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-> ''He was right. Of course, he was. At this point, [Luz] had all but accepted that Shigaraki was right more often than he was wrong.'' - ''
-->-- '''Luz''' on '''All For One.'''
-->-- '''Luz''' on '''All For One.'''
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* When Luz is trying to talk the cops out trying to engage in fighting her, Sophia isn't wrong when she points out that [[spoiler:Luz just became a CopKiller]] and their fallen brothers and sisters deserve justice for that.that and the girl should be arrested.
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--> '''Rikitatsu''': After all, it wasn’t me who made you go through that [[DeadlyGame death camp]]. It wasn’t me who sent [[ProfessionalKiller assassins after you]]. And it wasn’t me that [[DoomedHometown destroyed your home]]. Those go to [[AntagonisticGovernor Maxwell]], [[SinisterMinister Wittebane]], and [[AntiVillain The Golden Guard]] respectively.
--> '''Rikitatsu''': After all, it wasn’t me who made you go through that [[DeadlyGame death camp]]. It wasn’t me who sent [[ProfessionalKiller assassins after you]]. And it wasn’t me that [[DoomedHometown destroyed your home]]. Those go to [[AntagonisticGovernor Maxwell]], [[SinisterMinister Wittebane]], and [[AntiVillain The Golden Guard]] respectively.
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-> ''He was right. Of course, he was. At this point, [Luz] had all but accepted that Shigaraki was right more often than he was wrong.''
'' - '''Luz''' on '''All For One.'''
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* Despite being a greedy murderer, Kennedy isn't wrong about Wittebane family being a bunch of pretentious douches, which is later proven in later chapters with the introduction of the next ArcVillain Tyler.
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*** Before Luz wakes up, Shigaraki tells her there's no such thing as an evil Quirk, only an evil Quirk user.
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All For One is a horrible person, but he's an extremely perceptive one, especially to Luz's situations. His {{Breaking Speech}}s to Luz in particular are cruel but full of this.
* He points out that no one tried to understand Luz's CloudCuckooLander and NoSocialSkills habits, including Camila, and instead dismissed it as an inconvenient weirdo to those around her to varying degrees.
* He also points out it would have been better for Luz to have her creativity directed into something more positive and productive than being forced to think inside the box, like the original [[ImaginationDestroyer Reality Cheek Camp]] intended to do. He goes as far as to compare it to a ''conversion camp''.
* While he is exaggerating to unfairly paint Camila as a ResentfulGuardian and UselessBystanderParent, All For One isn't wrong in his deduction that Luz's mother caved to peer pressure from the very people who thought her daughter as an inconvenience when she should have stood up for her more. This fact hurts Luz more than anything else.
* Luz quietly admits that All For One is right about her: deep down she has always resented the people in her life having power over making her feel small and weak, and wanted to give them a taste of their own medicine.
* He points out that no one tried to understand Luz's CloudCuckooLander and NoSocialSkills habits, including Camila, and instead dismissed it as an inconvenient weirdo to those around her to varying degrees.
* He also points out it would have been better for Luz to have her creativity directed into something more positive and productive than being forced to think inside the box, like the original [[ImaginationDestroyer Reality Cheek Camp]] intended to do. He goes as far as to compare it to a ''conversion camp''.
* While he is exaggerating to unfairly paint Camila as a ResentfulGuardian and UselessBystanderParent, All For One isn't wrong in his deduction that Luz's mother caved to peer pressure from the very people who thought her daughter as an inconvenience when she should have stood up for her more. This fact hurts Luz more than anything else.
* Luz quietly admits that All For One is right about her: deep down she has always resented the people in her life having power over making her feel small and weak, and wanted to give them a taste of their own medicine.
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All For One is a horrible person, but he's an extremely perceptive one, especially to Luz's situations. His {{Breaking Speech}}s to Luz in particular are cruel but full of this.\n* He points out that no one tried to understand Luz's CloudCuckooLander and NoSocialSkills habits, including Camila, and instead dismissed it as an inconvenient weirdo to those around her to varying degrees.
* When Luz claims she'll never use her PowerParasite Quirk no matter what, All For One points out that the AddictiveMagic that comes with it could drive her to attack people, including her new friends, in a fugue to satisfy her urge and could destroy her new friendships. Luz hates to admit that could very well be a possibility.
* His BreakingSpeech to Luz in Chapter 8 in particular is cruel but full of this.
** He points out that no one tried to understand Luz's CloudCuckooLander and NoSocialSkills habits, including Camila, and instead dismissed it as an inconvenient weirdo to those around her to varying degrees.
** He also points out it would have been better for Luz to have her creativity directed into something more positive and productive than being forced to think inside the box, like the original [[ImaginationDestroyer Reality Cheek Camp]] intended to do. He goes as far as to compare it to a ''conversion camp''.
* ** While he is exaggerating to unfairly paint Camila as a ResentfulGuardian and UselessBystanderParent, All For One isn't wrong in his deduction that Luz's mother caved to peer pressure from the very people who thought her daughter as an inconvenience when she should have stood up for her more. This fact hurts Luz more than anything else.
* ** Luz quietly admits that All For One is right about her: deep down she has always resented the people in her life having power over making her feel small and weak, and wanted to give them a taste of their own medicine.
* When Luz claims she'll never use her PowerParasite Quirk no matter what, All For One points out that the AddictiveMagic that comes with it could drive her to attack people, including her new friends, in a fugue to satisfy her urge and could destroy her new friendships. Luz hates to admit that could very well be a possibility.
* His BreakingSpeech to Luz in Chapter 8 in particular is cruel but full of this.
** He points out that no one tried to understand Luz's CloudCuckooLander and NoSocialSkills habits, including Camila, and instead dismissed it as an inconvenient weirdo to those around her to varying degrees.
** He also points out it would have been better for Luz to have her creativity directed into something more positive and productive than being forced to think inside the box, like the original [[ImaginationDestroyer Reality Cheek Camp]] intended to do. He goes as far as to compare it to a ''conversion camp''.
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** Luz is willing to accept The Multiverse as a thing but initially doesn't believe in parallel worlds in her own dimension until All For One dryly calls her out on her ArbitrarySkepticism.
* As Luz is about to go into a HeroicBSOD after being tricked into believing she just [[spoiler: accidently killed her own mother with her DeadlyForceField]], All For One tells her she has to grieve later, as they're still in a fight to the death that's far from over.
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VillainHasAPoint in this story.
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!!All For One
All For One is a horrible person, but he's an extremely perceptive one, especially to Luz's situations. His {{Breaking Speech}}s to Luz is cruel but full of this.
* He points out that no one tried to understand Luz's CloudCuckooLander and NoSocialSkills habits, including Camila, and instead dismissed it as an inconvenient weirdo to those around her to varying degrees.
* He also points out it would have been better for Luz to have her creativity directed into something more positive and productive than being forced to think inside the box, like the original [[ImaginationDestroyer Reality Cheek Camp]] intended to do. He goes as far as to compare it to a ''conversion camp''.
* While he is exaggerating to unfairly paint Camila as a ResentfulGuardian and UselessBystanderParent, All For One isn't wrong in his deduction that Luz's mother caved to peer pressure from the very people who thought her daughter as an inconvenience when she should have stood up for her more. This fact hurts Luz more than anything else.
* Luz quietly admits that All For One is right about her: deep down she has always resented the people in her life having power over making her feel small and weak, and wanted to give them a taste of their own medicine.
* When Luz asks Shigaraki for more information on the [[spoiler:Golden Guard's]] Quirks, her EvilMentor refuses to divulge beyond the first 2 telling her she needs to FigureItOutYourself. He points out he's not obliged to give her all the answers and can’t coddle her forever. If she wants to be a true successor to All For One Quirk, she needs to be able to think for herself. [[UnskilledButStrong Her multitude of Quirks doesn't make up for lack of problem-solving.]]
!!Others
* Despite being a greedy murderer, Kennedy isn't wrong about Wittebane family being a bunch of pretentious douches, which is later proven in later chapters with the introduction of ArcVillain Tyler.
* When Luz is trying to talk the cops out trying to engage in fighting her, Sophia isn't wrong when she points out that [[spoiler:Luz just became a CopKiller]] and their fallen brothers and sisters deserve justice.
VillainHasAPoint in this story.
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!!All For One
All For One is a horrible person, but he's an extremely perceptive one, especially to Luz's situations. His {{Breaking Speech}}s to Luz is cruel but full of this.
* He points out that no one tried to understand Luz's CloudCuckooLander and NoSocialSkills habits, including Camila, and instead dismissed it as an inconvenient weirdo to those around her to varying degrees.
* He also points out it would have been better for Luz to have her creativity directed into something more positive and productive than being forced to think inside the box, like the original [[ImaginationDestroyer Reality Cheek Camp]] intended to do. He goes as far as to compare it to a ''conversion camp''.
* While he is exaggerating to unfairly paint Camila as a ResentfulGuardian and UselessBystanderParent, All For One isn't wrong in his deduction that Luz's mother caved to peer pressure from the very people who thought her daughter as an inconvenience when she should have stood up for her more. This fact hurts Luz more than anything else.
* Luz quietly admits that All For One is right about her: deep down she has always resented the people in her life having power over making her feel small and weak, and wanted to give them a taste of their own medicine.
* When Luz asks Shigaraki for more information on the [[spoiler:Golden Guard's]] Quirks, her EvilMentor refuses to divulge beyond the first 2 telling her she needs to FigureItOutYourself. He points out he's not obliged to give her all the answers and can’t coddle her forever. If she wants to be a true successor to All For One Quirk, she needs to be able to think for herself. [[UnskilledButStrong Her multitude of Quirks doesn't make up for lack of problem-solving.]]
!!Others
* Despite being a greedy murderer, Kennedy isn't wrong about Wittebane family being a bunch of pretentious douches, which is later proven in later chapters with the introduction of ArcVillain Tyler.
* When Luz is trying to talk the cops out trying to engage in fighting her, Sophia isn't wrong when she points out that [[spoiler:Luz just became a CopKiller]] and their fallen brothers and sisters deserve justice.
