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* AnAesop: Tries to shoehorn one in at the end about not thinking things through.
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* HydePlaysJekyll: [[spoiler:The EvilTwin pretends to be the De Noir's son after losing his scepter to Breeze Rider, claiming to have been "cured".]]
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** In the beginning, Breeze Rider and one of the De Noirs inform the audience that the family's only son hasn't been outside for a long time, he owns the land, and that his father is missing.
** The VillainSong states that the father assembled the castle with dark powers, and a doppelganger is formed from them.
** The VillainSong states that the father assembled the castle with dark powers, and a doppelganger is formed from them.
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** In the beginning, Breeze Rider and one of the De Noirs inform the audience that the family's only son hasn't been outside for a long time, that he owns the land, and that his father is missing.
** The VillainSong states that the father assembled the castle with dark powers, and adoppelganger {{doppelganger}} is formed from them.
** The VillainSong states that the father assembled the castle with dark powers, and a
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The Chick is not a trope anymore
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* TheHeart: Doodlecute. See TheChick.
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''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NgJPHj7Cjss My Little Pony: Dusk's Dawn]]'' is an [[TyopOnTheCover "orginal"]] fanfiction based on ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', made by Project Interlude. The story is composed entirely of [[OriginalCharacter original characters]], other than passing references to Princess Celestia, Nightmare Moon, Discord and the [[FanNickname Mane Six]].
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''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NgJPHj7Cjss My Little Pony: Dusk's Dawn]]'' is an [[TyopOnTheCover "orginal"]] fanfiction based on ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', made by Project Interlude. The story is composed entirely of [[OriginalCharacter original characters]], other than passing references to Princess Celestia, Nightmare Moon, Discord and the [[FanNickname Mane Six]].
main cast.
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''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NgJPHj7Cjss My Little Pony: Dusk's Dawn]]'' is an [[TypoOnTheCover "orginal"]] fanfiction based on ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', made by Project Interlude. The story is composed entirely of [[OriginalCharacter original characters]], other than passing references to Princess Celestia, Nightmare Moon, Discord and the [[FanNickname Mane Six]].
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''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NgJPHj7Cjss My Little Pony: Dusk's Dawn]]'' is an [[TypoOnTheCover [[TyopOnTheCover "orginal"]] fanfiction based on ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', made by Project Interlude. The story is composed entirely of [[OriginalCharacter original characters]], other than passing references to Princess Celestia, Nightmare Moon, Discord and the [[FanNickname Mane Six]].
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''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NgJPHj7Cjss My Little Pony: Dusk's Dawn]]'' is an "original" fanfiction based on ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', made by Project Interlude. The story is composed entirely of [[OriginalCharacter original characters]], other than passing references to Princess Celestia, Nightmare Moon, Discord and the [[FanNickname Mane Six]].
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''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NgJPHj7Cjss My Little Pony: Dusk's Dawn]]'' is an "original" [[TypoOnTheCover "orginal"]] fanfiction based on ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', made by Project Interlude. The story is composed entirely of [[OriginalCharacter original characters]], other than passing references to Princess Celestia, Nightmare Moon, Discord and the [[FanNickname Mane Six]].
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* BigBad: The [[NoNameGiven unnamed]] EvilTwin is the one behind the storm enveloping Ponyville..
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* BigBad: The [[NoNameGiven unnamed]] EvilTwin is the one behind the storm enveloping Ponyville..Ponyville.
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* BigBad: The EvilTwin is very clearly the main antagonist.
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* BigBad: The [[NoNameGiven unnamed]] EvilTwin is very clearly the main antagonist.one behind the storm enveloping Ponyville..
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* SuspiciouslyAproposMusic: Sure, that one song provides pretty much all of the {{Exposition}} there is in the entire episode, but it lasts a whopping 3 minutes and 50 seconds and is completely forgettable, with the exception of the part where the villain starts ScatSinging. Basically, it's mostly there to just kill time.
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* AmbiguousGender: Despite having a female body design Breeze Rider is voiced by a male actor and is most likely male. Still, it's never really made clear.
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* AmbiguousGender: Despite having a female body design design, Breeze Rider is voiced by a male actor and is most likely male. Still, it's never really made clear.
* ArtisticAge: Dusk is only nine but he has the model, and voice, of an adult. The writers may have been trying to invoke "horse years", but horses don't take ''nine years'' to mature (they're adults by three).
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* {{Expy}}: Breeze Rider is this to Rainbow Dash, both being able to fly, cracking jokes and having a strong sense of adventure.
** He even quotes her "thirty seconds flat" line too.
** He is also definitely trying to be like Pinkie Pie by providing goofy (attempted) [[PluckyComicRelief comic relief]] at random times, like popping his head out of a cloud and impossible areas.
** He even quotes her "thirty seconds flat" line too.
** He is also definitely trying to be like Pinkie Pie by providing goofy (attempted) [[PluckyComicRelief comic relief]] at random times, like popping his head out of a cloud and impossible areas.
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* {{Expy}}: {{Expy}}:
** Breeze Rider is this to Rainbow Dash, both being able to fly, cracking jokes and having a strong sense ofadventure.
**adventure. He even quotes her "thirty seconds flat" line too.
**He Breeze Rider is also definitely trying to be like Pinkie Pie by providing goofy (attempted) [[PluckyComicRelief comic relief]] at random times, like popping his head out of a cloud and impossible areas.
** Breeze Rider is this to Rainbow Dash, both being able to fly, cracking jokes and having a strong sense of
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* FurryReminder: Tried and failed. The De Noir son states that he's turning nine, and at the start of the musical number sings that "Today I am/A kid no more". Problem: real stallions are considered mature somewhere between a year to three years old (depending on the rancher), and in [=FiM=], there's at least one normal character (Grannie Smith) who's lived to be at ''least'' one hundred years old, implying that MLP ponies age at human rates. So either De Noir is an incredibly slow bloomer, or he's kidding himself about being an adult.
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* FurryReminder: Tried and failed. The De Noir son states that he's turning nine, and at the start of the musical number sings that "Today I am/A kid no more". Problem: real stallions are considered mature somewhere between a year to three years old (depending on the rancher), and in [=FiM=], ''[=FiM=]'', there's at least one normal character (Grannie Smith) who's lived to be at ''least'' one hundred years old, implying that MLP ''MLP'' ponies age at human rates. So either De Noir is an incredibly slow bloomer, or he's kidding himself about being an adult.
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* MostWritersAreAdults: Dusk is only nine but he acts much more like a nineteen year old. He's quite mature for his age.
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* UnexplainedAccent: Breeze Rider's voice actor has an accent completely different from everyone else's. It's impossible to tell if the character is from a different area or if he's not supposed to have the accent, even though his voice actor does.
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* VocalDissonance: Dusk's voice is deep for a character who is meant to be a foal.
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* EasterEgg: When Dusk reads from the Book, the words in the Book are actually the Lyrics to; ''Sweet Child O' Mine'', by Guns N' Roses?
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* EasterEgg: When Dusk reads from the Book, book, the words in the Book it are actually the Lyrics to; ''Sweet lyrics to "Sweet Child O' Mine'', Mine", by Guns N' Roses?Music/GunsNRoses.
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** He even quotes her; "Thirty Seconds Flat" line too?
** He is also definitely trying to be a lot like Pinkie Pie by providing goofy (attempted) [[PluckyComicRelief comic relief]] at random times, like popping his head out of a cloud and impossible areas.
** He is also definitely trying to be a lot like Pinkie Pie by providing goofy (attempted) [[PluckyComicRelief comic relief]] at random times, like popping his head out of a cloud and impossible areas.
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** He even quotes her; "Thirty Seconds Flat" her "thirty seconds flat" line too?
too.
** He is also definitely trying to bea lot like Pinkie Pie by providing goofy (attempted) [[PluckyComicRelief comic relief]] at random times, like popping his head out of a cloud and impossible areas.
** He is also definitely trying to be
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* FunPersonified: Breeze Rider cracks (bad) jokes many times in the short and tends to be a daredevil… if flying through a forest counts.
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* FunPersonified: Breeze Rider cracks (bad) jokes many times in the short and tends to be a daredevil… if daredevil…if flying through a forest counts.
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* EasterEgg: When Dusk reads from the Book, the words in the Book are actually the Lyrics to; ''Sweet Child O' Mine'', by Guns N' Roses?
