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* TheOneThingIDontHateAboutYou: After tearing into every other aspect of the game, [=Axman13=] takes a moment at the end to admit that he actually liked the voice acting.
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* TheOneThingIDontHateAboutYou: After tearing into every other aspect of the game, [=Axman13=] takes a moment at the end to admit that he actually liked the voice acting.acting, which is the only reason he gave the game one star instead of zero.
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* ItsEasySoItSucks: In-universe, Axman13 complains the game is too "[[RougeAnglesOfStain esey]]", with him especially angry about the final boss being impossible to lose to.
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* ItsEasySoItSucks: In-universe, Axman13 [=Axman13=] complains the game is too "[[RougeAnglesOfStain "[[RougeAnglesOfSatin esey]]", with him especially angry about the final boss being impossible to lose to.
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* ItsEasySoItSucks: In-universe, Axman13 complains the game is too "[[RougeAnglesOfStain esey]]", with him especially angry about the final boss being impossible to lose to.
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* StupidStatementDanceMix: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zn2IB91TFYo "Reviewing the monsters"]], set to a tune from ''VideoGame/SuperMarioRPG''
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A DramaticReading with kinetic typography of a poorly-written {{review}} of parodical DeconstructionGame ''VideoGame/SuperPressSpaceToWinActionRPG2009'', set to Carl Orff's ''O Fortuna'' and voiced by D-Mac-Double. The original review was by someone who [[ComicallyMissingThePoint hilariously missed the point]] ([[TrollFic or was pretending to]]). [[http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/558516 View it here]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Z2Z23SAFVA here]].
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A DramaticReading with kinetic typography of a poorly-written {{review}} of parodical DeconstructionGame ''VideoGame/SuperPressSpaceToWinActionRPG2009'', set to Carl Orff's ''O Fortuna'' and voiced by D-Mac-Double.[[Creator/DevenMack D-Mac-Double]]. The original review was by someone who [[ComicallyMissingThePoint hilariously missed the point]] ([[TrollFic or was pretending to]]). [[http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/558516 View it here]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Z2Z23SAFVA here]].
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A DramaticReading with kinetic typography of a poorly-written review of parodical DeconstructionGame ''VideoGame/SuperPressSpaceToWinActionRPG2009'', set to Carl Orff's ''O Fortuna'' and voiced by D-Mac-Double. The original review was by someone who [[ComicallyMissingThePoint hilariously missed the point]] ([[TrollFic or was pretending to]]). [[http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/558516 View it here]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Z2Z23SAFVA here]].
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A DramaticReading with kinetic typography of a poorly-written review {{review}} of parodical DeconstructionGame ''VideoGame/SuperPressSpaceToWinActionRPG2009'', set to Carl Orff's ''O Fortuna'' and voiced by D-Mac-Double. The original review was by someone who [[ComicallyMissingThePoint hilariously missed the point]] ([[TrollFic or was pretending to]]). [[http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/558516 View it here]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Z2Z23SAFVA here]].
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: The game the reviewer was complaining about was designed as a [[DeconstructionGame deconstruction of RPGs in general]]. The reviewer took it as a badly-made game, despite the fact that it was featured on the front page.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: DoubleSubverted. [=Axman13=] was initially insulted by the original audio recording of his review, but when the audio was set to Flash, he changed his mind and found it hilarious.
* ComicallyMissingThePoint: The game the reviewerwas complaining complained about was designed as a [[DeconstructionGame deconstruction of RPGs in general]]. The reviewer took it as a badly-made game, despite the fact that even though it was featured on the front page.
* ComicallyMissingThePoint: The game the reviewer
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* FreezeFrameBonus: A review by [=Axman13=] [[spoiler:[[TakeThat years]] [[InternetJerk old]]]].
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* FreezeFrameBonus: FreezeFrameBonus:
** A review by [=Axman13=] [[spoiler:[[TakeThat years]] [[InternetJerk old]]]].
** A review by [=Axman13=] [[spoiler:[[TakeThat years]] [[InternetJerk old]]]].
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* VisualPun: "This game is crap!" Cue [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Craps a pair of dice]] rolling across the screen during the sentence after.
** D-Mac pronounces "ESEY" as "Essy", then the flash transitions to the next paragraph with a cloud of the letter S.
** D-Mac pronounces "ESEY" as "Essy", then the flash transitions to the next paragraph with a cloud of the letter S.
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* VisualPun: VisualPun:
** "This game is crap!" Cue [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Craps a pair of dice]] rolling across the screen during the sentence after.
** D-Mac pronounces "ESEY" as "Essy", and then the flash transitions to the next paragraph with a cloud of the letter S.
** "This game is crap!" Cue [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Craps a pair of dice]] rolling across the screen during the sentence after.
** D-Mac pronounces "ESEY" as "Essy", and then the flash transitions to the next paragraph with a cloud of the letter S.
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* DramaticReading: See LargeHam below.
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: "Contrail", [[spoiler: to the point where the background music of ''O Fortuna'' is temporarily stopped just so an explanation of the word "contrail" can be shown]].
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A DramaticReading with kinetic typography of a poorly-written review of parodical DeconstructionGame ''VideoGame/SuperPressSpaceToWinActionRPG2009'', set to Carl Orff's ''O Fortuna''. The original review was by someone who [[ComicallyMissingThePoint hilariously missed the point]] ([[TrollFic or was pretending to]]). [[http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/558516 View it here.]]
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A DramaticReading with kinetic typography of a poorly-written review of parodical DeconstructionGame ''VideoGame/SuperPressSpaceToWinActionRPG2009'', set to Carl Orff's ''O Fortuna''.Fortuna'' and voiced by D-Mac-Double. The original review was by someone who [[ComicallyMissingThePoint hilariously missed the point]] ([[TrollFic or was pretending to]]). [[http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/558516 View it here.]]here]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Z2Z23SAFVA here]].
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* RecursiveAdaptation: As the opening states:
-> A flash...based on a voice track...about a review...(of another flash).
** The flash has been uploaded to Website/YouTube, adding another layer.
-> A flash...based on a voice track...about a review...(of another flash).
** The flash has been uploaded to Website/YouTube, adding another layer.
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%%* StupidStatementDanceMix: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zn2IB91TFYo This.]]
%%* TakeThat: Intensely.
%%* StupidStatementDanceMix: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zn2IB91TFYo This.]]
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* VisualPun: "This game is crap!" Cue [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Craps a pair of dice]] rolling across the screen.
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* VisualPun: "This game is crap!" Cue [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Craps a pair of dice]] rolling across the screen.
%%* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonCommascreen during the sentence after.
** D-Mac pronounces "ESEY" as "Essy", then the flash transitions to the next paragraph with a cloud of the letter S.
* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: The transcript of the original review (visible in the description of the version on Ricepirate's Youtube channel) shows that Axman doesn't bother starting sentences with capital letters.
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** D-Mac pronounces "ESEY" as "Essy", then the flash transitions to the next paragraph with a cloud of the letter S.
* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: The transcript of the original review (visible in the description of the version on Ricepirate's Youtube channel) shows that Axman doesn't bother starting sentences with capital letters.
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* FreezeFrameBonus: A review by [=Axman13=] [[spoiler:[[TakeThat years]] [[{{GIFT}} old]]]].
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* FreezeFrameBonus: A review by [=Axman13=] [[spoiler:[[TakeThat years]] [[{{GIFT}} [[InternetJerk old]]]].
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* SuddenlyShouting: Explain to me. EXPLAIN TO ME!
* StupidStatementDanceMix: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zn2IB91TFYo This.]]
* TakeThat: Intensely.
* StupidStatementDanceMix: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zn2IB91TFYo This.]]
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: "Contrail", [[spoiler: to the point where the background music of ''O Fortuna'' is temporarily stopped just so an explanation of the word "contrail" can be shown]].
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: "Contrail", [[spoiler: to the point where the background music of ''O Fortuna'' is temporarily stopped just so an explanation of the word "contrail" can be shown]].
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: "Contrail", [[spoiler: to the point where the background music of ''O Fortuna'' is temporarily stopped just so an explanation of the word "contrail" can be
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin
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* RougeAnglesOfSatinRougeAnglesOfSatin: All over the place in the review, making it sound even more nonsensical when read aloud. Lampshaded on "contrail", where it pauses to show the definition of the word, when it's obviously meant to be the word "control".
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* FreezeFrameBonus: A review by Axman13 [[spoiler:[[TakeThat years]] [[{{GIFT}} old]]]].
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* FreezeFrameBonus: A review by Axman13 [=Axman13=] [[spoiler:[[TakeThat years]] [[{{GIFT}} old]]]].
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* TheOneThingIDontHateAboutYou: After tearing into every other aspect of the game, Axman13 takes a moment at the end to admit that he actually liked the voice acting.
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* TheOneThingIDontHateAboutYou: After tearing into every other aspect of the game, Axman13 [=Axman13=] takes a moment at the end to admit that he actually liked the voice acting.
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** The flash has been uploaded to YouTube, adding another layer.
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** The flash has been uploaded to YouTube, Website/YouTube, adding another layer.
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A DramaticReading with kinetic typography of a poorly-written review of parodical DeconstructionGame ''VideoGame/SuperPressSpaceToWinActionRPG2009'', set to Karl Orff's ''O Fortuna''. The original review was by someone who [[ComicallyMissingThePoint hilariously missed the point]] ([[TrollFic or was pretending to]]). [[http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/558516 View it here.]]
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A DramaticReading with kinetic typography of a poorly-written review of parodical DeconstructionGame ''VideoGame/SuperPressSpaceToWinActionRPG2009'', set to Karl Carl Orff's ''O Fortuna''. The original review was by someone who [[ComicallyMissingThePoint hilariously missed the point]] ([[TrollFic or was pretending to]]). [[http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/558516 View it here.]]
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-> A flash...based on a voice track...about a review...(of another flash).
** The flash has been uploaded to YouTube, adding another layer.
-> A flash...based on a voice track...about a review...(of another flash).
** The flash has been uploaded to YouTube, adding another layer.
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* VisualPun: "This game is crap!" Cue [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Craps a pair of dice]] rolling across the screen.
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A DramaticReading with kinetic typography of a poorly-written review of parodical DeconstructionGame ''SuperPressSpaceToWinActionRPG2009'', set to Karl Orff's ''O Fortuna''. The original review was by someone who [[ComicallyMissingThePoint hilariously missed the point]] ([[TrollFic or was pretending to]]). [[http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/558516 View it here.]]
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A DramaticReading with kinetic typography of a poorly-written review of parodical DeconstructionGame ''SuperPressSpaceToWinActionRPG2009'', ''VideoGame/SuperPressSpaceToWinActionRPG2009'', set to Karl Orff's ''O Fortuna''. The original review was by someone who [[ComicallyMissingThePoint hilariously missed the point]] ([[TrollFic or was pretending to]]). [[http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/558516 View it here.]]
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* StupidStatementDanceMix: [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zn2IB91TFYo&feature=channel_video_title This.]]
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* StupidStatementDanceMix: [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zn2IB91TFYo&feature=channel_video_title com/watch?v=Zn2IB91TFYo This.]]
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* OldShame: Axman13 found the animation quite funny, and is embarrassed by his terrible typing skills and flagrant missing of the point. He was actually insulted by the original audio recording, but by the time it was made into a flash, he had changed his tune.
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* ShapePoem: "How can this be called an RPG" is spelled to form a "?"
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A DramaticReading with kinetic typography of a poorly-written review of parodical DeconstructionGame ''SuperPressSpaceToWinActionRPG2009'', set to Karl Orff's ''O Fortuna''. The original review was by someone who [[ComicallyMissingThePoint hilariously missed the point.]] point]] ([[TrollFic or was pretending to]]). [[http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/558516 View it here.]]
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* TheOneThingIDontHateAboutYou: After tearing into every other aspect of the game, Axman13 takes a moment at the end to admit that he actually liked the voice acting.
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* SuddenlyShouting: Explain to me. EXPLAIN TO ME!
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A DramaticReading with kinetic typography of a poorly-written review of parodical DeconstructionGame ''SuperPressSpaceToWinActionRPG2009'', set to Karl Orff's ''O Fortuna''. The original review was by someone who [[CompletelyMissingThePoint clearly [[ComicallyMissingThePoint hilariously missed the point.]] [[http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/558516 View it here.]]
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* CompletelyMissingThePoint: The game the reviewer was complaining about was designed as a [[DeconstructionGame deconstruction of RPGs in general]]. The reviewer took it as a badly-made game, despite the fact that it was featured on the front page.
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* CompletelyMissingThePoint: ComicallyMissingThePoint: The game the reviewer was complaining about was designed as a [[DeconstructionGame deconstruction of RPGs in general]]. The reviewer took it as a badly-made game, despite the fact that it was featured on the front page.
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A DramaticReading with kinetic typography of a poorly-written review of parodical DeconstructionGame ''SuperPressSpaceToWinActionRPG2009'', set to Karl Orff's ''[[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome O Fortuna]]''. The original review was by someone who [[CompletelyMissingThePoint clearly missed the point.]] [[http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/558516 View it here.]]
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A DramaticReading with kinetic typography of a poorly-written review of parodical DeconstructionGame ''SuperPressSpaceToWinActionRPG2009'', set to Karl Orff's ''[[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome O Fortuna]]''.''O Fortuna''. The original review was by someone who [[CompletelyMissingThePoint clearly missed the point.]] [[http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/558516 View it here.]]
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome
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** Q: the athore coments al totol lies! A: [[spoiler: [[CurseCutShort what the fuc--]]]]
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** Q: the athore coments al totol lies! A: [[spoiler: [[EvenTheSubtitlerIsStumped what the]] [[CurseCutShort what the fuc--]]]]
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* OldShame: Axman13 found the animation quite funny, and is embarrassed by his terrible typing skills and flagrant missing of the point. He was actually insulted by the original audio recording, but by the time it was made into a flash, he had changed his tune.
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A DramaticReading with kinetic typography of a poorly-written review of parodical DeconstructionGame ''SuperPressSpaceToWinActionRPG2009'', set to Karl Orff's ''[[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome O Fortuna]]''. The original review was by someone who [[CompletelyMissingThePoint clearly missed the point.]] [[http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/558516 View it here.]]
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!!Provides examples of:
* CompletelyMissingThePoint: The game the reviewer was complaining about was designed as a [[DeconstructionGame deconstruction of RPGs in general]]. The reviewer took it as a badly-made game, despite the fact that it was featured on the front page.
* DramaticReading: See LargeHam below.
* FreezeFrameBonus: A review by Axman13 [[spoiler:[[TakeThat years]] [[{{GIFT}} old]]]].
** GO AHEAD! I don't care! [[spoiler: [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial Yes I do. :(]]]]
* LargeHam: The narrator makes a point of reading as over-the-top as possible.
* OminousLatinChanting: ''O Fortuna'' plays in the background for 95% of the flash.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin
* StupidStatementDanceMix: [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zn2IB91TFYo&feature=channel_video_title This.]]
* TakeThat: Intensely.
* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma
* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: "Contrail", [[spoiler: to the point where the background music of ''O Fortuna'' is temporarily stopped just so an explanation of the word "contrail" can be shown]].
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!!Provides examples of:
* CompletelyMissingThePoint: The game the reviewer was complaining about was designed as a [[DeconstructionGame deconstruction of RPGs in general]]. The reviewer took it as a badly-made game, despite the fact that it was featured on the front page.
* DramaticReading: See LargeHam below.
* FreezeFrameBonus: A review by Axman13 [[spoiler:[[TakeThat years]] [[{{GIFT}} old]]]].
** GO AHEAD! I don't care! [[spoiler: [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial Yes I do. :(]]]]
* LargeHam: The narrator makes a point of reading as over-the-top as possible.
* OminousLatinChanting: ''O Fortuna'' plays in the background for 95% of the flash.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin
* StupidStatementDanceMix: [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zn2IB91TFYo&feature=channel_video_title This.]]
* TakeThat: Intensely.
* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma
* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotAwesome
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: "Contrail", [[spoiler: to the point where the background music of ''O Fortuna'' is temporarily stopped just so an explanation of the word "contrail" can be shown]].
