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[[WMG: The Ferret gods are [[Myth/NorseMythology Odin, Freya, and Loki]] ]]
* Since Loki is painted in a sympathetic light, that's how he gets a {{Cult}}; they feel sorry for him.
** [[WordOfGod BHS]]: Not quite, but this is a very good guess! Ferret Godlore is going to be posted sometime in the next month, if all goes well. Keep reading!
[[WMG: Hanami will become Life's ''keshin'']]
* And N'Ktane will become Death's.
** Alternatively, Lily will become Death's, because that little irony is too delicious to pass up.
* Since Loki is painted in a sympathetic light, that's how he gets a {{Cult}}; they feel sorry for him.
** [[WordOfGod BHS]]: Not quite, but this is a very good guess! Ferret Godlore is going to be posted sometime in the next month, if all goes well. Keep reading!
[[WMG: Hanami will become Life's ''keshin'']]
* And N'Ktane will become Death's.
** Alternatively, Lily will become Death's, because that little irony is too delicious to pass up.
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[[WMG: N'Ktane is corrupting Lady Lilly.]]
* [[AlternativeCharacterInterpretation Despite all her flaws,]] she's still LawfulGood. This drive to have the Outcastes executed [[spoiler: and the mind-control bracelettes]], came out of left feild. N'Ktane was sent back to do a task for Death, one that she enjoyed the prospect of; subverting the most prominent and pious mortal servant of the Life Goddess while taking her revenge seems to fit the bill.
* [[spoiler: Someone pick up that phone, because I totally called it!]]
[[WMG: Squad 13 was a Death Squad; the ''Chimatsuri'' was a massacre that happened during the Rebellion.]]
* "Chimatsuri" means "Victimization"
** {{Jossed}}: Squad 13 was a sort of covert-ops group, formed to carry out missions impossible for the rest of the Order to complete. "Chimatsure" is actually a title meaning "bloodbath". [[spoiler:Possibly it refers to whatever turned Drake into a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent sanguivore]].]]
** Black Ops and death squads aren't mutually exclusive. It's called "Assassination" or "wet-work".
* [[AlternativeCharacterInterpretation Despite all her flaws,]] she's still LawfulGood. This drive to have the Outcastes executed [[spoiler: and the mind-control bracelettes]], came out of left feild. N'Ktane was sent back to do a task for Death, one that she enjoyed the prospect of; subverting the most prominent and pious mortal servant of the Life Goddess while taking her revenge seems to fit the bill.
* [[spoiler: Someone pick up that phone, because I totally called it!]]
[[WMG: Squad 13 was a Death Squad; the ''Chimatsuri'' was a massacre that happened during the Rebellion.]]
* "Chimatsuri" means "Victimization"
** {{Jossed}}: Squad 13 was a sort of covert-ops group, formed to carry out missions impossible for the rest of the Order to complete. "Chimatsure" is actually a title meaning "bloodbath". [[spoiler:Possibly it refers to whatever turned Drake into a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent sanguivore]].]]
** Black Ops and death squads aren't mutually exclusive. It's called "Assassination" or "wet-work".
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* For some reason, I feel that the outlander version of fox society should be a joyless USSR-style nation.
[[WMG: Gen Tsurugi is a suit of AnimatedArmor]]
* His entire body is armored except his eyes, and according to [[StoryWithinAStory The Legend of Hayaoh]], he battled the [=HellSerpent=] ''and'' Hayaoh a thousand years ago... perhaps his EvilWeapon is keeping him alive?
[[WMG: [[spoiler:Drake was forced to kill Rain]]]]
* His line in Book IV says it all: "You'd be surprised what you can live with."
[[WMG: Gen is [[Music/JudasPriest The Nightcrawler]]]]
* Straight out of hell; One of a kind. Stalking his victims. Don't look behind you, Nightcrawler. Beware the beast in black, Nightcrawler. You know he's coming back...
[[WMG: Gen's tail is [[AchillesHeel the source of his power]]]]
* Why go through the trouble to protect something no-one's going to aim for anyways? Because it'll destroy him if it takes even the slightest damage.
[[WMG: The rebels got off with a slap-on-the-wrist because the council felt guilty for driving them to revolution in the first place.]]
[[WMG: Gen Tsurugi is a suit of AnimatedArmor]]
* His entire body is armored except his eyes, and according to [[StoryWithinAStory The Legend of Hayaoh]], he battled the [=HellSerpent=] ''and'' Hayaoh a thousand years ago... perhaps his EvilWeapon is keeping him alive?
[[WMG: [[spoiler:Drake was forced to kill Rain]]]]
* His line in Book IV says it all: "You'd be surprised what you can live with."
[[WMG: Gen is [[Music/JudasPriest The Nightcrawler]]]]
* Straight out of hell; One of a kind. Stalking his victims. Don't look behind you, Nightcrawler. Beware the beast in black, Nightcrawler. You know he's coming back...
[[WMG: Gen's tail is [[AchillesHeel the source of his power]]]]
* Why go through the trouble to protect something no-one's going to aim for anyways? Because it'll destroy him if it takes even the slightest damage.
[[WMG: The rebels got off with a slap-on-the-wrist because the council felt guilty for driving them to revolution in the first place.]]
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* For some reason, I feel that the outlander version of fox society should be a joyless USSR-style nation.
[[WMG: Gen Tsurugi is a suit of AnimatedArmor]]
* His entire body is armored except his eyes, and according to [[StoryWithinAStory The Legend of Hayaoh]], he battled the [=HellSerpent=] ''and'' Hayaoh a thousand years ago... perhaps his EvilWeapon is keeping him alive?
[[WMG: [[spoiler:Drake was forced to kill Rain]]]]
* His line in Book IV says it all: "You'd be surprised what you can live with."
[[WMG: Gen is [[Music/JudasPriest The Nightcrawler]]]]
* Straight out of hell; One of a kind. Stalking his victims. Don't look behind you, Nightcrawler. Beware the beast in black, Nightcrawler. You know he's coming back...
[[WMG: Gen's tail is [[AchillesHeel the source of his power]]]]
* Why go through the trouble to protect something no-one's going to aim for anyways? Because it'll destroy him if it takes even the slightest damage.
[[WMG: The rebels got off with a slap-on-the-wrist because the council felt guilty for driving them to revolution in the first place.]]nation.
[[WMG: Gen Tsurugi is a suit of AnimatedArmor]]
* His entire body is armored except his eyes, and according to [[StoryWithinAStory The Legend of Hayaoh]], he battled the [=HellSerpent=] ''and'' Hayaoh a thousand years ago... perhaps his EvilWeapon is keeping him alive?
[[WMG: [[spoiler:Drake was forced to kill Rain]]]]
* His line in Book IV says it all: "You'd be surprised what you can live with."
[[WMG: Gen is [[Music/JudasPriest The Nightcrawler]]]]
* Straight out of hell; One of a kind. Stalking his victims. Don't look behind you, Nightcrawler. Beware the beast in black, Nightcrawler. You know he's coming back...
[[WMG: Gen's tail is [[AchillesHeel the source of his power]]]]
* Why go through the trouble to protect something no-one's going to aim for anyways? Because it'll destroy him if it takes even the slightest damage.
[[WMG: The rebels got off with a slap-on-the-wrist because the council felt guilty for driving them to revolution in the first place.]]
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[[WMG: The Ferret gods are [[NorseMythology Odin, Freya, and Loki]] ]]
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[[WMG: The Ferret gods are [[NorseMythology [[Myth/NorseMythology Odin, Freya, and Loki]] ]]
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[[WMG: The rebels got off with a slap-on-the-wrist because the council felt guilty for driving them to revolution in the first place.]]
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** Black Ops and death squads aren't mutually exclusive...
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* His entire body is armored except his eyes, and according to [[StoryWithinAStory The Legend of Hayaoh]], he battled the HellSerpent ''and'' Hayaoh a thousand years ago... perhaps his EvilWeapon is keeping him alive?
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* His entire body is armored except his eyes, and according to [[StoryWithinAStory The Legend of Hayaoh]], he battled the HellSerpent [=HellSerpent=] ''and'' Hayaoh a thousand years ago... perhaps his EvilWeapon is keeping him alive?
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* Straight out of hell; One of a kind. Stalking his victims. Don't look behind you, Nightcrawler. Beware the beast in black, Nightcrawler. You know he's coming back...
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* Straight out of hell; One of a kind. Stalking his victims. Don't look behind you, Nightcrawler. Beware the beast in black, Nightcrawler. You know he's coming back...back...
[[WMG: Gen's tail is [[AechilesHeel the source of his power]]]]
* Why go through the trouble to protect something no-one's going to aim for anyways? Because it'll destroy him if it takes even the slightest damage.
[[WMG: Gen's tail is [[AechilesHeel the source of his power]]]]
* Why go through the trouble to protect something no-one's going to aim for anyways? Because it'll destroy him if it takes even the slightest damage.
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* Straight out of hell; One of a kind. Stalking his victims. Don't look behind you, Nightcrawler. Beware the best in black, Nightcrawler. You know he's coming back...
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* Straight out of hell; One of a kind. Stalking his victims. Don't look behind you, Nightcrawler. Beware the best beast in black, Nightcrawler. You know he's coming back...
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* Straight out of hell, One of a kind. Stalking his victims. Don't look behind you, Nightcrawler. Beware the best in black, Nightcrawler. You know he's coming back, Nightcrawler
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* Straight out of hell, hell; One of a kind. Stalking his victims. Don't look behind you, Nightcrawler. Beware the best in black, Nightcrawler. You know he's coming back, Nightcrawlerback...
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[[WMG: Gen is [[JudasPreist The Nightcrawler]]]]
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[[WMG: Gen is [[JudasPreist [[Music/JudasPriest The Nightcrawler]]]]
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* His line in Book IV says it all: "You'd be surprised what you can live with."
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* His line in Book IV says it all: "You'd be surprised what you can live with.""
[[WMG: Gen is [[JudasPreist The Nightcrawler]]]]
* Straight out of hell, One of a kind. Stalking his victims. Don't look behind you, Nightcrawler. Beware the best in black, Nightcrawler. You know he's coming back, Nightcrawler
[[WMG: Gen is [[JudasPreist The Nightcrawler]]]]
* Straight out of hell, One of a kind. Stalking his victims. Don't look behind you, Nightcrawler. Beware the best in black, Nightcrawler. You know he's coming back, Nightcrawler
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** {{Jossed}}: Squad 13 was a sort of covert-ops group, formed to carry out missions impossible for the rest of the Order to complete. "Chimatsure" is actually a title meaning "bloodbath". [[spoiler:Possibly it refers to whatever turned Drake into a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent sanguivore]].
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** {{Jossed}}: Squad 13 was a sort of covert-ops group, formed to carry out missions impossible for the rest of the Order to complete. "Chimatsure" is actually a title meaning "bloodbath". [[spoiler:Possibly it refers to whatever turned Drake into a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent sanguivore]].
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** {{Jossed}}: Squad 13 was a sort of covert-ops group, formed to carry out missions impossible for the rest of the Order to complete. "Chimatsure" is actually a title meaning "bloodbath". [[spoiler:Possibly it refers to whatever turned Drake into a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent sanguivore]].
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* For some reason, I feel that the outlander version of fox society should be a joyless USSR-style nation.nation.
[[WMG: Gen Tsurugi is a suit of AnimatedArmor]]
* His entire body is armored except his eyes, and according to [[StoryWithinAStory The Legend of Hayaoh]], he battled the HellSerpent ''and'' Hayaoh a thousand years ago... perhaps his EvilWeapon is keeping him alive?
[[WMG: [[spoiler:Drake was forced to kill Rain]]]]
* His line in Book IV says it all: "You'd be surprised what you can live with."
[[WMG: Gen Tsurugi is a suit of AnimatedArmor]]
* His entire body is armored except his eyes, and according to [[StoryWithinAStory The Legend of Hayaoh]], he battled the HellSerpent ''and'' Hayaoh a thousand years ago... perhaps his EvilWeapon is keeping him alive?
[[WMG: [[spoiler:Drake was forced to kill Rain]]]]
* His line in Book IV says it all: "You'd be surprised what you can live with."
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*For some reason, I feel that the outlander version of fox society should be a joyless USSR-style nation.
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