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* AbsoluteXenophobe: Lalari is an entire empire of humans like this; not that non-humans not in danger of being subjugated by them care much, as the empire has an appalling level of social disparity between it's poor and it's rich, and women don't fare much better, leaving very few people at all jealous of the citizens who get to live within it's borders.
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* AbsoluteXenophobe: Lalari is an entire empire of humans like this; this, not that non-humans not in danger of being subjugated by them care much, as the much. The empire has an appalling level of social disparity between it's its poor and it's its rich, and women don't fare much better, leaving very few people at all jealous of the citizens who get to live within it's its borders.
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* PurpleIsPowerful: The Cuthintal, which manifests as purple cloud, and Duliae, who wears a variety of purple clothing.
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* PurpleIsPowerful: The Cuthintal, which manifests as a purple cloud, and Duliae, who wears a variety of purple clothing.
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* SpikesOfVillainy: When Alenca looks out her window in Gha’alia for the first time, she notes tall spires on the buildings; [[CrystalSpiresAndTogas Crystal Spires And Togas]] this is not.
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* SpikesOfVillainy: When Alenca looks out her window in Gha’alia for the first time, she notes tall spires on the buildings; [[CrystalSpiresAndTogas Crystal Spires And Togas]] this is they are not.
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%%* TechnicolorEyes: The elves of Raval and Lior, a previously unified people split by civil war, have this in conjunction with [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair You Gotta Have Blue Hair]]. A few characters we see in the story are half Gha’alian and half one of these, including Vadeyn, Calipoa, and Imre.
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%%* TechnicolorEyes: The elves of Raval and Lior, a previously unified people split by civil war, have this in conjunction with [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair You Gotta Have Blue Hair]].colorful hair. A few characters we see in the story are half Gha’alian and half one of these, including Vadeyn, Calipoa, and Imre.
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* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: A whole race of them!
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* LongLived: Gha'alians.
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* PointyEars: They're elves.
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* TheSpartanWay: The Gha'alian method of training soldiers.
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* TechnicolorEyes: The elves of Raval and Lior, a previously unified people split by civil war, have this in conjunction with [[YouGottaHaveBlueHair You Gotta Have Blue Hair]]. A few characters we see in the story are half Gha’alian and half one of these, including Vadeyn, Calipoa, and Imre.
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Ebon Light is an indie romance visual novel for PC developed by Underbliss. The full version was published on itch.io on November 19, 2019.
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Ebon Light is an indie romance visual novel for PC developed by Underbliss. The full version was published on itch.io on November 19, 9th, 2019.
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Our Elves Are Better has been disambiguated. Our Elves Are Different now covers various portrayals of elves
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* OurElvesAreBetter: Gha'alian elves are able to see better in the dark than humans, are much longer lived, and are implied to be physically stronger, taller, and have more endurance.
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* SuperiorSpecies: Gha'alian elves are able to see better in the dark than humans, are much longer lived, and are implied to be physically stronger, taller, and have more endurance.
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* ConstructedWorld: Gha'alia is located in the Great Pillar Ocean, on the continent of Caleare. There are mentions about various races populating it, both humanoid and not, as well as their varying cultures and/or myths surrounding them.
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* ConstructedWorld: Gha'alia is located in the Great Pillar Ocean, on in the continent world of Caleare. There are mentions about various races populating it, both humanoid and not, as well as their varying cultures and/or myths surrounding them.
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* ConstructedWorld: Gha'alia is located in the Great Pillar Ocean, on the world of Caleare. There are mentions about various races populating it, both humanoid and not, as well as their varying cultures and/or myths surrounding them.
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* ConstructedWorld: Gha'alia is located in the Great Pillar Ocean, on the world continent of Caleare. There are mentions about various races populating it, both humanoid and not, as well as their varying cultures and/or myths surrounding them.
