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* Asexuality: Virginia repeatedly insists she's not interested that way in anyone, male or female. Even if you manage to enter into a romantic relationship with her (which isn't easy), at the end it comes out that she'd really rather just cuddle.
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Magical Diary: Horse Hall is an OtomeGame released by [[http://www.hanakogames.com Hanako Games]] in 2011.

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Magical Diary: Horse Hall is an OtomeGame released by [[http://www.hanakogames.com Hanako Games]] Creator/HanakoGames in 2011.
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** When Jacob's "fathers" are mentioned in Virginia's path, it comes up very casually and might not even be noticeable.

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** When Jacob's "fathers" are mentioned in Virginia's path, it comes up very casually and might not even be noticeable.noticeable if one doesn't pay attention to his exact wording (as in, [[spoiler: "my fathers" versus "our fathers"]]).
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** When Jacob's "fathers" are mentioned in Virginia's path, it comes up very casually and might not even be noticeable.
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* Foreshadowing: If you manage to acquire certain amounts of magic points before the events, some of Ms. Potsdam's lectures can be considered foreshadowing ''at least'' for [[spoiler:Damien's path]], and possibly a few others'.

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* Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: If you manage to acquire certain amounts of magic points before the events, some of Ms. Potsdam's lectures can be considered foreshadowing ''at least'' for [[spoiler:Damien's path]], and possibly a few others'.
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* Foreshadowing: If you manage to acquire certain amounts of magic points before the events, some of Ms. Potsdam's lectures can be considered foreshadowing ''at least'' for [[spoiler:Damien's path]], and possibly a few others'.
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* RunningGag: "...Wait, is this going to be ''sex education!?''"
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* TwoTeacherSchool: The only instructors we ever see are [[SternTeacher Professor Grabiner]] and [[CoolTeacher Professor Potsdam]].

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* TwoTeacherSchool: The only instructors we ever see are [[SternTeacher Professor Grabiner]] and [[CoolTeacher Professor Potsdam]]. WordOfGod says there are more but they mostly teach the upper years.
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** [[TroubledButCute Damien]]. Alienated from his [[{{Muggles}} muggle]] parents? Check! Bullied at school due to his mysterious, demon parentage? Check! Believed to be a vicious {{Casanova}} - while really just LookingForLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces and getting his trust betrayed constantly for his trouble? Check! [[spoiler: Too bad it's an act he puts on, specifically designed to invoke this trope.]]

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** [[TroubledButCute Damien]]. Alienated from his [[{{Muggles}} muggle]] parents? Check! Bullied at school due to his mysterious, demon parentage? Check! Believed to be a vicious {{Casanova}} TheCasanova - while really just LookingForLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces and getting his trust betrayed constantly for his trouble? Check! [[spoiler: Too bad it's an act he puts on, specifically designed to invoke this trope.]]
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* ShoutOut: The school play is ''[[LittleShopOfHorrors The Small Place of Purchase of Frightening Things]]''.

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* ShoutOut: The school play is ''[[LittleShopOfHorrors ''[[Theatre/LittleShopOfHorrors The Small Place of Purchase of Frightening Things]]''.
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*** Bonus points for one of the characters from Butterfly Hall having literal butterfly wings.

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*** Bonus points for one of the characters from Butterfly Hall having literal butterfly wings.
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* AnimalMotifs: Deliberately invoked by the faculty of Iris Acabedemy. All students are assigned a house when they enroll;

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* AnimalMotifs: Deliberately invoked by the faculty of Iris Acabedemy.Academy. All students are assigned a house when they enroll;
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** Ellen's attitude towards magic, down to the [[spoiler:secret society]] she creates, is pulled almost directly from the fanfic [[HarryPotterandtheMethodsofRationality Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality]].
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** To be fair, it's certainly much better than the alternative that the player character brings up.



* GayOption: No Hanako Games title would be complete without this. In this case both Ellen and Virginia fulfill the [[SchoolgirlLesbians role]] officially. Pastel would fulfill this too, and only exempt because you can't really date her.

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* GayOption: No Hanako Games title would be complete without this. In this case both Ellen and Virginia fulfill the [[SchoolgirlLesbians role]] officially. Pastel would fulfill this too, and only exempt because you can't really date her.
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* TheTalk: Something of a RunningGag. Professor Potsdam will sometimes open a class sounding like she's about to lead into [[TheTalk the talk]], only for it to turn out to be something unrelated. She does eventually get round to it, kinda.

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* TheTalk: Something of a RunningGag. Professor Potsdam will sometimes open a class sounding like she's about to lead into [[TheTalk the talk]], only for it to turn out to be something unrelated. She does eventually get round to it, kinda. Apparently there are no rules against any kind of love in Iris Academy, but no student is allowed to carry children.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: For all of Damien's flaws and problems, it's safer to listen to his warnings. Your first encounter with him in the gym, where he tells you to attend at least the first lecture of every class and not trust the professors? [[spoiler:You need a minimum of one point in every colour to avoid getting detention after the first two weeks, and a minimum of ten to avoid being kept behind for summer school. And Potsdam ''definitely'' isn't telling you everything. He also gives the first hint you'll get about Initiation.]] His suggestion to study blue magic during Initiation week? [[spoiler:Successfully using blue magic (which requires a total of thirty or more points in it) will get a whopping ten merits in the first exam - more than you can get from any other option.]] His warning not to use Spirit Sight during the Dark Dance? [[spoiler: Doing so will turn you blind and cause Grabiner to give you detention and take ten demerits from you - twenty, if you'd mentioned the Dance to Grabiner prior to attending it.]] It doesn't excuse his later actions, of course.

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* JerkassHasAPoint: For all of Damien's flaws and problems, it's safer to listen to his warnings. Your first encounter with him in the gym, where he tells you to attend at least the first lecture of every class and not trust the professors? [[spoiler:You need a minimum of one point in every colour to avoid getting detention after the first two weeks, and a minimum of ten to avoid being kept behind for summer school. And Potsdam ''definitely'' isn't telling you everything. He also gives the first hint you'll get about Initiation.]] His suggestion to study blue magic during Initiation week? [[spoiler:Successfully using blue magic (which requires a total of thirty or more points in it) will get a whopping ten merits in the first exam - more than you can get from any other option.]] His warning not to use Spirit Sight during the Dark Dance? [[spoiler: Doing so will turn you blind and cause Grabiner to give you detention and take ten demerits from you - twenty, if you'd mentioned the Dance to Grabiner prior to attending it.]] Him telling you that you might be in danger in the Academy? [[spoiler: If you don't end up in the secret society of Rose and Wasp and decide to wreak revenge on anyone and everyone that so much as looks at you funny and uncover a dark conspiracy going on in the school, there's still a good chance you might end up going through an extremely dangerous time in the Academy.]] It doesn't excuse his later actions, of course.
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* GayOption: No Hanako Games title would be complete without this. In this case both Ellen and Virginia fulfill the [[SchoolgirlLesbians role]] officially.

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* GayOption: No Hanako Games title would be complete without this. In this case both Ellen and Virginia fulfill the [[SchoolgirlLesbians role]] officially. Pastel would fulfill this too, and only exempt because you can't really date her.
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** To be fair, it's certainly much better than the alternative that the player character brings up.
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* DepravedBisexual: [[spoiler: Damien. If you don't romance him, he'll go after a freshman boy instead.]]

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* DepravedBisexual: [[spoiler: Damien. If you don't romance him, he'll go after a freshman boy instead.]]]] On the other hand:
* EveryoneIsBi: Gender appears to be completely irrelevant when it comes to romance here; not only can characters be romanced either way but no one comments on this to indicate that it's at all unusual, and other [=NPCs=] date both genders as well. Most obvious with [[CoolBigBro William]], [[TroubledButCute Damien]], or Ellen if you pursue her.



* EveryoneIsBi: Gender appears to be completely irrelevant when it comes to romance here; not only can characters be romanced either way but no one comments on this to indicate that it's at all unusual, and other [=NPCs=] date both genders as well. Most obvious with [[CoolBigBro William]], [[TroubledButCute Damien]], or Ellen if you pursue her.
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* TheDumbledore: Potsdam. Basically, a female version of the man himself.
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* TheDumbledore: Potsdam, natch.

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* AnimalMotifs: Deliberately invoked by the faculty of Iris Academy. All students are assigned a house when they enroll;

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* AdultFear: Really sets in with the gradual mind-wiping of Wildseeds' families. Imagine your child went off to a boarding school. You dropped them off there, you could drive back, but you can't remember a damned thing about it. You can't recall anything specific about the place and, even worse, as time goes on, you have no want to visit or see them at all. Eventually, you can't really remember caring about your child at all and may, some day, forget about them altogether. And the magic community pretty much sees this as acceptable.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Happens very late into Damien's path if you try to appeal to Potsdam [[spoiler:to let him back in for the May Ball]]. She not only refuses but very gently chews you out for even asking, pointing out that what he did might have been ''technically'' legal, but [[spoiler:he still nearly killed you]] and he'd be expelled for that alone even if his deed isn't on the books as being expulsion-worthy (and if it isn't, she'll ''add it''). On top of that, you realize - too late - that you just got told off in front of the entire school, and Virginia and Ellen ''very'' quickly find out. They are [[UnderStatement not happy]] to hear that you're even talking with Damien again after what he did to you, and refuse to listen to any justifications. They even kick you out of the room for good, only letting you back at night so you can sleep and their very justified fury carries all the way into the final exam - which they ''will'' deliberately throw [[spoiler:unless you promise to break up with him right then and there. And breaking that promise deprives you of your magic - refusing to make it at all means that your entire ''Hall'' is so disgusted with you that the only option for you is to be moved to Snake Hall. "Perhaps the girls there will be more understanding of your choices."]]

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* WhatTheHellHero: Happens very late into Damien's path if you try to appeal to Potsdam [[spoiler:to let him back in for the May Ball]]. She not only refuses but very gently chews you out for even asking, pointing out that what he did might have been ''technically'' legal, but [[spoiler:he still nearly killed you]] and he'd be expelled for that alone even if his deed isn't on the books as being expulsion-worthy (and if it isn't, she'll ''add it''). On top of that, you realize - too late - that you just got told off in front of the entire school, and Virginia and Ellen ''very'' quickly find out. They are [[UnderStatement not happy]] ''not'' happy to hear that you're even talking with Damien again after what he did to you, and refuse to listen to any justifications. They even kick you out of the room for good, only letting you back at night so you can sleep and their very justified fury carries all the way into the final exam - which they ''will'' deliberately throw [[spoiler:unless you promise to break up with him right then and there. And breaking that promise deprives you of your magic - refusing to make it at all means that your entire ''Hall'' is so disgusted with you that the only option for you is to be moved to Snake Hall. "Perhaps the girls there will be more understanding of your choices."]]
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* NonStandardGameOver: The [[spoiler: Divorce]] achievement in particular, which is difficult to reach but is probably the worst possible outcome for the player character.

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* ExtraStrengthMasquerade: Kept in place by making anyone not part of the "in-group" forget that things like 'magic' are really real. [[spoiler:This includes your parents. And anyone who chooses to leave the magical world.]] It's barely touched on, but the few comments it gets imply that not only have things been like this for a ''very'' long time, but the born-witches just don't see anything wrong with it.



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* ParentalAbandonment and ParentalNeglect: Combined with AdultFear for bonus points: the {{Masquerade}} reinforcement causes your parents - and the parents of ''every other Wildseed'' to forget that their kids are magical. In some cases, the spell hits so hard that the adults in question actually forget so hard that, at best, they forget why they care about the kid...and Ellen suspects that this is what's happened to her family. [[spoiler:She later has Potsdam make them forget her completely and elects to stay at the school over the summer; if you've become close friends with her or are pursuing her romantically, you can offer to let her stay at your home during the summer - otherwise, you never even find out about the situation.]] More, it's implied from the way Virginia tells you this, that this is considered ''completely normal and justified'' by the born-witches.


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* TheUnFavourite: Ellen's comments to Donald, when the topic of sibling rivalry comes up, suggest that she either was this or at least feels like she's this. Coming to Iris Academy doesn't seem to have improved matters much - her family tells her not to come home for Thanksgiving. [[spoiler:She eventually has Potsdam just make them forget her entirely.]]
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* JerkassHasAPoint: For all of Damien's flaws and problems, it's safer to listen to his warnings. Your first encounter with him in the gym, where he tells you to attend at least the first lecture of every class and not trust the professors? [[spoiler:You need a minimum of one point in every colour to avoid getting detention after the first two weeks, and a minimum of ten to avoid being kept behind for summer school. And Potsdam ''definitely'' isn't telling you everything. He also gives the first hint you'll get about Initiation.]] His suggestion to study blue magic during Initiation week? [[spoiler:Successfully using blue magic (which requires a total of thirty or more points in it) will get a whopping ten merits in the first exam - more than you can get from any other option.]] His warning not to use Spirit Sight during the Dark Dance? [[spoiler: Doing so will turn you blind and cause Grabiner to give you detention and take ten demerits from you - twenty, if you'd mentioned the Dance to Grabiner prior to attending it.]] It doesn't excuse his later actions, of course.
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[[caption-width-right:288:[[BrainyBrunette Ellen]], [[TroubledButCute Damien]], [[{{Tomboy}} Virginia]] and [[LovableRogue Donald]]]]

Magical Diary: Horse Hall is an OtomeGame released by [[http://www.hanakogames.com Hanako Games]] in 2011.

Part [[SimulationGame Life Sim]], part DatingSim, part AdventureGame - it follows the [[{{Muggles}} Wild Seed]] born PlayerCharacter through her first year of the WizardingSchool - Iris Academy.

A [[SpearCounterpart Wolf Hall]] spin-off is currently being planned.

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!!''Magical Diary'' contains the following tropes:

* AccidentalMarriage: More like accidental engagement, but due to [[MagicallyBindingContract the power of a promise]] the people involved have to go through with it.
* AnimalMotifs: Deliberately invoked by the faculty of Iris Academy. All students are assigned a house when they enroll;
** "Adventurous" Horses, "charming" Butterflies or "mysterious" Snakes for the girls
** "Daring" wolves, "elegant" falcons or "eldritch" toads for the boys.
* AnythingThatMoves: Pastel.
* AudioErotica: Professor Grabiner, according to the PC.
** Possibly also Damien, depending on how you choose to phrase the love letter and whether or not you're just making things up. "Voice like melty butter," indeed.
* BigEater: Virginia. She sure can pack it in.
* BoardingSchool
* BunnyEarsLawyer / EccentricMentor: Professor Potsdam. Despite being the powerful headmistress at a prestigious WizardingSchool she comes across more of a mature GranolaGirl. [[spoiler: Most of the time, anyway.]]
* CaptainErsatz: Professor Grabiner is very obviously [[HarryPotter fanon Snape]].
* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}:
** Big Steve.
** Suki.
** Snake/Toad Hall students in general.
* CoolBigBro: William to Virginia. [[BigBrotherWorship And she adores him for it.]]
* CrazyJealousGuy: Kyo towards Minnie.
* DepravedBisexual: [[spoiler: Damien. If you don't romance him, he'll go after a freshman boy instead.]]
* MrFanservice:
** [[TroubledButCute Damien]]. Alienated from his [[{{Muggles}} muggle]] parents? Check! Bullied at school due to his mysterious, demon parentage? Check! Believed to be a vicious {{Casanova}} - while really just LookingForLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces and getting his trust betrayed constantly for his trouble? Check! [[spoiler: Too bad it's an act he puts on, specifically designed to invoke this trope.]]
** [[LovableRogue Donald]].
** [[HotTeacher Professor Grabiner]].
* EveryoneIsBi: Gender appears to be completely irrelevant when it comes to romance here; not only can characters be romanced either way but no one comments on this to indicate that it's at all unusual, and other [=NPCs=] date both genders as well. Most obvious with [[CoolBigBro William]], [[TroubledButCute Damien]], or Ellen if you pursue her.
* GayOption: No Hanako Games title would be complete without this. In this case both Ellen and Virginia fulfill the [[SchoolgirlLesbians role]] officially.
* MagicallyBindingContract: The sworn promise of a witch or wizard is completely binding, with dire consequences if broken.
* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler:Damien!]]
* {{Masquerade}}
* MiddleChildSyndrome: Donald's problem.
* ObfuscatingStupidity : [[spoiler: Professor Potsdam]] is a lot more devious than she first appears.
* OddCouple: You have two roommates. Virginia is a BookDumb junk-food-addict slob. Ellen is a quiet, studious neat freak who loves vegetables.
** This isn't quite TomboyAndGirlyGirl since as Horses they're both somewhat tomboyish. Ellen ''is'' more girly, but not drastically. However, Pastel is extremely girly, and she and Virginia are apparently friends.
* ParodySue: [[HelloInsertNameHere The default character name is]] MarySue. The creator was having a bit of fun there.
* {{Pastiche}}: Of ''HarryPotter'' FanFic. For example, Professor Grabiner is [[CaptainErsatz Severus Snape through fangirly eyes]], while Damien is a Malfoy (in [[DracoInLeatherPants leather pants]]) {{Expy}}. And, of course, the PC's [[HelloInsertNameHere default name]] is MarySue.
* SaveScumming: Given the multiple dialogue options, [[MultipleEndings multiple game paths]], and [[LuckBasedMission random nature]] of magic skill gains, this is pretty much required. Given that you can literally save everywhere, to 80 slots, this is also practically a game feature.
* SecretCharacter: [[spoiler: As of the latest patch, Big Steve now has a partial romance path. Reaching it is ''much'' more difficult than any of the other characters.]]
* ShoutOut: The school play is ''[[LittleShopOfHorrors The Small Place of Purchase of Frightening Things]]''.
* SpiritWorld: The Other World.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: When asked if you are dating Donald:
-->'''Mary Sue''': I am not currently dating your brother.\\
'''Virginia''': [[LampshadeHanging That's suspiciously speci-, spuspi- spefic- That's a very specific denial!]]
* TheTalk: Something of a RunningGag. Professor Potsdam will sometimes open a class sounding like she's about to lead into [[TheTalk the talk]], only for it to turn out to be something unrelated. She does eventually get round to it, kinda.
* TroubledButCute: Damien. Donald to a lesser extent.
* TwoTeacherSchool: The only instructors we ever see are [[SternTeacher Professor Grabiner]] and [[CoolTeacher Professor Potsdam]].
* TwoTimerDate: Possible if you were on Virginia's path and then accepted a date with Damien.
* UrbanFantasy
* WizardingSchool
* WhatTheHellHero: Happens very late into Damien's path if you try to appeal to Potsdam [[spoiler:to let him back in for the May Ball]]. She not only refuses but very gently chews you out for even asking, pointing out that what he did might have been ''technically'' legal, but [[spoiler:he still nearly killed you]] and he'd be expelled for that alone even if his deed isn't on the books as being expulsion-worthy (and if it isn't, she'll ''add it''). On top of that, you realize - too late - that you just got told off in front of the entire school, and Virginia and Ellen ''very'' quickly find out. They are [[UnderStatement not happy]] to hear that you're even talking with Damien again after what he did to you, and refuse to listen to any justifications. They even kick you out of the room for good, only letting you back at night so you can sleep and their very justified fury carries all the way into the final exam - which they ''will'' deliberately throw [[spoiler:unless you promise to break up with him right then and there. And breaking that promise deprives you of your magic - refusing to make it at all means that your entire ''Hall'' is so disgusted with you that the only option for you is to be moved to Snake Hall. "Perhaps the girls there will be more understanding of your choices."]]
** You can get this from Minnie too, if you successfully campaigned for treasurer and try to use empathy on her when she comes to you with a problem. Turns out that doing that kind of thing is considered a bit rude in magical culture.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Many of the characters have unusual hair colors. You can give your character one, too.
* [[spoiler: YourSoulIsMine: What Damien's trying to accomplish.]]
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