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Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
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* UncannyValley: Done on purpose with the [[spoiler: Infiltrator Android]] ForTheEvulz. [[spoiler: It assumes the voice and face of the dead 19 year old Ensign GenkiGirl while still using the body of the BigBlackMan Master Sergeant.]]
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''Critical Point'' is one of the older visual novels to be translated by Peach Princess, having been first released [[TheNineties over a decade ago]]. Its primary claim to fame is the writing talents of [[Anime/MobileSuitGundam Kenichi]] [[Anime/SuperDimensionFortressMacross Matsuzaki]] and as one of the few sci-fi visual novels to receive the licensed translation treatment.
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''Critical Point'' is one of the older visual novels to be translated by Peach Princess, having been first released [[TheNineties over a decade ago]].in TheNineties. Its primary claim to fame is the writing talents of [[Anime/MobileSuitGundam Kenichi]] [[Anime/SuperDimensionFortressMacross Matsuzaki]] and as one of the few sci-fi visual novels to receive the licensed translation treatment.
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Hint: [[CaptainObvious sex ensues]].
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Hint: [[CaptainObvious sex ensues]].
ensues.
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* AnimeChineseGirl: The oh-so-cold Lai Wong.
* [[spoiler: BabiesEverAfter]]: Reiko and Julietta.
* [[spoiler: BabiesEverAfter]]: Reiko and Julietta.
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* BabiesEverAfter: [[spoiler:
* BadassTransplant: [[spoiler: The arm Leiji lost before the story was replaced with a cybernetic one, which becomes a ChekhovsGun in some of the game paths and endings.]]
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* [[spoiler: BrainUploading]]: Of a sort in Elise's case. [[spoiler: Some of her memories are "Judith Frazier's" memories, a woman who died in an Army Intensive Care Unit and had her memories uploaded to Elise's brain.]]
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* BrainUploading: [[spoiler: BrainUploading]]: Of a sort in Elise's case. [[spoiler: case. Some of her memories are "Judith Frazier's" memories, a woman who died in an Army Intensive Care Unit and had her memories uploaded to Elise's brain.]]
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* HandicappedBadass <=> BadassTransplant: [[spoiler: The arm Leiji lost before the story was replaced with a cybernetic one, which becomes a ChekhovsGun in some of the game paths and endings.]]
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* HotScoop: Monica.
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* JekyllAndHyde: Monica.
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* PornWithPlot: In this case, the porn is actually worked into the plot in a very sensible matter. In fact, without spoiling anything, the disproportionate female to men ratio is actually a plot point (and it is discussed by the protagonist and a few other characters in a serious context), the intense desire for sex felt by many of the soldiers on the base is also a plot point (played for drama, not porn, though the motivation for why this is so differs depending on ending), and the actual core of the plot is not for the sake of porn at all. [[spoiler: the actual plot involves trying to find out who is sabotaging the lunar base and why, then stopping them before they turn a period of detente into a war again in some of the endings.]]
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* PornWithPlot: In this case, the porn is actually worked into the plot in a very sensible matter. In fact, without spoiling anything, the disproportionate female to men ratio is actually a plot point (and it is discussed by the protagonist and a few other characters in a serious context), the intense desire for sex felt by many of the soldiers on the base is also a plot point (played for drama, not porn, though the motivation for why this is so differs depending on ending), and the actual core of the plot is not for the sake of porn at all. [[spoiler: the The actual plot involves trying to find out who is sabotaging the lunar base and why, then stopping them before they turn a period of detente into a war again in some of the endings.]]
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* UndignifiedDeath: In one bad ending, Leiji gets [[spoiler: stabbed in the chest with a vibrator.]]
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* UndignifiedDeath: In one bad ending, Leiji gets [[spoiler: stabbed in the chest impaled with a vibrator.]]
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Misuse. It\'s Genre Savvy, not just \"savvy\".
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* GenreSavvy: Leiji is unusually bright for an HGamePOVCharacter, usually not letting his lust dominate his thought processes, being reasonably paranoid of danger most of the time, and generally keeps a level head in most ordinary circumstances.
** GenreBlindness: Unfortunately, one ending has him be unbelievably dense when he [[spoiler: tells Elise androids are superior to humans.]]
** GenreBlindness: Unfortunately, one ending has him be unbelievably dense when he [[spoiler: tells Elise androids are superior to humans.]]
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''Critical Point'' is one of the older visual novels to be translated by Peach Princess, having been first released [[TheNineties over a decade ago]]. Its primary claim to fame is the writing talents of [[MobileSuitGundam Kenichi]] [[Anime/SuperDimensionFortressMacross Matsuzaki]] and as one of the few sci-fi visual novels to receive the licensed translation treatment.
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''Critical Point'' is one of the older visual novels to be translated by Peach Princess, having been first released [[TheNineties over a decade ago]]. Its primary claim to fame is the writing talents of [[MobileSuitGundam [[Anime/MobileSuitGundam Kenichi]] [[Anime/SuperDimensionFortressMacross Matsuzaki]] and as one of the few sci-fi visual novels to receive the licensed translation treatment.
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''Critical Point'' is one of the older visual novels to be translated by Peach Princess, having been first released [[TheNineties over a decade ago]]. Its primary claim to fame is the writing talents of [[MobileSuitGundam Kenichi]] [[SuperDimensionFortressMacross Matsuzaki]] and as one of the few sci-fi visual novels to receive the licensed translation treatment.
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''Critical Point'' is one of the older visual novels to be translated by Peach Princess, having been first released [[TheNineties over a decade ago]]. Its primary claim to fame is the writing talents of [[MobileSuitGundam Kenichi]] [[SuperDimensionFortressMacross [[Anime/SuperDimensionFortressMacross Matsuzaki]] and as one of the few sci-fi visual novels to receive the licensed translation treatment.
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* BodyHorror: Shows up a lot with the murder victims.
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** [[spoiler: The Infiltrator android as well.]]
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Leiji in a very dark, serious, and realistic way. He's mostly fine until his trigger is pulled. [[spoiler: IE androids getting too close. Followed my him flashing back and snapping, causing him to sexually abuse and torture Elise.]]
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* UncannyValley: Done on purpose with the [[spoiler: Infiltrator Android]] ForTheEvulz. [[spoiler: It assumes the voice and face of the dead 19 year old Ensign GenkiGirl while still using the body of the BigBlackMan Master Sergeant.]]