title of Episode 1.1. [[RealityEnsues Keitaro loses his promise girl, becomes a nervous wreck studying for Tokyo U's entrance exam, his family is crumbling apart, and he's been kicked out of the house.house]]. And [[FromBadToWorse that's not even the start of what's to come]].
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[NotSoDifferent Keitaro and Naru] deliver one to eachother in episode 3.1 after [[spoiler:failing the entrance exam]], both accusing eachother of only caring about their promises and using everyone to fulfill those promises.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[NotSoDifferent Keitaro and Naru] Naru]] deliver one to eachother in episode 3.1 after [[spoiler:failing the entrance exam]], both accusing eachother of only caring about their promises and using everyone to fulfill those promises.
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** Keitaro in particular has gone from a [[IdiotHero clumsy-but-loveable idiot]] to a [[ClassicalAntiHero nervous wreck]], [[{{Determinator}} willing to go through any length and use anyone to fulfill his promise]]. This becomes the central plot of the story, when Keitaro realizes [[spoiler:his fervor to fulfill his promise has ruined all of the lives around him.]]
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** Keitaro in particular has gone from a [[IdiotHero clumsy-but-loveable idiot]] to a [[ClassicalAntiHero nervous wreck]], [[{{Determinator}} willing to go through any length and use anyone to fulfill his promise]]. This becomes the central plot of the story, when Keitaro realizes [[spoiler:his [[spoiler:[[NiceJobBreakingItHero his fervor to fulfill his promise has ruined all of the lives around him.]]]]]]
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->'''Keitaro''': It's fine. I'm pretty sure I'll figure out where to go next. ''([[/FawltyTowersPlot I can't]] [[ArcWelding tell my sister I can't get the inn back]], but [[BlackComedy maybe if I jump into the ocean, no one will find the body]]...)''
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->'''Keitaro''': It's fine. I'm pretty sure I'll figure out where to go next. ''([[/FawltyTowersPlot ''([[FawltyTowersPlot I can't]] [[ArcWelding tell my sister I can't get the inn back]], but [[BlackComedy maybe if I jump into the ocean, no one will find the body]]...)''
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** [[ChildhoodMarriagePromise The first episode alone butchers the idea of Keitaro trying to hold onto his promise, showing just how disturbed Keitaro would have to become to hold onto his promise for so long]]. [[SunkCostFallacy Subsequent episode scripts explore how virtually every choice Keitaro ever made, from staying at the inn to having Naru as a study partner, was all simply so he could keep his promise.]] [[spoiler:[[SweetAndSourGrapes Subsequent scripts of the final episodes show it turned out for the best: he got to meet the girl from his memories and got a firsthand lesson in why he needed to take care of those around him.]]]]
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** [[ChildhoodMarriagePromise The first episode alone butchers the idea of Keitaro trying to hold onto his promise, showing just how disturbed Keitaro would have to become to hold onto his promise for so long]]. [[SunkCostFallacy Subsequent episode scripts explore how virtually every choice Keitaro ever made, from staying at the inn to having Naru as a study partner, partner,]] [[FawltyTowersPlot was all simply so he could keep his promise.]] [[spoiler:[[SweetAndSourGrapes Subsequent scripts of the final episodes show it turned out for the best: he got to meet the girl from his memories and got a firsthand lesson in why he needed to take care of those around him.]]]]
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->'''Keitaro''': It's fine. I'm pretty sure I'll figure out where to go next. ''([[FaultyTowersPlot I can't]] [[ArcWelding tell my sister I can't get the inn back]], but [[BlackComedy maybe if I jump into the ocean, no one will find the body]]...)''
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->'''Keitaro''': It's fine. I'm pretty sure I'll figure out where to go next. ''([[FaultyTowersPlot ''([[/FawltyTowersPlot I can't]] [[ArcWelding tell my sister I can't get the inn back]], but [[BlackComedy maybe if I jump into the ocean, no one will find the body]]...)''
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->'''Keitaro''': It's fine. I'm pretty sure I'll figure out where to go next. ''(I can't [[ArcWelding tell my sister I can't get the inn back]], but [[BlackComedy maybe if I jump into the ocean, no one will find the body]]...)''
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->'''Keitaro''': It's fine. I'm pretty sure I'll figure out where to go next. ''(I can't ''([[FaultyTowersPlot I can't]] [[ArcWelding tell my sister I can't get the inn back]], but [[BlackComedy maybe if I jump into the ocean, no one will find the body]]...)''
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'''Keitaro:''' [[SelfDeprecation... I SUCK AT EVERYTHING!!!]]
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'''Keitaro:''' ... I SUCK AT EVERYTHING!!!
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Keitaro and Naru deliver one to eachother in episode 3.1 after [[spoiler:failing the entrance exam]], both accusing eachother of only caring about their promises and using everyone to fulfill those promises.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[NotSoDifferent Keitaro and Naru Naru] deliver one to eachother in episode 3.1 after [[spoiler:failing the entrance exam]], both accusing eachother of only caring about their promises and using everyone to fulfill those promises.
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** [[ChildhoodMarriagePromise The first episode alone butchers the idea of Keitaro trying to hold onto his promise, showing just how disturbed Keitaro would have to become to hold onto his promise for so long]]. [[SunkCostFallacy Subsequent episode scripts explore how virtually every choice Keitaro ever made, from staying at the inn to having Naru as a study partner, was all simply so he could keep his promise.]] [[spoiler:Subsequent scripts of the final episodes show it turned out for the best: he got to meet the girl from his memories and got a firsthand lesson in why he needed to take care of those around him.]]
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** [[ChildhoodMarriagePromise The first episode alone butchers the idea of Keitaro trying to hold onto his promise, showing just how disturbed Keitaro would have to become to hold onto his promise for so long]]. [[SunkCostFallacy Subsequent episode scripts explore how virtually every choice Keitaro ever made, from staying at the inn to having Naru as a study partner, was all simply so he could keep his promise.]] [[spoiler:Subsequent [[spoiler:[[SweetAndSourGrapes Subsequent scripts of the final episodes show it turned out for the best: he got to meet the girl from his memories and got a firsthand lesson in why he needed to take care of those around him.]]]]]]
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* SadisticChoice: In the finale, Keitaro must choose between [[spoiler:running away from the inn and everyone's he's hurt so he can be with Mutsumi, who appears to be his promise girl]] and [[spoiler:leaving Mutsumi behind so he can go home and fix everything he broke on the way to seeing her again]]. [[spoiler:He chooses to return home and fix everything.]]
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* SadisticChoice: In the finale, Keitaro must choose between [[spoiler:running away from the inn and everyone's he's hurt so he can be with Mutsumi, who appears to be his promise girl]] and [[spoiler:leaving Mutsumi behind so he can go home and fix everything he broke on the way to seeing her again]]. [[spoiler:He [[spoiler:[[CharacterDevelopment He chooses to return home and fix everything.]]]]]]