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Inquisitor Thrax sends Titus, who is resistant to Chaos and the Warp, to the Eye of Terror, which is the biggest Chaos hotspot there is. While there, he runs into the [[PreviousPlayerCharacterCameo Force Commander]], who is on his 100-year Penitent Crusade. [[TheyFightCrime Together, they fight the forces of Chaos!]]
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Inquisitor Thrax sends Titus, who is resistant to Chaos and the Warp, to the Eye of Terror, which is the biggest Chaos hotspot there is. While there, he runs into the [[PreviousPlayerCharacterCameo Force Commander]], who is on his 100-year Penitent Crusade. [[TheyFightCrime Together, they fight the forces of Chaos!]]
Chaos!
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* Also, his shutting down of the Forge World is necessary, at least in the short term, not only did they have (At a minimum - this is just an estimate of what Titus faced personally) a regiment of Chaos Raiders backed by a company each of Bloodletters and Chaos Space Marines that he will want to make sure are dealt with before people go back to work, their presence is the result of Inquisitor Dorden using what turned out to be a very dangerous Warp Artifact to power a Titan product facility - and were only gotten rid of because Titus used said artifact to directly power a Titan. Titans ''have'' been corrupted by Chaos before. Letting production resume before ensuring that Invictus and the facility it was built in aren't isn't just foolhardy, it's insanely dangerous. The longer he holds the planet in quarantine, the more likely the Cogboys will try to apply pressure against him, but in the near term the Inquisition ''will'' back him up so that he can make the necessary inquiries.
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* Also, his shutting down of the Forge World is necessary, at least in the short term, not only did they have (At a minimum - this is just an estimate of what Titus faced personally) a regiment of Chaos Raiders backed by a company each of Bloodletters and Chaos Space Marines that he will want to make sure are dealt with before people go back to work, their presence is the result of Inquisitor Dorden Drogan using what turned out to be a very dangerous Warp Artifact to power a Titan product facility - and were only gotten rid of because Titus used said artifact to directly power a Titan. Titans ''have'' been corrupted by Chaos before. Letting production resume before ensuring that Invictus and the facility it was built in aren't isn't just foolhardy, it's insanely dangerous. The longer he holds the planet in quarantine, the more likely the Cogboys will try to apply pressure against him, but in the near term the Inquisition ''will'' back him up so that he can make the necessary inquiries.
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Capitalization was fixed from WMG.Warhammer 40000 Spacemarine to WMG.Warhammer 40000 Space Marine. Null edit to update page.
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Ghost wick was fixed on WMG.Warhammer 40000 Space Marine.
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White Scar as the CrazyAwesome DeathFromAbove delivery service with his Assault Pack or Bike (if he gets a SM Trike, we have the wheels for the vehiclular section) will round off the team.
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White Scar as the CrazyAwesome the DeathFromAbove delivery service with his Assault Pack or Bike (if he gets a SM Trike, we have the wheels for the vehiclular section) will round off the team.
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[[WMG:The sequel will have you meet up with the Literature/BloodRavens from ''VideoGame/DawnOfWar''.]]
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[[WMG:The sequel will have you meet up with the Literature/BloodRavens Blood Ravens from ''VideoGame/DawnOfWar''.]]
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While it might simply be his attempts to turn Titus and a First Founding chapter to Chaos, Nemeroth doesn't seem too opposed to the idea of Chaos Ultramarines running around lead by their own captain. It isn't conclusive, but the war-scars of fighting against their loyalist cousins during the Heresy is in living memory of most Chaos Space Marines. That and Nemeroth repeatedly calls Titus "brother". While not a hard and fast rule, many Space Marines will call marines descended from other legions "cousin" and their own chapter and legion "brother".
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While it might simply be his attempts to turn Titus and a First Founding chapter to Chaos, Nemeroth doesn't seem too opposed to the idea of Chaos Ultramarines running around lead by their own captain. It isn't conclusive, but the war-scars of fighting against their loyalist cousins during the Heresy is in living memory of most Chaos Space Marines. That and Nemeroth repeatedly calls Titus "brother". While not a hard and fast rule, many Space Marines will call marines descended from other legions "cousin" and their own chapter and legion "brother"."brother".
** Also, take note of the front horns of Nemeroth's armor. Notice the shape they make?
** Also, take note of the front horns of Nemeroth's armor. Notice the shape they make?
