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[[WMG: Atlantiana's mother is none other than [[EBONY DARK'NESS DEMENTIA RAVEN WAY FanFic/MyImmortal]]
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[[WMG: Atlantiana's mother is none other than [[EBONY [[FanFic/MyImmortal EBONY DARK'NESS DEMENTIA RAVEN WAY FanFic/MyImmortal]]WAY]]. ]]
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That's why she "scanned" the entire cafeteria with her eyes in one scene, that's why she was so athletic, and that's also why she said "like watt" when Snuffles talked her about her new vampire powers, it wasn't a misspelling of "what", she was saying that she had electric powers from being a cyborg.
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Building off the theory above, the reason Larry managed to rape Atlantiana despite her cyborg nature, was because of his SuperStrength. That's also why Edward (a vampire with SuperStrength) needed a stick to knock out Larry.
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Building off the theory above, the reason Larry managed to rape Atlantiana despite her cyborg nature, was because of his SuperStrength. That's also why Edward (a vampire with SuperStrength) needed a stick to knock out Larry.Larry.
[[WMG: Atlantiana's mother is none other than [[EBONY DARK'NESS DEMENTIA RAVEN WAY FanFic/MyImmortal]]
C'mon, the comparison was inevitable. The two of them are impossibly beautiful, gothic (or goffik), dress like whores yet slutshame people who dress in similar fashion, are extreme jerkasses, have blue eyes. It may also explain why she was a human before having sex with Edward DESPITE her biological father being Caius, Ebony used her wizard powers to turn Atlantiana into a human (unless she sexed a vampire) so she wouldn't be BlessedWithSuck like her (remember that Ebony hated being as perfect as she is for... reasons). And you may be asking: How did Ebony manage to get impregnated with Tiana despite being a vampire? Because OurVampiresAreDifferent is in effect.
[[WMG: Atlantiana's mother is none other than [[EBONY DARK'NESS DEMENTIA RAVEN WAY FanFic/MyImmortal]]
C'mon, the comparison was inevitable. The two of them are impossibly beautiful, gothic (or goffik), dress like whores yet slutshame people who dress in similar fashion, are extreme jerkasses, have blue eyes. It may also explain why she was a human before having sex with Edward DESPITE her biological father being Caius, Ebony used her wizard powers to turn Atlantiana into a human (unless she sexed a vampire) so she wouldn't be BlessedWithSuck like her (remember that Ebony hated being as perfect as she is for... reasons). And you may be asking: How did Ebony manage to get impregnated with Tiana despite being a vampire? Because OurVampiresAreDifferent is in effect.
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That's why she "scanned" the entire cafeteria with her eyes in one scene, that's why she was so athletic, and that's also why she said "like watt" when Snuffles talked her about her new vampire powers, it wasn't a misspelling of "what", she was saying that she had electric powers from being a cyborg.
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That's why she "scanned" the entire cafeteria with her eyes in one scene, that's why she was so athletic, and that's also why she said "like watt" when Snuffles talked her about her new vampire powers, it wasn't a misspelling of "what", she was saying that she had electric powers from being a cyborg.cyborg.
[[WMG: Uncle Larry has SuperStrength and SuperToughness and would have beaten and then raped Vampire!Atlantiana if he reacted earlier]]
Building off the theory above, the reason Larry managed to rape Atlantiana despite her cyborg nature, was because of his SuperStrength. That's also why Edward (a vampire with SuperStrength) needed a stick to knock out Larry.
[[WMG: Uncle Larry has SuperStrength and SuperToughness and would have beaten and then raped Vampire!Atlantiana if he reacted earlier]]
Building off the theory above, the reason Larry managed to rape Atlantiana despite her cyborg nature, was because of his SuperStrength. That's also why Edward (a vampire with SuperStrength) needed a stick to knock out Larry.
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*** My mistake. When I wrote that, all I knew was Forbiden Fruit had been deleted, but I don't know it was Critics United.
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*** My mistake. When I wrote that, all I knew was Forbiden Fruit had been deleted, but I don't know it was Critics United.United.
[[WMG: Atlantiana is a cyborg]]
That's why she "scanned" the entire cafeteria with her eyes in one scene, that's why she was so athletic, and that's also why she said "like watt" when Snuffles talked her about her new vampire powers, it wasn't a misspelling of "what", she was saying that she had electric powers from being a cyborg.
[[WMG: Atlantiana is a cyborg]]
That's why she "scanned" the entire cafeteria with her eyes in one scene, that's why she was so athletic, and that's also why she said "like watt" when Snuffles talked her about her new vampire powers, it wasn't a misspelling of "what", she was saying that she had electric powers from being a cyborg.
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To recap, Marissa already took care of her fanfic when it was [=MSTed=]. Invader Cakez removed her saga entirely. invderofdeath also reacted, but less so than the others, so it's not that unprobable [=BeckyMac666=] will also notice the girl who thinks she can MST any fanfic she seems fit to MST.
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To recap, Marissa already took care of her fanfic when it was [=MSTed=]. Invader Cakez removed her saga entirely. invderofdeath also reacted, but less so than the others, so it's not that unprobable [=BeckyMac666=] will also notice the girl who thinks she can MST any fanfic she seems sees fit to MST.
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[[WMG:Further off of that, had Forbiden Fruit continued it would have turned into a Harry Potter crossover.]]
I imagine that in the proverbial chapter nine after Ewdard saved Altantiana from Jacob the Werewolf King we would have probably gone further into what Atlantnina's witch powers were. It wouldn't have surprised me if, even if it wasn't a true HP crossover, it still would have ripped off HP a lot.
I imagine that in the proverbial chapter nine after Ewdard saved Altantiana from Jacob the Werewolf King we would have probably gone further into what Atlantnina's witch powers were. It wouldn't have surprised me if, even if it wasn't a true HP crossover, it still would have ripped off HP a lot.
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[[WMG:The plot of Forbiden Fruit will suddenly take a turn against Skepkitty and [[TheHalfWorld her MSTs]].]]
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[[WMG:The plot of Forbiden Fruit will suddenly take a turn against Skepkitty and [[TheHalfWorld [[Blog/TheHalfWorld her MSTs]].]]
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[[WMG:Tiaa's mother is [[HarryPotter Ginny Weasley]].]]
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[[WMG:Tiaa's mother is [[HarryPotter [[Literature/HarryPotter Ginny Weasley]].]]
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** In what way? Did the author decide to disallow Skepkitty to further MST the story? Because if so, then a) it wasn't her who removed the fanfic and b) the MST is still continuing through one of many versions with commentary.
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** In what way? Did the author decide to disallow Skepkitty to further MST the story? Because if so, then a) it wasn't her who removed the fanfic and b) the MST is still continuing through one of many versions with commentary.commentary.
*** My mistake. When I wrote that, all I knew was Forbiden Fruit had been deleted, but I don't know it was Critics United.
*** My mistake. When I wrote that, all I knew was Forbiden Fruit had been deleted, but I don't know it was Critics United.
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* Confirmed!
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** In what way? Did the author decide to disallow Skepkitty to further MST the story? Because if so, then a) it wasn't her who removed the fanfic and b) the MST is still continuing through one of many versions with commentary.
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* On the other hand, "The Death of Skepkitty: The (insert trollfic/badfic writer here) Edition" would get boring after a while, so no.
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* On the other hand, "The Death of Skepkitty: The (insert trollfic/badfic writer here) Edition" would get boring after a while, so no.no.
* Confirmed!
* Confirmed!
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[[WMG:The plot of Forbiden Fruit will suddenly take a turn against Skepkitty and her [=MSTs=].]]
To recap, Marissa already took care of her fanfic when it was [=MSTed=]. Invader Cakez removed her saga entirely. invderofdeath also reacted, but less so than the others, so it's not that unprobable [=BeckyMac=] will also notice the girl who thinks she can MST any fanfic she seems fit to MST.
To recap, Marissa already took care of her fanfic when it was [=MSTed=]. Invader Cakez removed her saga entirely. invderofdeath also reacted, but less so than the others, so it's not that unprobable [=BeckyMac=] will also notice the girl who thinks she can MST any fanfic she seems fit to MST.
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[[WMG:The plot of Forbiden Fruit will suddenly take a turn against Skepkitty and [[TheHalfWorld her [=MSTs=].MSTs]].]]
To recap, Marissa already took care of her fanfic when it was [=MSTed=]. Invader Cakez removed her saga entirely. invderofdeath also reacted, but less so than the others, so it's not that unprobable[=BeckyMac=] [=BeckyMac666=] will also notice the girl who thinks she can MST any fanfic she seems fit to MST.
To recap, Marissa already took care of her fanfic when it was [=MSTed=]. Invader Cakez removed her saga entirely. invderofdeath also reacted, but less so than the others, so it's not that unprobable
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To recap, Marissa already took care of her fanfic when it was [=MSTed=]. Invader Cakez removed her saga entirely. invderofdeath also reacted, but less so than the others, so it's not that unprobable [=BeckyMac=] will also notice the girl who thinks she can MST any fanfic she seems fit to MST.
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To recap, Marissa already took care of her fanfic when it was [=MSTed=]. Invader Cakez removed her saga entirely. invderofdeath also reacted, but less so than the others, so it's not that unprobable [=BeckyMac=] will also notice the girl who thinks she can MST any fanfic she seems fit to MST.MST.
* On the other hand, "The Death of Skepkitty: The (insert trollfic/badfic writer here) Edition" would get boring after a while, so no.
* On the other hand, "The Death of Skepkitty: The (insert trollfic/badfic writer here) Edition" would get boring after a while, so no.
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[[WMG:The plot of Forbiden Fruit will suddenly take a turn against Skepkitty and her [=MSTs=].]]
To recap, Marissa already took care of her fanfic when it was [=MSTed=]. Invader Cakez removed her saga entirely. invderofdeath also reacted, but less so than the others, so it's not that unprobable [=BeckyMac=] will also notice the girl who thinks she can MST any fanfic she seems fit to MST.
To recap, Marissa already took care of her fanfic when it was [=MSTed=]. Invader Cakez removed her saga entirely. invderofdeath also reacted, but less so than the others, so it's not that unprobable [=BeckyMac=] will also notice the girl who thinks she can MST any fanfic she seems fit to MST.
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[[WMG: This has to be a troll fic]]
beckymac666 (the author) must be a troll, because there is no possible way that the story could be this bad otherwise.
beckymac666 (the author) must be a troll, because there is no possible way that the story could be this bad otherwise.
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Because her mother was a witch, and [[ActorAllusion Ginny Weasley is engaged to Caius]].
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Because her mother was a witch, and [[ActorAllusion Ginny Weasley is engaged to Caius]].Caius]].
[[WMG: This has to be a troll fic]]
beckymac666 (the author) must be a troll, because there is no possible way that the story could be this bad otherwise.
[[WMG: This has to be a troll fic]]
beckymac666 (the author) must be a troll, because there is no possible way that the story could be this bad otherwise.
